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2004-07-26 |
24 |
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i started reading this fic a while ago and left off around
chapter 20... and let me tell you, the real ending was much better. i'm so
glad you included that last chapter. i cried so much when Nuriko died... i
love reincarnation fics where they're together again. the story was great...
the only thing i can think of to comment on is your chapter breaks. the first
chapter ended kind of oddly - maybe a little abruptly. other than that, the
story was perfect. |
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2004-04-03 |
11 |
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*tears in eyes* o gods! SUCH A SWEET MOMENT THERE! aw! |
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2004-04-03 |
10 |
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OO!...dude sweeto! |
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2004-04-03 |
7 |
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* eyes well up with tears* aw! HUGGLES! |
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2004-04-03 |
5 |
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oohohohoho!! hotohori took the opertunity this time! sure.. it
was a "kiss of life" bwha yeah right! smoch! |
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2004-04-03 |
4 |
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come on nuri-kun! take advantage of the situation ur in!
snuggle, kiss, SOMETHING! hehe |
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2004-04-03 |
3 |
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BIGO SMILE! tama feels miaka. hoto feels nuriko...hehe that
didnt come out right. lol |
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2004-04-03 |
2 |
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aw! what a thing to wake up to! nuriko must be very happy then.
but still that would scare me also to have dreams like that. OO.. and ooh
whats the sound? |
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2004-01-15 |
1 |
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your story is nice. keep it up. i like it, the gradual way, not
really fast and not too slow. |
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2003-09-12 |
24 |
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Oh... my... goodness.. gracious... I absolutely positively
-ADORE- the way you write Hotohori and Nuriko! The last scene... It's just
priceless... And absolutely -kawaii-... I was crying at least three times
during the fic, but the end was adorable... Left me with a smile, and I can
tell I'm going to be in a good mood for a while... Alright, now that I've
babbled... I just wanted to say how much I admire your writing capabilities,
and wish you a long, happy life! |
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lordbob |
2003-06-25 |
23 |
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Ok all I have to say is OMG! That was just wonderful very
inspiring and extremely well written the funny just made me fall out of my
seat and laugh and sad part made me need a kleenex I have to say you have
inspired me in my original anime and it's was just something I was so happy I
found. You need to get an award for this cause it was just that good I
enjoyed every chapter and some point didn't know what expect and then when I
knew what to expect I was bowing to how clever the and creative the plot was.
Kinda sad that they do die... but the way you put it is the base for every
death fic there is. Cause it kinda death but then it expresses the other side
of death the being reunited with your loved ones and finally being at peace.
Well I guess I won't jabber any more but still this was over all the best fic
I've read I need to print it out and put it in a frame or something. Anytime
I need inspiration be sure I will always turn to this fic for idea. |
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Nightengale ([email protected]) |
2003-05-13 |
24 |
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You kept me up for two and a half hours reading this. It was
more that well-worth it. I won't cheapen it by trying to analyze or applaud
your fic; just know I'm now going to crawl in bed, and wish I could cry,
because I have no Nuriko of my own. Your have done both Ryuen and Saiheitei
an immesurable honor with this story. I'm quaking a little inside, because
you have touched me so very profoundly. Please know how much I love you for
writing this! You're amazingly talented; keep writing, because if you ever
laid your talent to rest it would be an awful, awful act. |
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2003-03-30 |
1 |
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I love Nuriko! |
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2003-02-06 |
24 |
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I love this story. It is something you've heard before but I
still wanted you to know that there is one more person from your many fans
who thought this story was really special. Thank you for writing it. It's
strange how I feel like crying when I should be smiling for joy at reading
this. It is so sweet and filled with so much hope. I feel glad that Nuriko
and Hotohori could have had a chance of happiness together. This is beautiful
and you are a wonderful writer. |
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Ami |
2003-02-04 |
24 |
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OMG!!! I love this story! Sugoi da yo!! n_n I read it once, and
then...I read it AGAIN! Yep. n.n very very good! The way you fit everything
together so that it worked in your favour was extremely well done! ^.~ |
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Date |
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2002-11-07 |
24 |
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My heart has been broken and put back together many a time
through this fic. Oh no, now I'm a Hotohori/Nuriko shipper too!! I'm carrying
way too many signs now -.- .... |
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2002-10-18 |
12 |
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LURVE this ficcie! Please don't tell me they're gonna die
anytime soon.. I have to stop reading, because my #$&)@ parents are
#%(_@$ walking into the room 0_o *love love sparkles to this ficcie* Can I
use it on my Nuriko/Hotohori website? ^^ |
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NK ^,~. ([email protected]) |
2002-08-11 |
24 |
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I got to chapter 17 of this once. That last chapter was really
good, you know. ^^. The whole fic was. It's been written a gazzillion times,
but you are an amazing writer. I cried at every chapter ;___;. & that
poem thing at the end? It was perfect ^___^. |
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2002-02-18 |
24 |
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That was so SWEET! I love the ending! Write a sequel! |
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2001-12-05 |
24 |
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I loved this story! It was so cool! please write more! |
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2001-10-02 |
13 |
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Luv it, Luv it. Keep writing |
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2001-09-20 |
24 |
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That was sooooooooooo pretty!!! At first I hated you......for
killing Nuriko again......but then the end came and it was so sweet!! You are
awesome!! Thank you for the WONDERFUL story!! |
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2001-09-08 |
24 |
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Wow :::tear::: what a great fic, I loved it!!!!!!! |
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2001-09-07 |
3 |
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Okay, well, you rule for one reason (well, more than one, but
one really great one): you used the word "steeling". Don't ask my
why, but I looooove that word. I have respect for authors who do, too.
