2/9/03
English 204w

Fiction Exercise #1
The year I turned sixteen was one I will never forget. From the moment I woke up in the morning until the eve before my seventeenth birthday, I remember every moment of my sweet sixteen. I remember my older sister leaving for college that year, and my baby brother succumbing to the life draining effects of leukemia. I remember my father leaving my mother because she had been cheating on him. But I still blame him. He was the one that beat her, she was trying to make a new life for herself, but since my father wouldn�t agree to a divorce, sneaking behind his back was her only option, and it normally got her a black eye whenever he happened to come home in a drunken stupor.

A lot happened the year I turned sixteen. My grandmother �retired� to a nursing home since my family didn�t have the time to care for her. Imagine the scene: being forced out of your own home by your children because they�your own flesh and blood�can�t seem to make the time to take care of you. Grandma died shortly after she moved out of the house. It seems though everything I�ve told you so far passed in a blur, the moment that sticks out in my mind the most, the one true instant that I remember being truly happy was the night my brother died.

Ironic isn�t it? Well, that isn�t the whole story. Up until this time, I was having a decently good year. My birthday had passed on Valentine�s day, same as it did every year. Only this particular year was different. When I came home, my brother was no where to be found. He was in the hospital. To make a novel into a paragraph, his fight was long and died not long after he was diagnosed. But it wasn�t the struggle he ensued, it was the night we buried him that is burn into my mind that has made me remember it as the best moment of my life.

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