Elijah vs. Snowflower
Winner: Elijah
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"A new battle contest is about to begin! Snowflower, using a dagger and unstrung bow used as stave, will battle with Elijah, who will use a short sword, hunting knife, and long wooden staff. Make sure you read the rules. You have ten moves each. You may begin when ready." |
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Snowflower steps into the Battle Ring. Her bow already unstrung, she holds it out in a defensive position and draws her dagger in her left paw.
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Elijah strides into the ring, surprisingly cheerful. He is hefting his staff across his broad shoulders. He smiles at Snowflower, then draws his sword with his right paw and holds his staff diagonally across his body in his left. His dagger is sheathed and hanging on his belt. He bends his knees slightly, placing his right foot behind his left. Cracking his neck, the badger nods at the smaller fieldmouse. He has decided that he will try not to harm her badly, but will by no means go easier on her.
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Snowflower returns the smile, not wishing to be too serious with a Battle Contest, especially against a friend.
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Move #1
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Elijah doesn't respond - at least not with words. With as much speed as he can muster with his heavy frame, he lunges forward into her space, slashing straight across Snowflower's middle with his sword - from his left to his right, in a backhand stroke. He is, of course, prepared to turn his blade so the flat of it hits her, if the attack gets through. Simultaneously he lifts his staff above his head and swings it straight down at the mouse's skull, not aiming to bash so much as distract. |
Move #1 |
Snowflower moves her paws out of the way and bends forward, bringing her torso out of the path of Elijah's sword. She takes the blow from the staff on the back, and, using the momentum gained from the blow, falls to her knees. Holding her bow above her head to block any more blows, she moves to slap at the badger's right footpaw with the flat of her dagger. |
Move #2
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Elijah lifts his footpaw, dodging the dagger but actually receiving the slap on his left footpaw instead as it barely misses its original target. He manages to hold his balance though, and in the same motion of moving his footpaw he pivots in on his left footpaw and aims a swift kick at Snowflower's shoulder, hooking her bow from underneath with his staff and attempting to flip it out of her hands. The added momentum from the pivot adds some power and speed to his kick as well as to the disarming move with his staff.
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Move #2 |
Snowflower takes the kick in her stomach, and her bow is knocked out of her paws. However, the kick sends her rolling, and she converts her poxition into a somersault and gets back on her footpaws. She charges toward Elijah, picking up her bow on the way, and moves to whack his side with the bow. |
Move #3
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Elijah pulls his staff back as soon as he knocks the bow out of Snowflower's hand and balances his himself on both paws. He readies himself for Snowflower's next move as best he can in the limited time he has.
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Move #3 |
Still a little disoriented after the roll, Snowflower stumbles a bit when Elijah parries.
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Move #4
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Now that they are in something of a lock, Elijah's mind works quickly. He allows them to hold it for a second, bow against staff, then suddenly shifts, pulling his staff away as quickly as possible and sidestepping. He quickly sheathes his sword in the brief moment of disorientation, placing both hands on his staff.
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Move #4 |
Snowflower stumbles a bit whe Elijah pulls away, but manages to remain on her footpaws. She imitates Elijah, quickly sheathing her dagger and putting both paws on her bow.
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Move #5
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Elijah takes advantage of this. He pulls his staff back so that his right paw is holding the back end of it above his head, and his left paw is grasping the front end at around shoulder height. In a quick lunge he sticks his let footpaw in between her footpaws and pulls forward, slamming her in the chest hard with his left shoulder, hoping to knock her off balance. He also pushes forward with his staff, letting his front paw slide a little back and poking her hard in the shoulder. |
Move #5 |
Snowflower, quite simply, gets the wind knocked out of her for a moment, and falls to her knees.
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Move #6
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Elijah slips and falls as his leg is swept out from under him, his back leg collapsing and landing him in a rather uncomfortable and disadvantageous position, with his left leg splayed out in front of him and his right leg folded underneath him. The badger grunts in surprise as he falls but moves almost as soon as he hits the ground, wasting no time.
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Move #6 |
Snowflower, still panting to recover her breath from being winded, has no time to struggle to her feet before Elijah attacks again. She ducks slightly as the badger swings his staff as her, gasping as it hits her ear.
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Move #7
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The end of the bow catches Elijah's paw with a crack. The badger's grip on his staff is loosened, and it slips down, out of his control, the end thudding into the ground. His paw still stinging, Elijah pulls his staff up as quickly as he can and aims a series of swift blows at Snowflower's neck and chest, the pain driving him to hit faster and harder, but with less accuracy and control. |
Move #7 |
Regaining her breath, Snowflower stands and, gripping her bow with both paws in the middle, the front one facing upwards and the other down, does her best to fend off Elijah's attack.
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Move #8
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Elijah, having lost control and awareness of his surroundings while performing the rapid-fire barrage of attacks, takes the hit, his shoulder jerking back slightly, causing him to sort of square up. He grimaces but regains the calmness he reserved earlier on.
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Move #8 |
"Oof!" The mousemaid takes the blow in her stomach hard, and falls as she trips on Elijah's footpaw. She slowly sits up, and then puts herself into a crouch, holding her stomach with one paw and extending her bow in front of her with the other.
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Move #9
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Elijah's footpaw slides out from underneath him, something he feared, and he almost stumbles, but places his staff on the ground to quickly right himself. He doesn't have enough time to stage a very effective attack, and instead just whips the staff up at Snowflower's chin quickly, a sort of quick forward sweep.
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Move #9 |
Snowflower stands up, taking the hit to the chin, but not very hard, due to the fact that she was moving away from the staff when it hit. She crosses her dagger over her bow in a rough X, and takes a deep breath.
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Move #10
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Elijah's staff fits neatly in the X Snowflower's two weapons form. He pushes back, feeling her dagger make a shallow gash in his own wooden weapon.
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Move #10 |
Snowflower lands on her footpaws hard after Elijah's block, but steadies herself, and assumes a defensive posture.
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Nice job you two. |
A brave fight, but considering Snowflower was not very well equipped, she did very well and deserves to win. |
Simply put, I thought Snowflower played to her advantages better (speed, agility, flexibility) than Elijah. On a more critical, RP-judge note, I was a little offput by Elijah's posts - he put a disconcerting amount of action into each one, which indicated either an incredible speed of attack (not so sure of that with a badger fighting with two heavy weapons at once) or assuming long pauses in Snowflower's movements. On both sides, I would've liked to see a little more willingness to remain in a weak position where plausible (not doing so reduces the realism significantly, since real fighters do watch for stumbles and disarms and seize upon those opportunities), but at the end of it all I thought Snowflower made a better show for herself by posting reasonable-length moves and assuming fewer hits to her opponent. |
Elijah received some hard knocks, but being a badger, could more easily withstand them than a mouse. Snowflower needed to use her advantage of speed and agility to wear Elijah down. |
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