1. Work on memorization. It needs to be memorized by Monday.
2. Look at the blocking.
3. Be careful not to turn your back to the audience.
4. Work on volume. I couldn't hear anything you were saying. It doesn't matter how well you deliver the line if I can't hear you.
5. Don't stand onstage when you aren't onstage. I saw you standing at the edge for about the first 5 minutes today, and it is very distracting.