Exercise 3: Writing a Better Paragraph with Coordination

 

Directions: Revise the following paragraph to make it a better paragraph.

Coffee is one of those psychologically addictive substances and it tastes better than tea. Coffee can contain caffeine and it can be decaffeinated. In recent years, gourmet coffees have come on the market and now we have flavored coffees. These are more expensive than regular ground coffees and they are much better tasting. They have a deeper, richer flavor and they are more satisfying to the palate. We can drink French vanilla or chocolate raspberry and our tastes buds never get bored. We also have the choice of flavored creamers and creamers combined with flavored coffee beans seems a bit like overkill. The flavored coffees, however, are sometimes a waste of money and the flavoring ends up in the steam and not in the cup. The best solution is to buy a really good coffee and not one of those fancy flavored creamer, and add the flavored creamer. The flavored creamer adds the flavor we want, and we get a better cup of coffee for our money. Of course, this is what we do at home, and we also have those luscious coffees available at coffee houses. We can order a mocha and we can order a latte. We can also order weird combinations of coffee, chocolate, spices, and syrups to create the ultimate cup of coffee and we can get the best cup of coffee we can afford. We seem willing to pay for this service and coffee houses and latte bars are popping up all over the land. How about a cup of coffee?

 

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