Reviewer

Date

Chapter

Type

Nightengale, too lazy to log in ([email protected]) 

2003-05-01

1

Anonymous

Oh, I like. I'm a HUGE Nuriko/Hotohori fan, but not to the degree that Hotohori would consent to doing *something* with Nuriko. That would be too OOC for me. Rather, I love giving Nuriko the chances (or watching someone else give him those chances) to have quiet, personal minutes with the Emperor, to whet his hunger for a relationship by experiencing profound moments of friendship and connection. Once in a very long while, an author comes along that knows how to, and does, portray that side of Nuriko, and that facet of Hotohori. You're one of them. While including all the seishi in a believable, rounded scenario, in a realistic environment, you give special attention to the non-action. Instead of detailing the snowball fight and then moving back inside for Nuriko's moment, you made the wise decision to let the reader, as well as Nuriko and Hotohori, know no more of the snowball fight than can be heard from the muffled yells. It imparts the reader, too, with a calming sense. Your diction is masterful, and your grammar, tense, and formatting impeccable. Were it not for the techinical merit of your story, its spell would be lost, so I applaud your word choice and proofreading as much as your artistic and lingistic skill. All in all, a very sweet, believable piece that leaves the reader as calm as its characters. It's on my favorites page, and so are you. Keep it up.

-Nightengale

Eiko  

2003-04-12

1

Anonymous

EKIES! Ya mean GERSHWIN's 'Someone to Watch Over Me'? EEKIES! YAY! I LOVE IT!

VioletAngel

2003-01-30

1

Signed

hey there! as usual, i just happen to love another story written by you ^-^ seriously, you're and excellent author, and when i find myself writing, i'm usually striving to be as good as authors such as yourself. and yeah, the reviews don't hurt either ^-~

umm, i know you've mentioned that you have a gay/lesbian fanfiction support group type thing, and i was just wondering, is it just a place to submit your fanfiction, or is it anactual support group? is there a message board to post on and people to talk to? because myself, i am confused as hell and waaaaay to cowardly to mention anything to anyone of my friends. if you could e-mail me with some information or something.... i'd really appreciate it.

gah, i don't usually write such long reviews!!

~*VioletAngel*~ A.K.A. YanagiStar
[email protected]

Ri Aikyo

2002-03-29

1

Signed

Ohayo Ryuen!

I just have one thing to say: How cute! This story is so nice, so peaceful, so....warm and fuzzy! *smiles* sorry, I couldn't resist....hee hee! Well, you've managed to amaze me yet again my dear Ryuen-chan! I can't wait to see more of your stories! Keep it up sweetie! Take care! Ja ne no da!

~*Ri Aikyo*~

Lady Sage

2002-02-18

1

Signed

^_^ Very cute and sweet. I like the real-world-interlude thing you have going there. It's very relaxing, especially after going INSANE from the suspense of the original series. ^_^" I've been watching waaaaaaaay too much...

Emmi-chan

2002-01-25

1

Signed

Aw! That's all squishy and happy and pleasant. Good job!

Ryu Tamashi

2001-09-29

1

Signed

Geat job.

chescaOtaku

2001-07-21

1

Signed

sugoi...another wonderful piece of writing!! write more!!

JN Paredes

2001-07-21

1

Signed

Great characterization! Very good job!

Kittie ([email protected]) 

2001-07-21

1

Anonymous

Ahh! Kawaii kawaii!!!! That was soo~ sweet, and funny! I think it'd be intresting with a continueation. Or not.(Maybe.But that's just my opinion) As for your other fics that i love so much, i wont yell at you for them to be finished immediatly like i do to my friends-mainly just to annoy them-because i'm suffering through a severe writers blick with my story 'The sighn from two worlds' that hasent been posted at all yet. But, onegai, try to hurry! I just looooooooove your writing and am getting bored waiting for it. But i can be very patient....HURRY!!!!!!:)::)::):):):):):)::):):):--;

Shinzui Naru

2001-07-21

1

Signed

Awww, that was great! Just the thing I needed after a 7-hour road trip and unpacking. ^_^

Solarcite

2001-07-20

1

Signed

I think it's a very sweet fic, and I like your style. It's very discriptive and expressive. Please write more!!

ANIKI ([email protected]) 

2001-07-19

1

Anonymous

::sways along:: Hehehe... I remember the music from band... GOOOOOOOOOD song ::grin:: the dance was awesome...and it's funny that he burned the pizza ::snicker::

Luna  

2001-07-19

1

Anonymous

Ahhh, so nice! I love this soft-gentle-type of friendship between Nuriko and Hotohori, it's so wonderful, something nice for a change, not all that yuri stuff others write. I love Hotohori madly!!!

Abby ([email protected]) 

2001-07-19

1

Anonymous

You're right...this IS relaxing. It's nice to see the seishi getting a break from saving the world and just having fun, and I needed a break from wacky parodies and angsty stuff, which is what I've been reading. Thanks! Your fics always make my day better.

Ruri-chan2

2001-07-19

1

Signed

That was a wonderful short fic. It was so well written and everyone was in character. It was indeed relaxing. And it didn't help that I was listening to classic music myself ^.^ Great job. And I hope you do write more of these, they're great.

Lanen

2001-07-19

1

Signed

This was so sweet. Uhmm.. Fluff? I love it! Hahah! *^-^* Great job. Very soothing to read, too, might I add!

Nuriko Metallium

2001-07-19

1

Signed

Ooooh I loved that it was so wonderful! Please write more. Very touching!