Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Pottter. JKR does. And I don't own Ranma 1/2 Rumiko Takahashi does...
Harry Potter and the Prophecy of Shi.
A Harry Potter Crossover Fan-fiction
By Sheya
Review answers::::
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ME 2004-01-14 Ch7
Though not by blood Draco and Harry are cousins. I find that thought
extremely amusing.
You know if the "Pureblood" wizards are a
messed up genetically as I got the impression they were. Then I wouldn�t be
surprised if the redneck �I�m your father and your uncle� joke isn�t true for
some of them. So having Harry related to Draco by marriage isn�t all that
farfetched� in fact having Harry related to Draco, or Ron, by blood isn�t that
farfetched� but Dumbledore says that it�s Harry�s mother�s blood that saved him
not his fathers blood so Harry has to stay with his mother�s family- in cannon
anyway. I think that since both his parents died to save him- they both knew
full well that Voldemort was after him- then either blood can protect
him.
Rick
Robinson ([email protected]) 2003-12-26 Ch7
Good story, your
grammar and spelling are alittle loose but not too bad. I like the way you are
portraying the various people. I would like to see a little more of Harry
though.
Oh and for the record Shi is also an anglization of Chi. I have seen
it used in some of the more British parts of the world. ( I live in America. )
Canada and Australia and New Zealand to be precise. Just a spelling difference
not a real translation difference.
Rick
Robinson
[email protected]
Since I�m American I will
use what I�m used to. Why are my grammar and spelling a little loose? Everything
gets spell/grammar check by Mister Microsoft Word and I go over it before and
after Mister Word does. Anyway when I was using rigid Grammar I got a review
�your grammar sucks� never did understand that one since I had one of my
professors go over the fic before I posted it ^ . ^
Aleh
2003-12-19 Ch7
As I mentioned earlier, your Japanese needs
work.
Aleh 2003-12-19 Ch6
Your Japanese... needs
work.
Aleh 2003-12-19 Ch5
Check your spelling (and Japanese
word choice in the case of the one sentence in which it's relevant).
Of the stuff we talked about I will take your suggestions for
everything except the Okasan/Ofukuro (Otosan/Oyaji) thing. And I do have my
reasons for it. Also, in some things I will use the Japanese words like Youkai,
I mostly won�t use demon because that denotes the �hell-born fire-breathing
minion of Satan� kind or the European kind and I�m not talking about them. So
even if I�m having the characters talk English there are something�s that I
won�t use English for� like Miko since Miko means so much more then �Shrine
Maiden� or �Priestess�
Ookii Mamoru 2003-11-30 Ch7
Very
interesting fic. Slightly Similar, but so very diffrent from my own HP/Ranma
Crossover. (I have nothing typed yet.)
I like the idea of making them
brothers. I would have never of thought of that. I also like the attitude
towards the Ministry.
I wounder if I'm going to far by humanizing the
Durslys... humm...
Look forward to seeing more. Keep up the good
work.
OOkii Mamoru
Umm I made them cousins� not brothers.
Then you should hurry and type yours up.
After more then two months I
hope that I still have a following but then again leaving it this long got me
more reviews.
Ranko-Tendo 2003-11-09 Ch6
i like your
fic, even though you are giving people wrong imfo about ki and chi. Ki is the
energy within a person. Chi is the energy around you which is in everything.
everything has chi. Next time look it up dobe!
Just because I
never said that Chi is in all things (I was after all referring to humans not
rocks) doesn�t mean that I don�t know it and won�t go into it more- later. Like
I said it is only basic info I was giving. I wasn�t going to write a
dissertation on Ki/Chi in the fic- people don�t do that in real life. Ranma gave
the info he thought that they needed not a detailed explanation. As for the
difference between them Chi does mean earth and Ki means energy. But the way
they are used they are almost interchangeable so I will lump them as energy for
right now in the fic because Ranma really doesn�t have time to go into details.
He will when he starts training Harry, but for now my explanation stands. As for
looking things up and getting things correct how about you do that with your
reviews DOPE!!!!
Demon Hunter 2003-10-31 Ch7
GREAT
STORY!! Keep up the great work and update!
Updating *wishes that
it was easier to type*
LonelySpirit 2003-10-20 Ch7
Hiyo! *Waves frantically* Great story! I like that you have an
interesting way of keeping Sirius alive, albeit a bit hurt. I haven't read Ramna
in a while, so I'm a bit rusty. Actually.. I've only read one or two, but since
I'm not allowed to buy them and the library only has one or two... So anyhow,
great chapter/story! Keep writing and update soon!
LonelySpirit
Updating *still hates typing**is trying to wave back but typing
with one hand is even worse*
Lunarian 2003-10-20 Ch7
Wee love the chapter. Although Harry getting Owls in everything but
hom and div I find a little over the top because im pretty sure he wasnt doing
to well in that astrronomy one. Authors discretion i guess.
Still love the
fic, though wasnt Botan supposed to have been with them? She didnt say anythin.
Well I did forget that Botan was there but I explained why she
wasn�t saying anything in this chapter. I have also edited the previous chapter
but as of this replying session I haven�t uploaded it because I�m going to be
changing some more things in it.