::grins:: Plus, you have some AWESOME Hotohori descriptions. There is no end
to my love for that man. I'd marry him if there weren't this whole problem
with Van-sama. Oh, and the fact that he's ficitonal. |
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Nozomi-chan ([email protected]) |
2001-08-27 |
24 |
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...gosh! what can I say! I LUV IT! A perfect example of the
action behind the scenes in the anime! (i wish...) You are a great writer! |
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2001-07-24 |
1 |
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good job. |
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Raine Laguna |
2001-07-14 |
24 |
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;_; this was one of the BEST Hotohori/Nuriko fanfics I have ever
read!!!! It was so beautiful!!! I love the way you write, I love the way you
followed through with the storyline of Fushigi Yuugi, and I LOVED the
ending!!! I love this story! Thank you for writing it! Hotohori and Nuriko
together forever!! Yay! ^_^ |
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2001-07-10 |
24 |
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^_^ YAY!!! that was a great story, I loved it, Hotohori and
Nuriko were so kawaii, and the ending was just as good ^_^ DOMO ARIGATO for
posting this great fanfic |
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2001-07-10 |
24 |
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Drat! Yeah, it did have a happy ending. But what a shame it had
to come to the end. Bye-for-now. Dratini! |
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2001-07-10 |
24 |
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WAH!! I LOVED IT!! IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!! *sniff* you're such a
good writer!! i love all of your work!! i have read everything you've posted
on FF.N and love each and everyone of them!! you should write more stories!!
^_^. |
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Reviewer |
Date |
Chapter |
Type |
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2001-07-08 |
24 |
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I have to admit, I lingered breathless on the word
"end" for a few minutes.... *inhales* That was such a beautiful,
well-written story,...erm... mininovel... This was definately one of the best
fics I have *ever* read. Great job, Ryuen. I believe you have gained a *lot*
of respect here, as I can tell from the reviews! :) This is on the
favorites.. heheheh... and so are you... Great job, though,... I'll continue
to read your other works.. I love how you ended this. You ended it perfectly.
If you wanted to continue this into a sequel "Wink, wink. Nudge,
nudge,..." it would be rather easy, too. I can't compliment you and this
story enough! |
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2001-07-08 |
24 |
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I love this story. Out of all the Hotohori/Nuriko fanfics, I
think this must be my favorite. The ending was amazing...everyone was well
in-character all through the story, and everything was so well
thought-out...it really *is* like something that could happen in the series!
^_^ |
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Tenoh ([email protected]) |
2001-07-08 |
24 |
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First off I must say that this story is the absolute best and
most well-thought out Hotohori/Nuriko fanfic I have read thus far. You really
captured the characters' personalities and kept them within their range of
personality while setting the real story a bit off course... in other words,
you made me COMPLETELY BELIEVE in this story! Now I wish that this had
happened and that we were able to see it in the show! And the end was
beautiful. You finished it off with a bang- omedetou gozaimasu!!! Thank you
for your beautiful story! |
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2001-07-08 |
24 |
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That was the best ending to anything I have ever read. It's so
great that they found each other after they were reincarnated... and they are
SOOOOO much in character I could actually see it playing out as you wrote it.
