hm, i definitely think you should do a sequel to this.

It's like 3am and I just finished reading this! I love this fic, you did an awesome job with it. I loved it when she sang the Meow Mix song! I nearly pissed my pants laughing. (you didnt need to know that) *shrugs* anywho, i really enjoyed it, keep up the great work!

hey megan, great story(ok, i didn't really read it cause i dan't dig wrestling). yea, this isn't much of a review, but g/w it's 100!! yay!! ~nikki

that was a really cool story! i think that it was really cute and sweet. please keep writing u r really great!

Wow, another great story. Wonderful sequel and i'm glad everything worked out...keep up the good writing. Good stuff.

That story was great. It would be awesome to read a sequel, maybe have it be about the twins learning to wrestle and becoming a tag team together, or something. That would be kinda cool. Anyways, great job!

Jenni

Hey, the story was so cute.I def. think there should be a sequel!

great ending! I loved the entire story!!

lol! yay, of course another wonderful chapter read. Thanx again for using my suggestion and I'm waiting for any new updates from you on this story or a sequel! Until next time, See ya!

oooooooh i loved it

oh my goodness! I've fallen into this Brock Lesnar frenzy and I just cant get enough of him! Thanx to you and your wonderful story, its not going to go anywhere anytime soon! Please update soon and you want names right? Um, how does Christina Rose and Blaze sound? (lol, sorry if they sound weird,but They're my fave names!)

to Lazy to log in that was so cute!!1 i can't wait to see what goig to happen next i hope Brock be ready for the deilver room..

Hi Meg,

Just wanted to say that I loved this chapter! I look forward to reading more as you post it. Would love to read another sequel to this series!

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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lol....good chapter...I love the Mewo Mix song too so that was cool!

Nme the twins Dwayne and Taina.Dwayne after The Rock

You stop there?!

Sheesh I come out of work hell and am reading to catch up.

By the way love the fact it was a dream.

But I digress, I'm all into it and then suddenly it stops.. *growl* More soon please!

it maybe short, but iw defin. good.....oh and I was just wondering...are you gonna update the "Mysterious" story because it was very good...

I dont see why you shouldn't write a part #3, there's not too amny Brock .And I hope your Reason 1 : Is getting better.
P.S. You always have a great Reason 2's: Will wait til next time!
Nicole

i really like this story!! i read the last story and this 1 all in 1 sitting. i like the idea of a 3rd part, because i really enjoy reading this story!!update soon!!

I'm so loving this story. Please post more soon. And I'm sorry you aren't feeling well. It seems everyone is getting sick lately. I'm sick, my mom's sick, and a lot of my co-workers are sick. Anyways, hope you feel better soon, and I really hope you post more soon.

Jenni

Hey, great job chica!!! *sighs*..what's up wit u ppl and ur cliffhangers!???
Sorry I haven't e-mailed u lately..school's a bitch. Hehe...
Keep up the great work!!!
Love,
Ell

Hi,

Just wanted to say that this was a great chapter and I look forward to reading further chapters of "Last Desire" as you post them.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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Great chapter!! Short, but sweet...lol...keep 'em coming!!!!!

I'm loving this story. Brock is too cute LOL. More soon pretty please with Ice cream with string cheese on top LOL.

LMFAO!! That was so fuckin' funny...more nned more!! lol...that was SOOOOOOOOOO funny!!!!! lol

Lmao I loved the end of that chapter. This fic is awesome!

Hi Megan,

Just wanted to say that I loved this chapter! Looking forward to reading more of this story as you update it.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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Mwhahahaha...Brock's her slave!!!!! *laughs evily*..you go, chica!!! :D:D:D\
Ehhh...and the moodswings begin, eh? LOL!!!
Ice cream and *string chese*?????
Ewww!!!
Keep up the great work!!!
-Ellie

Great updates! Sorry I haven't given u feedback meggie muffin! This chapter was good! specially when Roxy told Brock to get her popcorn and pizza then when brock was going to give it to her she fell asleep!lol
Keep up the awesome work!

Poor Brock and Rob got te chance to slap Brock beside the head that was funny! but i wonder what going to happen next? how she really going to act towards Brock when she going into labor? i can see it now her sreaming at poor Brock. lol

Hi Meg,

Just wanted to say that I loved this chapter! You certainly had me fooled, I thought that Roxy had really died. I look forward to reading further chapters of this story as you post it.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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:sighs in relief: I love you. LoL. Thank you SO much for not makin her die. You and this story ROCK!

that was so great!!! she better have been dreaming. you see i wasn't as mean as you! i made something good happen with RVD and Jamelia so we are even!

Eh, I kinda thought it was a dream, but with you and ur evil mind, i neva know...:P:P
I'm lovin it though girly...keep up the great work!!!
Aww...a boy and a girl? heehee...sooooo sweet!!! :):)
Hey, I added you to my AIM list..is that ok? feel free to e-mail me if you want, using the email i used for this review thingy...:)
And yes, school is a bitch. Evil!!!
Haha.
Take Care,
Ellectra

*screams* ROxie can't die! she's the star! She's the best! She cannot leave brock like this! ArrrGH. one day I'm going to murder heyman myself.

i want toknow who tep into he room! how could she have die!! Please youplaying a mind game with us or Brock is dreamingthis whol thing!!!! nw ic an't believe i actually wrote a sweet chapter for Jamelia and RD Fic for you!!!!!

