Aw its so sweet! I just hope that hwoarang and julia can get back together ^_^
keep up the awsome writing, and since i know you love wrestling I hope you saw the awsome return of the rock last night!
I'll be reading...

This was a great chp. Please update faster ok?

Hey I really liked this one because it was funny a little serious and i liked it but not to be rude or trying to tell you what to do but i think that Hwoarang and Julia should be couples! lol I like Steve and Julia too but christie and Hwoarang...lol i don;t care i am just saying though. lol

Aww...this was a cute chapter. I think you could go onto professional writing. Anywho, Good luck and update soon!

lol funny! Hope you update faster this time ^^

poor steve, poor julia, poor jin, poor ling, and poor jun and kazuya for walking in on their son

This chapter is hilarious!! I can't wait for more!

nice chappie.

Sweet, Jin got busted.

The other stuff was pretty funny too

I should have known Hwo and Cristie could'nt stay friendly for long :) Shaved eyebrows:)!

one word...ha no eyebrows!

Gr...You stopped writing! I demands you write da rest, pretty please? n.n

continuing to read, and loving your story, while distrubing the whole neigbourhood with my laughing. lol, it's so sweet that Jin and Xiaoyu are getting married, finally got it into the open yay!

Okay another person on my kill list:-
Heihachi! And you!
If you blow the question off one more time, expect a girl knocking on the door, with a wonderfully big sledge hammer...

Well, beacuse I stayed up so late, only two hours from skool, I over slept. So I guess I have the day off! Yay!
Now on to the review...
I am killing Julia next time I see her on tekken (Layughs evilly) that's for phone with your stuitped problem at the wrong time MUha ha ha ha
K.O!

I finally read to here! UPDATE! I wanna know what happens next. Really good, keep it up:)

o, must find out what happens to Julia...S* I only have two hours tell skool starts!!?! Ne, I'll say I'm ill, or I'll go to skool and faint...either way I'm still reading this...

oo, must read next chapter, heck am I gonna be tried 4 skool tomorrow! YOu should be an author, you'd be bigger than J.K Rowling, well I'd asy more, but wants 2 find out what happens next!

lol, lvon chapter 21! (it's me kerrianne, the only idoit to be reading when she's tired in the morning) The arguements betwen Lee and Kazuya and Heiachi are hilarous!

LMAO! Ha, reading chap 18, ;) It's so funny! You're so good at writing these things

This chp. was really good.Please update soon.Hope Steve and Julia can get along like Hwoarang and Christie.^_^

OMG no! Baek and Michelle can't get married, T.T they'll be no hope for julia nad hwoarang!

LOL! I'm loving chapter 9 and 8!! You get the characters personalities so well ^^ And you make me laughh my head off !

LMAO!I love this chapter (chap 4) It's so cute! You must be wring more okay? Don't care if your finshed lol, your story is so great! (I'll probley make a fanlisting coz I love it so much ^^) On to chapter 5 (now 1:49am)

*In uncontrolable laughter* ;) I love chpater 3 IT'S SO FUNNY! I don't care if I stay up half the night reading this any more lol

LMAO! Just reading first chapter and loving it! It's 1:29am in the mornig where I am, I'm well tired. But I really can't be bothered to get up and go to bed...I'll read the rest instead.
o.O how many chapters...?!?
I'll try and read it all in one neight coz I want to, but I can't promise anything...
Trying to stay awake as I finsh this >.<
z ! I'm awake! really I am...

i read it

Oh I love DDR! I'm at the light level and slowly getting used to the standard level. I have exactly a week and a half before I go against a friend of mine who works at standard so I have to get better! Okay enough about me, the chapter was great! But my only conscern is what happens if they get caught... Update soon!

That was a funny chapter. You're doing a great job on this fic.

Good update. Keep it up.

This chapter was awesome! It had, humor, originality, and a tinge of fighting. Who would have thought Christie and Hwo would get along. I feel sorta sorry for Julia and Steve. I was not surprised with Jin and Xiaoyu. Please update

You have out done yourself. This chapter was awesome, funny, and had that tinge of fighting in to. Who would have thought Christie and Hwo get along. Please update

i really like thise chapter too! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE!

You are evil for making these chapters so small.

You are good for making these chapters so good

I love this fic, can't you tell

this is so cool its not really tekken junior but more like tekken :the days of our lives

Honestly, I like the story to a degree, but I don't like where the story has headed. Jin has never liked Xiaoyu in 'that way' from what I've seen in the Tekken series. (However, Xiaoyu DOES seem to have a 'thing' for Jin though, according to Tekken 4). I've never thought that the Hwoarang/Julia thing would work out, but strangely enough, you've written it really well. I can actually see them as being a couple. Props on that. :) Steve/Christie? o_O Never saw that coming, but it doesn't really bother me. Oh well, keep writing. After all, this IS fanfiction.net. It's what is called 'fanfiction,' so you can pretty much write whatever you want (as long as no real sex is involved, a.k.a - NC-17 fics o_O). Your story is entertaining and something fresh in the (somewhat) stale world of Tekken fics that are being released these days. Keep at it. :P

Hahahahahaha! That was hilarious. I wonder if they don't care about the sex is not an option thing. Jin and Xiaoyu are pretty smart not to drink unlike the others. Please update soon.

Another good chapter and very funny again...but it seems like they are gettin shorter and shorter. Oh well who am I to complain keep up the good work.

wow...nice story...and hail the return of Forest...is he a psychiatrist or a psychologist...nice twist w/ the "secretly desiring each other" possibility...send in the next chap soon

lol that was funny! lol and this was another good chapter! So, I hope you continue!

Later

That chapter was very funny!! And what an unexpected turn!!

Forest, you smug bastard.

I forsee, HELL, for all involved

NO SEX!! Lmao. How will they survive??

Update soon!

Great chapter. Keep it up. This is my favorite Tekken fanfic, and you are on my favorite authors list.

FINALLY, I HAVE COME BACK TO FANFICTION.NET! AND FOREST IS BACK IN TEKKEN JR! Sweet chappy, skittle. Man, I need to catch up with Tekken Survivor and Runaway's new chappys, which should be up tonight (Cheap Plug, I know). So keep up The good work skittle, and review my fics!

Wordlife to ya!

ha ha this just gets better and better and the one liners are geat...next chapter is going to be hell!

wow...this actually the first time i had given a review 2 this fic since when i first began reading it last year...(actually i did but it was under -)...jez time can fly...one day bickering toddlers...next bickering married (or almost married) adults...just like a soap opera...nice twists with the drunkeness...alcohol is bad...in excess...btw since when did they become chain smokers and drinkers...wonder if they're gonna have each other's kid...a plot twist to bring them closer together...or even farther apart...just a thought...hope this'll be a lesson to all adolescents (including myself)...how not to screw your life...this kinda stuff prob nevr happens...but i guess it could...is soo sound like an old geezer...maybe it's the heat...one thing though...do mean to use "threw or through"...only really bothersome thing for me...sorry...write more...you really planned this one out eh'...wonder if this'll be the 1st fanfic 2 reach 100 chaps...b cool if it was...i'll shut up now

I agwee wiff ya. POWEW TO THE INSANE!

^_^ Enjoyibwe!

*bouncing up and down*
NEXT CHAPTER MUST COME SOON!
Please? ^_^

Well, to get you off the evil number of reviews, here's one. Another great chapter! Update!

there gonna die ha ha ha oh well you could still update with the remaining characters...what happened to forest?

Lol! THat was a funny chapter! But all of these chapters are funny. That's why I love this story!!

Jin, that was a low blow
This story still rocks

OMG that was so funny when Xioayu tripped Chris! lol i was bursting out laughing lol and i thought that was a great chapter so please continue because this is a good story and it will turn out to be a great story!
later

Update real soon

Hey, i was wondering if you have another chapter to Tekken Jr. I think is so... funny! HAHAHAHA! I like this story. write more okay! see ya! V(^_^)V

Great fic! If Xiaoyu moves out, I say either she moves in with Miharu, or Miharu moves in with Julia and Christie. Oh, and can you make Julia a little less bitchy? Thanks. And pro wrestling is fake.

wait! Xiao's moving out? why would she want to leave her friends? yes, they're irresponsible but who cares? i just hope this isn't one of those misunderstanding thing again though it was funny. anyway, update soon! can't wait for the next chap!

Hwoarang in a mid-life crisis? LOL! Love it! Great story! :D

hey i really liked this chapter i guess so please f you can please continue!

Man, this is a good story! I had the thought that Hworang was evil like that... anyway, good story!

WOW! Xiao movin' out! Let me take a guess, Jin wiil move out too, Xiao and Jin will share an apartment, and then the damned, "I never drink, never smoke, never make mistakes" bull wiil end!
If you couldn't have guessed, I hate XiaoJin! And I also have Xiao and Jin as people induvidually! This is getting too dang long!
Wordlife to ya!
Begin Shameless Plug Alert: skittle, the new chappys of The Runaway and Tekken Survior are up, so R&R if you can! :End Shameless Plug Alert

woah, Xiaoyu wants to move out! Well she was going to live with Jin anyway but are you seriously trying to end their friendship?! I better see some answers! Update soon!

...uh oh. i really cant blame Xiaoyu...i mean they are so irresponsible and they take this whole epidemic as one big joke! i mean GOD, they are starting to get on my nerves >_< but i guess xiao doesnt have to be all preachy...O_o GAH i dont kno...im so confused. cant wait for more
T.P

i hate it when people leave the audience wanting more -_-' oh well guess youll just have to update k:)

Madness, greatness with warmth and humour

Funny chapter, I love this story!!

yay! OH FinALLY YOU UPDATE!! ^^ waiting soo long!! The next update better not take as long!! T_T

I do not care whaqt Ling does. She's is getting on my last nerves and I'm starting not to enjoy her i-told-you-so attitude. yes they know that she's getting married to jin, yeah whatever who cares already.

this is one of the best fics i've ever read in my life! i just love this chapter especially the misunderstanding between jin and xiaoyu.man that was hillarious!keep it up!

I'd be out

I bet that Forest raped Jin, Steve and Hwoarang, heehee just kidding

that was some funny stuff

That was some funny stuff!

That chappy was super funny!

yea, nice story and all. but baek doo san's last name is baek,(i am korean so i kno) and hworang is a name wit already two syllables. in korea, they rarely have names wit more than three syllables, and therefore it should be baek hworang. jus wanted to point that out.

Julia and her red headed "hubby" were so funny in this chappy

YOU ROCK! ^-^ -_- O_O

hoe do you come up with such AMAZING storys!-_-^_^

U must hurry and update, i mean it! that was the best chappy ever

tHAT'S RIGHT JIN AND LING! TELL EM LIKE IT IS. THIS IS MY LAST CHAPPY FOR TONIGHT THOUGH, I NEED TO GET SOME SHUT EYE, IT'S TWO IN THEE MORNIN

i LIKED THAT CHAPPY AND I GUESS I LIKE THE STORY TOO. FOR A MINUTE IT, AND YOU, WERE OFF OF MY FAVORITES LIST.

i AM ANGRY AND READY TO DIE! MY HAIR, REALLY THOUGH, I AM ANGRY AND HWORARANG (I DON'T CARE ABOUT HIS STUPID NAME!) IS SO ANNOYING. INSTEAD OF THE EVIL JIN HURTING LING HE SHOULD'VE MESSED UP THAT STUPID REDHEAD!

I knew iT! WHY RUIN JULIA AND HWOARANG'S RELATIONSHIP JUST BECAUSE YOU DON'T LIKE THE GURL? mAYBE IT'LL BE BETTER THOUGH, THIS IS LIKE AN EXTRA LONG SOAP OPERA.

Don't break up Julia and Hwoarang! I mean it

That was alright

Why don't you like Julia? She's way better then stupid Christie! Thanx for letting her have a nice chappy though because her and Ling are my favvies!

That was good, because of this story I really like Jin now.

Now that was funny! I figured Nina and Paul were...you know. Steve is a sweetie.

That was so sad. Poor Hwoarang. I thought his first word was going to be a cuss word or something.

That was nice. I'm not going to read Forest's memories though

Kazuya saying sweetheart? nah

Michelle is a dumb low life and I've always haved her. Ling and Jin's scene's are priceless though, a work of art. They're so funny. And get rid of Steve and Christie cause they have no storyline.

Just punch stupid Christie in the face for me please

Poor Julia but as much as I love babies I hope she doesn't have one. If she does don't make her abort it but she should have it adopted. I don't know though...

