| Moonlight Magic Reviewed by: *Sailor Star Healer* Site address: http://www.geocities.com/serena991/990.html Email: [email protected] Loading time: Umm..... the loading time kinda slow. You should work on this, because many people would not wait for it to fully load. So if you do not want to lose any of your visitors, I suggest that you decrease the loading time. For example, if you have a large file, you could either make the picture a smaller file, or cut it down into seperate files. Well...... you just think about that......ok? Main Page: Wow I like those cute butterflies that you have there. But maybe you should center your page. It all the way to the left of the screen. If you don't know how, than find out through HELP at geocities. It's not hard to figure out so you shouldn't worry about it. The updates are little hard to read and it's falling on the hit counter. Just one question......... How come the banner says 'Ami's Desires'? Is it suppose to be the name of the layout or something??? If it is, than where is the title of the site? I didn't find Moonlight Magic anywhere on that page. Hmmm............ Adopt an anime person: Ahh what's that! Oh it's only an animation of Ryoko. It kinda scared me..... But anyways.......you really should have your own adoptions. I know those sailor moon adoptees were made by pipsi (www.pipsionline.com). Maybe you could make your own and give it out to people? That way, it's made by you and not somebody else. That also applies to those Sanarios. At the adoption form page, when you say "why do you want this adoption" which adoption are you talking about? Those pipsi-made sailor moon kaos? Those geocities hello kitties? Or that scarey Ryoko who pops out very scarey...(oh I wouldn't want to have that). Please be specfic on which adoption your talking about. Coloring Pages: Why not explain to your visitors that they suppose to click on one of the thumbnails and print it. That way, they know how to color it. I also sugest to add more coloring pictures so you will have more choses. Contest: Good contests, and good prizes. Please add more details about each of the contests, and center the page. Besides that, it's fine! ^_^ Statinary Pages: Actually it spelled Stationary. Please note that visitors who wish to print out that paper should have a color ink, otherwise it will turn out black and white. Center you page, and maybe, just maybe, add more sationary pages, to give more varitey. Sailor Moon Paper Dolls: It's good that you made them into links, rather than thumbnails, because it decreases loading time. This page is fine except it's not centered -_-; Games: Oh come on! You can be more creative than that, can't you? I mean, I expected to play Sailor Moon games, but here I get some geocities games? I must admit I'm a little dissapointed. If you can't find some Sailor Moon games, than just make one up. Like make a mystery picture and the visitors have to guess which senshi is that, or make up some riddles that are realted to sailor moon. There are so many things you could do just use your creativity, and be orginal. If you don't then... well.... tisk, tisk. YKYWTMSMW Nice! Maybe you could ask the visitors to add some to the YKYWTMSMW collection if you want, but center that darn page please. Link Us Umm... I don't see what's wrong with it here. Nice job! Maybe you could make a small button because many people prefer to link other sites using buttons. Otherwise, nice job! About me! Well you have some humorous information there. Just check your spelling though. Maybe you could tell us the kinds of animes you watch, likes or dislikes, favorite foods, and hobby. You don't need to add any more than that. Anime collection: Wow! It seems like you have a lot of stuff. I don't think you should change much here, just center that page. Contact Me Umm..... no comment Profiles: You don't have all the profiles yet, but that's ok. But you should really add more information than that on the Sailor Moon, Mercury, and Mars profiles. It's too short and not very informative. Some visitors don't know much about Sailor Moon and would like to. So by reading the information that you have would not make us know a whole lot about her. Tell us her personalites, attacks, transformations, history, and future. There's a lot of things that you should mention about them. Make sure to add pictures of them on each of the pages. And center please..... Poem: Interesting poem. I told ya that you could be creative, just think. Umm not much to say about this, let's move on to the next page..... Animated Gifs What's that vegeta pic doing there? It kinda appeared out of nowhere. Anyway, those Sailor Moon gifs are fine, add more when you can. OMG! Those final fantasy animations are just soooooo cute!!!! You did a fine job here.........again, center the page. -_- Sailor Moon pics At least you've got 7 pics here. Just make the thumbnails smaller and close in size to make the page more neat. You could either add more pics otherwise, nice page! Awards we won: It's great. No problems here. Next link.... Awards for you: I'm glad you made those awards into seperate links. It saves visitor's loading time and paitience. Those awards look pretty good. Just by looking at your awards, I can tell you can be very creative and artistic. Unless you didn't make those awards... You've got a lot of awards here, so there should be many awards to choose from. Nice! ^_^ Links: Good page. If you are going to add more links, I suggest adding text links rather than banner links. It saves loading time and diskspace. Clubs: This page is ok except you didn't put the links to their sites. How can you visitors go to the club's site or become of member if you haven't put a link to there. You should, and the rest of the page is fine. The credits: Yaaa I made it to this page!! Yahoo! You have a credits page! I'm gonna give you some points for that. But you have only three links up. Are these the only resources you'd use? Now be honest. Did you go to other sites and took something off? If you did, then you really should credit them. Like those pictures of Sailor Moon, did you take them off a site? If you did than credit that person or site. It's only fair. If these are only the resources you have used, than everything on this page is fine. I'm glad you gave credit! ^.^ My Bishoujo: Congragulaitons on catching all those Bishoujos! You should be very proud! ^_^ If loading time becomes a problem, than you could always add text links. Oraganization: Your pretty much organized here. However, on some of your pages, the text is up in the top and very small to read while the rest of the page is blank. And unnecersary pictures appear out of nowhere (such as that ryoko and vegeta pics). Try to fix that. As I mentioned several times, most of you pages need to be centered. Which is not hard to do. Creativity: Here's where you need to work hard on. Most of your backgrounds are the geocities ones or something. They are not sailor moon related backgrounds. Try going to a Sailor Moon webgraphics site and pick out some backgrounds from there and upload them onto your site. Or you can make your own. Your site will look much better that way. Try to be more creative for some of your ideas too. There are ways to be creative for most of your links, so why don't you just go for it? I guarentee your site will look much better if you put a little more thought and creativity into it. So this is a major thing that you should consider for your site. Last thoughts: Your site is pretty nice. It can be better with more work on it. Add the dates for your updates. A little more effort wouldn't hurt, now will it? You have a nice start on your site. Overall Grade: 33/50 ----------> B- <<<<<<<< |