again...dont u think ur going a little over board with the cuteness?...i mean its great...to a point..

kk...powerpuff gurls? that a little extreme dont you think?

aw...hehe...i like putting my hair in pig tails too...hehe...good job...cant wait to read more.

WOW! this story is great! and sad i am interested in reading more of your fanfics your a great author

Great story, when Brock first arrived in the WWE he scared the hell outta me and Paul was just creepy, but in the past month that Paul has been with Big Show, Brock has really come out on his own and I'm actually starting to like him and I like how you've made him a real person, not just that big "monster" that everyone seems to think he is because of his ring persona.

I dunno how old this story is, but I just now found it and read it and it's REALLY GOOD so I'm going to go read the sequeal now...I'm sure it's just as good as this (PAUL SUCKS ASS!!)

Yay! A seqeal! I can't wait for it. Keep up the good work. This story rox!

*applauds* SEQUELS ROCK!!!! You should definitely write a sequel to this. It was a really cute story, and I loved Trish and Bubba Ray too. Brock was actually sweet too!!!! And Paul got F-5'ed!!!! Woo!!!!! Anyways . . . write the sequel, chica, and I'll keep sending my reviews.

SEQUEL SEQUEL THAT WAS AWESOME KEEP WRITING IT WAS FANTASTIC THANKS FOR THE GOOD READ

CONTACT THE LIZARD AT [email protected]

ITS CUTE! I LIKED IT A WHOLE BUNCH!!!

ohhhhh...
You have got to write an Epilogue or something! Arr! Oh man, I think you should do something smoochy... Hehheh, I bet it'll be a great read. This was such a wonderful story... *sobs that it ends* Totally love it.
~^*P*^~

make a sequel

Awwe. I definatly think you should write a sequal!! And I really am happy with the ending. I was thinkin Brock did it like on purpose. ( well he did but you know what I mean! ). This story was great!

trhat was a good story! you could wrtie a part 2 of it! i would like to see it!

Well everthing turned out nice.I smell....sequal??
Nicole

This was very good. I definitly think you should write a sequel

Ooooh nooo! F-5ing Roxie is a big nono if you want Heyman to NOT be accomplished. Oh man. Grr. Paul is such a piece of... Lard. :\. ~^*P*^~

i can't beleive it!!! what going happen now! Will Roxy and Brock break up! i hope not! i like them together now to your O-Town story!!! People youhave o read that Story is Great!

:O Oh my word. :passes out: This story ROCKS. Now I REALY REALLY cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Tell me I did not just read that! How could Brock do that to his own girlfriend? You have so got to post more of this fic ASAP! ^_^

HOLEY SHIT. thats just evil ending the chapter like that. cant wait 4 the next part

Come on.... that wasn't fair. What a cliffhanger! I'll be looking out for the next chapter.
Nicole

Now, I just finished reading "Heart Stopper" and I want you to right more. You need to right more. The story is so awsome. It's great.
Nicole

I really like this fic! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Whoohoo! Update... Well, have to say wasn't very Brockish, but I guess you've done a good job focusing on the reactions on everyone instead of sticking to the whole relationship alone. Great job, so far. ;]. ~^*Pear*^~

I can't wait for the pay per view to read what happens.

Hehe, awesome!!!
I love it, and that scene with Brock and Rocksy was sooooooo romantic, and not to mention--cute!!!
-Ellie

This is gettng so good!!!! i want to know who goign to wint he match! Is Brock going to turn on Heyman? You have to write more!

Love you. Love what you write. Love the chapter. Love wrestling! Arrrrrrrr! *big giant cheesy grinnn* :].

great story and i am actually really getting into it, so please start writing more soon

awe damn that was a short chapter! but i liked it! PLEASE write more sooN! its awesome.

WOW! Great Chapter! Wonder what will happen at the PPV??

i am loving this Fic! i also love the other one with O-town! ok back to this one! i hope Rob and Brock get along for Roxy sake and also i wanted to know what is Brock veiw about this match! How is reacting to all this! i need more! you have me hook!

