| Reviewer | Date | Chapter | Type |
| Mitzi | 2002-09-16 | 1 | Signed |
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| This one was very very good...However I dun think Pietro really likes his father that much...but on the show he saves him, but in the comic...it's just confusing. >.@ I've issued a challenge for all pietro fic writers. ^_~ Try a songfic about pietro/magneto, with the song in question being dead bodies everywhere by Korn. Now THERE'S some angst. Heeeell yeah. Hang on and I'll find the lyrics for ya. Come on, step inside, and you will realize. Tell me what you need, tell me what to be. What's your vision? You'll see, what do you expect of me? I can't live that... lie. Hate! I sing my words, I'm fucked at dealing, with your life's dead bodies everywhere. You! Really want me to be a good son. Why? You make me feel like no one. Let me strip the plain, let me not give in. Free me of your life, inside my heart dies. Your dreams never achieved, don't lay that shit on me. Let me live my... life. Hate! I sing my words, I'm fucked at dealing, with your life's dead bodies everywhere. You! Really want me to be a good son. Why? You make me feel like no one. You want me to be, something I can never ever be! You want me to be, something I can never ever be! I sing my words, I thought that didn't, (?_? I don't understand this part, this is what the lyrics site said...eh, go figure) with your life's dead bodies everywhere. You! Really want me to be a good son. Why? You make me feel like no one. Dead bodies everywhere! (repeat Dead bodies line 6 more times) there yew go. ^^ It kinda helps to have heard the song before. o.O; So it might help to download it. But, you might not even be accepting my challenge, in which case, disregard everything I have previously said completely. -_-; | |||
| Lady Eternal | 2002-06-05 | 1 | Signed |
| This almost seems like an interlude for Bittersweet, during the time when Pietro was closeting himself away from Lance and the others... no pun intended! Argh!@ I've been writing Lance too much; I'm starting to act like him. Anyway, this is adorable. Pietro definitely needs some TLC, as does all of the Brotherhood, really. They're abandoned, lost, hurting children in need of someone's love, even if it must be between each other. How's the twin fic coming? Once again, my dear, excellent story. I wanna read Ch. 28, dammit! ::cranky, contrary expression:: I need my Bittersweet fix. Write me! | |||
| Snoopy | 2002-04-20 | 1 | Signed |
| :( WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! ::Sniffle:: That was sooo sad. But Sweet. Sad but sweet. Plz write more stories. PLEEEEEEAASE! I'll be your best friend for eva and eva? Oooo, oooo, I know! I'll... GIVE YOU CHOCOLATE! ::maniacal giggle:: NEwayz, kool fic, very sad... Luv Snoopy :) | |||
| Imhotep Ardeth Bey | 2002-04-17 | 1 | Signed |
| i downloaded the song, and MAN is it pretty...i mean WOW, tis is really deep and understandaBLE. uh huh i mean WOW. *dreamy sigh* yay...i REALLY like this! | |||
| Gale | 2002-04-16 | 1 | Signed |
| Awwwww *happysqueaky* This is so good. Please follow this up. | |||
| yami no hikari | 2002-04-16 | 1 | Anonymous |
| *sniff* Damnit magneto get back to your family where you belong!!!! | |||
| Silentdemon | 2002-04-16 | 1 | Signed |
| good job. id like to hear that song some day 2. well keep it up! | |||
| SailorWade | 2002-04-16 | 1 | Signed |
| Awww! so Sweet!!!!! | |||
| Blood Roses (once DarkFire | 2002-04-15 | 1 | Signed |
| Awww...I got a question. Why does everyone think that Pietro *likes* his dad? Probably cause of the comics...nevermind. I just made no sense..that was sad. You really like those song-fics don't ya? ^_^. I'm liking what I'm seeing, more stories coming out of ya. Keep Going!! | |||
| batE | 2002-04-15 | 1 | Signed |
| Arrrgh! How dare you?!? How dare you!?!?!? Already at work and ont he verge of tears, and I read this and it all comes out ;_; And there's no sweet Pietro RL-clone to kiss it better ::pouts:: Aw, man . . . the ANGST. Pietro emoting . . . he cares about bastard Magneto even if bucket head is off trying to conquer some other barren piece of weirdness (I mean, really .. . Asteroid M? The little secret installation in the Sahara? The Savage Lands? Come on, Maggie . . . stop being a recluse and step out into the liiiiight.) O.o. Right. Anyways, Lancey is there to hold and snuggle our speedster cutie all night long! Yay! So take THAT you deadbeat freak Magneto. Ok. I have problems. I need tissues. Thanks SO very much psycho b for making my mascara run ::glomps:: | |||