All right, before you bite my head off and curse me for confusing the living hell out of you... I'll explain 'Hidden Fate'. It's a poem inside of a poem. I repeat certain words over and over again because those are the words for the interior poem. Still confused? I apologize. But I'm proud of this poem... On a side note, have you ever written something so many times that it doesn't look like it's spelled right anymore?
you hide
               hide away
    I hide
               hide inside

is it me
                         me you're afraid
  of me
                 me outside

or is it inside
                   inside of me
seeing inside
                            inside where I stay

because of you
                            you lost me
       inside you
                                  you damned me

         say you love
                          love me
you can't take love
                                          love can't take you

is it my worth
                       worth nothing
  hardly worth
                            worth the trouble

is it your hate
                       hate in me
  lies and hate
                                 hate in everything

is it I
                      I who failed
was I
                  I the one

    I hide
               hide away
you hide
               hide inside

away from
              from me
  stay from
               from you

lost you
                    you from me
torn you
                    you from me

could be worse
                           worse than this
you were worse
                              worse before this

I was for
               for you
alway for
             for us

   lost to fate
                      fate weeps
weeping fate
                         fate lost you
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