WARNING: HARDCORE LEMON/SLASH/YAOI/WHATEVER = Graphic Boy/Boy sex -- you have been warned. No flamey me. :P

Continuation of the “big, bad bedroom scene!” Woohoo! More of Pietro and Lance swapping bodily fluids! Yay! More slashy, smutty goodness here to rock your world! ^_~ Although I am a little disappointed to have received my first flame. At least, I think it was a flame... yeah. Couldn't really tell... Darn! ^_~ I shoulda known I'd get the first when it came down to the nitty-gritty smut... but I refuse to wimp out and delete it, because I really want an accurate reviews list, sooo... it will remain, in all it's confusing glory! :D (Please, people, if you feel it absolutely necessary to flame me, do it in a way I can understand! Psycho B is retarded (or you would think) and cannot decipher your cleverly worded comments when they are done this way. Thankies! Or... you could just not read it. That actually makes more sense, but...)

You may want to go back and re-read chapter ten, just for continuation's sake. (Yeah, right -- you just want them to re-read the smut! Go on, admit it, Psycho B! Yeah, so? It's not like they don't want to! I don't hear any of `em complaining!) ^_~ And this chapter (if it can even be called that due to the embarrassing shortness) is really more of a continuation of the scene from the last couple chappys... more like a chaplet! But I need to break up the sex stuff, because if I sit down and write a long, drawn out smut scene, my brain will implode and all coherent thoughts will be squished to death! Resulting in... writer's block! And we wouldn't want that, now would we? :D Honestly, though, when combined, the sex scenes equal out to be fairly average in length, so it's not like the entire story is devoted to smut... it just looks that way! :D

And response to... (don't bother reading unless you've reviewed/read the reviews recently)
*DarkFire: Yeah, no door. I tried to reason with the little punks, but they were far too wrapped up in each other to notice or care. :D Toddles is already semi-traumatized, but I think he and especially Fred need some serious therapy-necessitating visuals... ^_~
*batE: Hee hee! Costume bulges are fun! XD Totally agree on the “latent homosexual feelings” thing -- but depending on how you view it, it does make anything else you do (like the fanart my mother undoubtedly knows about now, since she must have read the last chappy's updated A/N's) seem “off” somehow... Ah, well. Can't please everyone 100% of the time, so you gotta please yourself! (That sounds wrong, too, come to think of it...) Have fun on vacation! :D
*Kelly: Bookmarks are definitely a double edged sword -- they're helpful little buggers, but at the same time, they get you in more trouble... at least my bookmark of Ramsey's fic is more or less “straight” than the blatant “gay porn” I've been writing, but... eh. Whatever! And thank you for putting me on favorites!! My statistics page still says I am on no one's faves, but I checked, and I was there! So take that, stupid little stats page! You don't know so much! (Although this is probably because I am too cheap to pay for ff.net's complete services, and that's why it won't tell me anything... ::sigh::)
*SailorWade: Umm... we'll see... :D Why shouldn't Toddles and Freddy get some therapy-necessitating visuals? Therapy is fun! XD
*casey: So many peeps liked the “Little Pietro” thing, I may just have to bring it back! ^_~ I can so picture you doing a “Mr. Burns” with the “excellent” thing -- coolies! Simpsons rule! :D
*Cherry Drop: Another wonderful person putting me on favorites! I love it! :D Don't sweat the “semi-normal” thing -- normal people are boring! Only semi-normals and crazies (like Psycho B) are any fun, so... be crazy! Be free!
*Medusa171: Uh... I'm not sure if that was a flame or a compliment, or a bit of both, but, umm, yeah. Gagging yet asking me to continue? -_-;;; ::is confused:: I do warn in the summary AND at the beginning of each chapter what is involved, so it's your own fault if you don't wanna read this stuff -- it's not like I don't give adequate warning... Well, whatever, I guess! :D

Disclaimer: As if! No, really, if you actually believe I own any of this (makes grand sweeping gesture) then I have some prime swamp land down in Florida you may be interested in... No, seriously. I don't own anything. (Duh?)



Chapter eleven: The Wait Is Over! Part Two



Pietro Maximoff was not a mean boy. Okay, maybe he was on occasion, but not that mean. He knew that Lance hadn't yet been granted the opportunity to enjoy his own release; he'd only helped Pietro find his. And what a release it had been -- that was the single most excellent experience of his young life. So far. The night was still young.

Pietro was still straddling Lance's hips, his erection pointing at Lance like an accusing finger. A very large finger, that is. Very, very large, Lance noted, mentally grinning like an idiot. Costume bulges are fun! Wait, this must be why we always lose in battles against the X-Geeks! I'm too busy checking out Pietro's package in that skin-tight outfit to fight properly! Yeah, that's it! Lance's own hard-on was being smothered beneath Pietro. Apparently, the speed demon was only just realizing this. Pietro moved his hips slightly, evoking a low moan from the earth-shaker. Lance wanted, needed more than just the slight, sweet friction he was getting now. Lance made a grab for Pietro, and pulled the fast one up towards his face. Pietro, in reply, let out a small yelp, which was swallowed up by a deep moan of intense pleasure as Lance popped Pietro's penis into his mouth once again. Pietro couldn't stand it -- it felt almost too good. So before he could lose himself completely to Lance's manipulations, Pietro pulled away, gasping for air.