Lunarian 2003-10-19
Ch6
Whoo whoo, new chapter makes me ecstatic. I loved how you gave
Ranma lots of spotlight. Hehe him shutting up Ms. Black was great, and also only
the second time I've read about anyone being polite to her. That was a most
ingenuis use of the gates, somewhat like the dark world of zelda link to the
past.
Thats also cool letting Ranma claim home to be all of Jusendo.
I
don't think you could have picked a better person to be Ranma's love interest
IMO if you tried. I was recently lookin for yusuke/botan fics and saw like none
and pairing Ranma with Botan is awesome, done only other in donny chegs life and
times as far as i know.
Pretty clutterd review, but basically saying Love
the story!
I love that you love the story in fact I think I�ve
got the most reviews for this story of any so far ^ . ^ I love reviews. Well I
figure that Mrs. Black would respond better to Politeness and anyway the
Japanese are known for politeness� no matter how informal Ranma is he is still a
tactician and he will know how to get people to do things they don�t want to�
usually he uses insults here he uses niceness. I think I said this already but
the only people that I think Ranma would be happy with are Botan (who is single)
Kagome (who has InuYasha) and Usagi (Who no matter how much I hate him has
Mamaru). In the case of Kagome and Usagi I�d have to somehow get rid of someone
although getting rid of Mamaru would be a pleasure� I LIKE InuYasha and would
never kill him (Unless I made Ranma his reincarnation- but that would mess up my
fic). The Gates� I liked that idea too I just couldn�t reconcile that the Veil
was instant death (I don�t believe people like Sirius have died until I see the
body) so I gave a reason for Remus to think that there was no chance of Sirius
returning but also gave Sirius a way to return. �Course I used the death bit in
my other fic ^ . ^
Vorax 2003-10-16 Ch6
I'm looking
forward to the next chapter as soon as you can get it out. With what you've said
Shi-sama can only be Botan, she is the only female in both places you
mentioned.
Yep and I think that she is just sooo perfect for
Ranma- well Botan or Kagome or Usagi- but to do that I�d need to kill InuYasha
and I need him in this fic, and Usagi isn�t in this fic though she did get an
honorable mention.
Paladin3030 Ch 05 (FF.net numbering)
For
a minute I thought you were going to give Sirius Daredevil like
powers.
Not much of a DareDevil Fan I never got into that comic.
Any strange powers I give the characters with be Chi based... of course that
doesn't preclude DareDevil's powers from being chi based.... He might just have
tapped into his chi when he went blind. Or whatever I shouldn't talk I know
nothing about it.
shdurrani Ch 05 (FF.net numbering)
I
will say that i am not much of an Anime reader or watcher but this is really
good. Keep going.
till next time.
Alex
Thank you...
I always hope to snare people into my stories ^ . ^
Lunarian
Ch 05 (FF.net numbering)
First off gotta laugh for Ranma being Sirius's
son, *ROFLMAO*.
Since you chopped your review up.... I shall
answer in pieces too, so I can get all the points. Glad you got a laugh. I
thought it was obvious both are handsome both have black hair and I know if
Ranma ever got the chance he would have a similar sense of humor and their honor
and loyalty are beyond reckoning. Both are dangerous to their enemies and both
beat the odds on a fairly regular basis.
Love this chapter,
sometimes having everything easily accepted may seem less acceptable but is
funner to read and in this case it was. Not sure who Shi-sama is, but as long as
its not some SI or mary-sue I'd love it.
Ohh not a Mary-sue and If
I'd do a SI it would not be as someone's girlfriend (I hate those too so why
would I write one) I'll give you two hints Shi-sama made an appearance in the
first chapter of my fic Reikai Arc and Shi-sama is female. Oh and you found out
who she is in this chapter. ^ . ^
Sounded like you hinted that
Ranma joined the Amazons in his girl form, but he seems to be staying in his guy
one all the time so far.
Well I have partially explained this
chapter but Ranma spent 2 months with the Phoenix People 5 months with the Musk
and 5 months with the Amazons. This fic takes place after the Amazon training so
he can be in whatever form he wants to be in now.
Giving Ranma a
phoenix is cool, thats just the type of thing to make him feel better and less
alone on the times the worlds against him.
This has also been
explained in this chapter... Ranma got his Phoenix because he is an Avatar of
Saffron, Dumbledore also got his Phoenix for the same reason.
Slightly curious as to if Ranma's dabblin in the magics... I dont
recall any mentioning of it but you did say they apparated which implies both of
them.
Explained in next chapter his mother has been teaching him
and, in this chapter so have the Jusendo valley denizens but he still needs
training.
Nice nostalgic beginning scene in grimmauld place for
Ranma, bet he's hoping no tomboys with mallets show up.
What
about the next Grimmauld Place scene? If they do his girlfriend will bash them
on the head with her oar. But he has put the loons of Nerima behind him, except
for Ryoga, but you already know about him.
Methinks im in a
writing mood... should do my HW now probably... anyway great stuff lookin foward
to more!
