His father was the greatest of Heroes, saving the entire universe from subjugation time and time again! Now he must continue that tradition , his powers are the same, but his outlook is different. He wields the mighty Nega bands and has the Celestial insight of Cosmic Awareness. The universe is his inheritance, for he is its Protector as he struggles to find his place amidst the Heavens, his buds call him Genis, but he's known and feared by his enemies as....

The Sensational Captain Marvel !



Captain Marvel #83



The Revisionist War Part II



Things get worse.



By Ralph L. Angelo Jr







The burning , gaseous surface of Saturn is receiving yet another plummeting visitor. As it does countless times a day. Meteors, smaller meteorites, as well as all sorts of flotsam and jetsam find their way to Saturns roiling gasses everyday. But this piece of matter is different. It is alive. Or at least it was when it was hurled into the huge planets gravitational influence. This discarded, burning being is the hero known as Captain Marvel! And he is dying!

Suddenly , his pain wracked face twists , as he is awakened by the incredible torment that tears through every inch of his being! "ARRRGGHH!" He screams agonizingly, pain his entire existence at the moment, but then , through the awful agony, the Universal Protector reacts, on an instinctual level. No longer is he quite the green hero he was ! Now , continued practice and regimented workouts and tactical practice have come into play! Concentrating inwardly, the young hero centers his entire being on his powerful Nega-Bands! They are all that fill his mind, his soul as he wills himself back to life! First he uses them to shunt off the incredible heat, then he uses the excess energy , as he has done many times before , to heal himself, to repair his battered body, as well as his costume! And just like that, the burning heat is no longer a threat to Captain Marvel. Now it powers him. Arcing away from the world of Saturn, on a plume of photonic energy, Captain Marvel streaks back towards deep space, already using his vaunted cosmic awareness to pinpoint the exact location of his attackers, Drax the Destroyer and Firelord. He has one thought in mind at the moment, one that burns as powerfully as the flames that engulfed him mere moments ago, Vengeance!

A mere hundred thousand miles from Genis' current position the two in question cruise back towards Titan. The Destroyer is the first to speak. "So Firelord, another evil one is destroyed. The masters vision of the universe proceeds with clarity."

Firelord looks towards his companion and nods. "Yes Destroyer. Soon none that could stand in the masters way will exist. Soon all will be as it should, As we know it will be under our wonderful masters rule."

"You two sicken me!"

Both turn towards the voice that accusingly attacks them from deep space, in time to be savagely torn into by the hurtling Captain Marvel, Protector of the Universe entire!

Ba-KOOOM!

Circling back around, Genis wastes no time, leveling powerful photon beams at the Destroyer, unleashing every erg of power he can into his friend and ally turned enemy. Relentlessly hammering him with an unmerciful power.

Wa-KOOOOM!

"Don't think I've forgotten you either Firelord. Believe me, I haven't."

"I would not accuse you of such boy. But I will accuse of foolishness. You should have run while you could have. Now you will be afforded no second chance. "

Genis smiles as the stars light the ebony tapestry surrounding him and his opponents. It is not a smile of humor, rather one of dark anger. Firelord uncharacteristically feels a chill go down his burning spine. "Bring it on hot head. Loser. No wonder Galactus got rid of you. You're the worst herald he ever had. The most ineffective. Waste. C'mon, I want to get this over with so I can be back home in time for the late night news."

With an inarticulate growl Firelord hurls himself at Captain Marvel, his staff blazing two trails of cosmic flame from its ends as he rockets towards Genis-Vell! Genis' face grows calm, instead of panicking, he calms himself. Then the cosmos itself suddenly appears on his visage. The stars, the planets. All are reflected there darkly. And still does the young hero not move, until Firelord is right atop him and then, and only then does Captain Marvel strike! A move so fast that none could possibly perceive it, least of all the angered Firelord, Captain Marvel accelerates quickly as Firelord smashes head first into another rocketing figure, the powerful form of the Destroyer !

Ba-WHOOOOMMM!

