Well, I was
going to make this into a long boring essay of my thoughts, BUT
due to a bright lightbulb going off in my head, I have decided to
have a message board. I am going to post some of my poems here,
and you may either, comment,,, or leave a poem of your own! Let's
share our creativity!
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Maybe you guys can help me... I don't have a title for this poem,,,, I am not sure what to title it... any thoughts?
| Tears form puddles on the sand Life stolen is acknowledged in fear Time stands still as blood joins tears The soul of a lover floats down to stare A cry breaks free to the mortal world Too late to stop an anguished sin An unforgivable hell-bent sin. The spirit is helpless, but tries to end The flow of life that wastes on the sand Escaping, a lover too tragic to live Accepting, a world too weary to give Two spirits yearn, unable to touch |
Other things: |
Hate Frozen walls
trap |
Oxymoron At the
telling of this tale The meaning,
I decided |
Remembrance Remembrance
causes pain |
Here are some Poems that I especially like.
The cremation
of Sam Mcgee
by Robert W. Service
There are strange things
done in the midnight sun Now Sam McGee
was from Tennessee, where On a
Christmas Day we were mushing our way And that very
night, as we lay packed tight in Well, he
seemed so low that I couldn't say no;
its my awful dread of A pals
last need is a thing to heed, so I swore There
wasnt a breath in that land of death, and |
Now a promise
made is a debt unpaid, and the And every day
that quiet clay seemed to heavy Till I came
to the marge of Lake Lebarge, and Some planks I
tore from the cabin floor, and I Then I made a
hike, for I didnt like to hear him I do not know
how long in the snow I wrestled And there sat
Sam, looking cool and calm, in the There are
strange things done in the midnight sun |
