Coolies! The "big, bad bedroom scene" for real this time! ^_~ And I changed the title of the last chapter because it was stupid and I didn't like it, so... yeah! New title! Rock on! :D AND these smutty chapters have spawned an evilly wicked little piece of fanart I would luv to share with ya'll, but sadly, I have no digicam and my scanner doesn't work (at least not for me... grr...) soooo... you can't see it! But it's actually really cool (even though you can't see anything inappropriate, it's very, umm... suggestive.) Can anyone recommend a really good digital camera? Cost is no object, just tell me what's the best! Then maybe someday you can see the nifty little fanart I made! :D
Umm, yeah, my mom totally found this story saved in Microsoft Works, and thinks I am some kind of freak for writing "gay porn." She even asked if I was gay... As if! Just because your nineteen year old daughter writes "gay porn" based on cartoon characters... well, that doesn't mean anything! That just shows total lack of trust between child and parent. Yeah, that's it. Mean mommy. Hmph. So, I dedicate this chappy to my mother, who now thinks I'm some kind of demented gay/lesbian loving freak! Luv ya mommy! ^_~ (On a serious note, no, I am not gay myself, I happen to like boys a whole lot. As you can tell from this fic... ^^;;;) This is the fruition of all those years of sleeping through AP English, journalism, and creative writing in high school -- gay porn. Oh yes -- I so earned that 4.0 GPA!! Hope you're real proud, Ms. Andersen! :P
Sorry if I killed the mood for ya'll! XD
And response to... (don't bother reading unless you've reviewed/read the reviews
recently)
*Cherry Drop: Yes, I did read your chappy in Ramsey's fic -- super nifty! Did you
request to be paired with Bobby, or did Ramsey come up with that all by himself?
*DarkFire: They're doing better'n getting somewhere -- they're there! :D
*Medusa171: Well, I'm glad someone appreciates my ramblings! Hmph.
Thankies! ^_^ But if you're not into the whole "gay porn" thing, maybe you should skip
the next couple chapters... even though they're tastefully done, in my humble opinion, it's
still kinda explicit... :D Wait, no! Still read it! It's actually really good, according to
everyone I've shown it to (which isn't a whole lot of people, but still...) But there's still
gonna be cute, pointless insanity chapters in the near future -- it's not going to turn into
some 24/7 smutfic like some people's... :D
*batE: ::drools:: Yeah, Lanciepoo with the whole "I'm a handyman/carpenter/service
worker" thing going on is simply irresistible! And I think Pietro would be inclined to
agree, no? :D If I ever see a Lance or Pietro look-alike in the real world, just change my
name to velcro! Even if real life Pietro did look a bit odd w/ the coloring... he'd still be
hella hot! ^_~ But now, Todd's tongue is an entirely different matter -- if I was licked by
a small, stinky boy with a massive, slimy green tongue, I don't think I'd react as well as if it
were, say, Pietro, but ya never know... some people might go for that, but...
:P
*Dead Man Curb: Interesting name ya got there... and don't worry! All will work out
eventually... (like in this chapter) so never fear! ^_^
*Alex Destine: I've been reviewing your fic in bits and pieces, so I don't scare myself by
committing to read the entire thing in one sitting... cuz I'm scared of commitment! Yes,
that's it! :D And I've been trying to include the parts I like from each chappy in the
reviews, cuz I know I like to know what other people liked, so... yeah. ^_~ Luv your
review L/P/You commentary!
*Quichi: ^_^ Workin' on it!
*michigandarlin: Pietro.... Lance...... ::drools:: If I actually drooled as much as I mention
in my fics/reviews, my keyboard would be waterlogged! :D
*Cherry Drop: Yummy mental pictures, indeed! Use the tongue thing delicately -- some
people might be a bit disturbed if you're a semi-normal person who all of a sudden goes
whacko and starts licking random people. But if you've got a freakish rep., go for it!
^_~
*casey greengate -- the snow ninja!: Only second best fave? Hmph! Let's see if we can't
change that, shall we? :D
Disclaimer: As if! No, really, if you actually believe I own any of this (makes grand
sweeping gesture) then I have some prime swamp land down in Florida you may be
interested in... No, seriously. I don't own anything. (Duh?)
As much as Lance was enjoying being pressed up against the wall in the hallway with
Pietro's tongue in his mouth, he knew that if Pietro was home from school, the other two
would be home soon as well. Lance forced himself to break the kiss, and looked into
Pietro's passion-glazed eyes. His lips were parted slightly, and he was breathing heavily.
"Bedroom..." Lance managed to choke out. The nearest bedroom being Mystique's newly
re-opened room, that was where the boys ended up. (They did not happen to notice the
fact that there was no door, and thus, they would be just as visible in Mystique's room as
they had been out in the hallway... But you try explaining that line of reasoning to
two lust-crazed teenage boys! ^_~)
By the time they made it to the enormous bed, they were each half undressed. Somehow, they had managed to do this virtually without breaking contact -- so far. Pietro's quick fingers unbuttoned Lance's fly and snatched the zipper down. Lance moaned as Pietro dropped to his knees and pulled down his pants. Gods, but he was taking his sweet time! Lance ran his hand over Pietro's downy-soft hair, his fingers entwining with the silky strands. He felt Pietro's hands go for the elastic waistband of his boxer shorts, then hesitate. He looked down to see Pietro staring up at him.
