The Mentor II

From: [email protected] (Susan)



This story is about a juvenile female who has lost her way in the world of peer pressure and outside influence. This story does contain two spanking scenes, but the author doesn't condone the spanking of children and it is purely fictional.

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"Anna, Taylor will be here soon so you need to get up, my mom said through my bedroom door.

"I'm up mom," I said.

But I really wasn't and I wasn't in a great hurry to get out of bed. It was Sunday and I wanted to spend it with Megan at the mall. I laid there and thought how this was going to ruin my life and how I felt like I was being punished for being a kid. Rules, who needs them!. Taylor didn't understand about my life. It was all my moms fault that I got into so much trouble. If she spent more time with me and didn't work so much maybe I would be a different kid, but this was how I was and they were going to have to accept that..... I called Megan.

"Hey, lets go to the mall, but we have to leave like real soon before my warden gets here and I'm stuck in therapy all day."I said in a whisper.

"Ok thirty minutes and meet me at my house ok, I said. Out my bedroom window ok?"

I hung up, jumped in the shower and threw some stuff in a backpack and dropped it out my bedroom window. Megan was there and caught it. I went into the kitchen and grabbed an orange.

"Mom I'm going outside to wait for Taylor ok! and out the door I went before she could say anything. We ran down the street as fast as we could toward the city bus stop that would take us to the mall and to my whole day of freedom.

We got to the mall and there were actually not to many people there. It was great. We stayed all day and then we headed back to Megans house. It was about six and I figured mom would be making dinner so I told Megan that I should just go home.

"Well after today I probably won't have to deal with Taylor any more. I told him I didn't need his help." I said.

As I rounded the corner toward my house I felt relieved, his car wasn't there. I went inside the house to deal with my mom.

"Young lady, where have you been? She yelled

"Mom just chill, I went to the mall with Megan, no big deal," I replied.

"Well it was a big deal to Taylor, when he got here we looked everywhere for you." She stated.

"Mom, I don't need a babysitter and I don't need his help, if you all wanna help me then just leave me alone and stay out of my personal business. I am glad he left."I stated.

We had a very big fight and I once again said very hurtful things to her.

"Anna, I can't help you so I decided to totally give you over to Taylor. He is responsible for you now. You insist on having to learn the hard way so I guess thats the way it will be. She said.

"I HATE YOU!!!" I said and I headed for the door, I opened it and ran right into the chest of my mentor.

"Trying to skip out on me again little girl," He said in a very harsh voice.

"GET OUT OF MY WAY," I yelled

Maybe it was me, but he seemed pretty pissed, he grabbed me by the arm and preceeded to plant my butt right down in a chair at the table. I was to shocked to say anything. No one had ever treated me this way before.

"Put your head down," he ordered as he pointed to the table.

"What! no way! I replied

"Do it now," he again ordered.

"NO I WONT" I yelled back and I quickly stood up to protest his treatment.

Taylor looked at my mom.

"How much time do you need Taylor," she asked as he was holding me in place.

"Well considering he unwillingness to cooperate, give me about 45 minutes,' he replied

My mom picked up her purse and left me alone in our house with Taylor. After my mom walked out he grabbed me and took me to a corner and stuck my face in. Every time I tried to get out he held me there.

"Stop it!" I cried. Let me goooo.

"Are you ready to talk?" he asked.

NO! and get your hands the fuck off of me, I replied. As he held me into the corner.

"Anna you will stay in this corner for fifteen minutes, and the time starts when I let go and you stay here with out being held. I have all night, he replied

I was so pissed, but I wanted out of that corner. I started fighting with him, but he was much stronger than he looked. I continued to struggle, but he held me tight into the corner. I tried to kick him but he put his shoulder into my back and preceeded to pull my shoes off, one at a time.

"Stop fighting me," he ordered.

"Let me out," I ordered and I continued to try kicking him.