Okay, Ling really has a big mouth number one. Number two, they can't blame Julia and Hwoarang because Julia didn't even want to go to the game let alone the party and two, she was drunk because someone spiked the punch. I like the story though and I had been reading with ASBarbie300

why oh why do julia and hwoarang have to be a couple. i'm going to kill julia andd hwoarang.
( takes out evil frying pan of doom)(evil laugh)
mhahahahaahahah
smallf9: don't listen to her, she has a desiese (it may be spelled wrong) actually, i'm a j/h fan

funny, and interesting. y does julia have to be such a dork?! tell me, y

oh no!

funny

I really like this story and i hope you continue!

funny. keep it up

i'm reviewing now pixi's please don't get me.^_^

that was too funny

Nice stuff skittle! Really funny! Hate Xiao and Jin, but I'll belive anything Steve says, Xiao and Jin are the perfect parents!
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW MY FICS! PLEASE!
Wordlife to ya!

Hahahahaha! Funny chapter. please update.

It is great to read another chapter again! Very good, it's quite funny how they are all married together! Anyway, update soon!

hehehe that was kind of funny, but please continue!

Shyz, I've been looking for this fic for the last week and I just found it now! Tekken has too damn many stories... >.>; Anyway, time to catch up on what I missed! Shit, what was the last chapter I read, 20 something? O_O;

Wow, that was more bad news then good news combined (and there wasn't much of it). And Steve's right, Xiaoyu and Jin are basically the perfect couple and parents EVER! And if Hwo and the others don't get that early divorce, will they survive the year? I can't wait to find out! Update soon! Or at least as soon as you can, I know how it feels to be sick right now. (though my immune system is unusually strong, I rarely get sick)

ALL SICKNESSES SUCK! I'm sick right now, and it blows. Thankies for updating though.
And that is a really nice bright side to think about.

Funny LOL!! Please continue!

This is GOLD, I laughed, and laughed
Jin is such a goody two shoes though, oh well who cares
This story is still the coolest Tekken fic

this chap was good if not better then the last 54 ! my friend likes it to 2 fans lucky you !

Oh dear god.
You done one heck of a job to make this fic so funny. I really like the sex assignment they had the first day after gym class.

I just wanted to say...(Looks around) FUNNYY! This story was awesome! Me and my friend were talking on the phone and I would bust up cracking (laughing) out of no where and she would ask what happened and I told her and she would luagh to. Plus I have tekken tag tournament so I pretty much know who's who and I have tekken 2. I guess tekken means: King of the iron fist tournament? I don't know its a guess. I wacth a lot of anime. Any who back to the author...(Smiles) This story was great!! You should write some other strories too. I myself write but the stories arne't good-enough (I think) to go on the internet yet... I plan on writing a book. You should make the whole tekken jr gang sing the YMCA! ^_^ see ya!

I missed a lot. I AM SO SORRY! I forgot to put replies on all the other chapters! *offers cookies and candies* Anyway, WHAT THE HECK ARE THEY THINKING! I thought Christie liked Steve! And Julia and Hwoarang! I am getting so confused. Hopefully, you are going to do something. O.o;

Awesome chappy! But I have one question. How the hell are you going to explain the whole marraige mix-up?
(Pixis come toward me, ready to bite)
I reviewed darn it! Leave me alone!
(Throws pixi attractant toward people that hate this fic, pixis go toward haters, eat haters alive.)
Oh yeah, skittle, could you read my fics? Please?
Wordlife to ya!

Thiz iz VERY interesting.
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ^_~

sorry. steve was artificially encemanated, although nina is his mother. by the way i love this story it is the best i have ever read. hwoarang dipping xiaoyu's hair in paint, hahahahaha!!
great job.

I wouldnt want to piss off te pixies so heres my review...ha ha ha guess they got a little mixed up...ok more then a little!

Another funny Chapter, LOL very funny that Hwoarang and Christie, Julia and Steve got Married LOL! Very funny! I wonder how they will get out of it? Anyway update soon!

Yep.. I was half right. Julia and Hwo got drunk and married! Just not to each other.. Typical fik..
=D
Update soon!
*LL*

Oh...my...God...
Well, that was unexpected.

Funny! I loved it, I wonder how they're going to get out of this mess?

Class. pure class

...o...kay... ^_^;;

SO COL!

Very nice way to end... or continue, being you already have more chapters. Your stories were good- I even reviewed your first chapter last year!

I've been reading for a while, just haven't bothered reviewing.
This is an awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

OH MY FREAKIN HELL AVU GOOD TOTALLY AMASING BUT NO AS GOOD AS ME OR THIS FIC GOD! IT IS TOTALLY THE BEST THING EVER! UPDATE NOW! + what happened to forest? < gay

PLEASE. hurry up an update!! TOO MUCH SUSPENSE.

NO! u left it THERE?!?! the suspence will eat me! *cries*

DAMN YOU.
You end on such a good cliffhanger

That OH MY GOSH better be Julia and Hwo married or something.. Haha I can smell it from a mile away.
Update.. in... 2 Weeks.
*LL*

Good chapter, I can't wait for the next update! Btw, I was a bit confused but when Xiao said they can't drink till 21, is that true? Here you can drink when you get to 18. Anyway update soon!

w00t!! Vegas!! Are they gonna gamble?? Lolz, good chapter, update soon!

DUDE!UPDATE SOON!I MUST KNOW WHAT FREAKED XIAOYU OUT!

WHAT THE H*LL?!?! i Un get it... what happens next!? whoowowowowo.. UPDATE. ^_^

*dramatic music plays* O_O oh god...christie is planning something...bad news...^^;; o well, cant wait for next chappie *yay*
Nyoko-chan

I used to be called Predator, but I changed my name and registered. I love this fic. It just gets better and better every chapter. I wonder what they're betting on. Whatever it is I bet it will be funny as hell. So their families are okay with the wedding, it's just the type of wedding. YOU'D BETTER UPDATE OR I'LL GO NUTS TRYING TO THINK OF WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Once again another cool update, I enjoyed it! Please update soon!

YES!! this story really kicks it.. i love it... its the best EVER. can't wait till the next update

Wonder wut Julia'z gonna do.
Can't wait 4 chappie 53! ^_^
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ^_~

Lads, its time for some strengthening ales: females in a bet are a dangerous species

gawd, dat story was awesome! dat was like so kool! but i would of liked it better if jin and julia were engaged

OH! I just had the perfect idea for your fik..
Julia and Hwo get drunk in Vegas and get married!
Kinda like in Friends w/ Rachel and Ross..
But better!!
Consider it, at the least..
=D
Update soon!
*LL*

Dragons star: What happened to last week?! I was all siked up for your next chapter and I found nothing! I wanted to know what happened to them at least! Man if Crystal hadn't knocked me out...
Crystal: Your mom should never had left those sugar cubes out in the open! You probably ate more of those things then your brain can handle!
Dragons star: Hey! It's not my fault! And I ate Pixi sticks last review. Anyway I only ate about... 15 sugar cubes after that review.
Crystal: 18 cubes of pure sugar to be exact! It's enough that you ate so many pixi sticks last review but now pure sugar?!
Dragons star: Whatever, try to update soon! I have to go grab a few more sugar cubes! *runs off to the kitchen*
Crystal: Hey get back here!

HA HA HA HAHA! That was good. I love to watch Kazuya diss everybody (except Jun). The that bath scene was pretty funny too and the fact that the two families hate eachother. I can't wait till the next chapter. This is still my favorite Tekken fic. Please update!

YOU ARE SO GRIIMMEY! 51 CHAPTERS AND YOU STOP AT THE MOTHERLOAD?!?!?!? THIS IS BETTER THAN DAY TIME TELEVISION! UPDATE! Say it with me UP--DATE UP--DATE!

Uh Oh!
I could say more, but I'm speechless. ^_^
Keep up tha GREAT work!
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ^_~

I love the story tekken Jr!
Can you e mail me and tell me other stories that you did?

Once again another good chapter! I can't wait to see how everyone thinks of Jin and Xiao! Very good, please update soon!

Oh-my-gosh. Lol, that part was hilarious. Oh...I can't take the suspense, what will they say, WHAT WILL THEY SAY?? *starts biting her nails*

Sorry about the anonymous reviews from before, I didn't want to sign in. Okay let's guess what happens next now... The perfect wedding! Ling in a traditional chinese wedding gown and Jin a tux, both looking cute together... being buried together in their graves... Okay so that may not be what happens, heck they may still be alive! But who knows... Wait the author knows! Let's barrage him for info! Get the pitch forks! *gets knocked out by Crystal*
Crystal: Don't worry I'll make sure she doesn't, it's just early and she hasn't eaten anything yet so she's hyper. Oh well good luck, I know I can keep her from killing you I just don't know about everyone else...
Dragons star: *suddenly wakes up* Update soon!

Brilliant as always, although I had hoped that the family would bring the prospective Boy along with them so Kazuya could just laugh at him, this was as funny as the other chapters despite that. Bravo

yay! Wonderful!! hehe.. so cute.. ^_^

I love this fic! I can't wait ot see what Jin and Xiao are gonna do!

Sorry I haven't read your last few chapters in a while, just been busy myself since my Grandfather died so it's been pretty hectic. Anyway very good last few chapters! I enjoyed them very much! I hope you add Miharu in later though, she is a good Tekken character! Anyway please update soon!
Ksim

Great chapter!! Please keep going. When u got the time please read and review my stories. If u don't understand one please let me know!

*pops a confetti stick* YAY! a whole year! congrats! *does the the happy* ^_^ this was GREAT! everything is wroking out -squels- XIAO AND JIN ARE GUNNA GET MARRIED SOON! YAY!
hehe...O_O i had a lil to much pixie stix *twitch*
Nyoko-chan

E...JUNK FOOD!! Lol, this was a lovely chapter, as usual...tee hee.

(too lazy to sign on)
I am so glad that you updated! Jin is going to die... Hard. Hope he survives long enough for the wedding day! If that ever comes that is... Update soon!

Jin in in so big trouble. i expect there'll be some bloodshed in the following chappies. Xiaojin rules!

Excellent, good and funny
Jin, I hear a funeral march

WOW, thiz iz one of tha BEST ficz I ever read!
Can't wait 4 chappie 51.
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ^_~

I LOVE your fanfic about the TEKKEN fighters as kids! It is very hilarious!
Bye-Bye!

I luv this story... but u dont have to make excuses for not writing, its worth the wait. I recently red some one else's "humor" story... yeah I htink ur one of the only funny people left on Earth.

woAH INCREDIBLE story! i totally love it! You could like write a novel..

^_^ yay!! happy! i love it! im sorta glad now that julia is staying ^_^ thats happy...and well i just love the jin.xiaoyunes...and..uhm...u_U im running outta things to say...O_O 49 chappies is ALOT! -hail to the faithful reviewer- ^_^
~Nyoko

This whole pregnancy confusion had me laughing my head off! ^^

Cool! Julia is soo smart! I hope you feel better. Just update whenever your pain goes away, k? Thanks for a great chapter!

Good chapter!! Please continue.

It was cool, but that last thing Hwoarang said didn't make much sense to me
Still the coolest Tekken fic

forgot lei wu long

wert crazy

This is just an overall funny story and the little added drama is nice. I don't normally read this much but I really got into this one. Keep up the good work ;)

Wonder when they gonna tell tha otherz.
Anywayz, thiz iz tha CUTEST fic!
Keep up tha GREAT work!
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~ ^_~

good chapter, i really like this story, cause it could happen during the game, or it make you feel like, or think like it already didi, but the tekken tournament is coming, it is also funny, which is good i guess, well please do continue!

Wonderful!! Bravo!! The most excellent childhood fics I have ever read!! It took awhile but it was worth it!! Please continue!!

Oh...it looks like Hwo wants to be Godfather Hwo! Please update soon. Hope you had a good holiday!

it's a cool story,but about steve:KAZUYA is his father!not Paul!Cause when could paul make here pregnant?she was in a cryosleep by kazuya!well,keep up the good work!

hahaha i liked that one a lot ^^ hwoarang is a nut... and a funny one at that...

Oh, this story totally rocks! I love the way you...er...portray them! OOh, I used a big word...kinda.

Poor Xiaoyu! =( I'll continue reading. ^^

Thats totally adorable. ^.^

Dude, classic stuff.
Come on, next chapter

DAng...hoping there was anotha chapter...I was getting caught up reading this chapter..hehe..whens the next and Merry almost christmas!

Work on your grammer. You said "Here" instead of "Hear" and you put "but my friends and me" instead of "but my friends and I" Then you said that Hwoarang was really a man, don't you mean mean?