"Are you sure you want this? I mean, I just kinda attacked you out in the hallway there, and--"
Pietro's protests were cut short by a lusty kiss. Lance knelt down before Pietro, taking his chin in his hand and tilting the smaller mutant's head upwards to meet his eyes.
"Of course I want to be with you! Actually, I... I think I love you... but I'll stop if this makes you feel uncomfortable, even a little. Damn, I want you, but I want you to want me just as much." Lance's little outburst seemed to surprise himself just as much as Pietro. He looked at the slender youth for assurance, and the ashen-tressed boy smiled shyly. That was all Pietro needed to hear.
He brought his lips back to Lance's in a gentle, tentative kiss, almost seeming to ask permission with his every movement. Lance could feel the plush carpeting in Mystique's bedroom beneath the pads of his fingers as he held himself up in his semi-crouch. He didn't like the position; it required the use of both his hands to hold himself up, so Lance stopped, pushed back from Pietro and stood. He noted the hurt expression in his friend's eyes, mixed with the fear of rejection, and sought quickly to change that as he offered Pietro a hand in getting up. Thrilled by the fact that he wasn't being discarded, Pietro drew his arms around the neck of his new lover, standing on his tip-toes to make up for the height difference. He brought Lance's lips to his own, savoring the surprising softness.
They continued at the new, slower pace for a bit, Pietro's senses heightened all that much more due to the entrancing slowness. He felt like he was drowning in Lance. Yummy.
This time, Lance undressed Pietro. Slowly. Pietro shivered as more of his pale flesh was exposed to the chilly air. Lance toyed with Pietro's zipper, pulling it down painfully slowly. The feel of Lance's lips on the sensitive skin just below his navel was almost enough to push him over the edge. Lance stopped to dip the tip of his tongue in Pietro's belly button. Pietro moaned.
Lance knew this was the final step before everything changed forever. And Lance was loving it -- he knew right then that he wanted to be like this forever -- with Pietro. He wanted to lay down at night with Pietro; he wanted to wake up the morning after next to Pietro. He knew the thoughts running through his head were childishly saccharine, but he didn't care. This was like nothing he'd ever experienced before. And Lance wanted more. Much more.
Lance eased Pietro's shiny, blue, pinstriped satin boxers down his hips, freeing the straining erection within. He was unsure of what to do first, now that he was actually face to face with Pietro's "Little Pietro." Then all his years of watching porn with the older boys in the foster homes came rushing back to him. Lance knew what he must do.
Pietro was on his knees on the bed, back arched, as Lance took his first tentative licks of "Little Pietro." Pietro's hips jerked forward in response. Lance reached around to cup Pietro's buns lovingly, keeping the speedster more or less in place as he began his routine. Lance caressed Pietro, running his hands along the backs of Pietro's thighs, over his firm bottom, up along his back, and down his hips again, stopping every so often to tease his cleft with a tender tickle. Pietro was responding beautifully to Lance's ministrations. Lance had begun alternating his licking with gentle kisses, making sure to hit all the sensitive spots he knew so well.
This was more than Pietro could bear. Suddenly, a nanosecond after Lance fully engulfed the speedster's swollen member, Pietro came. Lance's eyes widened in surprise as the hot liquid shot into his mouth. Shocked as he was, he continued sucking, easing his rhythm to a stop. Pietro had collapsed onto the bed in exhaustion. Lance finished up with the soft kiss to Pietro's "Little Pietro" and laid down beside his lover. Wow -- I can actually call him that now, Lance mused mentally before he was cut off by Pietro pouncing on him. Lance stared at his new lover quizzically -- it was quite obvious to Pietro what the older mutant was thinking.
"You know I'm fast. Betcha didn't know that fast." Pietro smirked down at Lance from his position straddling the earth-shaker's hips.
"Your speed handles, uh, recovery time too?"
"Yep."
Lance grinned, nodding slowly as the confirmation fully dawned on him. "Nice..."
(Insert primo PietroSmirk (TM) here.)
"You're telling me?"
To Be Continued...
Summary continuation/update: Pietro wants Lance, Pietro makes plan, Pietro accomplishes plan (sort-of) Pietro changes/revises plan midway through, Lance acts on his own unknown-to Pietro-and-himself feelings, Lance blurts out mega serious but true three-words and kisses Pietro due to lack of caffeine, Lance feels guilty but relieved, Pietro freaks out, Todd blabs to Rogue (implied), Pietro confides in Rogue, Rogue comforts Pietro, Pietro goes home to sort things out with Lance, who is taking Mystique's door off it's hinges to gain access to the possible money/jewels/valuables inside so they can fix up the house, Pietro takes over and gets the door off in five seconds, Lance is impressed and says so, Pietro brushes it off and apologizes for being a retard earlier, Lance says it's okay, Pietro jumps Lance and, well, you know... and now they've made it to the bedroom! :D
No trivia/cool quote(s)/crazy X-Men and/or Brotherhood related thing I do (so ya'll can laugh at me)/random category thing! (TM) today (again) because, well, don'tcha think ya'll got enough? A full chapter of pure smut? I think I earned the right to slack off on this one. :P
Please review! Lance & Petey are damned curious as to how everyone liked it... Review if ya want an encore! (Hell, yes!) =^.^=