I'm done playing games with you and this is getting old, he said as he laid three smacks on my bottom.

SMACK..... SMACK.......SMACK.....

It really caught me off guard. I had never been smacked before by anyone.

Owwwww , what Oweee are you, Owwww doing, I cried,as I felt him lay them upon my butt with force.

He then turned me around by my shoulders and spoke to me.

"You have two choices, You will stand here for fifteen minutes with out me holding onto you. When I let go, if you don't stay put on your own, I am going to put you across my knee and spank you, then we will talk about the rules you broke today and the way I heard you talk to your mom when I was standing outside the door." he replied.

He then turned me back around and stuck my face back in the corner. When he let go, I decided I had better stay put. I somehow didn't doubt his word and I really didn't want to find out what a spanking from him would feel like. The three swats really hurt my feelings and I felt strange about that. Did I actually care? Oh my! were these actual tears on my face? someone actually got me to cry real tears? I cried quietly in the corner. I wonder if he could hear me crying? I stood there with my face in the corner until I heard him tell me that I could get out. We walked into the living room and he told me to sit on the couch. I couldn't believe that I was actually listening to him and I couldn't believe that I was being punished by a kid. I didn't feel so angry after standing there, but I didn't like being told what to do.

"Are you ready to talk now?" he asked as he stood there looking down at me.

"Do I have a choice?" I asked.

"Anna, we all have choices, you are just making bad ones and I am going to do whatever it takes to help you fix that." he replied as he took a seat on the coffee table. "We could have done this the right way, but you chose to ditch me and you had your mom worried. I know you don't feel it now, but she cares about you and so do I. "Do you have anything to say?" he asked

I looked at him and I couldn't help it, I just got so mad. He came into my house and was trying to tell me what to do, boy he had some nerve and I am not going to listen to him.

"Yes, I have something to say. I hate you! and I hate my mom for bringing you here and I want you to leave!" I stated as I turned away from him.

I wouldn't expect you to feel any other way under the circumstances, but you won't feel that way forever, because I'm not leaving Anna. I don't like to use force to get you to do what your suppose to do. If you follow the rules that we all agree upon then you have nothing to worry about, but if you break them Anna, there will be consequences for your misbehavior and I will punish you." he said.

For some reason that statement got my attention, but I wasn't willing to believe his threats or promises or what ever he wanted to call them.

"So what do I have to do to get this night over with, because I want to go to my room," I cried.

"Well we need to talk about some things, like I know why you left with out telling your mom today. I know you didn't want to see me and that bothers me because I thought we had a good start yesterday. She was really worried about you." he said.

"I went to the mall with my friend, we go every Saturday, but I couldn't go Saturday so I promised her that I would today."I replied.

"Can I ask you a question now?"I said

"Sure" he replied.

"Why did you swat me anyway," I asked.

"Because I asked you to cooperate, you were trying to kick me and you said fuck. None of your behavior was acceptable. You got off lucky, I should have spanked you ass for that, but I want to give you a chance to behave and turn yourself around," he replied. "We are going to discuss rules and you will not break them. Do you understand?" he asked.

"I need time to think about this, I replied. I couldn't believe he said he would spank me. This was going to be a big problem.

"Ok, Thats fine, but we will talk tomorrow after school. I will pick you up and we will spend the afternoon together until your mom gets home. We will discuss rules then. Ohh and by the way, your grounded for the whole week for your little stunt today and for the way I heard you talk to your mom. I will be here every day after school and you better come home. Do you understand that?" he asked.

"Yes, I get you loud and clear," I replied. Can I go to my room now?" I asked.

"Goodnight Anna," he said.

I was out of there fast and as far away from him as I could get. It was like having a dad now and I hated it. My butt was actually stinging from those three swats and he made me get tears in my eyes. What was I going to do about all of this. I picked up the phone to tell Megan, but I sort of got embarrassed about the swats and having to stand in the corner that I decided to keep it all a secret.


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