Now on with the reviews.
Simba- During this afternoon, I had the pleasure to find this fanfic about Harry and Hermione after reading it I have absolutely no criticisms to make to it. It is in all ways captivating. It shows a view of Hermione that none of the readers have stopped to think about. We always see different Hermiones, the academic Hermione, the good girl Hermione, the well-behaved Hermione, the good-friend Hermione. But we never see, or stop to look at,the loving-needing Hermione And that is exactly what Phoenix was able to acheive in this piece of writing. He is able to characterise Hermione correctly, making her look herself, not defornming her image by adding more things. The piece is full of feelings, which are not tedious at all. He was able to acheive a balance between the shortage and the surplus. the same mechanism was applied to style, choice of words, and mainly plot. For he did not incurr into any field that can be considered irreal or irrational His writing was 100% compatible to the origional story as we know it today.
Making this whole thing short, I've got nothing but praises for this young writer who was able to attain a level and quality of writing which is very difficult indeed for people like me.
Please keep on the hard work.
Best wishes, Simba
meteorgarden89- This is one of the best stories I've read. Maybe you'd consider continuing it?
AJ Taylir- *sniff* even i'm crying! ^_^ a good sad fic!
Christmas1- I really like this story. I too think that all things never end happy and this fanfic really shows that. Its very realistic, sorta reminds me of sad poetry. I loved it, though I route more for Ron and Hermione than Hermione and Harry but it was great all the same.
orligurl88- Oh, poor Hermione. I'm a Ron/Hermione person, but that was sweet and ::sniff:: sad.
Wraith6- FREAK... :[
hyuinn- was this the end of the fic? I thought it was good, but too sad. We didn't hear anything from Harry's POV.
Slim- omg...IM GONNA CRY NOW!! Wah!! (*runs away*) lol. that was really good.
dupeydog- i found myself reading the last 3 paragraphs over and over again. it was well done. as a Hermione/Harry person, the ending struck a nerve. please continue with the story.
Psy_Girl- sniff...cant you just go on...and make it a happy ending?? pleasee!! please! You know that Harry wont just stand there! please!!
Tori- Definately good! It's soo true. All I can say is that I was in tears just reading it.
OceanGirl28- OMG that was SO sad! I practically cried! I usually HATE sad fics but this one was great. Totally well written. I loved it. :)