You little meany!!!! No Brock and Rocks in this chapter?! You're such a tease!!!! *pouts*
Keep up the great work...and you better not tease me anymore!!!! *pouts again*
-Ellie

Grrr. Now I want to stomp on Heyman's cap (on his head as well) for getting poor Roxy into trouble. Rob's SO gonna kill her, and I know it. >:|. Oh well. Great great, super reat job on this!
~^*Pearl*^~

This is so good, I can't wait for the next chapter to read what happens now that rob knows.

i am loving this Fic! Man Rob found out! i didn't want him to found out like that what about Brock? what is going to do to Paul? i can't wait!

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! How could u leave it there?????
Great chapter(s) (I had to catch up)

Damn Paul Heyman.LOL.
Looking forward to reading more.

omgomgomgomgomgomg!!!!!!! you can't just leave it there!!!!!!! *whales*...noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!
You little evil...arggg!!!!!!
Newayz, I love it!!!!! I've been looking forward to a Brock story for a while--and I gotta say...wow!!!!!!!
:D
-Ellectra

who was at the door? What happen behind those close doors!!!! i want more!!! you have to write more soon!

at last i get back to this story!!! alli want to say Keep up the good work! i would never think that Rob was her half brother! that was a great surprise!!!!! Brock and Roxy sittingint he tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g...lol... i can't wait to see what going to happen next! And Paul hey man what he had next for the two lovers!

Come on, I'm dying to know who was at the door. This is so good.

Another cliffhanger? Ahh stop with the evilness! LOL. That was a great chapter! awwe I loved the beginning. hehehe. Awesome job!

Oh my goodness. I love this story, but you are killing me when you keep cutting it short right at the best parts...I am dying to read more...Post more soon...I LOVE it.

Vykke

great story so far!!plz continue i wanna see whats ganna happen!!hehe!

Hey great story. It's about time Brock got some luvin'. Hope to read more from you soon! ^_^

*dies* I love this. I absolutely love this. I've never loved anything so much and I love this. Maybe because I'm part of a psych ward myself. But I love this. Grrr... Why'd you stop THERE? Did you have to? Anywaes, couldja like review on my short little story called reasons or something? If you could that'd be wonderful. Remember, I LOVE THIS and I LOVE YOU FOR making it!!! :P

^*~Hells*^~ aka Pearlyn

Loved your story Heart Stopper. It was great.

I'm dying to read what happens next, this is so good.

Hi,

Just wanted to say that I am really enjoying reading this story. I look forward to reading more of this as you post it.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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OMG you are soo evil! How dare you leave us right there!!! LOL. I love this fic so much its not even funny haha. IT is awesome! PLEASE add more SOON!

WHOA HOO!! I LOVE IT KEEP WRITING... ROXY IS CUTE AND BROCK IS EVEN COOLER YEAH!!

AWwww that was sweet. I never thought of Brock Lesnar like that. PLEASE CONTINUE!

Hi!

Just wanted to say that I am really enjoying reading this story and I look forward to reading more as you post it.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
[email protected]

Great chapter. Need more soon! ^_^

this is real good story! wierd, but good! don't leave me hanging for the next chapter!!

I can't wait to read what happens next. This is such a great story.

That was another great chapter! Man i eally didn't want her to found out abot her mother like that! i hope Brock go to her and comfort her and i hope Rob don't do any thing dumb to Brock!

O.O wow...I feel bad for the Brock now...poor guy..O>o update soon XD

awwe I love this fic so much!!!!! grrrr im mad at brock though. haha. I hope he goes to Roxy! Update soon! its awesome

Awe ur fic is sooo cute and awesome!!I LOVE it! PLEASE add more soon. I wanna know what happens to Brock and Roxy!

