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e john e  unModerator Posts: 1869 (5/5/06 12:07 pm) Reply | Edit | Del All 
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quick poemquick poem i was thinking about you when the sky went dark but lit by moon how angels sing! another matter lit by spring i nearly didn't notice until some po et wrote some t hing that triggered me i read it on an internet poetry board actually this whole thing is a lie the fancy dancing softly soft inside i'm roaring i'm thinking of you ~ 5 5 06 | |
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Nicholas J Junkheer Posts: 609 (5/5/06 12:36 pm) Reply | Edit | Del 
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Re: quick poem ah... well... when a person is full... what can they do but burst? take a leak... or dump but then that just shit and piss aint it. that's it either you wait for the prostate to fail and lose the pressure behind the stream or you bust a sphincter. Edited by: Nicholas J at: 5/5/06 12:38 pm | |
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nativedancer Dot Posts: 174 (5/5/06 12:47 pm) Reply | Edit | Del |
Re: quick poem i loved this john, but fuck the other poet; keep it all yours, more like: i was thinking about you when the sky went dark or seemed to but still lit by spring and i thought how the angels sing! nah actually this whole thing is a lie the fancy dancing softly soft it's spring inside too lit up like lightning and i'm roaring out loud thinking only of you Edited by: nativedancer at: 5/5/06 12:50 pm | |
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e john e unModerator Posts: 1871 (5/5/06 1:00 pm) Reply | Edit | Del
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shit how did that other poet get in there? i was sidetracked, i think, and i know i wanted to sort of get this place in there, sort of but you might be right, jim as regards the poem thanks john | |
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Dorothy D Mienko Dorothy D Mienko Posts: 350 (5/5/06 1:14 pm) Reply | Edit | Del |
Re: shit I agree it is fine make it all your own yea. | |
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