The Incredible Adventures of Spaceman Ned

[Scott Watrous and Brian Scilabba]
there is a comic strip Ive been drawing for and I think that it would make an exellant video game. Its called The Incredibale Adventures of Spaceman Ned ned is of cource the main character but there are many others you can be. The style would be that of Starwars Shadows of the empire, with the shooter aspecs and the flying aspects however there would be mutch more content. The main thing is put as many people or units as you can onto a screen powered by the X Box. There would be many levels with very high replay valur because there would be almost no linearity ie. a giant city with multipe allies routs and paths. buildings to go into and tons of padestriens. The plot is already down. ned is flying a small scout ship only to be gunned down by an enemie patrol, he crashes onto the enemie planet and is captured end level one. lv.2 ned blows open a wall and escapes running through a large complex. he leaves and end lv.2. lv.3 Ned comes across another complex and you must sneak into the garage without waking anyone. you blow open a door and punch a guard. end lv 3. lv 4 you are on a cool hover bike(looks like a jetski with laser turret on back) and are being chased by martettins(the enimie race.) you fight them off in a long canyon in the desert. and fly across off of the dark regeion you are on whitch is magnettic so the bikes crash without it the martettins though gety stuck to the still magnettic ground. end lv 4. you are piked up by a rescue squad that on the way to the ship is attacked (all in the cutscene) you land on the mother ship and are promoted. end mission 1 mission 2, lv 1 you order a bombing run on martetta and then play starts when your bombing squad gets a visit from an enemie fleet you take controll by doing a real time strategy mission where you control ships and fighters positions and give them commands. after a scertan point you see a cut scene where a pilots squad is seperatted from their platoon and must fight some baddies for a while before they can get back. end lv1. lv2 you fly about as col. willham and destroy ships for a while. Then when a good chungk of baddies are space junk you see a small martettin battleship it unloads its ships. and you must blow it up. after it is floating away as little pices youre squad finds a vessel and you land on itend lv2. lv 3 ned discovers he has lost many ships and has no choice but to inveade the planet so level 3 shows ned with many squads of troops on the desert surface. they advance through a few fire fifgts when they see nothing but desert as far as they can see. so a short cutscene shows ned hop into an ATT whitch looks like Red Alerts APC's but with a lser turret on top. while another group goes on to another objective. Ned is in the turret and you must shoot at invading sloops and martettin battle tanks. after a good two minuts of driving there is a city in the distance you approach it and a cut scene shows all of the ATT's let everyone out.end lv3. lv4 There are atleast 100 people there some good some bad and you must shoot as well. when all is said and done you get to see a cutscene that shows everyone charge the city and start lv. 5 in level 5 there are many people there. most are bystanders but some turn hostile. shooting citizens in the city is not good and deducts from your score. if you kill to many you are pulled away by fellow soldiers and the mission starts over. the object is get to the capital in the capitol city and command the officials to surrender.when you domission 5 is over mission 6 has the other group in a simmilar situation but with considerably less men. They must get to and capture a giant ship port with your men and signal for reien forcements. when they find no human help is available they hear that the great order of the elders has a flagship in the area and witll send troops and supplys to aid segals troops.mission 6 ends with the giant ship landing at the giant port and depositing its troops. lv. 7 segal and the elders take the large city and then the rest of martetta is considered safe. a cutscene shows Ned getting promoted yet again to fleet commander (see the pattern every mission Ned grows in rank.) end mission 2 I havent got all of mission 3's details but will havethem in a bit. Ill mail back soon!

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