OK so here is this poem ive been working on for like 2 years, this is still a rough draft tho... its about this dream i had, keep in mind it was only a dream, but it was the most vivid dream ive ever had, and im on this medication that makes my dreams really vivid anyway.


A dream
So good, and then, so bad
and in the dream within
a fantasy was had.


I knew it was a dream
and since it wasnt real
I consented, agreeing-
it was no big deal


Then all the sudden it wasnt a dream
although of course it was
and those faces, all those faces
staring just because.


The clever ploy that they had planned
had smoothly seemed to work
and for a moment, though I was aghast
I was no longer a dork.


How could their faces show no regret
when inside I felt like this
my utter aloneness seemed to clash
with their self-congratulatory bliss


These people were not my friends at all
they had plotted against me and won
no one cared how upset I was
they were having their fun.


At the party it was a joke
the humor I failed to see
so upset, so disbelieving
how could they do this to me?


I had been so naive
and actually thought he cared
when deep down he schemed
just because he'd been dared


Now here I was broken down,
my face streaked with tears
all I could feel around me
were their smiles and cheers.




Like everything on this webpage, if you havea  question about something, ASK!  If you want me to explain part of this dream, or one of the quotes, or something like that, id be glad to.  I'm hoping to write more poems and put them online, if people like this one. 
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