| This Love Sh*t | |||||||
| In a way I want love, but then again I don�t want it All the flesh in me is satisfied for a minute Than in an instant I�m not on it Stay away from me! No� come back ...go away I need my space..though I miss you Excuse me, my misuse of these miss you's But I say them on the 1st verse through the interlude And the 2nd track I curse and try to diss u When we make up I scream u up from my mind through my soul Until it goes up to spirit Sometimes the heavens could hear it But love man, I swear I fear it; it scares me in two parts My yes side and no side make a decision which one holds the most pride Who how or when am I going to confide Storing thoughts in someone�s memory that I rather hide This love shit..this ..this love thang got me thinking this is a mind game thang Know me, show me, throw me on the bed and control me Make us one hun Make my flesh weak, until my trust is in your hands ready for your demise I see you through my distant eyes, in a photo of weeping tears that I pray u shed for me As u realize that the love we had felt more than just a gift It felt more like a surprise Look back baby check your memory We had a good thing going on before all these lies. Written by: Roberta M. Rosa Roro Productions � 2003 |
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| Okayplayer.com Freestyle Board comments on "This Love Sh*t" - Fuck Yeah! by: Snow_Flow - I stay away from love poems, cause they're mostly the same thing. Obvious exception being muse's love cypher.Ths piece was worthwhile. I dig the mixed signals it sends and I like its attempt to speak honestly with plain speech. by: delsbrothergeorge - This is lyrical, a real mental piece, self argument and wondering, and easily relatable. The end brings it together..explains the why-for of all the questions before, neatly. Great read, fun for the way love can make us so sonfused and very real for the thoughts by: lunaeco - ((Understood)) Love is a coin toss --heads or tails...indeed I felt this. by: PhotoSynthesis - its nice how you showed the push and pull and the contradictions of wanting and/or needing to be loved and in love. by: napiness - I've been there myself....tight piece!! by: Deepthought74 |
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