RathForstepingOntheGardenofJaffaEye

[00:15] * Charlie hangs from a bar as he hangs from a dark cage

[00:16] * Charlie is releaved when he is taken out into the light and dragged to the colliseum

[00:17] <Charlie> *Elder stands before the representitives from earth

return to Stargate

:17] <Charlie> <Elder> This prisoner was caught stepping on our sacred flowers

[00:18] <Charlie> <Elder> The penalty is inprisionment and torchure for as long he lives

[00:19] <Thor> what form of punishment would be soo severe?

[00:19] * Charlie looks at his friends beaten and dirty as he is walked to his cage, as the crowd throws food down on him

[00:20] <Charlie> <Elder> He walked on our Garden

[00:20] <Thor> sir charlie? thou dost needeth a bath

[00:20] <Charlie> <Elder> but as you are from the jaffa eye you may not know our laws

[00:20] <Thor> that is a little tuogh for a walk dont ya think

[00:21] <Charlie> <Elder> you may speak a defence

[00:21] <Charlie> <Elder> or comphensation

[00:21] <Carly> he didn't do it!

[00:21] <Thor> what dost thou require to release noble charlie

[00:22] <Thor> for belongs free as all life should be

[00:22] <Carly> he didn't do it for I did

[00:23] <Thor> carly? thou dost wlketh upon the forbidden garden?

[00:23] <Charlie> <Elder> We should see him plant a garden as mythodical as the great garden he tarnished

[00:23] <Thor> by the gods.....

[00:23] <Carly> I didn't know it was forbidden and I wanted to see the precious flowers closer

[00:24] <Thor> by what tools should be used to plant this garden?

[00:24] <Charlie> *Elders play a holographic view screen, of us comming out of the stargate, as most walk strait with the path, charlie amazed by the garden the stargate is placed, walks onto the grass

[00:25] <Charlie> <Elder> What tools the gods gave him

[00:25] <Thor> release mine friend sir charlie for he dost be noble and ment not to traverce upon thy sacred garden....sympathy to him i humbly beggeth u=of thee

[00:25] * Charlie sighs as the view screen shorts off, the crowd boo's and hisses

[00:26] <Charlie> <elder> We shall take a recess

[00:26] <Carly> charlie I'm sorry I tried

00:26] * Thor dost becoming agered...against the better wishes of his therapist...

[00:26] <Carly> if it weren't for that damned screen

[00:27] <Charlie> *A crowd surrounds Charlie before departure, as a man reaches through the cage to strangle him

[00:27] <Thor> By Odin's beard.... this punishment dost

[00:27] * Thor smights mans hand aways from charlie

[00:27] * Charlie tries to fight free but the big brute be strong

[00:27] * Charlie is finally let free

[00:27] <Thor> by my hammer i swear to protect thee noble charlie

[00:27] * Charlie gasps for breath as the guard, jokingly pushes the crowd

[00:27] <Charlie> *away

[00:28] <Charlie> man

[00:28] <Charlie> they should put warning signs

[00:28] <Charlie> or something

[00:28] * Charlie looks at his friends

[00:29] * Thor grips his hammer with anger, it begins to glow with static charge....

[00:29] <Thor> i will not stand idle while my friend dost suffer so

[00:30] <Charlie> i'll be allright

[00:30] <Thor> nay

[00:30] <Thor> such a judgement is not fit

[00:30] <Thor> for thy crime is so meak

[00:30] * Charlie shivers in rags

[00:30] <Charlie> it makes sense that its a sacrid place most stargate sights are for the gods

[00:31] <Charlie> i should have known better

[00:31] * Thor raised his hammer to the heavens and thunder begins to echo accross the sky and the ground shakes

[00:32] <Thor> i know for i am a god and these pesants shall make hast in fleeing from the sight of the Odinson

[00:32] <Charlie> *mike steps out the stargate to aid Charlie in his trial, where he might be sentenced a sevire punnishment

[00:33] <Thor> Sir Charlie the mighty Thor will set the free if thou wish it

[00:33] * Quinn15 looks around and shakes his head

[00:33] <Quinn15> Great

[00:34] * Thor calls to asgard for guidence from the all father Odin himself...

[00:34] * Charlie watchs thor get taken to the asgard ship

[00:34] * Thor dost kneel before charlies fowl cage

[00:35] * Carly nods

[00:35] * Thor fades

[00:35] * Thor dost return

[00:35] * Charlie jumps back at the bright light

[00:35] * Quinn15 walks into the crowd of people and looks for Charlie and the others

[00:36] * Charlie is in the center ring of a collicium in a cage

[00:36] * Thor looks into charlies eyes with concern for his being

[00:36] * Carly walks to Mike

[00:36] <Charlie> no help?

