aw, Jinny got a baby ^^ Xiao and Jin live on, but did you have to be so harsh?

wow, i think this is the most powerful and moving story that i've read in a while ... i thank you for writing it ... i believe it might have inspired me to write something of my own, freeing me from my recent writer's block
perhaps this might be time to ask you for an alternate ending, one where hwoarang is the father of xaioyu's baby?
please keep up the wonderful writing, i really liked your style ... it's very moving

would you believe me if I told you I had an intuition splurt it was him in the first place?
Go Intuition!!

I'm on a sugar high that would take a lesser person to the moon!

NO! stop right now! It was not Hwoarang! It can't have been! he's too kind, caring, -and for goodness sake-pretty!

EEK! the suspense is killing me!Litterally!
well, no, not literally...but I still waqnna' know!!

Durn drunken Policeman!

Poor Xiao...Kick 'is ass Jin!!

wow. i'm still getting over it. i dont exactly like xiaojin coupling, so i was reluctant to read. but i'm glad i did! reading ur comedy fic was already awesome, but this was purely amazing. u inspired me to write a story bout rape. cuz altho its something really serious, no one ever really focuses on it. u did a fantastic job, pleze keep up ur fantastic work. if i do a tekken rape thingy, i'll ask for ur permission formally in an email, then if u want, i'll even let u read it so it wont b the same. k? nehowz, AWESOME! THAZ ALL I CAN SAY!!
xoxo-di

I knew it!

You know, there's one thing I never understood, how could Xiaoyu be a virgin when she was raped by Hwoarang if later on it was revealed that she also had sex with Jin so that her baby turned out to be Jin's? She didn't want anyone to touch her after Hwoarang's betrayal so how could she have had sex with Jin and had the probability of her child being Jin's?

I thought that one of your clues was when you said Lei you meant 'Lee'.
can you put in another chapter with all off the clues

hahaha! i read the whole thing i just realized sumthin at the end of chappie 5! i forgot ta read the epinlogue! silly me! THIS STORY WAS KICK ASS! yay!ttyl!
Hugz and Cookies
T.P

HUWHAT?!?!?!?!? it was hwoarang!?!? i can't believe it! OMG!... sniff, sniff(;_;)... this is so sad(;_;)... but at least it had a happy ending with jin and xiao being together with their newborn son(",). they're one, big, happy family! aw... *group hug*!

oh and yea i read the whole thing but i forgot to add dis...wat else is new?lol! OMG OMG i could of sworn it WAS gonna be Lei cuz of " he was so drunk" and he does drink ALOT! or King but he doesnt talk...he growls...!o well Hwoarang jsut makes this even dirtier cuz he's like Jins FRIEND or atleast was... damn him! lol
LATAZ

Wow...im shocked @_@ whoaa...damn it hwoarang! im gonna kick his stupid ass! thats so sad! pleaz continue! OH AND OMG plaeaz dont make Ling have an abortion or somthin!! i read a story JUST like this ( well not really it resembled it though) na dthey had to put THAT in there! it made me sad O_O! but ya kno...
PLEAZZ continue! I L-O-V-E reading your stories! your so GREAT at it! i've read another one of yours too! i wish i could write as good as u! Lol my story on herre hasnt gotten mani reveiwzz! it makes me! lol
okk well lata mego
T.P

Hwoarang: God oh my! my oh god!

Baek: Those are the only three words he can say at the moment.

Hwoarang: Oh my god! god my oh!

Baek: The defribulation affected his brain!

Hwoarang: God oh my! Fucking god!

Baek: HE SAID A NEW WORD!

Hwoarang: Oh my, oh my, oh my, oh my, GOD!

Baek: He says he wanted it to be Lei or even steve or anyone else but.

Hwoarang: God my oh fucking my god oh oh!

Baek: Not Hwoarang!

*Hwoarang jumps out of the window and commits suicide*

Baek: Don't worry, he's still alive in the real world, it's just a fanfiction glitch.

Hwoarang: God oh my. *dies*

Baek: I'm gonna listen to the soulbalde record to keep me in track.

*do doo doo doo doo! WE ALL NEED TO SHINE ON, TO SEE

HOW FAR WE'RE GOING ON THE JOURNEY!

HOW..FAR! SEARCHING FOR OUR. STAR!

DEEP IN THE NIGHT, I PRAY IN MY HEART,

FOR THAT SPECIAL LIGHT, TO SHOWER ME WITH LOVE,

TO SHOWER ME WITH POWER, TO SHINE ABOVE!

YOU NEED TO START, TO BELIEVE IN AND CARRY ON!

WHAT YOU BELIEVED IN FROM THE VERY START!

GOTTA GET TO TO THE EDGE OF SOUL, TO SOUL, TO CARRY ON, DEEP IN MY HEART!

TO LOVE, TO SHINE, TO LOVE, TO SHINE!

COME FACE IT BELIEVE IT, IT'S TRUE.

Neighbor: FUCK OFF, I LOVE THAT SONG BUT THAT SONG'S TERRIBLE!

Baek: *tears in his eyes* *puts gun to head and pulls trigger*

Neighbor: *Pulls wig off to reveal hwoarang's head* HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

OH MY FUCKING GOD YOU MADE HWOARANG DO IT!

OH MY GOD.OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD!

Baek: Ignore him, the point is he means to say he enjoyed this chapter really much and he has added you to his fave author's list.

Hwoarang: OH MY G0D! OH MY GOD!

Nurse: Ok, get the defribulator, boys.