NO! Ling said yes! I'm the girl who called you evil! Remember? Anywho, I can't believe what you've done!! You are going soft, but don't give up, there's hope yet! Poor Hwo, he's thinking 'bout his mom. That's going to be a developed story, ain't it? I can't think of any tips or ideas for you yet, but keep writing! (Hope I've kept the pixies happy!) Chow Meggie Muffin! Maybe we can get too know each other, I'll send you my e-mail address if ya wanna be m8s!

Ohh that was an evil chappy! Yeah, you don't know me Meggie Muffin, but I'm going to be reviewing you more often! Jin tries to propose to Ling, but the phone cuts out! Good one! I'd feel sorry for him if I liked him, that is! Him and Ling together is weird though. I think she should refuse, then it would be interesting. He would be really emotional and depressed, and she'd be guilty. Okay, I'm evil too! I've read you're story so far, and I think it's really good. What you're planning to do with Julia and Hwoarang seems a mystery too me. Maybe they should just split up and get over it! I wanna see you with blue hair, so I'll be looking at you're journal. I'm guessing you're 16, seen as though you can drive now. Good on you! One more tip for you're story, Heihachi being gay and having a secret chat with Forest...You could make it hilarious! I've been thinking of a story line like that for ages. What if Jin found out!?!? You don't have to use it, but I'd like to see Forest up to his usual 'gayness!'
You're evil, evil, evil! (But hey, evil = cool in this century!) Write back soon...

Great chapter! I've been having a bad day so far, one of the bad things that's happened is I've sprained my pinky! Right now I'm typing with one hand, I wasn't even going to review any of the stories I read today but because you were one of my favorite authors I made an exception! Update soon!

I'll continue reading this later. Great story!!

Feel better, and update soon! =)

O.O gah why are there secrets?! i want ebbryone to kno...it would make things fun!

YAY!! Xiaoyu was wearing green! Tee hee. I think you have the most reviews in the videogame category. We..let's try to get you to the most reviews on this whole dang site! ^_^

Thiz iz soo good!
Can't wait 4 tha next chap.
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~ ^_~

It seems as if Jin and Xiayou may get found out, no thanks to Sherlock Montiero.
You aer still writing the best Tekken fic on this site

about time man. you must update soon. i need to see how it happened! oh and tight chapter.

I've just caught up on the latest three chapters and once again I must say brilliant work! Really liked the bit where Jin proposed although glad I had a few chapters too read, missing out on the proposal would have be stressful lol. Anyway please update soon!

YAY! omg the HAPPY! i LOVE U! mwhahaha...^_^;; err...im okay now. but err...question *shiver* is the lil story behind the proposal...sex? gah * shakes head* ickyy

Update soon, please!

They're engaged! WOO HOO! They're gonna B so cute 2gether!
Keep up tha GREAT work!
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~ ^_~

WHOHO! I liked this...Hwo going into the medical field...quite interesting. Yay, Jin finally got it out!! whoo!! wonder what happens with Julia... I CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!

YAY! GO YOU GO YOU GO YOU! WE! That was a cool chapter.

YES, GO JIN, GO JIN
About goddamn time too
And Hwoarang as a Doctor, hmm, intriguing

Alright! He did it! And I didn't need to hunt you down! But what about the other couples? Are there futures as bright? Update soon!

O__O GAH! no! so CLOSEE! yet so far away =( I luv this so much! it gives me the giggles ^.^ christie ish so cute!

AH! ::HITS HEAD ON COMP SCREEN IN FRUSTRATION:: WHY! DAMN THAT HEIHACHI! lmao. i liked these chaps! i wish i could give you an award for this story.. too bad i don't know anything >.< eh. Anyway, i will wait patiently for your next update!

Heihachi you son of a bitch >_<
You have undoubtedly created the best Tekken fic on this entire site, and let no one tell you otherwise, this has a degree of class that few people can put in thier fics

Aw! I hope you feel better soon. Please write more!

*Stares at the third to last line* DO YOU WANT ME TO GET PISSED?!?! And you do not want me pissed, my Conscious can only hold me so much before that barrier breaks and go beserk. The next chapter better be good! Update soon!

when will he ask her?

OMG! I want to know what is going on! What does Heihachi want with Jin? It is so confusing! BUT awsome!! You are so cool!

no don't stop it there! thats jus cruel man. plz update.

*strangles heihachi* AH! you ruined the moment, Dammit! AARGGH! i wanted to see what happens!*continues to struggle heihachi*

Ai ai ai... thats cruel.. you can't leave it hanging like that. Good all the same. please update soon ^^

>< DAMN CLIFFHANGER!

Will Jin ever get 2 ask Xiaoyu tha question? What will Heihachi speak 2 Jin about?
2 interesting questionz. Wonder what'll happen. Can't wait 4 tha next chap!
Keep up tha great work!
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~

Nice. I like ti alot. keep going.

dude ya have ta update this soon man. you're killin me here.

Julia you evil bitch!

That was a great chapter

yay! This story needs to get an award or something.

Thiz iz better and better. Can't wait 4 tha next chap!
Keep up tha great work!

LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~

OMG!OMG! I haven't reviewed in a MAJOR long time! Woah...Blonde moment. AND I AM NOT EVEN BLONDE!! Anyflip, Jin was so going to ask! Darn that Julia! XD

*twitch* julia just like needs to leave, she's playing my poor Hwo and ow she's interfering with the Jin and Xiaoyu. *grumbles*

hi i hope u dont make jules and Hwoarang breake up cause that would make the story boo well its up to you so bye oh love the story

WHAT THE F*CK ARE YOU TRYING TO DO?! DO YOU WANT HORDS OF XIAOYIN FANS AFTER YOUR FLESH AND BLOOD?!?! Oh well your problem not mine. Just make sure you're alive enough to make an update! Update soon!

Jinny wants to get mar-ried! XD Good for him and Xiao!

heyz. i totally luv this story! you must update soon!

aww! julia is gunna break up wif my hwo?!?!? that bish! lol jk...i can understand tho...i mean she should have her options open *nods head*
~Nyoko~
P.S. hope u fweel better ^_^

Once again two more brilliant chapters! Very good, I can't wait for the next chapter! Also I hope you get better soon, alot of people in The UK have been very ill aswell.

Woah, they have a few important problemz and decisionz 2 figure out. Very interesting. Cant wait 4 tha rest.

LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~

WEE! AWESOME CHAPTER!

This is getting cooler

Hey it's not your fault. Besides it's not like your going to get pummled by all your readers if you don't update. lol, but if so put it this way- at least you updated not then not update at all.

Crystal: Mia I thought this was a review on the story not the authors notes.

Oh Yeah, sorry about that, I like to ramble so I end up-

Crystal: Mia...

Oh right, great chapter but you just need to make it a bit longer but either way it's still good! But I've been meaning to ask... When is Jin popping the question? And this better not go 180 on me! I will litterally hate you if Xiaoyu says no! Update soon!

*whimpers* forest is not gay! he's NOT! *cries* he's just a wee feminine and THATS OKAY! ( i dont think i spelt that right) aniway i vote elementary skooL! ~
~Nyoko~

I think now mould be a good time to stop with the memories. It's kind of gettin old, but that was a good chapter.

I know I've read this chapter before but can I ask you for a favor? Can you repost this chapter? The whole symbols problem is gone so if you post it up again it'll go back to normal. Update soon!

Go Forest, Go Forest, Go Forest

That was cool

Junior high!Pulease! I love your style! I think that, whenever you decide to stop the fic, you should end it in the wedding of J/X! It would be uber sweet!

O GOD, THANK YOU SO *DEP BREATH* O MUCH. DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE WAITED FOR THE Forest STORY? THANKS FA MAKIN IT. WELL,now let's try THE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL.
SMOOCHES,
Nastasia =D

YAY! HAPPY GETTING YOUR PERMIT THINGY!! AND FOR YOUR FIXED COMP! well...im not sure what the next thingy should be...i guess...elementary!

Elementary.. i would suggest going in order... lol

Wow! Now we know that Forest iznt gay. LOL

For my vote, I think that tha next chap should B Elementary. It should go N order. Elementary, Junior High, then High School and etc.

Keep up tha great work!

LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~

Wee! That was great! Elementary next! PLEASE!!

Look, forget the voting and do the rest in order. That's what I would do *shrugs* But that's just me. But if you wan't the voting here it is- Elementary. We barely saw them in those years. Update soon!

You hate Julia? YOU HATE JULIA? You..you..are one of my fave authors! Jin and Julia DO NOT belong together! Julia doesn't even know Jin's name! Anyways, uh, you're story's funny! You know how to make a sista laugh!

Forest, just cause I think you should get the people out of the way and move on to school.

That wuz so cute! Need more! WHOO-HOO
I luv thiz story, it's great.
Anywayz, I think that U should do Forest... O_O I know, I know people really just don't like him. But C, I wuz thinkin that, if U do his then it'll B over. No more memories with him. C where I'm gettin at? He had 2 B of some importance, or U wouldn't have put him N tha story. Right? I think that I got a good reason 4 votin him. THankz 4 listenin.

LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~ ^_^

Cool.

Forest

Once again another fun chapter! Sorry you were not well on your Birthday but I hope you are better now! Also, what is Comcast? I live in The UK so I am not sure what it is? Anyway can't wait for the next part and I still vote Forest.

Thank you! you updated! and yes anyone with an october birthday rocks ^__^ I had mine two days after yours which is, if you read my bio, October 6th! Now for the voting, Might as well get Forest out of the way, and then go for elementary since we only seen them in Jr. High and Highschool. Do the rest in order so it makes sense. Update soon!

...im still a fan of christi/eddie but *shrugs* o well. this was still ADORABLE *squeeks* ^__^
~Nyoko~

HEH!! cute CHAPTER! heh, i think the next one should be...elementary!

Well, I have not seen Forest yet, so...I vote for forest. And good chapter! I like the part where Christie tries to teach Steve the splits. ^^ Anywho, if it is something else than forest, I wanna see Hwoarang get in trouble and say "Holy Shit." I don't know why, I just wanna hear it for some strange reason. >.>;

YAY! Another awesome chapter. I vote for FOREST!

I forgot to say on my last review that I want Chris/Steve memories next. Update soon!

cute! I thought it was hilarious too! Try expanding it, and for your own amusement, draw pictures to go with it!

Hey, wut up? just had ta say ...*HAPPY BIRTHDAY SKITTLE-XTREME*

pfft, *rolls eyes* Hwoarang-chan deserves better then HER *pouts and hugs her chibi hwo-doll* its not fair >_< she makes him sad! and thats bad! HA i made a rhyme!! ^.^ anyway good chap, >_>

Once again another good chapter! Can't wait for the next one, I would love to see Forest though next and what happened to his Mother. Anyway hope you have a nice B-Day! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

YES! Fantastic!:)

first of all, ADVANCED HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
::THROWS CONFETTI AND BALLOONS SUDDENLY FALL FROM NO WHERE:: WE!YAY! YOUR SIXTEEN! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! DO DO DO! hehe..
okay then!! i hope you have a happy birtday and all...NOW IM GOING TO SING! ::sings happy birthday song::
OKAY THEN!! i LOVE this story! heh...im not sure what should be next...
x_X i suppose it should be CHRIS/STEVE!
AGAIN!! ADVANCED HAPPY BDAY!

SWET

Aw, thiz fic iz perfect! U Rock!

My vote 4 next time iz Chris/Steve. Tha only couple left. Thiz way we get a little more info on tha couple without many problems. Very curious! LOL

LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!

~ Rain ~ 'Smilez'

P.S. Happy Sweet 16, skittle-xtreme!

yo it's me again. i Really want ta hear uhh READ about Forest. HE isn't my fave character. i just wanna read about how he got over the BEING GAY CRAP. actually neva mind. that should be in tha High School section. so, yeh

YAA! My wish came true! LoL Hmm... My next vote is for Elementary School Memories!

*LL*


Happy Birthday!!

Happy early birthday! Now do Chris/Steve's memories! ^^

Cool, Howarang is being very understanding

Forest

YAY! I hope you have a wonderful birthday! Chris/Steve is my vote.
HAPPY SWEET SIXTEEN!

Cool, my birthday is only two days after yours, October 6th. Now for the review, The chapters have less and less humore but those are memories, this entire chapter was sad, in a mood kind of way. Hope you update soon!

that rocks! and happy birthday in advance youre only 20 days older than i am.btw i wanna see chris/steve next(you probably know who my fave characters are by now)

I think it should be Forest next. I also think u should get all the characters and couples out of the way.. then move on to school..

EH!! i dont know what next!! i know!! JUL/HWO! and by the way... I LOVE THIS STORY! and I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!