[00:36] <Thor> thou art noble

[00:36] <Carly> I think we can take them all on

[00:36] * Carly looks at the huge crowd

[00:36] <Thor> and a trusted friend of thor

[00:37] <Charlie> Hi thor

0:37] <Charlie> can they set me free legaly?

[00:37] <Thor> I am forbidden in crushing these creatures but they advise that your friends shall set you free with words of wisdom

[00:38] <Charlie> oh

[00:38] <Charlie> ok

[00:38] <Thor> i am sorry noble sir

[00:38] <Thor> i will break my code if thou wish it

[00:38] <Quinn15> You wanna take them all on?

[00:38] <Thor> to free a friend is to live

[00:38] <Charlie> dont want you to get introube as well

[00:38] * Quinn15 sees Charlie and looks over the cage he's in

[00:38] * Quinn15 turns to Carly

[00:39] <Quinn15> We could, but we should play it safe

[00:39] <Charlie> do they seem to have knowledge of the gate passage

[00:39] * Quinn15 nods to the left of them where two guards were

standing

[00:39] * Thor places his hammer at his side

[00:39] <Charlie> they seem romen

[00:39] * Thor slips Charlie a note...

[00:39] <Carly> party pooper!

[00:39] <Carly> hehe

[00:39] <Carly> any suggestions?

[00:40] * Charlie takes the note and reads it and it says :

[00:40] <Thor> thou art wise noble charlie

0:40] <Thor> use thy judgement

[00:40] <Charlie> to fight free?

[00:40] <Thor> if thou wish it

[00:41] <Thor> with all power that come with great responcibilty

[00:41] <Kboll> *Gate dials

[00:41] <Kboll> *wormhole opens

[00:41] <Quinn15> I say we sit tight, and see what brews up

00:42] <Quinn15> Maybe we'll get the perfect chance

[00:42] <Thor> Charlie thou shall be free so swears Thor........

[00:42] <Kboll> *Roman guards race to do battle with Kboll

[00:43] <Thor> stand before Kboll

[00:43] <Thor> i say thee nay thou shall not pass

[00:43] * Kboll glows his eyes and attacks the guards

[00:43] <Thor> gaurds

[00:44] * Kboll races towards the city

[00:44] <Thor> Quinn what dost thou wisheth of me? shall i smight and set free charlie?

[00:44] * Charlie sits in the cage as people begin acting worried, while his friends meet away from him as visiting hours are over

00:45] <Charlie> *colliceum workers evacuate

[00:45] <Charlie> hey whats going on!

[00:45] <Charlie> <prison master> The gods know you trample the mighty lands and come to claim you!

[00:46] <Quinn15> Do what you think you should do

[00:46] * Thor rises to the occation and slams his hammer into ons side of the cage..........leaveing an opening for charlie to get out

[00:46] * Charlie is left alone in the center stage

[00:46] <Quinn15> I think you shouldn't

[00:46] <Thor> this is what i do best

.[00:46] <Thor> ODIN!!!!!!

[00:46] * Thor charges to battles

[00:46] <Thor> run sir charlie

[00:46] <Thor> i shall face them all

[00:46] * Charlie sneaks out of the cage as the guards dont seem to care

[00:47] <Charlie> they are scared for some reason

[00:47] * Thor creates a ball of lighting i the air

[00:47] <Thor> rolling it into the gaurds near the gate

[00:47] * Charlie makes it out of the collicum to the others

[00:47] <Carly> close call there

[00:47] <Kboll> *Goaul'd mother ship appears in orbit

[00:48] <Thor> FLEE FlEE FROM THE ODINSON!!

[00:48] <Charlie> Go to the gate!

[00:48] * Thor slams his hammer into the ground opening a cassem to swallow the an army of gurds

[00:48] * Carly watches the ship hover

[00:48] <Thor> to battle is to live

00:49] * Thor gazes to the heavens and see a ship above

[00:49] <Charlie> to run is to live

[00:49] <Thor> go sir charlie

[00:49] <Thor> go

[00:49] * Charlie races out of the path towards the garden of the gods, as jaffa emerge from the stargate

[00:50] * Thor swings his hammer and lets go... crushing the doors to the colisium

[00:50] * Charlie ducks out of site

[00:50] * Thor hammer returns to him

[00:50] * Kboll commands his jaffa to take the ground

[00:50] <Charlie> how do we get past all those jaffa?

[00:50] <Thor> allow me noble one

[00:51] * Thor hammer begins to glow

[00:51] * Charlie looks for Carly and mike

[00:51] * Thor charges the jaffa and meets them head on

[00:51] <Kboll> *Jaffa spot Carly in her frozen state looking at the mother ship

[00:52] <Charlie> they must of used some kind of freeze ray

[00:52] * Thor is hit with blast of a staff and crumbles in pain... eyes squinting with anger, raaaaaaaaauuuuughhh

[00:52] <Charlie> why arn't we effected?

