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ReviewerDateChapterType
Silentdemon 2002-05-01 1Signed
uum good good
quicksilver-daniels 2002-05-01 1Signed
hi!realized i didnt review this story. its very, good, but sad for Evan. Maybe he and Pie can have an affiar behind Lance's back? It seems sad that Evan is alone. But the story is really good though
Imhotep Ardeth Bey 2002-04-17 1Signed
yaaaayyy Burandii got reveiwing back!yaaay! woo hoo! i like this fic, im glad evan is chasing pietro for once, so many fics have it the other way around. yah. thats about it.
Taiorami` ([email protected] 2002-04-15 1 Anonymous
Well, Goddess B, that was very creepy, morbid and quite warped, and yet...it made sense. But I have to be honest, I so don't feel bad for Evan, cause I don't like Evan. *Shrug* Might be his lack of purpose in Evo. Maybe?!?! But anyway, I did like this far too much for my failing sanity. Which means I have to go and stared at the wall until I get back to that place where I can be in polite company again.

Your stories make me a little wacked. Be proud. You are a kick ass writer. *Sigh* I don't know if I should hate you or hug you.

I won't hug you though, you might find that strange. So I'll smile and silently curse your talent. (Damn you!)
casey   2002-04-13 1 Anonymous
a little heady? hmmmm.... hehe... YAY!! Evietro rules. I like... morbid and angsty:)
FeatheredQuill 2002-04-11 1Signed
o.O....Ooooooooooo!!!!! I likeies!!!
And I see what you mean bout the song and Spyke. Total match.

Now on to bigger and better things. I see the torment of the box is working.
So its killin you huh? Nah i guess i don't want you to die so i just tell you right
now whats in the box. Okay ready for this its--mmmmfmmfmmfmmfmfmmfmm

My muse: Sorry but the contents of the box can not be reveiled at this moment
in time. They are to important and besides i want to see you squrm MWAHAHAHAHAHA

::struggling,kickin:: mmmmfmfmmfmm mfmmfmf mfmmmfmffmffffmmf

mm: Don't worry i'lll let you go......Eventually!

mmmmf fmfmffm fmmmmfmfmfmffm

mm:Only if you promise not to give away our secret.

::pause, silence::

mm: Come on i've still got a few chapters before breaking it out. You can't tell
yet. You want suspence don't you? Just trust me!

mmmfmmf mmf

mm: yes me.

mmmfmmf mfmmfm fmmf

mm:what do you mean you can't trust me? Of course you can.

mmmf ffmmmf

mm:good i'm letting you go know but on squeak in the wrong conversational direction
and.......

Grrrrrr.....Okay glad to be able to talk freely now. ::underbreath:: i knew i gave him
too much sugar today. ::loudly:: Oh well guess i can't tell you. My extreme appoligies.

mm: Now about chapter four.

oh great look what ive started. Better get out a pen. Guess i gotta start writin. See ya!
and if i didn't mention already Fissure Fic.

mm: u-u blahblahblahblahblah deee blah ---sorry these words have been changed to blah language
to secure the safety of this fic. Thank you--- blah be beee dee blah blahden

'-'.. ::shh im trying ta write::
Sky_Angel ([email protected] 2002-04-10 1 Anonymous
PSYCO THERAPY!!! evan needs help!!! has he really like P that long!!! you'd think he'd get over it...but then again ;(
i like the stroy it was diff but to be honest kinda creeped me out abit ohh well if Bittersweets anything to go by Chapter 1 is spose to be like that ;)
***SKIPZ RULE***
mass-destruction 2002-04-09 1Signed
okay now that was scary.. good scary... uh, write some more?
maxine mcginnis 2002-04-08 1Signed
Wow! One of the best Evietros out there, next to Hate to Love You, Snowy Season, Why I Hate Cupid and Admirer. You have a real talent. I know you tend toward the Lance/Pietro end, but you should write more Evietro! :)
Blood Roses (once DarkFire 2002-04-08 1Signed
Whoa....I think I agree with that other reviewer. You're really good. I'm going to be completely truthful, I used to try and avoid slash...So sue me. And your turning me into a Pietro/Lance fan...I'm still not a fan of Evietro even thought I can imagine Evan stalking Pietro like that. >_
Saralyn 2002-04-08 1Signed
Ooh, I like the song. It fits really well. And, um, the stalker-type Evan might appeal to my desire (as a writer) to mess with the characters. Alright, it appeals a whole lot. Which is why I loved the fic. Fun all around.
hana   2002-04-08 1 Anonymous
^^
Cherry Drop 2002-04-08 1Signed
Your right this song screams stalker. Awww poor Evan, he'll just have to go find himself some other object of affection, 'hey Evan how about Scott?' heh heh
7 years and Lance & Pie-Pie are still going strong, yay!
It doesn't suck silly, i luv it :)
batE 2002-04-08 1Signed
You already know I think this rules. I love the stuff you added. The way you write Evan's emotions was really incredible. Guess my faves list is getting another occupant ^_^
Medusa171   2002-04-08 1 Anonymous
that was weird!!! lol, but cool. and while i'm not sure I would hav picked Evan to be the stalker (I probably would have picked jean o.O) it worked.
Kyra Belle 2002-04-08 1Signed
O.O... Very good.

This gives off a definite 'Mr. Stalky Man' vibe.


Kyra Belle
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R   2002-04-08 1 Anonymous
Very nice... you've given this one a better dimmension than the other.. perhaps you needed a mental vacation.
SailorWade 2002-04-08 1Signed
OMG!!! How could Darren Hayes write that song? It's SOOOOO morbid and creepy, yet SOOOO right for this story. I was so afraid Petey would see Evan at the end though. But come on who wouldn't want Pietro!!! I usually only like Evietro's where they both like each other, but I like this one. Guess your just a great writer Psyco B, didn't like Lancetro before 'Bittersweet' either!!!!
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