Disclaimer:
I don't own 'em don't wanna own 'em. I have my own to own so I'm just practicing with these.
Harry Potter and the Return of the Round
Harry Potter and Ranma Crossover Fanfic
By Sheya
Review Answers
One-Winged Yagami 2004-06-23 Ch01
>>Ok... Please clear up the histories a bit more soon.
Next Chapter will be the stories and histories.
Jerry Unipeg 2004-06-22 Ch01
>>Great chapter!
Sheya is wondering if that and "Great Start" are all you can say?
Usagi-Hasano 2004-06-22 Ch01
>>The story has potential, but you're just not putting the potential
into it it.
Normally I write in a notebook then rewrite parts as I type them. For this story I'm just typing on the computer... The chapters will get revised as each new chapter comes out. I will re upload them as I put the new chapters out. Hopefully, by the time I'm finished with the story it will live up to it's potential. This way of writing is an experiment.
Darak 2004-06-22 Ch01
>>Ant the point of all this was? Serously though, I don't see how killing Nodoka will make your story progress in any way, if you wanted to avoid writing her in then you should have left her as a background character.
But I didn't want her as a background character and I did have a reason for killing her you will find out in time. And you knew that I was going to kill her from the very first chapter- really you were WARNED!
>>As a whole this chapter is pointless, Voldemort is as evil as a fish (meaning his character doesn't come out of the background)
Ahh but if he has a chance for killing Harry he would want to do it himself just like he's done each and every time they have faced off.
>>Harry is idiotic (who in their right mind would let himself be separated from other people if he knew he was a target, and if there was a plot behind his leaving security why didn't you write about it)
I did, dumbass, Harry is a budding seer he saw that if he didn't face Voldemort something bad would happen but if he did face Voldemort he would gain an ally. Anyway he didn't willingly leave the safety of his friends. And I never said that he did.
>>Ranma is completely OOC (I don't remember him leaving a fight for anything) and Angela's stay on the battleground is unnecessary (Ranma could have grabbed Harry and run for it there is doubt Voldemort could have followed after taking a ki-blast not saying that the umi sen ken could have cut him in pieces)
I would think that Ranma would learn, without Genma egging him on, that some battles aren't worth fighting. And his Mother told him to take Harry and go... he knew what was happening, he knew she planned to die that day, and he knew that she wanted to die.
Angela stayed there because she wanted to die- she wanted to face Voldemort. You didn't even comprehend what I wrote. She also had to hold the wards to keep Voldemort from going after Ranma and Harry.
As for the Ki blast Ranma didn't use one strong enough to harm Voldemort just knock him down after all the blast went through the spell holding Harry. Since he was trying to save Harry, he wouldn't use a blast strong enough to hurt the already injured Harry.
Spybot 2004-06-22 Ch01
>>CRAP!
I will assume that the "CRAP!" was because I actually did what I said I would and killed Nodoka... Well I do keep my word I do have plans for her they just need her dead.
Glaciersmash 2004-06-14 Ch00
>>I feel that you are rushing into this too fast.
I Explained what I'm doing in another answer.
>>1)a few people seem OOC, Ranma so polite? I don't get it. Xian Pu so accepting? I don't know...she'd try to pry herself into this, and why didn't she glomp Ranma at first sight? Why didn't Akane suddenly show up?
I believe that Ranma's mother would be a good influence on his politeness since it is a year since the failed wedding that ended the Manga his mother has had a year to work on him.
Ku Lon had told Ranma as he was leaving to get his tickets that the Kiss of Marriage is Annulled Shan Pu would have known about it, therefore she acted accordingly.
Akane didn't show up because Shan Pu wasn't trying to Glomp Ranma. Also because of BATAAISA. (Because I'm the Author and I Say So) >^ . ^<
>>2)You need to explain things, --I know that Voldemort is planning to attack Harry tomorrow...--? how does Sirious know this?
He's dead you figure it out. He either was spying on the Order or on Voldemort.
>>3)and with multiple people talking, you still need to write 'said' and various other forms of that word.
I hate when people say said and stuff too much, when it's two people talking I try to indicate who is talking in the words they are saying if someone else joins I indicate who is talking if I can't make it clear in their words.
>>4)You need to clear a few facts, halloween isn't exactly something 'celebrated' by Japanese, or various other countries.
I have heard that Halloween is known to be a holiday, after all these kids are taught about the English language I would think they would know about some of the holidays, Ranma knows about Halloween *shrugs* It is after all his birthday (In my HP Corssovers anyway)
>>If you rewrite this chapter, add a few more things, then i may continue reading. This is ok, but which Anime/Book are you focusing on?
The Manga after it's end about a year, and After Book5 of HP. And I have rewritten some of the chapter taking in to account you words.
Ranko Urameshi 2004-06-14 Ch00
>>wow, this is pretty cool. I hope you continue this.
Working on it.
Sixx 2004-06-13 Ch00
>>This is a very intresting twist on Harry/Ranma fanfic. Hopefully you are still writting chapters for this fanfic. I enjoyed read this first chapter and hope to see more.
^ . ^ Ok considering that you reviewed within a day of my posting the first chapter I think it's safe to say that I have not abandoned the fic.
rickW22 2004-06-13 Ch00
>>It's a good storie keep it up . When are you going to add more chapter's
Again you reviewed within a day of my posting the first chapter... Normally I try to have between a week or a month between chapters... and yes I have been lax in updating some of my other stories but I have also been starting new ones (Should really finish the old ones first- but D--n it I have lots of ideas.)
Joe Fenton 2004-06-13 Ch00
>>Interesting, but way too many inconsistencies.
>>--I can probably make it there by evening but not sooner- it's to far to apperate and there is no floo across the ocean.--
>>How does Ranma know these things? Besides, they'd just go to the Japanese Ministry of Magic and have them set up a portkey.
Well I explained why the Japanese Ministry won't help... After I got some reviews I revised the chapter a bit. And Ranma knows this because he knows magic and the explainition for HOW will come in Chapter 02.
>>--So I should not be distracted by your death because I have foreknowledge of it, and mourn when the fight is over.-- Ranma said sadly.
>>That is so out of character it's laughable. If Ranma had knowledge that his mom was going to be attacked, he would protect her rather than some unknown cousin. Even if he were somehow persuaded after hours of debate that it was necessary, he'd certainly never speak in such a manner.
Yes but Ranma would listen to his mother as well it's a balance Ranma would kill himself if his mother told him to- the fact that he is letting her kill herself is balanced out but the fact that she told him not to interfere.
>>Then we have the strange fact that Ranma and his mom are apparently English and no one seems to notice.
Well there is a simple answer to that--- MAGIC!
>>Plug a few plot holes and rewrite all the dialogue and you might have a story worth continuing.
I have rewritten some of it but I am still writing an AU crossover so some disbelief has to be suspended.
One-Winged Yagami 2004-06-13 Ch00
>>Hm... I've read several Ranma-as-Sirius'-son stories. Hopefully this will be a bit different. UpDaTe!
I have two this one and Prophecy of Shi... you may have read it... this one will only Cross Ranma and HP.. The other is going to have as many Anime and Toon Crosses as I can fit with out messing it up.
Jerry Unipeg 2004-06-13 Ch00
>>GREAT START!
Right not very helpful but still encouraging
Silverscale 2004-06-13 Ch00
>>A nice story and a nice prophecy to.
But tell me will it really be a dragon in this story or is it just something of that prophecy?
I have already stated that Albus thinks that the Dragon is Arthur Pendragon's heir... ^ . ^ I think you will be surprised who the Dragon is.