[00:53] * Charlie runs to Carly and tries to shake her

[00:53] <Charlie> find mike

[00:53] * Thor raise from the ground throwing his hammer towards the ship above in a hope it would free his friends

[00:53] * Thor is tackled to the ground by jaffa

[00:54] * Charlie is taken by jaffa

[00:54] * Thor raise from underneath the pile of jaffa

[00:54] <Thor> noble charlie

[00:55] * Thor throws his hammer to charlie to use and crumbles in pain....Take this noble one

[00:55] <Thor> fight

[00:55] * Thor passes out

[00:55] * Kboll grabs the hammer and shocks the jaffa

[00:55] * Charlie does

[00:56] * Charlie does !!!!

[00:56] * Charlie pulls a Zat gun and stuns the jaffa in his way

[00:57] * Thor has been shackled by the jaffa and repeatedly kicked and shot..

[00:57] * Charlie shoots the zat, an electric pulse at Carly that shakes her free from her trance

[00:58] * Carly falls backward

[00:58] * Charlie searches for mike but runs to carly as the jaffa are down

[00:58] <Charlie> you ok?

[00:58] <Charlie> (zats cause alot of pain)

[00:58] * Thor has blood draining from his wounds and is drug across infront of the gate

[00:58] * Carly nods

[00:59] * Charlie pulls Carly to behind a pole

[00:59] * Thor 's body has been thrown onto the steps and left for dead

:00] * Charlie spots mike frozen

[01:00] * Charlie zats him and watches him collapse

[01:00] * Quinn15 walks up to Charlie, tapping him on the shoulder

[01:00] <Quinn15> Thats not me

[01:01] <Quinn15> Lets go

[01:01] <Charlie> oops

[01:01] <Charlie> ok

[01:01] * Charlie heads us towards the gate

[01:01] * Thor sters and caughs

[01:01] * Charlie oddly finds no one guarding the gate anymore and sees thor

[01:02] * Carly gets to her feet very unsteadily

[01:02] * Charlie passes him his hammer

[01:02] * Thor is bleeding and caughing up blood

[01:02] * Thor unshackle my hands so that i may grasp the hammer noble one

[01:02] * Quinn15 helps Carly

[01:02] * Charlie heads up and zats the chains three times causing them to dissapear

[01:03] <Charlie> I see they had you chained to the gate. .so that you would be dissinigrated by the matter formation

[01:03] * Thor feels a surge of power over flow him and his wounds begin to heal

[01:03] <Thor> aye

[01:03] <Charlie> now that your gone.. where are they why not guard you?

[01:03] * Charlie pulls thor off the pedistal

[01:04] <Thor> tis truely a battle for the gods eh ? i know not

[01:04] * Charlie hears dialing

[01:04] <Charlie> they'll dial in if we don't dial out first

[01:04] * Thor stagers to his feet

[01:04] * Thor runs to the gate and holds the iris still

[01:04] <Thor> dial sit dial

[01:04] * Charlie heads to the dial home device and begins pressing the hyroglyphs

[01:04] * Thor releases

[01:04] <Charlie> ***1 ****2

[01:05] <Charlie> ***3 ***4

[01:05] <Charlie> ***5 **6

[01:05] * Thor steadies himself

[01:06] * Charlie notices gate is on its 7th chevran as charlie presses the 7th chevran

[01:06] <Charlie> *Gate opens

[01:06] <Thor> i need a mug of ale when we make it sir charlie

[01:06] <Thor> shall we

[01:06] <Charlie> who opened it them or us?

[01:06] <Thor> one way to find out

[01:06] * Charlie fires the singal for them to open the iris

[01:06] <Charlie> guys!

01:07] * Charlie heads up to the gate as death gliders begin surrounding the city

[01:07] <Charlie> i wish we could help these people

[01:07] * Carly looks at Mike

[01:07] <Charlie> go thor

[01:07] <Carly> we should be going

[01:08] * Thor stagers to the gate and vanishes

[01:08] * Charlie heads in

[01:08] * Charlie vanishes

[01:08] * Kboll fliers fire at the gate

[01:08] * Quinn15 goes

[01:10] * Thor is propt up against the wall and slides to the floor as the others arrive...

[01:10] <Charlie> *General hammon orders the iris closed as Carly makes it through, just as a flier blast dents the wall

[01:10] * Charlie sighs

[01:11] <Charlie> everyone ok?

[01:11] * Carly nods

1:11] <Thor> soon i shall face the asgard for my disobidiance... aye, i am well as expected sir

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