Lance didn't much like the rejection Pietro was affording him. He sat up suddenly, making another grab for Pietro. All he succeeded in doing was entrapping himself further. Lance could feel Pietro's member bobbing against his stomach. The white-haired boy's head dropped back; eyes closed, lips parted. Just that small bit of contact did that? Lance wondered. This boy is abnormally responsive. Oh, yes. He was going to have fun with this.

Lance placed his hand behind Pietro's head, tilting the speedster's face into a position more to his liking. He rained kisses on Pietro's face; stopping to tenderly kiss each closed eyelid, pausing to run his tongue along the outer ridge of his ear, his hot breath tickling Pietro in a most pleasant way. Pietro couldn't help but think, amidst the torrent of new sensations being played upon his body, that this was supposed to be Lance's time; Lance's turn. But Lance was, again, making it Pietro time. Pietro didn't enjoy feeling guilty, even a little, so he turned to settle the score.

Pietro pushed Lance away. Before he even had a chance to complain, however, Pietro had worked his tongue into Lance's mouth. Something about Pietro tasting himself when he kissed Lance aroused him to no end. Lance tried repeatedly to take command of the situation, but Pietro was too quick to allow Lance to succeed. When he felt a hand grabbing, he pushed it away. If Pietro sensed an arm moving, he pinned it back down to the bed. This is Lance's time, Pietro had to remind himself. He would get another turn. But now was Lance time.

Pietro finally left Lance's mouth, and went on exploring the many other wonderful body parts that his new lover had to offer. Pietro thoroughly enjoyed his stay at Lance's neck, and promised himself to go back real soon. The collarbone was next on the agenda, followed closely by the shoulders and then, Lance's nipples. Funny, Pietro had never paid much attention to his own, but when Lance had been toying with them earlier, he thought he'd died and gone to Heaven. So Pietro believed it only fair to return that particular favor.

He placed a gentle kiss on the left one, and lightly trailed his tongue across Lance's chest to the right. He took the hardening nub into his mouth and sucked gently. Pietro loved the feel of Lance arching beneath him, trying to push more of himself into Pietro's talented mouth. Whimpering for more... how could Pietro refuse?

To Be Continued...



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Am I the Smut Queen, or am I the Smut Queen? Should I change my pen name? (Don't quit your day job...) ^_~

Yeah, this chappy wasn't as good as the one before it (mostly due to the horrific shortness -- gah!) and won't be as good as the next one, either. Which sucks, but at least now you know there's another one on it's way! One that's better (and a bit longer, thank goodness!) dun dun DUN! :D

Reviews: Okay, if you're too bashful to leave detailed reviews on the page here, please email me! I LOVE hearing you guys' comments on the smut scenes -- these are things I desperately need feedback on! Is two whole chapters of smut too much? Too little? Just right? (Hopefully too little; I have another planned...) Did I vary my word choice enough for your liking (i.e.; not saying “cock” “dick” and “ass” every other word, etc.) and did I write it tastefully, as opposed to just plain explicit? I must know! I have no one else to be honest with me! Please let me know what you're thinking after reading this! Your feedback will help me do better on future love scenes! (Hint, hint.)

Summary continuation/update: Pietro wants Lance, Pietro makes plan, Pietro accomplishes plan (sort-of) Pietro changes/revises plan midway through, Lance acts on his own unknown-to Pietro-and-himself feelings, Lance blurts out mega serious but true three-words and kisses Pietro due to lack of caffeine, Lance feels guilty but relieved, Pietro freaks out, Todd blabs to Rogue (implied), Pietro confides in Rogue, Rogue comforts Pietro, Pietro goes home to sort things out with Lance, who is taking Mystique's door off it's hinges to gain access to the possible money/jewels/valuables inside so they can fix up the house, Pietro takes over and gets the door off in five seconds, Lance is impressed and says so, Pietro brushes it off and apologizes for being a retard earlier, Lance says it's okay, Pietro jumps Lance and, well, you know... and now they've made it to the bedroom! And they're still there! :D

I noticed something: almost every single paragraph begins with either “Pietro” or “Lance.” All of `em! Nifty! :D

No trivia/cool quote(s)/crazy X-Men and/or Brotherhood related thing I do (so ya'll can laugh at me)/random category thing! (TM) today (again) because, well, uh... ::runs away to avoid having to give a reasonable excuse:: ::but then runs back just to say...::

REVIEW! I COMMAND YOU! :D

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