The Competitor
What are they doing well?
The competitors are doing a good job of showcaseing their experience. Their websites are very well organized, all the important information is easily accessible. They also make it easy to contact them about their services.
What are they doing wrong?
Their websites are not engaging. The color scheme doesn't grab my attention and easy to glaze over. Their graphs also don't contain very much color making it difficult to read. The websites are also slightly detached from the creator, meaning their isn't much information on the person.
How can I do it better?
To help my audience get an understanding of who I am as a person, I want to include a section about my passions in the data world and how I came to be interested in data. I also want to incorporate engaging color scheme that is still professional but eye-catching. I also want to choose figures that people outside of the data field can look at and easily interpret.