Shadows Return

by Lynn Flewelling

Reviewed by Ruby

Seregil and Alec are back in Rhìminee and are bored. With a new Queen in power, her lack of love for Aurënfaie has quickly been adopted with the nobles, leaving both Seregil (being a 'faie) and Alec (being half Hâzadriëlfaie) unpopular.  They also have very little Watcher work, with Thero still in Aurënen, and with the rumors of the nightrunner The Rhìminee Cat being killed, they are left with only the noble roles. So when they are offered a job by Queen Phoria to go back to Aurënen to retrieve her youngest sister, they jump on it.

Unfortunately for them, there are other spies at work and as soon as they are on their way they are attacked and shanghaied. They are sent to Riga in Plenimar and sold as slaves. Alec is bought by the alchemist Charis Yhakobin who has been waiting for a very long time to get his hands on a Hâzadriëlfaie.  Alec's mother's people hold a secret in their blood, that even the Aurënfaie don't remember. Their blood can create a rhekaro; a creature capable of creating the deadliest of poisons or a cure for everything and can kill an army of men with a single word.

Seregil, on the other hand, is also sold as a slave and must play his part in order to escape and find Alec. Only when he does, Alec doesn't want to leave the rhekaro behind.

I really like the characters that Lynn Flewelling has created in this series. They are instantly lovable. In this book they are faced with slavery and separation and I found it was more angst driven then actual plot driven like her earlier books. That is not to say that I didn't enjoy this book, I did, I just found that not a lot of things happened. Alec and Seregil have a fight, then they make up, they get captured and separated, the rhekaro is created they escape and are reuntied, then they argue some more, make up and make it home, the end. There is more to it than that, but I don't want to give too much away. It was still enjoyable, it was just with all that happened in just Luck in the Shadows alone, I felt just a bit disappointed with the lack of actual action.

I am more disappointed with the continuity errors that are present in these books. The big one deals with the manner that Alec's father dies. In the first book he died because he was sick and in this book he was killed in Ansengai's dungeons. I read on the author's Livejournal that once she was made aware of this she has corrected and is republishing her book, but still the error is there. There are others throughout both of her series. The most annoying ones are the ones that are only a few lines apart. I have come across two that I know of. One is in this book and there is another in Stalking Darkness. I hate continuity errors in the TV shows I watch, in my movies and in my books. With the amount of editing and whatnot I think there is no excuse for them.

Ignoring all that; I still liked this book. I wish the errors weren't there, but I can ignore them. It was harder in this book than the other ones however. There's also a lower quality of writing in this books than the earlier ones. It felt sometimes I was reading a fanfiction other than the story the author herself wrote.

Grade: C