Ohhh! Please write more soon. Can't wait to read more. Loved it. ^_^

Ooh, intruiging! I've never read a fic I liked with Brock before, until now. I love the way he's all hard and evil in the ring, and then all cute and lovey out of it! :) I hope to read more very soon!

that was great chapter!!! Paul gets on my nervous! if he hurt Roxy in anyway iam going to be mad! i wonder when she going to found out about her mother and i hope she doesn't foud out in a bad way.

Awwwwwwwwwww. How sweet. Roxy and Brock are just adorable together. I can't wait for more.

Michele

Finally someone does a Brock Lesnar fic. I'm really liking it so far. Write more!!!!

This is great, not many brock lesnar fics that actually has HIM as the good guy, lol. Can't wait to read more

I love this story, I can't wait to read more of it..

if i was Trish i would have drop kick him. He almost got Roxy in trouble. i want to know hat going to hppen next? is Paul going to catch Roxy in Brock room? Will Roxy ver found out what really happen to her mother? How is RVD going to react to all his?

that ws cute Brock cam to the hosptial to see her. but i wonder what is Paul going to think when he found that Brock and Roxy has feeling for each other. On tothe next chapter!

this is getting good i think that Brock and Roxy will be a cute coupel! i can't wait to se what going to hapopen enxt between this two! on to the next chapter

this is great! i can't wait to see what next! i am on to Chapter 2 now!

Ouch! Quick recovery! but love that Brock is sweet to her. Need more soon! ^_^

Awwww that was so sweet!

Poor Brock, he feels so bad, well hope Rob can know how he feels. Great Fic!

Love this story so far!!! It's cute! Thank you for having a Brock story cause it's about time someone wrote about him!! =)

that is soooooooooo cute!!

Man that is so sweet. I cannot wait for more.

Michele

Hi,

Just wanted to say that this is a great story, I look forward to reading more!

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
[email protected]

I like it! Keep writing pwease! I'll... give you a lollipop... here ======( )
A lollipop
Lauren

u did it again! awesome awesome awesome....Brocky is sorry...aww that would be such a cute storyline for the wwe
~Ayala

Awww! -dies of cuteness- I just wanna go give Brock a hug now!!

Cute chapter.. the next one will be sooo cute. Cute cute! -giggles-

awe cute fic, love Brock actually being protrayed as somethingg other then a monster, great job!

thats a cute story u should continue

*waves frantically* Heylo it's me again and your story kicks major powerpuff butt! That is so cute i love seeing brock as what i think he really is...a big teddy bear. Good job!

I like brock to be tough, not to be nice.I don't really like the story.

Wow. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one and what happens in the match. Really looking forward to reading it. Great work! ^_^

This is pretty good. I usually don't read stories that carry out WWE Storylines into real life, but we need more Brock Lesnar fics! Add more soon!

dude this story kicks major bootay. lol. bootay is a funny word. but update soon, this story is great

:: jaw drops :: I have read...a fic...about Brock Lesnar...and I didn't hate it. :: blink :: Congratulations!
On a similiar note, waaaaaay further along in the story, do we _please_ get the visual of Heyman getting an F5 from Lesnar? Please?

wwooohhooo, i love brock! I love brock!!! this is a really cool story, i cant wait for the rest of it!!! well done!! I love Brock!!!

*blinks rapidly* That's not the end is it?please say no...Brocky is so sweet. Heyman just makes him an asshole. good job so far
~Ayala

Man Roxy is adorable. She has got a whole hellava lotta fight in her. This looks like it could be a really good fic. Keep it up. I want more. Pretty Pupupupuuuuuuuuuuwwwwwwweeeezzzzeee :)

Wow. I loved this chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading more - soon I hope. ^_^ Great fic - well written! ^_^

Aw! Hey that was cute! I like Roxy! =)

This is one of the few original wrestler stories I *like*. Nice plot, awesome characters. I hope I'm not asking too much if I ask for more soon? =)

Take care!

Ooh! Brocky's gotta heart! I can't wait for more of this story!