*cries*..I've just managed to catch up on this story. Damn school to hell.
Poor Brock...:'(:'(
-Ellectra

*and the plot thickens* I cant wait to see whats ganna happen!!!! good job!

:sigh: I really liked this story too. Now that Roxy is gone it kinda ruined the story. And I really hope 'The person that is stepping in' isn't her because that would make the story WAY to unrealistic.

ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh............. who was that unknown voice? make it be like somebdy that she was kinda friends with or sumthin and she told them what she wanted! can you please update as soon as you possibly can????????????

It was so sad that Roxy died. Please post more of this story soon, I look forward to reading it.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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This is a great story. I love Brock, and you are making me love him even more LOL. You rock girl, write more soon please.

::crying:: Roxy...babies...NOOOOOOO!!!!! this just cant be! ::sniff::.

How could you this!!!!!!! now i have to be evil!!! ad you know what i mean!!!! eviling laughing! you did it to me!

NO! You can't stop it just there! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! This is SOOOOO good! Please, please, don't kill Roxy or her babies! Jeezus... Now you've made me cry!
*Goes off to a corner to sob about poor ol' Roxy and Brock and their predicament*
Anywayz, this is REALLY GOOD, so DON'T STOP! And remember... Happy endings are always better!
This is Molly of Ozz (Rubber Rat) signing off.

Hi Meg,

I love this story, please post more soon!

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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oooohhhh, getting interesting update soon!

*screams at the top of her lungs* NO KILLING ROXY!!!!!!!!! Puh-leeeze . . . don't kill Roxy, or Brock, or the twins, or anyone!!!! C'mon, I really like this story . . . it's better than most of the garbage posted to ff.net recently. Hurry up and tell us what happens . . .

Yeah....the plot thickens...So thick you can't tell what's gonna happen.But I dont even want to think what's gonna happen.I'll wait!!!!
Nicole

Hi,

Great chapter, but still very sad! PLease post more soon.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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I totally hate you for stopping right there. I just thought I would let you know that.

By the way I love the story and I can't wait for Paul to get his.

Doctor PEARL?! hahaha, oh man. Did you sort of take that from me? Ahhhh! Oh well. Roxie HAS to be okay. Oh man. Brock oh geez, I just don't know what to say.

awwwww....... that is kinda sad. what happens to roxy and her and brock's baby? i really wanna know, coz i really like this fic. please please please please please update soon??????????????????

Too Lazy to sgin in! if she dies! i am going to be so mad at you lol

Hey!!! write more as soon as you can! i can't wait to find out what happens!

This was so sad, please post more soon, I can hardly wait to read more of this story.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! ::faints::
That was amazing...and suspenseful and...AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the great work!!
-Ellectra

oh my gosh! this chapter made me cry... are Roxy and the baby gonna be okay?

OMG!!!!!! Oh my fuckin' god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You can't just leave me here!!!! :( :( :(
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, but well, school calls. :P
Take Care!
Ellectra

Hi,

Just wanted to say that I love this story, although the last part was really sad.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
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that was mean! but anyways i still wanna know what happened. so can you please update soon?

You are so so SO WRONG!!!!

1st - You let us think everything is good in the world with Rob being nice and accepting.

2nd - You let us think ok maybe some problems delaing wiht mood swings ok... fine!

But then... THEN... you make the Undertaker MEAN and NASTY and have him kick her in the STOMACH?! And leave us with a bloody cliffhanger (literalyl and figurativly)

Ugh... I just wish I could have guessed you were going to do that. Great move for the plot line. ;)

More soon please!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! the can't happen!

*screams* omg! What will Robbie do? What would be the consequence? Damn. Poor Tommy. Getting choked for nothing. :P.

Hi Meg,

You are evil, leaving this chapter with such an ending, lol! Seriously, I really love this story and really am looking forward to reading further chapters as you post them.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
[email protected]

Hi,

Just wanted to say that I love this story, it is just as good as "Heart Stopper". I look forward to reading more as you post it. Roxy's character is a total sweetheart.

Regards,

Carolyn
Australia
[email protected]

Eek!!!
Cliffhanger..you evil person!!!!
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, but I've just managed to read it...school's evil. :P
Keep up the great work1!!! And taht slimey little Paul...what's he gunna do?!?!???
AHHH!!!
Take Care,
-Ellectra

WHAT?! WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED?! Arrrrrrr! I totally feel like murdering you for doing that sometimes. This is one of those times. What other thing is Rob talking about? Ahhhhhhhh... >:P ~^*p*^~

Rob is happy about it? Great angle! You should make more drama happen in the story. You know lyk maybe Brock cheats on Roxy or somethin. N e ways its just a suggestion.

Keep up the good work meggie-muffin!

Rob has so no idea whats actully happening, does he.