Captain Marvel smiles again. "I've had enough playtime for today boys. I'll have to catch up with you both another day." Without another word, Genis streaks away, as the two unconscious cosmic heroes float in the void, insensate.

"I wish I was as confident as I try to sound" he thinks to himself, "but after what happened when I returned "home" the craziness I found there has me worried. Especially now that these two boneheads attacked me, almost as if they don't recognize me, or don't remember things about our shared pasts the way I do. Am I insane? Maybe I'm not even in the right reality. But no, I went through this already. I would know if this wasn't my reality. That's the problem, everything is fine according to my cosmic awareness. It's just not to me. Something is very wrong, Very , very wrong."

In deep thought, Captain Marvel speeds to Earth, not manipulating Hyperspacial barriers this time, rather taking the many hours long route through normal space. In deep thought he descends towards New York City, the gleaming beacon on the East Coast of the United States. Slowly, arms spread wide and behind him, Genis-Vell flies through clouds, finally bursting through their low hanging cover, his photon trail glistening in his wake as he approaches the city proper.

"Whoa! This is definitely not right!"

Ahead of Genis a strange panorama beckons him, The basic architecture of the city has changed. The streets are almost archaic, cobblestone paths lie where concrete and tar once did. Horse drawn carriages rumble across the old streets, while above, higher then the highest skyscraper, string futuristic roadways the likes of which even Captain Marvel has never seen before! Vehicles powered perhaps by magnetic induction fly closely above the gleaming paths. While higher still , space faring vessels dart and race above the city so far below.

"No." He murmurs to himself, "definitely not in Kansas anymore."

Arcing low, below the mag-ways, Captain Marvel concentrates his cosmic awareness on a certain building he knows to be in the city. One where he hopes he can find answers to his many questions. Finally, Avengers Mansion looms below him. With a slight "whoosh" he accelerates and then slows to land softly on the mansions great lawn.

"Hopefully I'll get some answers here. If not, then I'm in deeper then I thought." As he thinks those words Genis solidly raps on the door. An instant later a ghost-like head appears from a section of wall three floors up.

"Captain Marvel?!" Surprise as well as a hint of emotion fill the Visions voice as the android Avenger sees the young hero down below. "We wondered if perhaps you would arrive here anytime soon. I see our thoughts and plans were not in vain." As the Vision speaks , he floats down from above towards the Universal Protector, fists first. Then suddenly he solidifies, changing his density to his ultimate-ultimate! Then, he collides with the young hero , with devastating results!

Ba-Kooom!

Interlude.....

Somewhere, some when else.... A massive figure draped in shadow enters a room. In the center of the room an even larger figure stands strapped to a huge upright metallic slab. His limbs spread wide and held in place, the mammoth figure says nothing, as energy seemingly bleeds from every pore, from its very eyes, as the creatures mouth is spread wide in a constant agonizing , silent scream. Even it's mouth bleeds the brackish energy that floats upwards to a huge parabolic collector dish of sorts. The first figure stares momentarily, then exits the room, uttering one word as he leaves, "Excellent."

End interlude.



Avengers Mansion. The Vision stands, dragging Captain Marvel to his feet, he delivers another powerful blow, shaking the Earth itself with its impact!

Ta-WHHOOOOM!

Genis hurtles through the air. Barely conscious, he crumples to the ground as the stoic android advances on his struggling form. "You are yet awake Captain? I am duly impressed. I will end this quickly. You will be taken into custody and held for the master to decide your fate." As he speaks the Vision flies upwards once again, to descend wraithlike towards Captain Marvel, seeking to disrupt his body painfully.

But Captain Marvel does not wait for the Vision to attack him, instead he rockets upwards on a stream of photons, to streak through the Visions form before the synthezoid can strike! "Unnngh! That HURT! But it's better then him laying that hand on me for more then a nano-second. If he did, I'd be out for sure.", he thinks silently.

