review_mariposa

Loading Time:
Wow! I'm glad that the loading time is quick. Many visitors are pleased to known they don't have to wait.

Main Page:
The picture on your layout, is not really a Sailor Senshi picture.   Here's a suggestion, try using Sailor Moon pictures so visitors can tell that it's a Sailor Moon site. Just a suggestion...... Oh and I like those gold balls on the layout. It's really orginal, and so is the name.

Information:
Senshi Profiles:
Your information is all correct! One thing your missing is their history and personalities. Visitors who don't know about Sailor Moon would want to know as much information as possible, so try adding more. It would be nice if you added another picture here and there. Besides that, it's great!

Villians:
The information is also correct. However, you could have added links to the group of villians, instead of jamming them in one page.   For example: Dark Kindom, Doom Tree, Dark Moon Clan, ex. That way you can give more detail about them all on one page. Also, give information on each villian.

Movie Information:
Once again, you are not leading your vistiors at the wrong direction. Nevertheless, you gave a summary of most of the movie. By the way, is this suppose to be a review or something? If it is, than you shouldn't give so much information away. Many people haven't seen the movie and by telling them what happens you are spoiling the movie for them. I'm just telling you ahead of time, because I know you don't want to get flamed. It's ok to give a summary, but not too much. Also, offer your personal opinoins of the movie. Did you like it or not? Who would you recommend this movie, and so. You should also give a rating to it too. On the other hand, if this isn't a review, just a summary, than you should warn your visitors that it contains spoilers. So try to look into that.....

Episode Guide:
I have no problem with it. It's fine.

The Past:
Good information. You could add more details though.

The Present:
Nothing wrong with the information. Again, more details.

The Future:
What? That's it??? You could only give that much information about the future? Surely you could give more. I don't blame you. There isn't that much information about the future, but still....

All About Naoko Takeuchi:
You did say you will find out more about her, so that's good. You could do some research about her over the interent, if that helps.

Naoko's Other Mangas:
Ahhh!!! It's a broken link!!! I'm sorry but I have to take a couple of points off for that. Always check for broken links. For your sake, because broken links drive visitors away.

Little Known Sailor Moon Facts:
I like this page a lot. In fact, it's my favorite page out of your entire site! You have such interesting facts. Nevertheless, IF you took this information from another site, make sure you say so, that way the person can get credit. I'm going to give you 5 points for just having such interesting facts that I didn't know. ^_^

Gallery:
Senshi Pictures:
I like how it is clearly stated how many pictures there are at each gallery. It's really helpful for some of your visitors. You have thumbnails for the pictures, however, the thumbnails don't exactly are close in size. To make your page nicer, have thumbnails that are close in size and shape. Oh and try not having them way off the page.

Humor:
All you have is pictures here. Usually, in humor, people offer many different things, not just pictures. So you should probably change the name, and change it to Funny Pictures or something like that. Humor is just way off. Many people who click on that link, might be expecting something else. Anyway, the pictures are fine. It's good that you stated that these pictures are linked from your old site.

Fun:
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Interesting thoughts. You gave credit, that's good. There seems to be no problem here.

Fun C***
I think you should change that name. I know you haven't put a link up for that, but you never know whose surfing your website. Sensitive kids, might see that word. I'm just telling you this, because many parents don't want their kids to see things that they don't want them to see. Do you understand what I'm saying? I'm telling you this for your sake. I don't think you want an angry complaint from a parent. So instead of saying "Fun C***" say Fun Stuff or something like that. Don't worry, I won't take points off for that, this is just a warning.

Picture of the month
Everything here is okie dokie!

Multimedia
I don't think that this page belongs in the fun section. You say that tripod deleted your tv clips page. So why is it even up??? Maybe you should get rid of that link and put it back up once it's been repaired.

Karaoke
Umm... I don't know exactly what to say about this......

Lyrics
This page looks great!!! Good job!! ^_^

Theme Songs
Again there is a little inapporiate language here. Maybe you say, so you won't confuse your visitors, that these are your favorite songs, or SITE theme songs, or something. Because when I clicked on theme songs, I thought it meant Sailor Moon, Dragon Ball Z, ex. theme songs. Besides that, I don't see what's wrong with it.

Omake
I had no clue what this means. I don't think all of your visitors do either. Try puting the meaning in parantheisis or something.

Updates
You labled the dates, good.... but you should be more informative on your updates. One sentence doesn't really cut it. But good try though!

About m.a.r.i.p.o.s.a
Nice information. Check your spelling. But nice information.

Credits:
Ah yes the credits.   The section that I'm willing to grade. What's this? Only one link? Only one credit? Now I'm not going to be picky, but you have to be sure that, that site was the only resource you used. If not, make sure you say all the resources from sites that you used. I like how you said why you gave credit to that link. Many people just put the links and that's all. So I'm going to give you points for doing that.

Mariposa:
I don't think this has to do with Sailor Moon, but oh well! ^_^

Sisters:
There's no problem here, if it gets too crowded, you could always put text links. It will save loading time.

Contact:
AHHH! Another broken link! Like I said, please check your links. I hate taking points off for silly things like this. It doesn't hurt to look around your site, and make sure everything is in order. Don't be too upset, everybody makes mistakes.

Creativity
You should work on this part. Every page has the same exact background. Come on, I'm sure you can be more creative than that. You also have the same pictures on almost every page. Consider this, try to add new things, or change backgrounds, ex. So your site, will become more appealing to your visitors.

Last thoughts:
Overall, I think this site is really nice. You use some html, and you made your site orginal. You also change the layouts, and update often, so it's good to hear that you are adding new things. There are things that you could change, but it's no big deal. You've done well Mariposa! ^_^