Great story, really like it.

Kellie

i bet she going to Smackdown !Lol

Wooah! What a surprise. Great update!!!!!!!!This is my fave fan fic! Keep up the awesome work! Cant wait 4 more updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =0)

awwww they are going to have a baby! How is the other goig to react? i wnt o know what Paul the big idoit is up 2!

Great story,can't wait to read more.Update soon please.

Your cliffhanger's are the best.Maybe Paul has a plan????
Nicole

Since you were kind enough to tell us she was pregnant, I'll be kind enough to leave a review!

I so want to know what is running through Paul's head. And if I were Brock I would be far away from Rob when he finds out. And as for Roxy, I guess the protection wasn't strong enough, Tommy better hide too.

More soon please!

Great chapter. i cant wait till u update it! Happy b-day! U should make brock act lyk wtf is she talking about then they break up or something then they get together. I think that doing the sequel was an awesome idea!

THANX!

Ooh . . . is your birthday Oct 4th??? I wasn't sure, cause I'm checking this a few days later. But if it is . . . happy birthday to you, and congrats, you share a birthday with me!!!!! And I'm 17 . . . ONE YEAR TILL I'M LEGAL!!!!!! Great update, btw . . . you know I love Roxy.

what did Brock do!!! Did he hurt Roxy ( my girl!!!! he better not have!

*groans*..I'm to sleepy for suspense...so, what happened?????
*sighs*...I'm not going to get an answer till the next chapter though. :(
keep up the great work, and happy b-day.
-Ellectra

Ahh~! im goin crazy with cliffhangers! lol. u gotta update soon! please! i love the story! keep it up!

Short Chapter, but I don't have a clue on,
What's gonna happen ?????
Oh......And A Happy Bithday
Nicole

awwwwwww.... why do you leave the cliff-hangers. o and happy birthday, please update soon.

Awwwwwwwwww,,,What a cliffhanger!!!!!
Can't wait 'til the next chapter!!
Chapter 2 was Sooooooooo Funny
Nicole

Eric's a bastard! Argh! I hope Roxie's gonna be okay if she's going to be demolished by the Island Boyz... :|.

*cracks up laughing at Tommy* Dude, I love Tommy Dreamer, and that was a wonderful scene you wrote with Roxy asking poor Tommy about sex. I could imagine him thudding his head into the table too. Great chapter . . . off to read the next one.

love the fic but yu leave the best cliff-hangers leave me and everybody else wanting ot read more and more.

i can't believe! Rosia andf Jamal!!!!!! i ahye Eric somuch! Wat is RVD going to do! What about Tommy!!!! What about Brock? Will they be together again!!!

I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Now why did you have to go and end the chapter like that for? lol...I'm leaving tomorrow and don't know when I'll be able to get on the website ;-( Good story though..

Vykke

ahh! u really really halfta update like now!! u cant juss leave me hangin there.. ahh! lol pleaasseee update soooonnn! the story is great!

OMG, the *WHOLE* box?!?!??? heheheheheheheeeee!!!
OMG, that convo w/Tommy and everything was just so awkward it was funny :) :)
What's Brock wanna talk about?!?!????
Keep up the great work!!!! :) :)
-Ellectra

WHY!!! WHY!!!! WHYYY you leave it there! i want to know about wht he going to ask her and i have a feeling what he is going to ask her! Poor Tommy! Lol. he had to take 20 shot of liquor!!!! lol.. she took the whole box!!! the whole box!!! Lol

AHHHH!!! Omg, Tommy is hilarious. I mean, who in the world drinks coffee to resolve a mini-shock? Anyway, nooooooo.... You have got to go on! Haha, Love you skits. :). ~^*P*^~

you so can not just leave it there....thats so mean i loved heart stopper and ive been waiting for this...more please more very very soon...

gez youi have me begging
beka >:)

This is so good, I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what brock has to tell roxy.

u leave such kewl cliff hangers can you please stop doing that or make more than one chapter at a
time please? but all in all this one and the other
one about Brock and Roxy are both toally kick-ass fics.

Hey! U should have lyk Brock do something bad 2 Roxy. Then Roxys and him break up and them they fix their problems they get back 2 gether and stuff!
Great! i am soooooooo happy u made the sequel!
and yeah it was long awaited!
lol
and to quote u~
"Hasta la BYE-BYE!"

*squeals* A sequel! A SEQUEL! Anyway, I find it a bit weird... Why Tommy? I mean, of all people to talk about it... TOMMY?! *Rolls around on the floor* I'd sure love to see what'll happen. Great job! ~^*Pearl*^~

that was agreat start! i wonderwha Tommy is ging tt do! or he do smething dumb lol.. and what if Rob found out! lol i need to know

I'm lovin the sequel!!! :)
Rocksy going to Tommy to ask about sex does make sense, even if it was kinda funny. Considering the fact that Rocks didn't have a mother growing up, she probably didn't have anyone to answer her questions...right? :)
Keep up the great work!
-Ellectra

totally loved the first one...this one looks like it will be just as good...oh yeah and brock is a sexy bitch lol ;-)