Very nice

it's okay about the Christie thing. but i vote ta see er READ Forest. and how he over-came the whole GAY act phase. hehe

Aw! Christie had nice memories. I thnk U did well 4 no knowin a lot about her. So, my vote goes 2 Jul/Hwo. That'd B cute.

P.S. Great job wit tha story. LUV IT!

LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain ~ 'Smilez' 'cause shez happy.

O_O julia and Hwo...alone...OH MY GOD!you should've written what happened *nudge nudge*good chapter ^^

Would be nice with some Jul/Hwo too, you're doing a great job btw. What sides of Julia did Hwoarang fall for; does he see the Julia which others don't? (Gee, I don't know, she reminds him of his mom?) Does he really love her? Does she really love him? Why do they love each other? Perhaps he understands the craving Julia has for being 'the best'? How did Julia feel when she thought she was pregnant? They were teenage crushes that didn't break up, what about now? Have the feelings between them gotten deeper? Or are they getting more and more apart?

How about one on Forest trying to get in a miss-contest(well, it could happen...)? I'd also like to see more on Xiaoyu and Jin's relationships.

That was so awesome. Jul/Hwo next please!

Oh cool! Nice Christie chapter! You've got to do Forest next! He deserves his own bit! ^_^

Once again another good chapter, I did enjoy it very much! I would like to see Forest next, that would be interesting. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

that goddamn thing wouldnt let me finish my review for the last chapter *glares* -ahem- AS I WAS GOING to say...i want a forest chappie !!there! HAHA i got my vote in...damn fiction.net...>_

O_O that's just disturbing...but in a good way...i think

jul/hwo plz =)

nice job! pleasee write some Jul/Hwo ;)

Chris/Steve!

Well now that my other request is done let's see about... Jr. High. That's something that I really want to see. The ups and downs of Jr. High, The treasured memories of those years... Oh how I hate them. Update soon!

Jul\Hwo 'cause hwaorang is the best of the best of the best and she does NOT deserve him...when will people realize he is for Juno-FOR JUNO, I TELL YOU-JUNO!

o-exiting!

O-that poor, poor chibi Steve...Now I wanna hug Hwoarang for losing Tao, and Steve for...well, you know the rest.

hi-i!I haven't reviewed in ages 'cause my computer died.oh!-i used to be known as Goddess Jade...-bu-ut!-i killed her!She was getting boring...
this is just getting better with time, y'know?I didn't review the last two chaps-i was busy reading.that's my excuse- take it or leave it!

whe! i get it now!! O_O uve been writing this a whole YEAR!?!?!? ^.^ ehehe...im not that dedicated O_- ANYWHO! ebrryones gunna hate me but...I LIKE EDDIE/CHRISTIE ROMANCE! bwhahahah! there i SAID it! >_>

I'm still for Jul/Hwo!!

i wanna see christie!

Forest..

Well I say Christie's memories. I don't know much about her except what charecter bios say. Update soon!

How about the wonders of Jr. High... Oh how I hated them. Update soon!

They are so dead... Update soon!

WHAT! she's leaving! You can't be serious you sick moron! Oh great there goes my cursing spree again. sorry about that. Update soon!

They are in so much trouble. lol. Update soon!

well great chappie,but... ick, I HATE julia...*grumbles* she's a lilIndian wannabe bish... but guess u had no choice ^_^ ehh...all the julia fanz are gunna are gunna bite me now >_< *pulls out her magical piece of wood* hehehe...anywho, are u gunna do like these after thingys like AFTER the memories are u gunna like continue? O_o cuz i want more! *tears up* yesh well...im just goin on and on and on bout nuthiness ^.^ so siyanara! oh and u getta cookie! * hands skittle-xtreme a cookie*
^_^
~T.P~ xoxo

I agree you are insane. You really need counsiling- wait scratch that if you had help you'd stop writing insane fics that cause me to break into fits of laughter. Update soon!

Thank god my parent don't know that I'm reading this. They probably think I'm reading another incredibly funny fic again since I'm laughing like a psycho.

It's night and I'm laughing like a friggin' maniac. Update soon!

I know, they completely screwed up his voice! Why couldn't they at least get an asian sounding person to do it? AND he isn't even speaking like a normal person, it's like crappy acting in it!!

Jul/Hwo ^-^

Ah think that U should do Christie's memories. That would B nice. Ah love thiz fic! It'z great.
LV & PEACE ALWAYZ! ~ Rain Nick ~

This wasn't bad, you did a very nice job for someone that hates Julia. I hate her too though, so I was saying negative stuff about her inside of my head as I read this. XP But anyhoo, I vote for Chris/Steve!

Once again another good chapter! It's okay abut The Parent's Memories, I understand. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! Also I am not sure what to vote next, I go Christie though.

Nice nice, finally some Julia..

You don't like Julia? What did she ever do to you? =D

Hm.. Next vote is Jul/Hwo

hey hey.. i lub this story.. its on one of my "got to read" list.. hehe.. well keep workin hard to make this story intresting. ;)
much luv

AW! That was so cute. I say Jul/Hwo next.

i want to know about forest

AH! OMG! he's gunna ASK to marry her?!?! *faints* im so HAPPY!! ladeedada! ^__^ thaT was really cute tho...*shakes head* COOTIES!! ah! some sweet stuff there. ^.^ cant wait for more...itz so much FUN! ^-^

eh, i dont know who or what should be next... hm. maybe... JUL/HWO!

HEHHEHE...that was really CUTE..i liket that little valentine day thingy..lmao
I LOVE THIS STORY...you kick major ASS!

Come on, give me some Julia/Hwoarang memories!

Forest

And this was another cool and well put together chapter

whatabout christie?

whatabout christie?we know almost nil about her

whatabout christie?we know almost nil about her

Miss Da Qiao: I love this story! XiaoJin Forever!

Jin: I love Xiao and Xiao loves me!

Miss Da Qiao: Jin...

Jin: What? ^^

Miss Da Qiao: Shut up. u.u

Xiaoyu: Where are my COOKIES!?

Miss Da Qiao: O.O!; I am ending this review. Bye!

Jul/Hwo ^-^

Ah loved tha last chap. it wuz great! I'm gonna vote on Jules or Chris. P.S. Eitha one would B really nice. LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ
~ Rain Nick ~

Ah loved tha last chap. it wuz great! I'm gonna vote on Jules or Chris. P.S. Eitha one would B really nice. LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ
~ Rain Nick ~

Okie smokies! I vote for Julia. I love the ring that you described. It's very pretty!
Please update soon!
Baccus Cremaeus

=O JIN'S GONNA PROPOSE??!! AIYE!! *squeals excitedly and bounces off the walls* THAT'S SO AWESOME!! *ahem* BTW I vote for Chris/Steve next...

Uh... All my votes go for Jules and Jul/Hwo..


*Commented by Mya in her new song* My body's like Hwo

Sorry, I thought it sounded funny..

*LL*

Great story!! I think Julia's memories should be next.

Julia

Another great chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter and what happens at the proposal! But will it fail? Will Xiao feel that she cannot do it? Anyway, can't wait for the next part and I think it would be good to do Forest's memories. Also, we could do their parents memories aswell? Like what they did during kids or something?

I was dinking Julia cause it would be weird having Julia/Hworang's memories without having Julia's First...

I've only read chapter one, but I really like this so far. Very funny, great job so far. ^_^

~LiquidSky~

yay another chapter

Very cool, I love the deadpan manner you gave Heihachi and the thing with Lee and Kazuya, true class

It's so funny! I'm really loving this story! XD Keep it up! Well... Jul/Hwo...

There aren't enough languages or words in those that exist to tell you how cool this story is

I haven't laughed as hard as I have when I read this story in a long time

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!4 STEVE I MEAN

lol wow... funni hahaha.. i like this story.. its cute and funni... and long too.. ^_^ i like that... i hope u update soon... hehe

MOTHER FUCKIN FUNNY!! Keep up the good work.

For order, I'd suggest:
Julia
Christie
Elementary
Jr. High
High
Xiao/Jin
Jul/Hwoarang (which is two characters in Korean, a pun on Hwoarang-do, a Korean martial art. o, fyi, last names come first in Korean culture, so if Baek is Hwo's dad, then Hwo should be Baek Hwoarang, though Baek being Hwo's guardian is a better idea)
Christie/Steve

Lemme guess...after memories is college, right?

Another great chapter! I really found that so funny! Anyway I think it would be good if we did Christie next. I am interested in what her past is.

Ah really, really like thiz fic! Keep up tha great work and ah caint wait 4 tha next chap. P.S. Ah think that Forest's (Forrest) should B next and then Julia's should B afta that. Anywayz, Az ah said B4 that would keep tha fic N orda. LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ! Rain Nick

hm, well i think it should still continue with all the friends first...maybe julia next, then christie...hm, somethings missing though...
OH YEA!! what happened to FOREST?
anyway, KEEP GOING! I LOVE THIS STORY!!

Hi, by the way, I love your story! My vote here: Jul/How! But, now it's up to you!

Great as always!! I loved this chapter. I like seeing Paul and Nina as parents, you wouldn't think they were cut out for the parent role, but when they are suddenly dragged into it they prove to be more than just good parents!! Steve is so cuute, being more smart than his father is ^_^. I liked that part where he called the police.

Xiao/Jin!

I don't care who, but Jr. High

hi i was wondering where is law you drope him out the story

whooaa poor steve...he caught his parents DOIN it!
my sides hurt from laufin when he called the police...it was gr8 man. cant wait for more...do...christie next all cuz i dont like julia ^-^ bwahahah * evil grin*

xiao/jin!! thats my vote!

cmmon,when can we see steve?

hehe, aww, another awesome 2 chaps. (i read them backwards cuz i'm bias to hwoarang lol.) anyhow, couple memories would be sweet...perhaps jin and xiao...the whole "marriage" thing was awesome! hehe! keep it up!! ^_~

xoxo-di

Another great chapter! I take it Tao died? A shame too indeed. I did enjoy that chapter though, very very good! Very good though! I would like to see Steve next aswell, that would be good. Anyway, can't wait for the next part!

I want to read Julia's next.

aw thats so sad...poor Hwo...his mom died...=( eh...well the resy was hilarios ^.^ *shakes head* Hwo was always a trouble maker U_U well anyway u changed mai mind ^_^ i want the next chappie to be bout Steve! woohew! well siyanara
T.P

Xiaoyu/Jin! ^_^

Write more please I still vote for Xiao/Jin.

I vote for Xiao/Jin's memories .

Christie

Ah like how you get N2 tha background history of each character. Thatz nice. Ah give U yo props on thiz fic! Anywayz, keep up tha good work. P.S. Steve's memories should B up 2 keep'em N order from Ntro. LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ! Rain Nick

I read one chapter of your fiction, got hooked and read it all in one day, and I must say I LOVE IT!! I loved this episode, though I felt a bit sad at the same time because I knew she'd die.
As for the voting...hm, would be nice reading about Steve next, (perhaps as a young Forest babysits him? I'd love to see some scenes of Paul and Nina thrown in too.)
or how about Xiao/Jin? They're my fave couple. Or some of Jul/Hwo? Would be nice to see some of Julia's softer or more positive sides for a change (come on, you have to admit she's not really been too positively described.

After Julia's I think it should be Steve's and Christie's. Not that I or anything, but what happened to Law?

Steve! Please do Steve!

O! Busted! This is getting good, I guess I'll just have to read on!

Predator is really ?, but I changed my name and I think Hwoarang's memories sound cool

I love this story. I never reviewed it but I read it since you wrote the first chapter. Me and my cousin were laughing so hard but I really like it. one question though: WHAT DID YOU DO TO COOKIE! okay, see ya!

Momenties

Hey, great chapter!I think, you should do Steve's or Hwoarang's memories! That would be really cool!

Another good chapter I shall say! I say we look at Hwoarang's life but as a baby too, see a bit of his Mother too, could be good. Anyway, can't wait for the next part!

Great story do steve's next

That is so cute! ^_^ Ahh, I loved how adorable Xiaoyu was, she's such a darling! Wang and his "I bought Cookie a new coat", that cracked me up!! XD It's a damn good thing Xiaoyu was young enough to believe such a thing... And I vote for Christie's memories next, as well as Xiaoyin for the couple's memories.

i thinky it should be Hwo, then maybe Julia, then maybe Steve, then Christie, then maybe Elementary, then Jr. High, then Highschool AND THEN!! do the couples thingy...BUT im just suggesting that..and yea...BUT other than that...I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY..you MUST KEEP GOING!...

