Reviewer

Date

Chapter

Type

Kurotaka Hinome ([email protected]

2003-03-22

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Anonymous

NO! How? HOW!? How could you DO that!?!?!?! AH! **bursts into tears** not Chichiri! or Tasuki, for that matter! WAH... **more sobs** well, still, a good story, from one of the best fan fic writers i know. (well, i don't KNOW you, but, you know what i mean)

rio  

2003-01-04

1

Anonymous

good story...

wolfwitch  

2002-11-30

1

Anonymous

There should be a second chapter, one in which Tasuki finds out. It'd be interesting. I really like your writing style, by the way, it conveys emotions beautifully.

NephilimTear

2002-11-06

1

Signed

Wow...I mean just, *wow*. That was an angsty one but really, *really* good. Poor Chichiri...although there's one flaw, didn't Tasuki see Chichiri's scar at least *once* throughout the series? Wouldn't he have recognized Chichiri from that? Although it does add to the story, kind of. You know, Tasuki knew it was Chichiri he hurt but couldn't tell him because he was afraid Chichiri would hate him or something like that. I really think that this was one of your best fics. Strange requirements for that contest tho...

Neko Kamiya

2002-08-03

1

Signed

*shivers*

as much as i HATE you for doing *that* to my boys...and, yes, BOTH of them were victims, one probably several more times, i cannot deny the fact that that was a good stroy. tears are streaming down my face, and i so badly want them to be real, just so i cna hug them to make it all better, but that was good. thank you.

shadow priestess

2002-06-04

1

Signed

POOR POOR CHICHIRI-CHAN!! I love the fic, but... CHICHIRI DO YOU NEED A HUG?

Bunny6

2002-05-09

1

Signed

I think that this is a neat story and I hope I will be able to read what happens next.

roku kyu

2002-03-27

1

Signed

Ummmm, Ryuen - I just went back to read this because I started reading your sequel and went WHATTTT???!!!! Your work is excellent as always, very emotional. I'm literally shaking as I type this. What an incredible, traumatic story. Wow! I'm blinking back tears, because this is child-abuse of Tasuki as well as the horrible violation of Chichiri. God, the mask, everything...unbelievable. Do you remember your first review for me? Back at ya, girl, ten-fold - excellent, exxxccellent work!

Emmi-chan

2002-01-26

1

Signed

Oooooh SHIT!!!! That's harsh. Poor Chichiri!!!!! Poor Tasuki!!!!!!!

Sei-Chan1

2001-10-08

1

Signed

WAIIIIIIIII!!!!! *Glomp Will-Sama*

Little Washu  

2001-07-16

1

Anonymous

You are such a good writer... this is the second story that's almost moved me to tears (I don't cry) ((The first? If I should die... *sniffle*))
I think you are my fave author here, adn I know I sent you a reveiw already, but here is another boost of confidence for you, so you can finish some of the loose ends of other stories if you get down...
Little Washu

Hillary Bean  

2001-07-12

1

Anonymous

Oh nnnnooooooooooooooooooooo!!! Poor, poor, POOR CHICHIRI! ::*~*:: sniffle ::*~*:: Oh my god! That was so...so...SOSOSOSO sad. Are you planning on a follow-up to this? Say yes! Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease! er...okay, i'm done.

miriya v

2001-07-01

1

Signed

awww...how come chichiri is the one who always gets boffed against his will? *grin/sniffle* I liked it...sad...and interesting, how you put things. Poor Tasuki-kun, too! ^_^ more!

Heather ([email protected]

2001-06-29

1

Anonymous

Oooooh! Very nice! A great job in dealing with the emotions and all... Tasuki would be a little young (as said in an earlier post), but that's okay -- the story works quite well, nonetheless. I really hope you do a sequel too, with Tasuki and Chichiri talking about this (and maybe more ^.~ I'm a TasuChi fan too *^_^*;) Anyway, nice job! :D

Miaka ([email protected]

2001-06-28

1

Anonymous

You Jerk! You heartless Creep!!!!!

 

Reviewer

Date

Chapter

Type

ChoButterfly

2001-06-28

1

Signed

Wow... *mouth hangs open in awe* That was... fantastic! Yikes, the emotion! It was beautifully written, I simply love it! I think the feeling behind it was wonderful, and... I can't put it into words! That was simply wonderful! Please, keep writing more! *hugz*

Bearit

2001-06-28

1

Signed

Whoa. That was... whoa. I can't say much more, but that just stunned me. Chichiri... whoa. Well, great job! ...but whoa... Poor Chichiri...

chichiriboshi  

2001-06-28

1

Anonymous

Wow, I really liked this... my only issue with it is that if Houjun was 18, then Genrou was only 11 years old... is 11 old enough to... *ahem*... you know, do that? You might want to push the timeline back a few years. It'd be great if you did a sequel! Either have Chichiri and Tasuki deal with what happened, or torture Chichiri some more, or whatever! I'm a big TasukixChichiri fan, so I'm hoping for a happy ending... onegai? :-)

Ascaruthiel Greenleaf

2001-06-28

1

Signed

Ooooo, this is a gooood ficcie... *okay, I knOw this IS R rated...* Ah heck! I don't mind vulgarities and I DO tend to fall for yaoi...Goood job =)

samuraiheart

2001-06-28

1

Signed

This was very good and very well written. I enjoyed reading it very much despite the evil things you did to Chichiri, but it kind of left me wondering what would happen next. Is there any chance of a sequel?

Shinzui Naru

2001-06-27

1

Signed

Poor Chichiri...but an awesome ficcy!!! Everything was perfect... ^_^

The Demon Princess

2001-06-27

1

Signed





Lets see... Only entry I've gotten so far but this is GOOD! Waaa! Can I keep it with me forever and ever? I never expected anything like, well this! Waaaa! Waaaaa! Kawaiiiiiiiiiii! Kowaiiiiiiii! Same difference! Hyper! :) Keep up the good work, Ryuen! I see you truly love Nuriko, so if I ever decide to host another contest, I'll dedicate one of Nuriko to you can you can participate! Kay? Waaaaa! Waaaaa! Waaaaa! (Chichiri Doll: I don't see why you like it so much....) SHUT UP!! I LOVE IT! Tasuki Doll, you're on! (Tasuki Doll: hehehehe.... Down the hatch Chichiri Doll! *Proceeds to pump him full of sake and Nuriko Specials* Wahahahaha!!!) *Grins* I LOVE IT!!!! WAIIII WAAAA! WAAAAAAA! KAWAIIIIIIIIII! KAWAIIIII! CHICHIRI-SAMA! FORGIVE ME! GOMEN NASAI!! ....But I enjoyed this wounderous ficcie by Ryuen!!! WAAAAAA!

 

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