Solar Revolution Notes

Chapter Ten: Stormy Forecasts Part Two

Now you know a significantly vaster amount of Celeste's past. The mysterious Jonathan, her parents problems, and Celeste's root to her problem of pushing people away; all of these have been revealed. I realized this took up half of this chapter, and I promise I won't do it again.
As mentioned before, I hate loose ends. While ones I create probably won't be tied up anytime soon, the key thing is they will be tied up. I think it is interesting how nobody (neither in the authentic SM world nor most fanfiction writers) mentions that the normal population has no memory of what happened before the scout's fight with Queen Beryl. So Greg was revived as a character to help introduce this idea. I have another major character who will be revived with this concept in mind, but you'll find out about it next chapter.
I did keep up with Hotaru's date with Brian. I'm so glad I didn't mess up the timing, cause I'd have to go back and rewrite it and etc. Not fun when you mess up like that. At the museum, there are three important foreshadowings. One, is that Rini is finally being treated as an equal with the other senshi. Scary, but then again, I hate characters who are dead weight. So she is actually an asset at times in fights (an even scarier concept), now that she lost her "Pink Sugar Heart Attack" and the stupid bell. The painting is another foreshadowing, though its significance won't be revealed until next season (sorry). And thirdly, Amy's focus on getting stronger will turn into an obsession. Whether it will succeed, that is the surprise.
The infamous They really are disturbing. You're probably wondering what on earth is wrong with Them. Not that they are native to earth. Just realize the following: They brought about Fauna's insanity. Which does give some indication that They too are insane. And you have no clue how crucial they are to the storyline. I can't tell you, though. =^ P
When I originally came up with the Evolites, I just kept working until I felt I had a decent number (turned out to be around 100). I also was originally going to develop most of them somewhat. I now realize how enormous of a feat that would be. That is how come Sebastian (Wasp) loved Honey Bee; it was going to be revealed and demonstrated. But now, I've come to the conclusion that at least one character in each Clan will be developed, and the rest will just have paragraphs describing their personalities in the character profiles. Once I get the time to complete the character profiles, that is. Which probably won't be for a while. Sigh.
There does seem to be strong evidence that Derek/DJ/SSW isn't as control of his situation as he would like to believe. I suppose he could be putting on an act, but then again, Raye did see SSW ensnared by a female fox (or vixen) in her vision.
With Raye's section, I can't bring myself to call her visions an invoking of spells. That is why I use the term spiritual energy instead of magic. Magic is too broad of a term which holds connotations that are undesirable for my current purposes. You'll learn the significance of the visions as the senshi do. Some you might predict, others you might not.
Stormy Forecasts is the title of this chapter because there is a lot of foreshadowing which doesn't seem to bode well for our heroines.
Annie and Monarch finally resolved their feelings. Now we got to wait and see if there are any repercussions.
Tara's section, I know it was silly to start off by putting the poll results. But it reinforces the point that M Butterfly revealing he is male to Annie was a big deal. And it is amusing, at least on my end. With the rest of the section, I'm hoping this makes Tara's motivation for her actions seem logical. Tara wasn't originally supposed to be a big character, but she evolved this way.
Natalie's section hopefully shows why she is associated with Snails. It is fun getting into her mind, though I truly despise her. She is almost as low on my likable list as Jared. What drastic measures will she take?
Quick question: Is Draco cunning enough to manipulate Fauna? Sure she has been a puppet before, and is returning to that status. But will She let Draco get away with his plans? Or would Fauna disrupt Draco's plans on her own.
---}Oh yeah, please don't send hate mail for Denaraconyul's unobtrusive part in this scene.
Advice I decided to repeat in every one of my notes here on out: pay attention to the details if you want to guess my foreshadowings. I rarely put in a detail just for the hell of it, though that is occasionally fun, I don't have the time to waste on superfluous minute aspects. So if you read something and it seems like it has been mentioned before, there is a good likelihood it was. There are many reoccurences. On that note, I do plan on tying up some loose ends I left in the beginning, such as what is with Amara and Michelle's seemingly random mentioning of their benefactor. Things really important in the long run are going to be periodically brought up again.
So after hearing my wise words, and marvelous opinions, outside of the context of the story, I hopefully leave you longing for more of my quick wit and humor. Now then, I've spent 5 ¹/₂ hours on the computer and completed yet another chapter and another set of notes that gives further explanations. I'm now going to head off to my room and roam around the realm of Morpheus.

I hope you enjoyed the first ten chapters of Solar Revolution. I am really proud of this episode. For those of you who were bored by the lack of action, I'll make it up eventually. Keep reading. =^ D Also, sorry this episode took forever. I'm even sorrier it turned out so long. It was going to be a short episode, but then I remembered my amount of time for working on future episodes would seriously dwindle once school starts again. So I decided to pack in a lot of info.
Love, Sailor Eeveon Girl: Friday, August 2, 2002- Day of Frigg and Venus; Month of Augustus (Octavius)

Revised: Monday, April 26, 2004. Day of Selene, Luna, Artemis, and Diana, month of apere (means to open in Latin; thought to do with blossoms).

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