The Betrayal of Love

Hilary a tall and slender girl entered onto the boat. She had blonde hair and blue eyes.
She wore a white peasant top that said, “100% Sugar” and a blue mini-skirt.

She lived in New York City. She was sweet, intelligent and very kind. She hopped she would meet new people and make friends on this cruise. But something told her that the cruise wouldn’t just be fun . . .

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A girl with short strawberry blonde hair leaned on the bar on the edge of the boat, her long hair blowing in her face. She wore a strapless green crop top, with really short jean shorts, with cuts on the sides.

She was coming from Washington D.C. All she could think about at the time was how much she hated her twin sister, Linda for ruining her latest relationship.

Next to the long haired girl stood her twin, Linda. Identical to her sister but with perfect curls, in her short strawberry blond hair, and unnatural pink streaks.

She and her sister were always craved about parties. She was the wild one of the two. Some people even called her ‘the evil twin’.

She wore only enough clothing to cover her chest, and an extremely mini, min-skirt. She knew her sister, Lisa was mad at her for ruining her recent relationship with . . . what was his name? Josh . . . Justin . . . something like that. Gosh they weren’t even serious. And gosh it was only a joke. Why did her sister have to be such a goody good?

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A chestnut haired boy handed his ticket to the usher, as he entered the boat. He never wanted to go on this trip in the first place, but his girlfriend, Megan forced him to.

Unfortunately she wasn’t able to come with him. Chris wore a navy blue top, and baggy jeans. And if you were even able to get his to take off his glasses you would find piercing blue eyes, which could mesmerize you. Not even his girlfriend was able to see his dazzling eyes often.

This trip better be worth it . . .

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“Love ya, Gorgeous!” A dirty-blonde haired girl said to the usher as she entered onto the boat. She took off her sunglasses to reveal light brown eyes deeply covered with make-up, like the rest of her face.

Beaky wore a tight sweater that in big letters said “SEXY” with an even tighter strapless belly top that had the playboy bunny sign on it. She wore extremely tight jeans so that you could even see her thong when she bent down.

Becky was on the chubby side, but it was hard to notice with her tight clothes. She was obviously the player type, and was looking for some ‘fun’ on the cruise.

“Now first things first, let’s go find some cute guys to share a room with,” She said to herself.

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A slim and tall girl handed her ticket to the usher and started to board the ship with her luggage.

She had long light-brown hair and looked like a rocker-chink. She had dazzling green eyes you couldn’t miss with a beautiful complexion.

She wasn’t a pretty-preppy kind of girl by the way she dressed. No make-up with a simple tight plain navy blue t-shirt. She wore gray sweat-pants with cool diesel running shoes.

She accessorized herself with wristbands and a cool rocker belt. You could tell she played the electric guitar because she was carrying a guitar case.

Her name was Katie and she lived in a small town in Wisconsin. ‘I hope I made a good choice taking this cruise,’ Katie thought to herself.

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Then entered a tall, cool, handsome and hottest guy ever. His name was Matt. He was your dream date with his muscular looks, great personality and his irresistible charm. He was everything a girl wanted cause for one thing, he was really kind and had a great sense of humor.

His perfect hair and eyes stood out. He wore a yellow T-shirt with cargo pants. Only one girl was going to win his love on this cruise. But who was it going to be?

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“I hate you!” A girl with light orange hair whispered harshly to her younger brother with red hair and dark brown eyes. The girl, Marlene wore a bareback, pink, with flowers on it, and a tight mini-skirt.

Her brother, Alex had on a baggy green top, with baggy jeans, and a chain hanging from his belt. Neither of them wanted to leave their cozy mansion in New Jersey. But their mother forced them saying, “you two never do anything together anymore.” And Boom! Here they are on a boat to their doom.

Marlene was still getting over her heart break. And here she is with her annoying brother. But the worst part is, he was aloud to bring his friend Joey!

“My life is ruined . . .” She said to herself.

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A guy with chocolate colored hair, and honey brown eyes gave his ticket to the usher. He wore a cheetah skin coat. Around his neck was a golden chain, and on it said, “PIMP”. He had geno tight white pants. Fancy black shoes, and in one hand he held a golden staff.

He was going to inherit playboy mansion.
“Yo! Ma brother! Any hot hoes on this boat?” He asked.

“I’m sorry Mr. I don’t know what you mean,” the usher replied.

“That’s okay, I’ll find out for myself, and please call me Mike.”

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“Thanks . . .” A girl with straight black hair said to the usher with attitude, and annoyance in her voice.

Her skin was pale, but you could tell it wasn’t natural. On each ear she had 3 piercing, and one on her left ear had a earring on her top ear loupe. She wore tight clack clothes. And on her top in red letters it said, “DEVIL”.

As she walked pass the usher, and her top lifted, you could see the image of a back raven on her thigh. It was necessary since her name was Raven.

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“So, where’s my room?” A guy dressed as a skater/ punk asked. He was wearing a backwards cap with a baggy T-shirt and low baggy jeans. With his luggage, he was carrying a skateboard.

He was obviously the skater type that was single and looking for a girl. Jake was laid-back and didn’t listen to any rules but he was still really sweet.

“There should be a list of the rooms and roommates beside the captain’s office,” the usher answered.

“Thanks,” Jake replied back.

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A guy with light brown hair, and misty blue eyes stepped abored the boat, he was dressed as any casual boy would dress. But really he was a nice guy, but whenever you bring him to a party with beer, or any kind of alcohol watch out! Joey never really liked boat rides, but his friend was so desperate . . .

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Michael looked up at the boat he was boarding. He seemed like a simple enough guy, but really there was more to him then meets the eye.

You take one good look at him, and you have memorized the meaning of hot, cute, sexy, adorable, and irresistible. He had the most gorgeous aqua greenish kind of eyes. He was one of those people with an attitude, who never really smiled or laughed or did anything . . . or was he?

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“Bye Erin, baby!” A girl yelled to a handsome young man who was boarding the a boat. He was partier, obsessed with dancing and drinking. That’s also why he got stuck with Olivia, his so called ‘girlfriend’. He hated all of her, even the thought of her made his sick.

But he didn’t have the guts to tell it to her. This was his chance to get away from her for a while. To live it up like he used to . . . before he meat her.

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Qleo-chan: Hello I posted up the prologue of the story me and my friend are making, we started in the end of February but decided to post it up recently.

So if it gets a lil confusing it’s cuz two ppl r writing it.

But I think all in all its good. Plzz R+R!!!!

Well if u’re reading this then that mead u did the first r now do the rest!
Hope u injoy the story, I’ll bring out the second chapter soon!!!