Title: Rites of Passage Series: Bonds of Choice #5 Author: Hiper Bunny Email: ChezBunny@hotmail.com Fandom: SW: The Phantom Menace Paring: Obi-Wan/ Qui-Gon Rating: NC-17 Category: Slash, AU, Angst Warnings: M/M sex, AU, **VIOLENCE** (see notes) Status: New, Complete Date: September 10, 1999 Webpage: http://www.shadowynd.com/~chezbunny/index.html Archive: Yes to: CKoS, haven-of-fic, M_A, RedRoom, Smutfic, TempleFic, TranformationFic, Witnesslist, WWOMB All Others: Just let me know where. Witnesslist Category: Inadmissible in Court Summary: The Boys are sent on a mission, Qui-Gon teaches a lesson, Obi-Wan receives a gift with a future and some linguistic confusion gets resolved. Disclaimers: The Boys belong to George "Our Heavenly Father" Lucas. Please don't smack me with a big ol' lawsuit. The poetry quoted herein is copyrighted by Jody Marie, and is used WITH permission. I just wanted to be able to say that about SOMETHING in these stories. I made no money off of this. Notes: ACHTUNG!!! SQUICK WARNING!!!!! If you are liable to be upset by corporal punishment between a Master and his Padawan Learner, beware. When you see the line "Face down on the deck. Push up on your arms." That would be the time to bail. Skip to the next set of asterisks to continue with the story. This is a scene of graphic violence described in loving detail from my own SM experiences, which were extreme in nature. I survived, so do our heroes, but I recognize that this could be seriously upsetting to certain individuals. This is also the scene that moved my Padawhine to call Qui-Gon a scum-sucking bastard, so 'nuff said. Rauhnee, once again you led me through the wilderness that is re-writing. Without you, my boys would be sitting in a tent going "Well, now what?" Thank you so much for all the work you do on these stories. Big thanks go to my Padawhine Mre, who is also known as my 'voice of sanity.' She lets me know when I go too far, when I've forgotten to do Qui-Gon's internal motivations thus making him come across like a thug in beige and basically defends our heroes from misuse at my evil hands. She's a Qui-Gon girl, so a lot of the more in-depth stuff here is brought to you by her guiding influence. // Qui-Gon's telepathy // ** Obi-Wan's telepathy ** <> * thoughts *