Suddenly the door to Avengers Mansion bursts outwards as the assembled Avengers storm onto the mansions lawn, Captain America in the lead. "Dynamo" Shouts the sentinel of liberty with authority none can deny, take the point. Thor, Ms. Marvel, Abomination. Back him up. Take this scum down, NOW!" As he speaks, Captain America hurls his shield at the floating Captain Marvel. A move Genis easily avoids, but he can't avoid the repulser blasts that slam him from the sky !

Zzzzaaa-KOWWW!

Ms. Marvel continues the attack, the female fury rockets into Captain Marvel powerfully, slamming him across the lawn and into the building itself with a resounding "BOOM!"

"AARrrgggh!" Genis cries agonizingly, as the gamma goliath, "Abomination" rushes towards him. "N-no, n-not this easy . W-whatever happens here, no way are you wannabes gonna take me down." With a roar, Genis fires a massive photon blast at the Abomination, knocking the monster from his feet, as he streaks skyward!

Accelerating wildly , the young hero disappears from sight, as even the fastest of the Avengers assembled is left far behind. "No way I could 've taken the Avengers down, at least not in the condition I'm in. I guess there's no use in checking out the FF either. Things are getting worse by the minute. What happens now?"

As if in answer, a lazar bolt shoots across his shoulder.

"OWWww! What the? " Genis turns, as floating behind him, a Police car of sorts hovers with guns aimed at him.

"Freeze dirtbag! Don't twitch a muscle. You do, you're dead."

"Oh please." Is all Captain Marvel says as flies headlong into the hover-car and punches it end over end across the skyline with one blow!

Pa-KOOM!

Without a backwards glance, Captain Marvel streaks towards the lower levels of the city, leaving the upper levels instantly behind. He lands amid the thronging mass of people when suddenly...

"There he is, the evil one! KILL HIM! "

Suddenly the once passive crowd, who look for all the world like serfs from some medieval realm , attack Genis. As pipes , boards, and anything loose and within hands reach becomes a deadly weapon! Captain Marvel is beaten relentlessly by the angry horde, disappearing beneath their pounding fury!

"GET OFF OF ME!" His voice roars from beneath them as he hurls them from him, like so many leaves before a storm! The people fly in all directions! As suddenly Captain Marvel speeds through the air, away from the roaring crowd. "Where do I go from here? Everyone is out to get me. I have to stay low, or the Cops or even the Avengers will be on my tail. I could fly into space, but where would I go? Two worlds , millions of miles apart have been changed. That means probably the whole universe is affected. Where in Chronos' name do I go?"

Below him crowds scream his name again, offering up all types of bludgeons to maim and hopefully kill him with.

Racing down low, and away quickly , Captain Marvel dives towards a filthy midtown alley. In a flash of light, he transforms his new costume* into a pile of rags. Pulling himself up underneath a pile of paper and other assorted trash, Captain Marvel hides amid the dregs of the city, as the howling crowd goes by, searching for him. Overhead he sees Thor and the Crimson Dynamo fly by, obviously searching for him.

* See issue 81 for all the details

One thought fills his beleaguered mind,"What now?"






Next: What now indeed?

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Kree-Lore C/O [email protected]

Another great issue, Ralph. The Revisionist War looks to be another

great storyline. You've built quite a mystery here, one I'm looking

forward to learning more about.


One request for the series after this story is finished and things

return to 'normal': I'd like to see Genis' supporting cast featured a

little more. It seems like the last few issues they haven't been

getting as much play as they used to.


Excellent work. Keep it up!


Thanks Matt! Keep reading buddy, the best is yet to come.



Hey Buddy! Well, I have to admit that I didn't see anything in this issue coming

> and that I love it! Genis is certainly going to have his work cut out for him in

> this story arc and I think we are all going to be in for one heck of a ride!

> Keep up the great work!




Thanks TJ. I really think the "Revisionist War" is going to possibly be the best thing I've written here. When you guys see where this is all leading to, I think you'll all be really, REALLY stunned. At least I hope so.

See you all next issue.

Ralph

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