Author's Notes
And the plot thickens. This took a very long time to complete, and I've realised that I am incapable of making a short episode. Even with one challenge this episode also reached seventeen pages. Yet do I dare cut my attention to the Tribes? Anyway, this episode has a few more areas I'd like to expand on. And yes, for the most part this will hopefully be the end of the cameos for quite some time.
The first area I must expand on is that of the challenge, that one page of them shooting hoops was supposed to be just the first few minutes of the challenge, and each score happening at a later time. I feel that this was not fully expressed and that some people may get confused or think certain characters didn't shine as much as others. I was originally planning to have two pages of this, but it became boring to me and seemed that it wouldn't help the confusion. In fact, it might even add to the confuson, as I give a wild guess as to what the total numbers of points scored at the end was. I have no idea how many would be a more accurate score, I'm not a basketball fan. I'll leave how it got to that score up to the imagination of the readers.
The next area I should cover is the cameos. Those familiar with the old RPG Survivor episodes will recognize Crystallis and Chris of the Brood, but probably not White Inferno. White Inferno is well, let's call him a person I know in my internet world, that I gave a cameo becase I was too lazy to complete some spriting work I said I would do for him. Fair trade off? Probably not, but he's a big fan of Web Shows so he might think so. Yes, that's the name that has kinda been developed for works like this. Or at least I think it should be.
Anyway, concering the plot of the show itself, I only realized it when writing the show itself that certain parts look very much like the first season. A prize wish being used in a romantic way and such. I'm also glad I don't have to write Ritz anymore. When I thought up her personality, I could only think of a bossy feminist little brat who was actually pretty inferior to others despite how she acted. But bossy was taken by Tifa and brat by Yuffie, so feminist all the way Ritz went. Good for a few laughes, but it was getting old, so I might've forced her out this episode. Unlike Dei cause we all know slapstick never dies.
Well, that'd be all I gotta say for this one. We'll see how episode four turns out.
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