Thank you I hope to get the next chapter out much faster
then I did this one.
SeaverCh O5 FF . Net numbering
Matches? how about Harry/Blaise. It's not done often. Ranma/Fleur. Lady
killer and man killer..grin. Ranma seems to be accepting things too easily.
When I ask for Crossover matches I mean crossover matches!
Not Harry and someone from Harry Potter- I mean something like Harry and
Sakura from Card Captor Sakura.
Also, I'm not doing Harry/Usagi. I'd
have to write too much of a background for it to even be possible, and After
three Mamrau- betrays/dumps/gets dumped by- Usagi fics even I'm getting tired of
writing them.
Also, I already have a match for Ranma- I did not ask for
a match for Ranma.... I'll give you a hint- in my fic the only woman Ranma
considers worth courting (after all he's had the rest- chasing him) is Shi-sama.
Also didn't JKR hint that Fleur and one of the Weasleys were getting close?
And Ranma has had a year to accept things, most of the stuff that we are
learning as the story unflods is old news to Ranma. Harry is the one who would
have a hard time accepting, but only if other things don't get in the
way.
Hitan FunbetsuzakariCh O4 FF . Net numbering
Good
story.
I realized that you said two animes that are going to be crossed with.
One is ranma. It makes me wonder what the other is. When you put the prophecy on
there you said the demon and his priestess.
There are two animes that I can
think of on the top of my head that have to do with priestesses.
1. Fushigi
Yugi
2. Inuyasha
Only on of these has demons as main characters.
Inuyasha
So in other words, is the other crossover anime Inuyasha? If so
which demon are we talking about?
InuYasha is the other one- now
for you to think... Who is the only demon who has a miko or two in InuYasha? And
I'm not including the ones who want the miko. How ever there are other anime
that deal with Miko and Demons- I just don't know them and most of the time the
demons are the bad guys... in InuYasha you never know ^ . ^
kiss4ranma ([email protected])Ch O4 FF . Net
numbering
hey i like your fic sofar keep writing. I think i may know what
ryoga means. I saw somewhere that it means lucky fang. oh and some guy had
pictures of the real nermia on his site if i come across it again ill be sure to
let you know. make sure you keep going i hate to come across a good crossover
fic then have the athur not finish and there are so few ranma/hp storys out
there. a little hint you might want to work on the background of why ranma left
nermia a little more. well bye bye.
kiss4ranma
Oh the
background is coming although I did say that he left because of Akane. And
because of Genma. In fact the background will come some more in the chapter I
just finished writing. I found the meaning of Ryoga. And I have taken your
information to heart- my dictionary no longer says that Nerima is the made up
place. I have a link to my new dictionary on my bio page at ff . net. I also
once made a vow to myself and my readers (of course I couldn't reach my readers
when I made the vow ... ^ . ^ ) my vow was to NEVER leave a fic unfinished, I
will make good on that vow (even with the fics that I have been dithering with
for the last 3 years.)
LunarianCh O4 FF . Net
numbering
Interesting, quite so. Ranma finally got through to Ryoga. Heh
hearing p-chan exhault Ranma's praises is a nice retribution. Still not
answerein the main question as to where ranmas gonna fall into this, but a well.
Since you have two I will answer them
together.
LunarianCh O3 FF . Net numbering
Interesting
story. You havent explained why Ranma is with the Amazons and Kasumi there as
well, so thats kinda abrupt. But... Ranma is surely getting some respect here it
seems so I like it. Nice omake too. Don't tell me Ranma is gonna be Sirius's son
or something, I'll laugh. Anyway looking foward to more.
I've
always thought that with pacients (excuse my spelling I'm in Simple text now not
Word can't Spellcheck) and Akari and no Akane to get in the way Ryoga and Ranma
could be very good friends. In fact if Ryoga didn't have the curses (Jusenkyo
and Directional) he would be much happier. With him getting a control on his
Jusenkyo curse and Nodoka teaching him how to control his directional curse he
his much better off and he no longer has anything to be mad at Ranma
for.
I've always felt that Kasumi gets very little for all she does she
has always wanted to be at least a dabbler in the field of medicine or she
wouldn't have been borrowing books from Tofu-sensei. In the Amazon Village she
can have that chance to learn- with Lilac- so when Ranma chose to go to China,
she went with him. BTW Nabiki isn't in Nermia anymore either I just haven't
gotten to introducing her yet. The person she is working for is another of my
cameos.
Ok Start laughing!!!
Ranma is with the Amazons because...
you'll have to wait for Ch05 for that answer. It will at least partially be
explained.
Jubilee BlackCh O2 FF . Net numbering
Hey
this is such a good fic.. O0o0o and Sirius' eyes r Dark Brown... An I got a
quick question. What r the names of the anime crossovers?
Thanks
for the eyecolor ^ . ^As for the other anime you now know some of them. *update* JKR said in an interview that Sirius' eyes are grey so I have changed the fit to reflect it.
SiriusWolfCh O1 FF . Net numbering
This is a fun little
cliffie, i hope you continue this soon,
Sincerely yours,
Very
Curious
Hopes do happen, ja ne!!!