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Rose of the Sun

by Mercurien Bladebrother

Manetheren’s young King rose and fell easily in his saddle as his mount trotted proudly along the terraced streets of the Mountain city. His stallion was a trained warhorse, proven in battle, but more, he was a King’s horse. He knew when to fight, when to run, and when to trot proudly, on display for the people of the King.

The people made way, and shouted their cheers for their King. Aemon, son of Caar, son of Thorin had the people’s love, their respect. He was a young man, and his Kingship showed the bursting enthusiasm of his age, bringing his city and his people great happiness. All of the women wanted to mother him, all of the girls wanted to kiss him. Every man, from Master At Arms to innkeeper, wanted to offer the advice of experience, and every boy was wracked with envy for the King they struggled to emulate.

He was a young King, but a good King. There was but one complaint, yet it was uttered by everyone in Manetheren. It was uttered by the women in a voice of matronly concern, by the girls with a deep longing sigh, by the men in a voice of jovial earnestness, by the boys as to a friend. Aemon, their King, needed a Queen.

But such thoughts were far from his mind as Aemon rode through the streets towards his palace, returning from an inspection tour of the city’s defences. In fact, his eyes keenly roved over the streets, taking in information. Were the businesses struggling or flourishing? Were beggars scurrying from street corners? Were the children plump and healthy or over-thin? Were the roads clean, and the houses well-built? For such details make a good King a great King. And Aemon was destined to be a great King.

Of a sudden, though, his roving eyes paused, moved on, then sprang back again. He pulled on the reins and sat back in his saddle, halting his horse. His heartbeat raced as in battle, and his mouth went dry.

“Surely,” he thought, “Surely the light never created a woman so beautiful as she. Surely she is a mirage, an illusion, surely this is a dream from which I am about to wake.” She was the most perfect woman he had ever seen, as though the master craftsmen of all ages has labored over every fine detail of her, honing her sweetness until it almost hurt to look upon her. Her fair hair framed a perfect, beautiful face, and she stepped, walked, moved with abundant grace. She was perfect.

The young woman at whom he stared pretended not to notice, and went about her shopping, purchasing fruits and meat and ribbon and thread while her King watched, staring at her as though he could not turn his eyes away. He spoke quietly to an attendant, without moving his eyes from her.

“Go to that woman. Find out who she is. Ask her if she will sup with her King.”

The man dismounted and walked to the woman.

“My Lady, may I ask your name?”

She blushed. “I am Eldrene ay Ellan ay Carlan, My Lord.”

He smiled. “My King, Aemon of Manetheren, invites you to sup with him.”

She continued to blush but her voice carried an edge of steel. “His eyes look upon me hungrily, not as a King but as a man. What manner of man is he?”

The attendant was shocked. “What manner of man? He is King of Manetheren. All people know of his courage, his wisdom. All of Manetheren loves him.”

She shook her head. “I love my King as much as anyone else. But what sort of man is he? What manner of man approaches a Lady by sending his servant? Does the King of Manetheren wish to dine with a subject, or does Aemon, a man, wish to dine with me?

“Go to your King, My Lord. Tell him that if he wishes to dine with me, he will approach me as any other man would approach a woman. Let him stand outside my house and convince me to accompany him.”

The attendant was shocked but Eldrene would not reconsider, and he walked back to his King and remounted.

“My King, her name is Eldrene. She is daughter of Ellan, daughter of Carlan. And she will not sup with you unless you stand outside her house in the manner of all men of Manetheren, and call her to come with you. For such, as she says, is the way of our people.”

The attendant was wary, waiting for the King’s anger. But Aemon threw back his head and laughed with glee. “She will have me stand and convince her to come with me?”

The attendant nodded.

Aemon laughed again. “The rose has a stem of steel, it seems! So be it!”

And so it was that the following morning, just after dawn, the King emerged from his palace upon his stallion, both of them groomed for high ceremony. For centuries, men of Manetheren had declared their love from before their beloved’s house, risking rejection in public, risking mockery and humility as the price they must pay for a woman’s love. The King wore the dress uniform of the Lord of Guards, and carried a power-wrought heron-marked blade. His stallion’s tack and saddle were of fine leather, inlaid with gold and blood-red silk. He carried the shield of his fathers, the Red Eagle of Manetheren embossed on its front.

And he came alone.

And alone he approached the still-sleeping house where Eldrene resided. And as he stood before it he thought he detected movement within. Well, he would wake them soon enough. He called out, as loud as he could, for all the street to hear, calling Eldrene by the name which would be hers evermore:

“Rose of the sun, rise and bloom! For the world is marred from perfection until you grace it!”

>From the window above there was nothing. No sound, no movement. Yet Eldrene was there, and though Aemon could not see the flows, she had reached for the Source, and wound air about him, so that his next words, and all that followed, flowed throughout the mountain city, echoing off the Mountains of Mist, and were heard by all in Manetheren, in the mountains and on the plains. And everywhere, people woke, or stopped their morning’s work, and heard the voice of their King.

“Rose of the sun, rise and bloom! For beside you all beauty pales!”

This time there was a stir at the window and Aemon could see a shadow within. An older woman, handsome in her maturity, carrying the memory of great beauty, opened the window and swallowed her nerves, as her daughter’s flows carried her words too.

“Who disturbs my daughter’s sleep?”

“I am Aemon, son of Caar, son of Thorin, and I declare before all who hear me that your daughter is the most beautiful woman in the light. So do I declare, standing in morning’s first light. I beg you, permit her to address me, if only to revile me and send me away.”

Ellan swallowed, still not believing these words were coming from her King. “So shall it be, Aemon al Caar al Thorin. If she wishes, she may come.”

Aemon shouted louder, though the flows made this un-necessary, and all of Manetheren listened.

“Eldrene, Rose of the Sun, I am Aemon. And I beg you to address me, for my heart is empty with longing, and all the world’s treasures are as dust while you are hidden.

“Eldrene, Rose of the Sun, let your beauty shine over all Manetheren from your window this morn!”

And then she was there.

Dressed in silks of Maroon and deep blue, Eldrene stood by the window. She had been preparing for hours, and she truly did look like the Rose of the Sun.

“Aemon, Red Eagle and King, why do you come?”

He replied. “I come to tell all of Manetheren that you are the greatest beauty within it.”

“You have done so, Red Eagle. Need you tarry further?”

“I must, my lady.”

“Why, Red Eagle? You have done as you wished. Why not go?”

A sudden boldness seized Aemon and he spoke as from the heart. “For my lady, I am King of Manetheren, and I would wish that the Mountain’s greatest beauty be my Queen!”

Her flows faltered as she stumbled, taken aback, but there was no doubt as to her response, and the flows were strong again as she answered.

“Enter my House, Aemon, King of Manetheren. I will be your Queen.”

At her words, the silence of the streets was no more, as a thousand thousand voices were raised in cheer, a cheer which rolled from hilltop to hilltop, right across the land, unassisted by the power, from man to man, woman to woman, child to child, all joined in a chorus of exultation and glee at the words which had held them in rapt attention.

For Manetheren had found its Queen.

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