My apologies, I've been neglecting my writing duties...getting over consecutive cases of - stomach flu, common cold, laryngitis and topping thigs off with a bout of IBS that made me feel bloated like a beach ball; I've been a bit preoccupied ...

And the love of my life Rina's been sick with a cold too for the past few days, had to call in sick this morning:-(

On the other hand, the Iberogast (no plug intended, but...)I've been taking since yesterday has been helping!  I've never been a big believer in natural remmedies (most have 0 effect on me)but the Iberogast is helping, so it might change my attitude towards natural medicine...

The worst for me was on the 18th (sick as a dog on my birthday) where if felt like the cold bug and the IBS had conspired to make me feel miserable; fever, low energy, headache, scratchy throat, stomach feeling like it was on the verge of exploding...

Ironically it was the same day this web site was accepted in the Fan Fiction webring (which is why I only found out about it the next day).

What I did do is send the Preamble and first Chapter of my work in progress to my Cinematographer (and fellow cartoon geek ;-) )MJ for critique.  I'm hoping his point of view, input and constructive criticism can help me see whether or not I'm on the right track.

In his new incarnation (the non DC Comic wannabe version), Reverend Justice's temper is more evident; seemingly always on the verge of crossing the line if he feels Blue Angel is disrespected or in any danger.

Crazy Sterling has to be the best thing to happen to the story though; he's the wild card, the loose cannon; one who would actually get an orgasm from pitting the various rival crime families against each other and watching the carnage.

I have an idea on how to conclude the story and leave it open to a sequel.  Creating a new playing field for Joey "Reverend Justice" Luca was a challenge...now I'm running with it!