I think Julia should go next. Maybe you could do all the characters first and then maybe like jr. high and then hs.. and then the couples... (lol i dun knoe.. just a suggestion)

Hm.. I'm up for.. Julia, Hwoarang, or Jul/Hwo!! Haha!

Great chappie! update soon!

*LL*

I think that U should put Hwoarang's memories next B'cause, that would keep things N order. Also after his, Steve's should B put up. P.S. this is one of my favorite fanfics!

o definatly Xiao/Jin memories! Luv this fic. plz update soon!

OMG! That was so cute! I vote Jin/Xiao! They are so cute! And it was funny when Uncle Wang said He got Cookie a new coat. Please keep it up!

happy happy HAPPY! i luved this chappie! poor cookie...*sniff* ahh! this was great! hey i vote for a xiao/jin memory! *smiles evilly* come on this is ME we're talking bout! when would i NOT pick a xiao/jin chappie!?! ^_^ well cant wait 4 more!! whe! ttyl!
T.P

Hwoarang!DO HWOARANG!

YEAH!! new chapters! I'm so happy!
I just had my first day of school and am really hyper!

xiaoyu! you have to make xiao's memories! and something to do with highschool. oh, and by the way are you going to make the gang go to college?

Elementry School because I never got to see it.

xiaoyu

I'd like to see Julia's memories next. Please update soon!

LOL on that. I'd like to see Hwo's next

Another great chapter and I really enjoyed it! However, what happened to this other baby? I am quite interested. Also I would like to see Hwoarang's memories next too, can't wait!

I think that Xiaoyu's memories should B next, B'cause that's how you started out this fanfiction when you introduced the characters. First Jin, then Xiaoyu, then Hwoarang, then Steve, then Forest and finally Julia. P.S. That's the way I think the memories should go too.

Next should be either Xiaoyu or Hwoarang memories
of elementary school

I wanna see Steve...PWEZE?!

that was so darn cute! ^_~ and as for my vote: HWOARANG!! tehehee. call me bias, but...*shrugs* im a sucker for da red hair. lol.
xoxo-di

Hey, great chapter! I want to see Steve's memory. Xiaoyu's would be good too!

heh, that was cute...
I THINK XIAOYU NEXT!

CUTE! Aw.. That's really really cute!! I think Hworang should be next, cuz he's really cool!!

Update soon, or I'll kick your ass!

Your faithful reviewer,

*LL*

Xiaoyu is the next one i want t read about

whe! i get it now! woohoo!! TAHTS what u ment! OH AND DO XIAO'S MEMORYS! *giggles* as u can tell she's my fav character! uhm and i cant pick which time...do all three O_o well cant wait 4 more!
Siyanara!
T.P

You could have a couples memories! Jin and Xiaoyu!

STEVE FIRST!

Xiaoyu! ^_^

Funny fic! ( . . . Paul, Steve's Father? Paul is 46 and Nina is in her early twenties. Kind of wierd, no?)

I think this chapter was great! I really enjoyed it! I would like to see more into Jin's memories first and I have a few ideas so if your interested, I would be glad to help out. Anyway, can't wait for the next part!

haha! i love your story! it's so funny! and the thing about the tekken gang's memories i was wondering whatever happend to xiaoyin's "marriage"? did jin go through the same girl's are icky hwoarang did? can you imagine?

REALLY FUNNY I VOTE FOR JIN FIRST

*coughcoughJULIAcoughcough* =D Great chapter! Hopefully you'll update soon, so I'll love this even more!!

Your faithful reviewer,

*LL*

ARG! the chap's done X_x
now i must be patient! oh well...KEEP GOING! because this fic really kicks ass..

i wanna see steve first!

XIAOYIN! XIAOYIN! XIAOYIN! ...All right, to be calm and rational, I just wanna say that I would like to see Jin and Xiaoyu's memories first, please. ^_^ *offers the author Skittles, taste the rainbow...* BTW, did I mention that I vote for Jin and Xiaoyu? :P

Really cool! Keep going!

wait wait...what? memories? of what? O_O eh? im like conused...but HEY what else is new ^_^ anyway this was funny!! ^_^ cant wait for more ^_^
Siyanara xoxo
T.P

YOU GOTTA KEEP GOING, THIS IS PHENOMINAL!WONDERFUL BEYOND REASON!BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ!

YOU GOTTA KEEP GOING, THIS IS PHENOMINAL!WONDERFUL BEYOND REASON!BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ!

URGH! HIS VOICE IS TERRIBLE AND HE'S LIKE THE THE HOTTEST GUY EVER SO IT'S NOT FAIR! POOR HWO!

well wat can i say? u've done it again! oh man, i've never been so captivated by a fanfic story!! (unless it was while i was writing one of my own! haha) excellent job, and i cant wait for the next chappie!
xoxo- keep up the FANTASTIC work! ^_^

*Whew* There's a weight off my shoulders. I'm glad she's not pregnant. Although her mood swings did pose as very comical. At least there is still PMS. *Grins wickedly*

lmao...funny, funny! keep going...i like this story, it kicks major arse...

This was good, even though I think it would have been better if she was pregnant. but... Oh well, this good, nevertheless.

Lol on the budget thing! This is so funny!Go on! Keep it coming!

Hwo got lucky! ^_^

So, Julia is not pregnant! God, imagine what would have happened if she was! It would have been scary, and even more so with Hwoarang in that fat body suit. Sheesh, scary thought! Kazuya, pass the wine, I think a lot of us readers need it. LOL
Write more soon!

*phew* jules aint pregnant! thats a relief...but...what did baek mean by "keeping the baby" im hoping he was thinking if she was pregnant then putting it up for adoption O_O uhm dont mind me im going bak to my morals again...damn those things. Anyway *cough* xioa and jin make me giggle ^_^ there fighting over toy babies and and fake money that they dont even have ^.^ some funny shit there. well cant wait for more!teehee ^_^
~TP~

Once again another marvellous chapter you have written! I can't wait to see the next part and how Michelle acts.

THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN AWESOME! YOU ARE SO TALENTED. I WANT MORE!

Am I the only one that sees a bunch of weird symbols? o_O;

This is a very funny story and also an interesting one!

You know... I find it awfully suspicious that this symbol mixup just happened in a yaoi fic I just read a second ago... hmm... I wonder...

Great story continue with another chapter.

Oh! I wonder what Hwo's reaction is going to be. I hope he doesn't blow up at Jules. Pls, update soon. I must know.

well another fuckin great chappie. but Julia is gunna be SO dead! i feel bad for her...maybe the tests were negative? anyway this chappie was great but uhm really hard to read cuz like this thing showed up in evry sentence
->€™t it was really wierd...well cant wait for more

T.P

Oh! The agony of a prolonged wait! *Collapses* Oh, anyway, great chapter. Creepy Michelle! Now I'm anxious to know whether Julia is pregnant or not! Hurry up and continue... please... ^_^

C_S

Poor Julia!

I LOVE THE STORY!
update soon!

Sure! What's w/ all the fancy doodles? Get bored?? Hehe!

Update soon!

Your faithful reviewer,

*LL*

What was up with all the symbols and stuff?
I like your fic by the way. ^_^

Man this is one of my favort storys. Can't wait to see what happens.

God, Jules is in trouble! This is freaky, but interesting, keep going!

hehe. Julia always seems to be the one with the problem ne...

You are funny. Keep going!

Poor everyone, what horrible situations to put up with. 0_0

Hey, I've really enjoyed this chapter! It was so good like your other ones too! Anyway can't wait for the next part!

How did you manage to write all of the Tekken juniors' life from toddlers to high school? Are you going to write about them being in college as well? You have much more patience than I do. I doubt I can ever write this much without giving up once. You've got a spirit of a great writer.

Peace~

uh oh...JUles mom is gunna out her lil secret...O_O and is there teacher CRAZY? thatz a bit extreme...poor hwoarang...he's gunna look like julia! ^_^ ehehe...ermm...well.. cant wait for more! LATAZ
xoxo
T.P

Oh no! Michelle has her mobile! That is gonna blow up drastically!

LOL! Hwoarang with all that weight on him, that's gonna be so... wierd. And Xiao with her pregnant stomach thing, weird too. LOL

Great chapter, keep on going!

Update! By the way it's a great story!

THIS IS SO GREAT! I can't wait to find out what happens when Hwo relizes that the baby is his not Jin's this is going to be great! I must find out what happens next.

I really liked this story. It featured most of my favorite characters and a lot of humor.

However, I felt as though the story went downhill as you went further along, and you forgot to write about certain scenes you skipped. (unless you're writing about them now.) The beginning was hilarious, but as they got older, it really wasn't that funny anymore.

And wouldn't Panda be with Ling Xiaoyu, if Kuma is with Heihachi?

And is Julia really pregunent with Hwoarang's child? I know Julia isn't one of your favorite characters (she's my second favorite female character right after Nina) but why? Sorry...I guess it kind of bothers me...they are not even out of school yet! But still...but I guess it doesn't matter. It's your wonderful story, after all. :-)

Keep up the good work and I cannot wait for you to write the next chapters!

-C.A.

I sorry but PLEASE say julia NOT having a baby she MY FAVORITE character i beg you to say the test is wrong

Waii!! That was a great story! make sure you update or else my elves are gonna hunt ya!! (Beware, pixis!! My elves are better trained!!)

LOL! That was hella funny! Tsk tsk to Jin, how can he not trust his girlfriend? >>;

This is turning into a day time talk show. Keep going. and read my YuYu Spin The Bottle

*gasps* Oh.. My.. GOD! Reading 28 chapters in ONE DAY is VERY bad for me!!

Haha! Great Story, so far.

Update soon!

*LL*

omg! this was so funny! i cant wait for the next chap!

We all saw that coming. But what's Hwoarang gonna do when he finds out?

I've just read the chapters I missed and I think they were great! Very funny! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

Continue writing another chapter this is exellent.

wow...took me awile to get that all in...O_O JULIA IS PREGNANT?!?!?! whoa...thats uhm scary...cuz like i'd think Julia was the somewhat smart one...lol itz all good and we need another hwoarang! poor xiao...lol she's to innocent to have uhm...THAT! itz so cute! ^_^ well cant wait to read more! ^_^ LATAZ
xoxo
T.p

hi i love your story and i love how u made everyone of the boys think it was Xiaoyu but it was really Julia and i also like i u made people belive that law was gay and he wasn't well can't wait till the next chapter

Good chapter.
For some reason, I found it funny that you made Anna working in a store, I mean, I wouldn't have expected that...!
Oh yeah, and I woulnd't want to be Julia, when Hwoarang finds out. He will be furious!!
And now, poor Xiao and Christie, who have to put up with their ever-so-moody friend!
Keep writing.

hi i love the story and can't wait till jules say what is wrong with her

NO! CLIFF HANGER! NO!! gr
::glares at skille-xtreme:: you wuv to torture me dont u? why is Julia being such a bitch?! she THREW Xiao's COOKIES out the WINDOW for god's sake! well...i dont even LIKE julia so yeah. lol kk! cant wait for More!
ttyl xoxo
T.P

Hmm, it's been a while since I reviewed this. ^_^; Sorry 'bout that, but I was on holiday!
(Coughs.) Anyway, good chapter(s)! and I reckon I know what's wrong with Julia too...

I wanna see whats wrong! I love your stories! Please continue!

Oh no.Julias got problems. Keep going, and enough with the clifhangers!

I bet she's pregnant! Yee!

Hiya! Black Shadow Dragon sending a review I think you are doin' a great job keep up the good work and I hope you feel better from your burns.
And please get the flippin' pixies away from me!

One of the best tekken stories i ever read please write more

Hope your arm is okay and great chapter! Can't wait for the next part!

^_^ yay! im a wil happy princess! i fweel bad for Julia and Hwo...but as long as theres no probs with Jin and Xiao's relashionship im peachy! i wuved diz, u get to hab a cookie! ^_^ kk lataz
T.P

Haha, I can't believe Julia pushed Hwoarang into the pond...what nerve...
update soon

I didn't know you write once a week good job.

Aww, that sucks. Well, Julia IS a tight-lipped bitch IMO, so it doesn't surprise me that she would be so damn possessive of Hwo. Poor fella.

Great!

I love your fic! I am writing one kind of like it right now! Love the insanity!

Lol, I liked Hwo's negociations with Jules. And Law is totally weird! Cant wait 4 next chapter!

Things just start getting better and better. If you ever stop this story I will...
Oh never mind. My regards to the pixis

see? i KNEW spring break would be fuN! now we're gunna have beach funn *naughtyness* lol! this was so good! i LOVE this ficcy! ^_^

LATAZ!
T.P

P.S. I didnt like Hwo's voice in tekken 4 either...it sounded funny

Sweet, this is so cute! ^_^ I wonder just what Hwo and Jul are doing, LoL. :P

Write more this is great can't wait for chapter 26.