Hwoarang: OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY- ZAP! YARGH!

Baek: *puts thumb up* good! gonna get to the next chapter now! *presses little >> button while hwoarang gets defribulated again and again*

Hwoarang: Oh my god.

-_-.

I can't figure it out. i feel really dumb. WAAH!

I'm guessing it was either king, heihachi or kazuya, kazuiya mpst likely.

jin's gonna get him back soon >:)

oh.my.god.

SUCH A GREAT PLOT!

Your really descriptive about each and every detail, I love it!

But, uh, Lei is 52 or around about that so i can't see why he'd want to rape some1 who is 18, noone, even some1 drunk would do that. it would have to be someone around her age. like KING!

Interesting story. I liked it and it would be great if you did a fanfic on Jin and Xiaou kid! You could also leave Jun and Kazuya alive. The kid needs grandparents!

YAY! The baby looks like Jin! Woohoo! Xiaoyin forever! And as for Hwoarang... *pushes him into a meat grinder*

Y'know I'm very surprised Julia even wanted to be near Hwoarang after that. Even if the kid wasn't his...
But that aside, I realy enjoyed this fic! The happy ending was appreciated too.

I liked this ending! Although, it would have been interesting if it was Hwoarang's child!

Damn, I was not expecting that! You definately got me there.
Still, a very good couple of chapters. But what's Jin gonna do to Hwoarang? Will he kill him? Oh, go on, let him kill him!

I thought that it could be Hwoarang, but I didn't want it to be him.

Woooh! I must say that Hwoarang wasn't exactly who I expected for that- I thought it was Law! Oh well, I'm wrong a lot. Write more, I wanna see what Jin does to him!

I don't think it's Lei. That would be too obious. I don't know. I think it's either Law or Eddy. Law because of his drinking problem, and Eddy because of the whole thing about the magazine. Please update soon! The suspense is kill'n me!

Ahhh! Poor Xiaoyu! Rape... that's horrible... >>; Who is it?! And whoever did it, I hope Jin will go and kill the bastard!

WOW! I am so confused. Well, you said the guy was drunk. So it could Be Lei or Law. But it could have been anyone. It could have also been Paul cuz he got drunk after the last tournament. Oh! I don't know. I want it to be Kazuya because... Well, I don't want it to be...but then again, it would be such a weird twist! Yeah, I bet I'm totaly off aren't I?? Yups! But hey, What do you expect... I am a freak!!! Anyway, I will be waiting for your next submitted peace!!! I WANNA KNOW WHO HE IS!!!! The torture!!! The torture!!! Something like this cannot be allowed to happen can it??? AGH!!! Oh, um... well, I know she was raped and all, but is she gunna be pregnant? That's a WEIRD TWIST. But it gives ya ideas to play around with!!! Well, G2G

This chap is great! No wait... This fic is great... Aw hell, YOUR GREAT!!!

Oh my god! Is it... Marshall Law?
I think it's him because...."He was so drunk"
And when you play Marshall story mode and listen to the opening it says that Marshall started drinking after his buisness shut down and I guess it would be hard to quit drinking! Although many people were drunk, that night. But I do guess that Marshall would be a very unexpected guess. Maybe it's Paul.

good suspence... this is a good fic. u sed that u left a clue, is the rapper jin?? coz u sed 'he was so drunk'. well, he could of, coz u never mentioned where jin was wen she was gettin raped. .....that's wat i think, so dont mind me, keep up the good work

"He left her there used and filthy. He shattered the innocence and purity of her snow colored dress along with her soul. She lay the darkness of her bedroom, curled into a fetal fashion and warm tears washing away the old dry ones. She slowly closed her eyes taking a shaky and steady breath in, convincing herself this had to be a nightmare. She clutched the cream and clammy sheets around her broken body as the door opened.
"
^That paragraph was kinda confusing..Well, anyways, overall this is a pretty good fic.

Um... it can't be Lei... can it??? I don't think so. Let's see... I still think it's Kazuya! I know that's weird, but think about it. Jin's father raped his girlfriend!!! nah! anyway... I WANNA KNOW!!!!!

Don't leave us hangin like that cuz I wanna know who did it. I'm guessin it was Eddy for some reason cuz.... well I dunno y but thats ok. U said sumthin about Christie so the first thing that pooped into my head was EDDY! But anywayz I'm gunna go read it again to see if I can find that clue u left just in case te Christie thing wasn't it, and I don't think it is. Continue Soon!!

kinda short, can;t waint for next chapter...good story! clues hab me thinking its eddy...cuz of christie...I LOVE UR STORY!

I don't know. Maybe Paul, Kazuya or Heihachi. It seems like them. I don't think it's Lei, though.
Great chapter!

your story was okay, but alittle dirty. sorry, just my opinion

Poor Xiaoyu! Who was it?!

So angsty! I like! ^.^ I was in the mood for something like this. Well, I don't know who it could be that did that to her...unless...maybe...well...I don't know. I have an idea, but I won't say it, because I'm probably wrong. I hope it wasn't Hwoarang though. Keep it up! ^_^

Angsty.
Well, I like the start of this. Continue please.

OMG once again!!!! Woah! That was sooo wrong...But soo good! Girl, you are definately in MY FAVORITES!!!! Oh yeah!!! You know, it would be extremely nasty if it were Kazuya! Blah!! But it has to be someone around her age right? Maybe one of the tekken fighters? Mostly, people use Hworang, but I don't know who else? I would say Steve, but he doesn't seem like that kind of person. Keep this up!!!!