who's the better killer?

This here happens to be my first smut piece ever. Syrai challenged me and I was having a hard time, so I clung onto this thing desperately for a week and wrote it. I wanted it to have some other theme on the side as well. I wanted to spread my Kyra hate and make her weak. I wanted to show how far Jack would go in her love for Riddick. I wanted... something more than just sex. I guess character study might be the word. Yeah...

Funny thing... I haven't been able to read this fic since I wrote it. Usually I keep on rereading my stuff hundreds of times, but with this one I just can't read the smutty part. I can read the whole Riddick vs Kyra situation, but then when it comes to the "Turn off the lights" thing I just block. Weird, huh?

Who's the better killer? // read in AFF.net