This is the Coolest story, only i can't get to chapter 25. Why is that?

Dude, this is funny! Your in my top readers list! Continue! it is getting good!

Ah shoot!! A stupid pixie bit me saying if I dont review they will bit the heck out of me. Well not bad I believe that this was a very good. I just relized that I didn't have to use my friend Ice Duelists name Yay!!

Tough-ass Tekken characters having 'the talk' with their parents? O_O Just when I thought I've seen/heard/read it all..XD

whoa man...that was depressin! but itz all ok now! SPRING BREAK! yay! more FUN now! hooray! ok i had skittles to day so im a BIT hyper! kk im outie! Siyanara! xoxo
T.P

That was totally creepy, cool, but creepy. I loved it! Keep going!

What I don't get it chicken grease it was cool when Ling had angel wings.

Aright this one was pretty strait up. Although one thing still bothers me. Why are thier little pixies standing at my door wanting to bite me?

Another great chapter! I like how you altered the main Tekken storyline around and everything! Very good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks for getting Jin to whop Hworang's @$$. That was the best!

hey! i love the story. its really sweet, and well, its a good friendship fic `^.^ please update soon!
~Mako-Kigue

Curiosity killed the cat." Hwoarang sighed as he raked a hand through his red hair.

"Yea but satisfaction brought him back

I loved that little exchange. This just keeps gettin better and better

Hey cool chapter. Great entrance for Devil Jin. Kinda surprised people are stilling hanging with Hwoarang after he slit Jin's throat.

Uh oh, bad Hwoarang! He's going to expose Jin's dark family secret! *smacks Hwoarang*

*gasp* hes gone CRAZY! hes bein such a dick head! i cant wait to see wat happens! *i would write more but itz like 9 at night and im slepi! k?) Siyanara! xoxo
T.P

What the freakin' h@$# is goin on here I know I Black Shadow Dragon am a psycho but never in 10 years will I ever make Forest a fag and Hwoarang a blond!

Look lady is Forset really a fag or a phase? Just make up your freaki'n mind!

This is so cool, I mean it took me 5 hours to read all 22 frekin chapters but it was worth it.say hi to the pixis for me

Why the F$&* is Forest a fag?! thats just not right. You know ther is somthing very wrong with you woman!

Hworang has gone mad!! Well, that's interesting. Keep going.

THIS IS SOO GOOD! and good job on ur final! Please give us readers a long LONG chapter!! please hurry the suspence is killin me!

I thought this chapter was very good! Very X-Files in a way too! Can't wait to see what happens to Jin!

heh, Hwoarang owns. He's a pyscho, and a knife crazy violence freak. YOU OWN HWOARANG.

Whoa, Jesus! 0_0 This is actually getting kinda dark!
Update soon, or I'll go crazy, I swear it!

*Screams* How could you leave it there? HOLY MAJOLY! (Sorry that made no sense) Hwoarang is going a little too far... dear lord, I hope Jin comes out of this alright. I think Kazuya should get involved with this situation.

Hey! (Twitch) Quit taking my stuff! everyone knows I'm the true freki'n psycho! If you want to test me check out THE ULTIMATE TRUTH OR DARE! Fan fic. Pretty good though.

Whew! You had the he11 scared out of me. I thought Xiaoyu was actually leaving

HWORANG IS SO BAD ASS. I love this just as much as i love your other fic. YOU RULE

waagh luv it! you rule

Wow! This is the best Tekken Fic I've ever read! You're so funny! I luv it! Is it just me or does Hwoarang remind anyone else of Tasuki from Fushigi Yugi. Maybe it's the red hair I dunno. Yes, Xiaoyu and Jin are the best couple. I don't really like Julia either! She always kicks my ass whenever I play! Jin's family is so funny too! I've been reading this story for 7 hours! 10 til 4! I hope you'll continue to the end cause if you cause don't you'll live with the burden of wasting half my weekend! Hworangs just hilarious might I add. (ads to favorites list) You deserve this many reviews.

Oh, living together... ^_^ That's cool, lots of stuff can happen, LoL. ^^0

Another great chapter Meggie! I really did enjoy it and letting Xiaoyu stay in Japan, a very good idea!! Can't wait for the next part!

this story is getting batter by the chapter and i can't wait for u to update

YAY! ::sings and does her happey dance:: Xiao anint MOVIN o yea Xiao ain movins O YEA! lol! hapy happy happys! now she gets tp LEAVE with Jin!! *naughtyness pursues* lol j.k! sorry i had sugerr...GREAT! CHAPPIE! I LOVE UR FICCYS! YAY! ::continues her happy dance::

Please finish the story! I wanna hear more!

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER BUT PLEASE DON'T MAKE LING LEAVE THAT WILL BE SO SAD AFTER JIN JUST ASKED HER OUT

good story but u cant make xiao move to china cuz then jin would be stuck with his werid family

That must have been embarasing for Jin. And poor Xiaoyu, it's not fair 4 her either.

Xiao's going back to China? HOO-RAY! *throws confetti in air* Now all you have to do is send Jin with her and this fic'll be perfect... lol, j/p. The way you portray Jin's family is freakin' hilarious! Hell, the way everyone is in this fic is great... I love it! ^_^ I can't wait to find out what happens next... hope ya can update soon!!

no...thats not cool dude!! she cant leave! not jin and all her friends! this sucks!! O_O stupid wang im gonna kick his old ass...i wanna c wat happens! cliff hangers are fun man! lol
LATA
xoxo
T.P~*~

HAHAHAHAHA! Dinner was funny! Kazuya and Lee going at it verbally. Aww, please don't make Xiaoyu go back to China! Have her go live with Jin instead! Yeah, go with that idea... Go... go... *Hypnotising wheel*

no freakin way xiao's leaving that so sux neway thats ur story...it was a nice twist...frankly ur story reminded me of some similar events iv gone through(shudder)...anyway keep the stories coming and dont take xiao away *tear

Another funny chapter Meggie! Very funny! I wonder what will happen to Xaio going back to China? I wonder how Jin will react? Can't wait for the next part!

Aw, no! :( Poor Xiao! Poor Jin! They must be very sad... I wish Xiao could live with Jin's family so that way they don't have to break up...

This was the funniest chapter. I liked two parts, especially.
-" That's just wrong." Lee said disgusted.
" Well, At least I wasn't having it rammed up the ass like you and your sick boyfriend in the kitchen." Kazuya accused-
LOL! That was funny. I also liked...
- " Xiao, that's my uncle." Jin said pointing to the man with the white hair and loud purple outfit. "He's adopted."-
That was also funny, but not as funny as Kazuya's witty comment.

i didnt want the pixies to get me O_O...*ahem*yay! chappies! hahahaha the date of DOOM! poor Jin...his mother is a phyco...this was GOOD! now u can have a cookie since u continued! lataz! TBC ( lol)

T.P

Julia, wanting to lok profecional? Lol! Update soon

Ah Xiaoyu, what ever have you gotten yourself into? Mwahahahaha...update quickly please!

wow!! i can't believe i missed this fic!! it's so brilliant!!

i absolutly love the silly realtionship xiao and jin have...steve and his braniac ways!! brillaint touch!

forest being gay? thats a twist and it's getting really exciting...i wonder if hwoarang can actually stay good a for a little while longer lol!

please continue soon! this is going so well!

Very funny..kinda short though...come up with another one soon...

THIS IS A GREAT STORY! PLEASE KEEP IT GOING! THIS IS THE FIRST FANFIC I EVER READ FOR TEKKEN! (even though I've been playing it for years) BUT U CANT STOP IT NOW! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY I RARELY COME ACCROSS GOOD FANFICS LIKE THIS! PLEASE FINISH IT PLEASE! OR MY PIXIS WILL GET U!
~*~A Girl Who Really Wants To Read The Rest Of Your Sory!~*~

Yay! ^_^ Xiaoyin love, whoo, whoo!

Another great chapter Meggie! Can't wait to see what happens when Xiao meets "The Family", especially Heihachi.

LOL! this is so funny! i cant wait for the next chapter to come out!

this is good a little more lenth would b good cause im getting into it! will nina kill kazuya for knocking her up? will she learn that it was kazuya? kazuya nina jin and steve r my favorite characters - the new generation of mishima family
*sigh* this is good!

funny and cute!

Damn I hate those pixies write more can't wait for the next chapter.

hehe funni! cant wait 4 more! hurri it up grl! lol!
L-A-T-A-Z!
xoxo
T.P

Great chappie ^_^ I noticed ya put the Portuguese thing in there... YAY! Interesting punishments for them all... I'd feel sorry for Jin but I don't think I'm allowed to... heheheheh ^^ Interesting situation with Steve... great job, can't wait for da next update ^_^!

Another funny chapter Meggie! Very good too! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Poor Jin! I wouldnt do that for all of the Mishima's money! And I wonder if Hworang will be able to behave and not get into trouble. I doubt it. And I like that Nina doesnt have to punish Steve, he definitely didnt get his smarts from his dad's side of the family.

YAY, new chapter! Oh, I can't wait 'til Jin meets the 'crazy' members of his family...

Kazuya and sane should never be used in the same sentence. LOL. Poor Jin!

AHAHAHAHAHA! Hwoarang has to be nice! Jin has to move in with the insane family! Write some more! LoL! ciao, xiang xuli

Poor Jin!! He's gonna be stuck with crazy diaper-wearing Heihaichi, aiya... >>;

LoL! Hwoar hella owes Jin and Xiaoyu BIG time!

That was cool and pretty funny at the same time! This is the best fic ever!

LOL, poor guys, helping their friend outta trouble and getting into deeper trouble, tsk, tsk, tsk. Well this is graet, keep writing!

he he he cool. Poor Jin, I hope he gets outav trouble. Well written, looking forward to more of this soon!

Later Days!

~Hwoarang~

Haha, this is one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. Gotta wonder what's going to happen with all the kids. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update ASAP.

Ok, my computer finally let me read this chp, and this was great! I laughed so hard when Lei though Jin & Xiao were Kaz and Jun! I agree w/ Chibi down there, I think he was drunk, or just being stupid as usual. Keep up the good work!

~Trenay~

damn it i hate when theres a cliffy hanger...uhm thing! lol! wow! that WAS loong! thisd is getting so so so so so GOOD ^_^ cant wait 4 more! LATAZ

*Stifles giggle* My God, that was funny! Though I'm pretty concerned with Lei's eyesight. I mean, I can believe Jin could get away with looking like Kazuya but Xiaoyu... she's Chinese and Jun is Japanese and Lei should definately be able to tell the different between since he's Chinese, right? Oh well, he was probably drunk on the job again! LOL I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Another great chapter Meggie! Very good! I found it very funny too! Anyway, can't wait for the next part and I wonder what will happen to them all?

heh heh. I thought what happened to Hwoarang was really funny. I just realised something. It's been a damn long time since I've reviewed this fic, huh? Well I try, some times I just get lost after missing one update. I would have read chp 18 now as well, but it says it's overloaded right now and won't let me read it. I'm hoping it will be better later on though. Well Keep up the good work!!

~Trenay~

oh my.. that was so HiLARiOUS! lmao! i'm cracking up so hard! but that's kinda creepy how xiao and jin look like jun and kazuya.. LMAO! oh well.. keep up the great work! ciao, xiang xuli

O_O *gasp* poor poor poor HWOARANG! i KNO wat they do 2 pretti boyz in jail...not good! and FINALLY Jin is gonna ask Ling Ling out...uhm i think? I'm scared of cheerleaders though...why does Xiao gotz to be one? lol
cant wait 4 more! LATAZ

omg but i havent reviewed in a WHILE! i alwayz get bunchez of laughz frum this! so FUNNY! lol! well i wanna finish the rest! i'll review lata! ^_^

Definitly very funny...it would be nice if u filled in the gap between toodler-hood and jr high...dats just my opinion...btw dnt get hwoarang arrested...at least not for long...really funny...i can see this turnin into like a tv series or watever...MORE! MORE!

One word... and some exclemation marks... ok alot of them!

MORE!

Hwoarang is gonna be arrested for driving when he is gonna be an officer in the army when he's 21 o.O COOL! Lookin' 4ward to the next chappy!

Later Days!

~Hwoarang~

oh my god. you a sick little turd ya no that.

poor 'rang.

ton of, almonds?

YOU.SMEGGING.RULE!

