1. Don't forget to draw your sword when you "Charge!!!"
2. That was much better on the bugle. Try to get a bit more volume.
3. Take the papers from Mortimer when you go to put on your "signing clothes."
1. The glasses thing worked very well. I'm not sure how I feel about them being in your vest pocket. Try putting them in your shirt pocket instead.
2. Pay attention to your entrences. You have a lot of little 10 second spots. Be careful not to mix them up.
3. Work a bit more on the "Bully!" Put a bit more umph behind it.
1. Today seemed to go pretty well for you. I enjoyed your character. Watch the volume. It only dipped in one place, but just keep it in mind.
2. Be careful not to turn your back to the audience. Yet again, it only happened once, but be mindfull.
1.I've gotta say, I loved the glasses thing. That made me laugh out loud. You are deffinately finding your character. Keep trusting your instincts.
2. Volume was a little off today. I don't know if that had to do with the surgery thing or not. I am guessing that it did, because you have never had a volume problem before.
3.On the bugle call, I want a short LOUD blast. The longer quieter one is funny, but it just lasts too long and breaks up the dialoge. Plus, it isn't loud enough for it to be believable that it would disturb the neighbors. I want students that came to the play to nap to jump out of thier skins:)
4.My only other comment is on the "Bully!" lines. I'm just not feeling it. It needs to be booming and glad.