Absolutely incredible story, daichan. I loved every moment of it. |
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2001-07-07 |
23 |
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Hey ryuen! reallly romantic. nice a bit sappy hehe but
neccessary i think! very nice....... enough said. |
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2001-07-06 |
23 |
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Whoa! This is fantastic. What a shame its going to end soon. Oh
well, I can't wait for the final part and I just want you to know that you're
the greatest. Bye-for-now. |
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2001-07-06 |
23 |
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*tears in eyes* So sweet. I had a feeling that it was Chiriko...
Can't wait for the end! *^-^* |
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2001-07-06 |
23 |
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Oh noooooo, it's almost the end?! T_T Oh, this was written so
well! Those last moments between Nuriko and Hotohori were so sweet...the
naming was a nice touch too. I love this story so much... |
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2001-07-06 |
23 |
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::sniffle:: so... sad... :( poor Hotohori, having Nuriko leave
him twice.... gah, but all will be good in the end, ne? I hope so! can't wait
to read the last part, should be excellent! Matta ne! |
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2001-07-05 |
22 |
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*cries with happiness* I swear, this is so sweet. I am like,
serious crying over here! This is so beautiful... so beautiful,... I think
you only need maybe 2 chapters now! And epilogue and the "morning".
Very romantic. |
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Kittie ([email protected]) |
2001-07-05 |
22 |
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Man. I can't really express my feeling for that. Someything
along the lines of, 'wow'? Or 'I'm still going over chapters in my mind' and
the only thing I have left to say besides the obvious that I REALLY liked it,
is 'I hope there's at least one more chapter where it all end and they live
happily ever after watching their friends, and Hotohori's son grow, fall in
love, and meet them when they die, in the life surrounded by suzaku's light.
Sheesh. I sound like I've written it myself. Loved it! Ja! |
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2001-07-03 |
21 |
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OH MY GOD!!! I NEED MORE!!! NOW!! WHAT A HORRIBLE PLACE TO LEAVE
OFF!! WAAHH!! IT'S JUST NOT FAIR!! WHY DID NURIKO HAVE TO DIE!! !_! *sniff* I
WAS CRYING SO HARD WHEN I READ THE LAST FOUR CHAPTERS!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE
RIGHT AWAY!! PLEASE!! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!! AND EVER!! PLEASE!! |
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2001-07-01 |
21 |
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Guess who's back!!! Heeheeheeheehee ::more maniac giggles:: this
chapter is very very very very cool! 'Specially the way Hotohori doesn't know
it til he sees the mole... ::snicker:: I'm not leaving you an extremely large
review since it appears that the soul of a dead writer invaded you and you
posted like a crazed madwoman! ::grin:: missed me, didn't ya? |
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2001-06-30 |
21 |
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good good good! yaay *applaud* well thats somethin -I- never saw
comin' ;p keep up the great work I look forward to the next chapter =] |
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2001-06-28 |
21 |
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Too cool! Nuriko gets one night with his Hotohori! Dratini! |
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Reviewer |
Date |
Chapter |
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2001-06-27 |
20 |
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what experiance??!?!?!!?!?!? hmmmm ooiiiii iknow! nah that can't
be! you must continue soon jay. real nice description with the different
clothings on nuriko! |
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2001-06-24 |
20 |
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Fantastic! Dratini! I can't wait for the rest! Dratini, Drat,
tini,Dratini! She says please post the next part soon. Bye-for-now. |
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2001-06-24 |
20 |
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You have so much talent! Coulda give a little to me? j/k! YOu
write so emotionally. I remember, my teacher always commented "Show,
don't tell," And I think this chapter is an excellent examply of this
comment. Continue writing like this, and remember, no matter what you think,
no matter how much you might dislike something, it may just be for the
better. Thank you for not deleting the 1st half of this chapter. I suppose
this will be my only huge review for the week, ne? Good job! Keep it up! |
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2001-06-23 |
20 |
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G- D- wha---- ::sputters for words:: Nani?! You aren't allowed
to stop there!!!!!!!! I refuse to let you!!!!! ::pout:: I donnae like when
you stop... it makes me sad... ::pouts more:: ::cheers up:: I like the
chapter!!!! Nuriko is so awesome.. and you got Suzaku wonderfully, his Godly
demeanor (if such a thing exists) ::snicker:: WAI! Gomen, daichan... I'm in a
rather odd mood (like you hadn't noticed) Matte ne! |
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2001-06-20 |
19 |
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you really killed him..................... why..........why....