EVEN I LIKE THIS AND I LIVE TO FLAME PEOPLE!

ALL HAIL LORD OF THE TEKKAN FICS!
ALL SHALL REVIEW YOU OR I SHALL HUNT THEM DOWN AND DESTROY THEM! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

Another great chapter Meggie! This is one of my favourite stories! Keep up the good work!

Pretty good. Just got finished reading the chappys. wow that was one heck of a read. Thank you hope to see the next bit soon. Good story I am enjoying this romp. Your protrals of them are so well and believeable. Thanks for the wonder.

I saw that Hwoarang thing coming... but it still cracks me up. That's what you get for trying to bend the rules too much. Oh well, lets just see if Julia is nice enough to bail him out.

Poor Hworang! Lol in this chapter. Crazy boys.

LoL! Sucks for Hwoarang! :P Damn, arrested so soon, I thought he would have lasted at LEAST a week before getting caught for bad driving! ^_~ Hmm, Kazuya gives good advice to his dear son; Jin SHOULD just ask Xiaoyu out already, the stupid boy. ^^0

haha! hwoarang's in jail.. i guess thats what he gets for "borrowing" his dads car and driving without a permit! anyway, keep writing more! lol! ciao, xiang xuli

Lol. Sounds great, the cheerleader thing. Hworang on the football team, cant wait for those mtches. ^u^

Great chapter! I wonder if they'll make it into the cheerleading sqaud? Oh well, can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor girls, they're in for it now. >>; Well, at least the guys don't have to get their girlfriends; THAT would definitely result in a break-up, oi vey. ^^0

Lol! Another good chapter! I'd feel sorry for Jin at the end, but I'm not very fond of him... so... good job!! Maybe Julia could've asked Forest to try out for being a cheerleader... *snickers* Oh and about the language thing... it's alright, I just get annoyed by everyone making Christie speak Spanish. Oh well. Update again soon! One!

yay! u updated! i really enjoyed your chapter! hehe! i was a cheerleader.. ((it hurt like hell)) anyway.. keep up the GREAT work cuz i keep laughin! ^__^ ciao, xiang xuli

yay! u updated! i really enjoyed your chapter! hehe! i was a cheerleader.. ((it hurt like hell)) anyway.. keep up the GREAT work cuz i keep laughin! ^__^ ciao, xiang xuli

Please write this is a great story I can't wait for the next chapter.

LOL!1 Sweet! I love as usual! I've been lazy, and haven't been keeping up. Bad girl me. Well, don't take it personally: i didn't update my own story for 3 damn months. This is the first thing i've come bak to, and i'm glad it's keepin up nicely. I'm eager to see what my boys have got up their sleves. ;) heheheheheh.

xoxo,
di

The boys are planning revenge from a joke played on them two years ago? Boy, can they hold a grudge! Anyway, sounds interesting. Cant wait!

hey this was cool. 4 once the pixis won't bother me, becoz of all that sleeping gas I... oh shit... i should not have said that...

That was really funny. I would've laughed out loud, but I'm way past bedtime. Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon! ^_^

CUTE! ^_^ I sure hope the prank will bring Jin-kun and Xiao-chan together!

Wow... it's been such a long time since I reviewed this fic!! Well, you've done a very good job on this fic! I love it!! There's just one little thing wrong with this chapter: Christie's from Brazil, and there they speak Portugese, not Spanish. Well, aside from that, great chapter! Hope ya update again soon! One!

Funny chapter! Really am enjoying this! I wonder what the boys revenge shall be? Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is such a great Fan Fic. How on Earth do you come up with sudden funny ideas? I like how they get worse the older they become. Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if the girls are going to get what's coming to 'em. Later days!

muahahahaha! they're in high school.. as FRESHMEN ((i'm guessing right??)) can't wait for more! lookin forward 2 their revenge ^__~ ciao, xiang xuli

Ohh! Poor guys, specially Steve. That Law sure is crazy... Well, great update, till next time!

Dude um Lee is gay other than that dude it Col!

Dude um Lee is gay other than that dude it Col!

this is the best story!
"Mister cuddles!" booyaka, baby!

LOL, LOL, LOL, LOL, LOL! Just when I thought this fic couldn't get any funnier, you go and prove me wrong! Oh well, I guess sometimes it's good to be wrong...
UPDATE!

Cute ^_^
Hwo crying for his teddy bear was so funny :D
Hope to read more very soon **

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WTF? why doesn't hwoarang get them back? In the next chappy, how 'bout shaving xiaoyu bald? thankyou!

*resists the urge to strangle Forest* >_o M, I miss the Xiaoyin cuteness... It'd be great if all the guys wanted to play a mean trick on the girls but Jin refused at the last minute; wouldn't that show his soft side for his Xiao-chan? ^_^

oh my GOD! LMAO! that was so hilarious.. "half way there guys!" lmao! so funny! keep up the great work! ciao, xiang xuli

Nice! It was funny what happened to the boys! Wonder if they will get revenge on the girls? Anyway, can't wait for the next part!

LoL! Wicked people! Loved the Xiaoyin. ^_^ Stop being so stubborn, Jin!

This is funny keep writing I love this.

Another great chapter! I wonder what they did to the boys? Also, will you be adding Miharu in this story? That would be good!

Cool update, keep writing. Poor boys.

MWAHAHAHAHAHA! Forest is so gay!
Great chapter!

HAHAHAHAHAHA! that was so hilarious! funny funny.. keep writing.. i wanna know what happens next! lol! ciao, xiang xuli

hey... why weren't you loigged on? I thoguht u wanted to chat on MSN. Oh well, BTW, This chappy was kindav shirt, Hm... I wonder what the prank will be...

I like this story but you
not update and i will be
HURTTING YOU DRASTICLY!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH(cough,cough)
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA(gag,gag,choke,die)

hey Meggie-muffin (thats so WIERD my friend has the SAME nickname cept its meg-o-muffin...) annyway! I TOLD u id review again!! lol! HAHA I LOVE Jin/Xiao stuff! but this isnt the fluffy crap! ITS SO FUNNY! lol!! pleaz continue!
lataz T.P xoxo

LOl. Very funny. Poor Hworang and Julia! It's so damn funny!

god damned baek and michelle those fucked-up pitiful asses if they seperate hwoarang and julia from being together bye bye parly!

I'm gonna KILL them if they do! *swats a pixi who is buzzing around his head* Sorry about that...

So uh... anyway um well yeah uh... EEp. BYE! *runs before herd of pixis chase and sting him to death.*

I just love Jin and Xioayu as couples there so cute in this story. This is perfect keep writing.

Another great Chapter Skittle! Can't wait to see how this summer camp turns out! Keep up the good work!

Another great chapter! Very funny! Especially Baek & Michelles little trick on the others, Wang was pretty funny in this too! Anywaze great fic, and I hope that maybe you'd read some of mine too! ^_^ Keep write'n!

~Trenay~

Ah, this is too funny! I love this fic! ^_^

heh heh *aims bazooka on baek*

Baek: HEY?!? I WAS PAYED TO DO THAT. THING. WITH MICHELLE! I HAVE A VERY BUSY SCHEDULE YOU KNOW! NOW IF YOU EXCUSE ME, I NEED TO GO STAR IN MAKAVELI'S TEKKEN PAINTBALL TOURNAMENT FIC! GOODBYE!

Hwoarang: heh heh heh heh! *releases skittle-xtreme's pixis onto baek*

Baek: *walks around the croner with pixis walking after him.* la de da de da. ARGH! CRAP!

Hwoarang: Heh! Hwoarang will BE WITH JULIA AND THAT IS FINAL! GO TO HELL FOREST! YOPU RETARDED TURKEY BALLS >:)

julia and Xioa look like they would be friend

Sorry about your Homework and everything. I hope you get it sorted out. Anyway, great chapter! Really am enjoying this Fic! I'm really looking forward to seeing how Forest and Marshall get on! Keep up the good work!

whoah, fuzzy slippers? Lifetime for women? Icecream? Oh, yeah, he's gay. ANYWAYS I love the story thus far, wirte some morsey please! lolz!

(Gets her flamethrower.) Pixis?! Keep away, dammit, keep away! (Runs away screaming.)

CHIBI GARET: Uhh, I apologise for Dragon Empress' worying behavior, this chapter was very good!

(Somewhere in the background.) Keep the pixis away from me! Wah!

wow good story u should read mine its Howarang in High School some one reviewed it and told me about yours they said yours was about high school but its really about them as kids its a good story i give it a 5/5

lmao! that was funnier than your previous chappie! keep up the great work.. muahahaha! ((scary)) julia.. and hwoarang.. step-bro n step-sis? X_x.. scary.. yet hilarious.. but seein michelle and baek make out? pure evil! bravo! just kiddin! keep up the hilarious break outs and i'll be a happy reviewer! ciao, xiang xuli

i love this fanfiction word of advice you should make jin,ling,and julia closer friends because they don't act like it please! write more chapters.

too laze to sign in your pur evil

o hey evil idea why dont you make Baek and Michelle related then that will bring hell to Julia and Hwoarang!

Michelle and Baek?! I thought I was the only one in the whole world who liked them as a pair. ^_~ But that'd be weird in this story, since Baek is Hwoarang's father and all, and he's dating Julia. Oh well, we'll have to see what happens! ^_^ Write more soon!

Yay! You added Christie in there! Froest and Christie? How cute! Also, Xiayuo and Jin 4eva, Hwoarang and Julia 4eva! WHOO HO! lolz ^^

Haha, that sucks for Julia! *laughs ass off*

Great chapter! I'm really eager to see what happens to Michelle and Baek plus Xiaoyu and Jin! Keep up the good work!

SO good *_*
I hope Michelle and Baek are dating.They're so cute together ^_^
And after all I don't see what's wrong about shoving her tongue down the throat of her future brother. ;P

He's always her STEPbrother, not her real or half-brother ^^

oh my god! that was so hilarious! that whole brother and sister thing.. evilly genius! muahahahaha! ((scaring myself)) lol! keep on writing cuz it's funny! ciao, xiang xuli

Great chapter! The catch at the end was pretty funny! Now I HAVE to know what Baek is going to say so plz update soon!

~Trenay~

ha ha the pixis are not goling to get me this time >:o)

*reveals secret room where pixis are being mocked and tortured by tekken force*

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

Anyway, baek and michelle dating?!? if they do get married, I'll. I'll. I WON'T BE ABLE TO DO A GODDAM THING ABOUT IT WAAH!

But plz, seriously, don't let them.

And plz have steve date christie, law is SO not her type! plz pretty please with sugar, ice cream, whipped cream and chrry on top?

Owl: QUICK MR HWOARANG! THE PIXIS ARE LOOSE!

OH CRAP! PLZ MAKE THE MODIFICATIONS IN THIS REVIEW. SO THAT THE PIXIS WILL NOT. AW HECK WITH IT!

*pulls out bazooka and shoots all the pixis*

BOOM! HA HA HA HA!

Hey Meggie! (Is that okay?) This is really great! Pure Grade A humor in the beginning, but I think that it gets more romantic in the last few chapters. I liked them more as kids, but that doesn't mean I don't like them now. Anyways, keep up the great humor/writing and update soon!

ive read all chapters, im just reviewing at 4, but plz make MORE. and are u sure nina is steves mom? imean maybe its like wut u did with baek but it should be steve williams or steve phoenix, in the manuesl it sez steve fox

That was funny as he11! Try to have Jin whoop Howorang's @$$ some time later! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! make more.

funny story. by the way, marshalls restaurant got bankrupt because of some competing place. his restaurant wuz called marshall china lol

OMG! i laughed so HARD! it was the most funniest thing EVA! PLEAZ write more! 4 me? lol
ill review when u continue!
ttyl
T.P

wah!
you rock meggie
power to tha insane

LOL! I loved it, go Kazuya for helping his son! ^_^ More soon!!

"That boy owes me his soul."
Hmm, you weren't referring to Tekken 4 there, were you? (Coughs.) :)
Anyway, this was a great chapter!

That chapter was really great! Absoutly enjoyed it! Can't wait for the next part!

hello i liked this chapter and WHAT THE FUCK?!?

*gets stung by several pixies*

I AM REVIEWING YOU FUCKING DUMBASS PIXIS!

Go to hell!

*pixis sting even more*

hey, baek, come look at this cool screensaver!

Baek: *comes into the room* Hi, what's up?!?

Hwoarang: EVIL PIXIES!

*Hwoarang and Baek run out of the room while being chased by evil pixies*

Hwoarang: This way! *runs into his room*

Baek: Hey wait a second. *SLAM!*

Baek: Open the ARGH! FUCKING DOOR. ARGHH! OWIE WOWERS! FUCKING PIXIES! IT'S HIM YOU WANT NOT ME! OPEN THE OW DOOR! NO!

