Into the Rain Reviews

Reviewer	Date	Chapter	Type
Navet	2003-08-07	1	Signed
Its really neeat! I've been going on a "Reading Mouse Chan's Fanfics" spree tonight.. and its late... so.. my review's probably won't be coherent. Oh well. The part with Nuriko was really sweet.. and the part with Tasuki was depressing. He was trying so hard to be sweet but tough at the same time and then he got scared and.. yeah. Did that make any sense? I thought not..
shnickers	2002-10-01	1	Signed
I love the pattern! Dialogue, description, dialogue, description... Oh, the descriptions! They were L-O-V-E-L-Y!!!! So poetic, so metaphorical, so... poetic. Oh... is this the ending? If it is, then try to think of more, 'kay? A ~few~ more chapters would make me very happy! I love how you emphasize Miaka & Nuriko's tight friendship. If Nuriko was re-born into Miaka's world, I bet they would have been just like that. I don't exactly understand what you're into: there seemed to be a pinch of Chichiri/Tasuki... maybe it was just my imagination??? After all, Tasuki's dialogue implied that they were brothers. And do you like Miaka & Nuriko? It sorta seemed that way. Just wondering. I LOVE that pair. They're just so... realistic. Nuriko is such a sweetie! ^_~ Byebye now!
Akia Starfrost	2002-03-28	1	Signed
Very artfully done! There's nothing wrong with experimenting with new styles once in a while. ^^ Especially when you can pull it off so well. The descriptions were nicely picturesque, and the dialogue sequences were skillfully written and easy to follow. I think you did a wonderful job! You're quite a writer. ^_^ And the tone was very nice as well...sort of bittersweet. I was listening to "Shiawase ni Narou ne" the whole time, too, which worked really well with it. (I'm a sucker for good background music to off-set the mood. ^^) I'll have to go see what else you've written! ^_^
J. Liha	2002-02-07	1	Signed
Oro... @_@x It's nice, a little on the odd side (I have no idea why I think that, just do ^_^x) but it's nice.
Emmi-chan	2002-01-23	1	Signed
That was nice, pleasant to read, but kinda confusing.
Kris	2001-10-09	1	Anonymous
That was a great story, the way you created the mood with just enough words. Well done and I'm glad to have read this. Keep writing please!
samuraiheart	2001-09-15	1	Signed
Wow... I really liked this style. It makes me wonder if sometimes all of the other stuff just gets in the way. I loved the way you were able to paint a gorgeous picture with only a few words. I think I liked the way that you characterized Tasuki the most. Poor Tasuki! sniffle Now I guess he'll have to hook up with Chichiri...
Missa	2001-08-25	1	Anonymous
I liked it. The style is nice...but slightly confusing. Maybe adapt it to be a little more clear?
Rashaka	2001-07-10	1	Signed
::sigh:: I loved that. It was like a little piece of life. Definietly on my fav list. However.....MY POOR TASUKI-CHAN!!!! THE PAIN OF UNREQUITED LOVE! I want to know what the gift was.
Ruri-chan2	2001-07-09	1	Signed
that was an awesome fic. I don't know why you want to take it down. Everything was greaet about it. The writing style, description, characters. It was all excellent. Wish I could write like that. ;.; ^^ the style was good too. I liked it.
AyanamiChan	2001-07-08	1	Signed
Wow, this is really good! I don't think I've ever seen anything about it before... ^_^ hugs
Michelle Riddle1	2001-07-06	1	Signed
I think it's definitely a keeper. Don't be so hard on yourself! (self: like you can talk, Michelle. Who asked you?!) =) I liked your story, you should write more of it! I want to see what happens. It's different the way you had Hotohori and Tama talking together. I would think tama would be the /last/ person hotohori would want to confind in about that. But it makes a nice effect. =) Keep up the good work!
Stormlight	2001-07-06	1	Signed
That was so gooood! It was really...poetic, almost. So sweet. Poor Hotohori-sama...and Nuriko...and Tasuki. I feel so sorry for them. ^^
Shinzui Naru	2001-07-06	1	Signed
I don't see why you'd take this down. It's great! So well-written...I'm envious of your writing talent. The part with the phone was pretty funny. ^_^
ReccaGirl	2001-07-06	1	Signed
That was great! I really like how you wrote it, adding in details of the characters and the setting after you finished the dialouge. Awesome work:)

Reviewer	Date	Chapter	Type
Bronwyn Kay	2001-07-05	1	Signed
That was kewl and as you said totally different! I really liked the way it was just the conversation between the two characters and then the setting was summed up by the fragmented paragraphs. It gave me the impression I was looking at a photograph of the whole scene that just occured. Sugoi! ^_^
Bearit	2001-07-05	1	Signed
This was different.. but it was a NICE kind of different. You also characterized the characters right; I didn't have to read any more than two lines of each character to figure out who was who (okay, so Chichiri and Tasuki are kind of a give-aways.. but that's not the point!). Great job!
The Demon Princess	2001-07-05	1	Signed
Whaaaa! Can I be your biggest fan, puh-lease? I wanna make a little 'I'm Ryuen's #1 fan!' piccie make a whole webpage just to put it there! I liiiiked this!
Kei-chan1	2001-07-05	1	Signed
::rests finger on chin:: hrm... I like it. It's definitely different, but it's also really cool. Particularly the pattern of the "silent observer." And the paragraphs of description are very very good, especially in all their fragmented glory. ::grin:: You can't delete this! And, even if you try.. I copied and pasted and saved on my computer and I'll repost it if I have to! ::hands on hips:: so there! Gomen nasai, daichan... I am REALLY tired.