when he just found his love.... why didn't he have the strengh to hold on....
huh...... *sniff**sniff**sob**sob* i have a ray of hope that he would live
on...... huh.... you well you have to power over the story. as always this is
good made me cry..... looking forward to the next one. your description is
good. a bit too much on the heisitation of houki though. not that it spoils
it or anything. just my opinion!*smile sadly*[cause nuriko dies...] |
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2001-06-15 |
19 |
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DRAAAAAT! WAHHHHHHH! DRAAAAAAT! WAAAAAAAAH! What else can we
say? DRAAAAAT! WAHHHHHHH! POOOOR NURIIIKO! DRATINI! DRATINI! bye-for-sob-now!
WAHHHHHHH! DRAAAAAAAT |
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2001-06-14 |
19 |
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Darn you, daichan. Just when I got all excited over Nuriko and
Hotohori confeesing their love to each other, you throw Houki in the mix and
make me like her, too. And don't apologize for the length... I still thought
it was too short for me.. I wanna read more. One comment.. you spelled
Changes wrong in the chapter title.... a minor typo yes, but I thought you
would appreciate me pointing it out to you. I shall speak to you later, I'm
sure. Matta ne! ^_^ |
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2001-06-13 |
1 |
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heh heh actually wriing this review cause i forgot to tick
" add to favourite stories" hehe thats a complement in itself! |
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2001-06-13 |
18 |
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hey i like writers who continue their story consistently. |
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2001-06-13 |
18 |
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WAAAAAAH! Nuriko going to die after all!! DRATTTTTTT! Please
post the next part soon. DRAAATTTT! Bye-for-now. |
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2001-06-11 |
18 |
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*crying her @*#&%*$ eyes out* You... killed... Nuriko...
again.. You brave, brave person! Very sweet. I think you should've mention
that Ryuuen finally broke through for a little, too. But I'm not one to talk!
Great job, really! Plz continue! I want to know how this effects everyone in
you ficcy! |
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2001-06-11 |
1 |
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what an incredibly beautiful story! thanks for writing it ^_^ |
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2001-06-10 |
18 |
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Holy... woah... I.. err... um... wow... (this is a true to life
reaction here) You're descriptions are incredible. This chapter totally
sucked me in... and I watched it all play out as though I were at your house
watching FY in your living room. It's very sad (duh) cuz Hotohori tries in
vain to get ahold of Taiitskun to do something, and Nuriko... wow... that's
all I can say... wow.... |
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diane choo |
2001-06-05 |
17 |
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Your good writer!! |
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2001-06-02 |
17 |
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Cool... I like how you went into how Hotohori and Houki met.. it
works.. and Nuriko's thoughts at the inn, superb. ::grin:: I love how this
story is progressing... but it's really setting up for major sadness. :(
Anyway, since you weren't getting any reviews.. I thought I'd leave you a
few. Besides, would I be your aniki if I didn't? PS... I'M BACK!!!!! |
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Hillary Bean (i'm signed in! really! i am!)
([email protected]) |
2001-06-02 |
17 |
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oh ryuen-sama!!! you're so goooooooood! please please PLEASE
write the next part quickly! waaahhhh! poor hotohori-chan! *~*;;
sniffle...**ahem** Well then. I have to say this is my favorite story you've
written so far. i love the angst. angst is a good thing. uh...oh yes. i have
to mention this. houki with a personality. i LOVE that. personalities, like
angst, are a good thing. where are you going with this story?!! i HAVE to
read more! if you don't write fast enough...well...uh, i'll think up some odd
method of torture soon enough! ^_^ strawberry pocky,
rainbow~colored~safety~pins, and all my love, Hillary Bean |
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2001-06-01 |
17 |
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Interesting, the way you have this written. Houki and "Lady
Korin" as best friends... like siblings almost. :) Hotohori finally
admits it outloud! He looooves Nuriikooo!!!! |
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2001-06-01 |
17 |
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Wow! Please continue soon, I want to know if Nuriko will be
replaced by a woman, and will he indeed die. I can't wait for the rest.