Great Chapter! I loved it! Write more!

wow, it went from pg-13 to R. YAYS! JULIA AND HWOARANG KISSIED! lols, i loves it still, very coolio. i hope the next chappie comes soonerz ^^ lol, I'm an idiot XD

This is one of the best I've read.mad props!

That was such an awsome story! Write another chappie, and it would be awesome if Julia and Hwoarang had a kissing scene! LOLZ! I also loved the marriage part, so cute! please write more. maybe you should add christie in there (she's in tekken 4, related to Eddy somehow, either a daughter or grandaughter relationship i think.) lolz. I'm mumbling, LOVE IT!

It wasn't long to me. In fact it was hilarious.

lol! interesting *wink* keep it uP!

Great chapter! I wonder if Kazuya and Jun will find them kissing or if they will stop before they get there? Still, great stuff! Look forward to reading more!

Xiaoyin forever!! ^_^

This is a great chapter! Nice that you included the Romeo & Juliet play, too bad you left us hang'n an the end though, I bet they'll get busted! Update soon!

MWAHAHAHAHAHA! They're gonna get caught, aren't they?! (Laughs evilly again.) What'll Jun do when she sees her 'baby' kissing Xiaoyu?
You are truly evil for leaving that cliffhanger.

great chappy! loved it! your going on my fave author's list, fave story list and author alert list to!

oh, yeah, I'll have 3rd chapter of my mindless tekken story posted on saturday, i was going to do it last week, but fictionpress.net was delaying the process, so i couldn't.

This is great! I'm gonna read your other fics too!

this was a classic chapter baby it had me rolling on the floor with laughter keep it up

POWER TO THE INSANE!
POWER TO THE SICK!

cool so far


P.s.i'm 13 and i'm happy didnt get the talk yet
i found out form my friend

Hahahaha! The best parts were Hwoarang's and Steve's talks with their parents. Funny stuff! ^_^

HhHAhahAHAAa... that's hilarious... ^___^

That wuz hilarious! I can just imagine the look on Baek's face. The scary thing is, that health teacher kinda reminds me of the trainer/health teacher here at my school! Plz update soon! :)

This chapter was great! I like how your growing the kids up and it's nice your including the parents but why not add alot more to do with the parents? Like going out on vacations, complaining about the kids being bullied etc.......?

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I love this fic! It' a riot, esoecially when Paul was trying to explain it to Steve. Heh heh, classic!

This is great! Very cute aswell! I hope you write some more of this!

HA! That was good. I hate Julia too. You need to make sure she gets a spanking or something later on-

This is so funny. more more more email me if you want a sick idea ;)

BWAHAHAHAHA!Tasty macorroni! Gets me every time! Love it! Keep it up!

This stuff is really funny! It kinda reminds me of the Rugrats

heh heh this is great pooor hwoarang :D. Good chappy, usual crap. well, see ya.

heh that was pretty funny reading about tekken fighters as kids.... but why did u soften hwoarang hes the coolest, and another thing is i dont know how old the kids are since the first chapter i mean... i guess their about five but...... any way great idea keep writting

This story is getting even more funnier. First there in daycare together, then they have chickenpox together. I wonder what will happen next.

This story is getting even more funnier. First there in daycare together, then they have chickenpox together. I wonder what will happen next.

Another very funny chappie...lol they thought they were gonna be fried chicken! And Julia bribed Steve to marry her and Hwoarang...lol...that's pretty funny! Hope you update again soon. One!

I liked the Julia and Hwoarang arguements! Haha!
Poor Hwoarang!

ok that was one of the funniest storys ive ever read! keep writing.

What a Cute story man. Hehe

Hello! I am bored! This is the last day of the holidays before school comes along. WAAH! Oh, yeah, almost forgot, I'm real popular at school, I'm in a prankster club, When someone dobs on me the teachers go "SO" and the teacher's discipline doesn't phase me. BUT I WANNA STAY HOME HERE AND PLAY CRASH TEAM RACING! I just got it and it's awesome fun! School is gonna kill me WAAH! Am i gonna die?

Well, asides from my crappiness, I'm going to say the usual crap: Great chappy, Can't wait for more, that sort of stuff. BUT I AM BORED STIFF! WHY BOTHER TO DO HOMEWORK WHEN THE TEACHER DOESN'T EVEN CHECK IT? Bad luck is following me around like a stalker! how to kill bad luck... where's a 4 leaf clover when you need it? WAAH! My neopets account got disabled for using illegal language in the battledome, my gamefaqs account got deleted for swearing, my ff.net account is SO... SLOW... and to top it all off I have nothing to do!

If you know any cool sites, know any stuff you can do you know cuz I AM SO BORED!, could you plz email me @ [email protected] I NEED SOMETHING TO DO BEFORE BOREDOM BENDS MY MIND INTO COMMITING SUICIDE PLZ HELP! Anyways, this reviews getting too damn long, see ya!

Awww! How kawaii! Lol...Steve joined them in tasty macaroni... I hope you update again soon! This is just too KAWAII! One!

::laughing her ass off:: This so was soo funny and cuuute! with the whole Hwoarang cootie thing lol!

That is the CUTEST chapter so far! I had a big smile on my face while reading it. I think I'm going to print out this story, it's that adorable. ^____^ I REALLY can't wait for more!

Aawww.. pure kawaiiness ^_^ Can't wait to see the next chapter! Keep on with the chibi Hwoarang... he's so cute!!

ChibiShiva

Very funny :D
Over all the reaction of Hwoarang(Hwo, I'm proud of you *______*)
Poor little Hwo ^__________^
I like very much your fic, hope to read next chapter soon *_____*

mama mia, thisa story isa very good! lolz i don't really talk like that, but i think you get the gist of what i'm saying. well, hope you write more cause this is really funny!

Weddings?! That was funny!
Okay, let Hwoarang and Julia have divorce! Make the divorce papers weird

This story is really kyoot ^_^;

Btw, I just finished writing a kill-maim-destroy-Julia fic, so I completely agree with your adaption of the little brat =/

Even though this is really off the wall, I can so see it happening...good job!

This is soooooooooo cute! "Uncle Wang, I have a husband now." =D I love your Xiaoyin, and yay, Julia got dissed! ^^0 Sorry, but I hate that girl so much... >>;

oOo love it! ha ha ha...write more!!

That's great. Chibi Hwoarang rocks...he's jsut like me when I was a kid (well I wasn't quite that bad...). I !!!!!!!

So it was Hwoarang that ruined Marshall Law's business! ^_^ Nice fic...cute as ever...write more!

This story is Hillarious!!! I likes it ::Nods head in approval:: Keep up tha good work chick!
Cna't wait to read tha rest!

^.~
^.^ Phoenix ^.^
^.~

(Tyrant Scizor's the name)

Aw... how cute!!! ^^ I can picture cute widdle Jin around my knee size! And Hwoarang! ^^ SOOOO CUTE!!!!!

Hwoarang: She's at it again...

I wuv u!!! (glompz both Hwoarang and Jin)

PLS CONTINUE FOR THE LUV OF THE KIDS!!!!

hey! have you read that fic that makelevi wrote? It's called hwoarang the psychic. You said that I read your mind. Do these mean things? Am i a psychic? YAY! You say ya got plenty of suggestions, but I'll tell ya mine anyway, have Forest make 1 of the chibis angry then they'll start teasing each other about their names. e.g.

Hwoarang: So, wood, what'd ya get for ya presents?

Forest: Wood? It's forest! Not wood!

Hwoarang : Fine then. TIMBER!

Forest:So what? Your name sounds like the sound you make when you clong 2 garbage lids over someone's head.

Xiaoyu: Stop it you 2!

Hwoarang: Zeeyowu! Ziayoyu! Zimbayoyo! How do you say it? Heck , let's just call her bob!

Xiaoyu: WWAAHH! (cries to Jin)

You don't have to use tht idea, i dunno. up to you. Oh, yeah, I've posted a new fic called my mindless tekken story can you plz read that & tell me what you think? Thankies! (_!_) see ya!

P.S. This chappies great! Can't wait for more!

So, so, so.... KAWAII!!!! *gets all starry-eyed and hugs herself like a bad anime* Cuties!

Kiddie Hwoarang is simply priceless. "I'm sorry your son is a pussy." Ha ha, hilarious!

It's stuff like this that may someday inspire me to write a tekken fanfic! Thanks, and keep up the good work!

Haha! I liked this!

DONT SAY HATE other than that Good GOOD GOOD GOOD
one more thing even if she not your fav she needs more than one line (Julia)Ling and Jin is still nasty i dont care what ya say

hey wassup baby bebop!

hey yeah loving it
totemo kawaii dayo!!

I hope you keep this lil' KUTE thing going!!

me loving it!

later days
Lahtinah Kerrigan™

Hahaha! This is a very great idea, and original! I like it, I'll put it in my favorites, I can't wait until you update!

this is another hilarious chapter thanks for using my idea in it. Jun was majorly out of character but guess what, I don't give a sh*t! This fic is great, keep on with it. Maybe you could also have The chibi fighters dine out with their parents at marshall law's restaurant. I dunno, this is your fic not mine, so you decide what you want, k? I'll be seeing ya round!

Chibi!!! That's one word that explains it all! Cute Chibi LOVE and Fun!!!! I love this! Keep it up, and keep up your other fic!!!

AWWWWWW!!!!! XIAOYIN!!!! YAY!!! *CRIES* SO SWEET!!!! I just knew there had to be some in there somewhere! I am so happy!!!!

Oh God!!! That's funny! I really have to keep reading!!!

LoL, this was HELLA funny! Gosh, one of the little tots remarking that the ADULTS are acting immature, like 2-year-olds... One of the damn funniest things I've ever heard, and good thing it came from Xiaoyu! ^_^ LoL to Julia sounding like an idiot when she said grace at the table; I swear, there need to be more Julia-bashing fics out there instead of all those stupid Xiaoyu-bashing fics. *growls...* Anyway, keep up with the Xiaoyin and Hwoarang/Julia bashing! Whooo! *hugs the author*

They must look so cute in little dresses and tuxedos! ^.^

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE! =D Please, that wasn't disgusting; Xiaoyin rocks! Stupid Hwoarang, screwing around with Xiaoyu like that... hell, I'm really glad that Jin tried to beat the crap outta that dumbass for messing with his girl. ^_^ Xiaoyin forever!

the story was good but that nasty if jin 3 Ling has to be just born i like jin and julia there a year apart other that it was good cool idea
toddler

Well, we've got a group of overaged kids here, haven't we? There's Jin and Xiaoyu, and the way they asked questions about the story - can't hide anything from kids nowadays.

and to kantwon, you have no right to say: I WANT MORE CHAPTERS NOW! I COMMAND YOU! Why don't ya go write ya own story, dumbass. ya always tryin ta be a bigshot thinkin' your the best well when you review fics you might as well do it NICELY!

and to skittle-xtreme this fic is great. Here's an idea: Have Kazuya and Baek fight and have Jin and Hwoarang argue going "My daddy's gonna beat your daddy" "Uh, uh, likewise" You don't have ti, that's what free wills are for, but that's just a suggestion. Well, I'll be seein' ya round!

Seems like this is gonna be a BIG THING on this site. Jin and Hwoarang as Chibi Rivals, never thought of that. This is great, if ya want reviews, you should do what I do. Read other dude's fics then review them thanking them and stuff and saying things like keep up the good work suff like that then put a p.s. please read and review my story. well, see ya!

awww...thats sooooo cute! please continue!

There's only one word to describe this: CUTE!! It's full of cuteness and fuzziness. ^_^ I love it!

It was pretty cool when they interrupted the teacher when she was reading the story. I don't mind the little Jin/Xiaoyu pairing as long as you keep on adding chapters to this story.

I think they are all so cute. can't wait for the next installment

Hey you know what you are not that good at what you say you are. You need to be on to what you say. For example, you say that your idea might suck...well it dosn't. It's wayyyy better than mine.

Hey you should keep going with this fan fiction. Its impressive with its humour, and Its funnie details.

If you could do me a favour?

Read mine.

Thankies
^_^ Lil' Miss Naughty!™

That was cute! Please continue!

*falls over laughing* oh god.....chibis!

Kawaii! Please continue! =D

I can't wait to see the next chapter. This story kinda reminds me of the show South Park.

XD Thats funny!!!! ^_^ more!!!

Really cute, especially Steve's part...
I really liked it ^_______^

quite humorous...please continue!