Dratini! |
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Abby |
2001-05-31 |
17 |
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I can't believe that I'm reading this only now!!! I saw it
before, but I didn't think it would be that interesting. I couldn't have been
further from the truth! I can't say what I liked best, because I liked
EVERYTHING!!! Oh, wait! Actually, I think that the scene in Hotohori's
bedroom was my favorite scene, but only by a small margin. I love this fic,
please write more! |
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2001-05-30 |
15 |
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Awwww, how cute! Does this mean that Nuriko will live? I can't
wait for the rest. Dratini! |
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2001-05-29 |
15 |
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Hi me again! Fic is still wonderful!! You are a very talented
writer, and I hope you keep it up! Short but sweet na no da. Raven over and
out. |
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2001-05-26 |
15 |
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! Kawaii!!!!! My advice, read this fic
while listening to Another Story from Record Of Lodoss War at
animeart.com/lodoss/ - click on songs - then click on Another Story. It makes
wonderful background music!!!!! Love the fic!! Till tomorrow. . . ^^; I like
ROLW too much . . . -_-; |
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Hillary Bean |
2001-05-26 |
15 |
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OH GOD! THIS IS SO...SO sad! Oh god oh god oh god oh god! It's
so GOOD TOO! uh. yeah. so uh...good work. yeah. |
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Kokkei (notta) ([email protected]) |
2001-05-24 |
15 |
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That was sad... sad because Hotohori KNOWS Nuriko is going to
die, but tells him to come back anyway, and sad because Nuriko plans on
coming back.... ::sniffle:: it's quite wonderful, Daichan, and I bow at your
greatness.. gomen ne for the short review, but I'm really tired... JA! |
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Kokkei (me? sign in? pah!) ([email protected]) |
2001-05-23 |
14 |
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::sniffle:: that was incredibly sad! But cool at the same time!
Grr.. only you, Daichan, can do that to me. Make me feel terrible in one
instant and happy in the next..... :P anyway... I really like it.. and its
not all that long, honestly. My favorite part.. besides the kiss... was when
he apologized to Kourin and decided to become a man.. that's the heroic Nuriko
we all know and love!!! ^_^ Ah well... NEEEEEEEED more!! If you make me cry..
I'll write the saddest fic you'll ever read. kakakaakakakakak ja! |
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2001-05-23 |
13 |
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*eyes go wide* OoooOOOoooOOH! More more more more! (I sound so
childish!) This is truly beautiful. I hope you continue asap |
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Kokkei |
2001-05-21 |
13 |
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GAH! How frustrating! I guess he can't remember it! Grr... you
WOULD do something like that, wouldn't you? ::sob:: what's gonna
happen???????? I wanna knoooooooooww. I like the description of Hotohori in
the beginning, very NICE! eh.. I'm off for now. Talk to you later, aniki! |
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Raine Laguna ([email protected]) |
2001-05-20 |
12 |
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I love this story!! I'm a BIG Hotohori and Nuriko fan and I've
been looking for as many fanfics that I could with them being paired
together. I think is a wonder fic, sad but I love it... ::cries:: Do they
really have to die!! I hope to read the next chapters very soon. I also hope
to read more of your stories because I think you're a very good writer! |
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2001-05-20 |
12 |
Signed |
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awww... Nuriko... *sobs* At least he is forewarned... |
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2001-05-20 |
12 |
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Hey! Don't blame me for the effects Lifehouse has. ^_^ It's a
great CD, and even better for romancey stuff. Anywaaay.... anou.... I loved
this chapter... like I do all of them... but having Nuriko know that Hotohori
is going to die as well really brings a lot to it. I think I managed to get
through this review without any major typos... except for the word
"romancey" (is it a word? and did I spell it right? ah, who cares)
^_^ So... yeah... The whole things is wonderful, and you better post more
SSSSOOOON!!!! JA, aniki! |
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Reviewer |
Date |
Chapter |
Type |
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mc |
2001-05-20 |
12 |
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;_; Waaaaaah! thats so sad!!! *tissue, where's my tissue...*
man, i love bittersweet stories lioke this... |
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2001-05-20 |
12 |
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this story was so sweet. i was touched, and they're so in
character! it was sort of rushed, but not to the point of obscuring the
story. i'm impressed, Miburui-san. |
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2001-05-19 |
11 |
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awww! Very kawaii! Please continue... I love this kind of stuff.
I eat it up! :) |
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Kokkei (obviously not signed in.. yet) |
2001-05-18 |
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::mouth hangs, agape:: ::trys to speak, then realizes she's
typing anyway:: oh....... wow. That has to be the most kickass chapter of all
of them. I am completely serious. Nuriko can't believe it.. _I_ almost can't
believe it. It's just completely amazing, aniki. Holy crap! And gomen for the
typo on that last review ^_^() Anou..... I'm gonna go back to typing my
terribe piece of crap fanfic, not that yours blew mine outta the f'ing water.
^_^ |
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2001-05-18 |
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Hi there, by all means this is a GREAT (May I emphasize GREAT
once again?) fic, and definately one of my favorites, in fact it deserves the
first review I've ever written. PLUHHEASE keep writing on it. |
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2001-05-17 |
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AHEM... as I was saying before you cawled and interrupted.....
It's crappy by any means... I love every sentence... and Nuriko's surprise at
Hotohori's request is quite well written.. now.. I demand more! ^_^ |
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2001-05-17 |
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Whoa, this is great. Please post the next part really soon.
Bye-for-now. |
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2001-05-17 |
9 |
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*eyes bug out of her head* Please continue! I can't possibly
wait for more! |
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who else? |
2001-05-17 |
9 |
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Holy crap... now Hotohori is dreaming about Nuriko's death?
That's, wow. I LOVE this chapter. and Hotohori realizing how Nuriko really
feels about him is beautifully written, as always. WAI WAI WAI MORE MORE
MORE!!! sorry.. getting a bit excited.. I'm off to type more too... again.. I
love it, aniki! JA ^_^ |
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2001-05-16 |
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GAHHHHHH!!! You can't do that!!! ^_^ I hate cliffhangers, aniki,
and this one is major! It's excellent though. I love Nuriko's feeling that he
messed up. It makes him really seem human. Wah.. I wanna know what happens
next! Do I know? You said I did... maybe I do.. hmmm.... anyway.. I'm at the
edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Ja, aniki! |
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2001-05-16 |
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Oh wow! This is so sweet. This is a beautifully written yaoi. I
can't wait to see where it leads. |
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Kokkei.. (obviously not signed it)
([email protected]) |
2001-05-15 |
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::wipes tear from eye:: Wow. Just, wow. I REALLY like this
chapter. It's just.. very cool.. and the heaven thought... PERFECT. Gomen ne,
aniki... I just really really really love this story. Every facet of both
their personalities is completely in character. The description is
wonderful.. and I demand MORE ::giggle:: WAI WAI WAI!!!!!! ^_^ JA! |
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Lanen(lazy to sign in yet again) ([email protected]) |
2001-05-14 |
6 |
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Very sweet. I can't wait for more. I love how it all just comes
together. Beautiful! |
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Camille ([email protected]) |
2001-05-10 |
5 |
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Ooooooooohhhhh.......moremoremoremore!!!!!Onegai??Please???
(puppy dog eyes) |
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2001-05-08 |
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Aniki.... I love it!!!!! It is NOT icky at all... the reactions
of Hotohori are very real, and I really like just about everything about it..
You at least, can keep them in character.. unlike Moi who's fanfic is sucky.
^_^ But it's all good.. I need criticism.... can't wait for more! |
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Kokkei |
2001-05-04 |
2 |
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MORE MORE MORE!!!! ::continues chant:: ahem.. sorry.. It's
great.. you just left off at a terrible cliffhanger.... what's gonna happen??
::cries:: Hehehe.. anyway.. you've captured the personalities of Nuriko and
Hotohori quite well, aniki, can't wait to read more. |
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mc |
2001-05-02 |
2 |
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*at the absolute edge of my seat*........*falls off seat*...what
happens next?! keep writing! |
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Aniki ([email protected]) |
2001-05-01 |
1 |
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wow... umm.. that's really good... having nuriko dream
about..well, you know, works in the story very well. The interaction between
the two is also very well written. I like, I like... I better get to read the
whole thing ::crosses arms and nods firmly:: |
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2001-05-01 |
1 |
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*grins* awww! You're gonna writen another chapter, right? :P or
else... :) j/k! Very sweet idea! |
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Aine ([email protected]) |
2001-05-01 |
1 |
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Wow! This is one of the best Nuriko fics I've ever read! He's
very in character and not over-infatuated with Hotohori. I hope you'll
continue this story. |
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chibi_ukyou |
2001-05-01 |
1 |
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ooh. i like! sequal please!!! more hotohori and nuriko!! :D |
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