From: [email protected] Newsgroups: alt.sex.bondage Subject: Re: The List 18 Message-ID: <[email protected]> Date: 7 Nov 91 14:42:21 GMT References: <[email protected]> Organization: Syracuse University, Syracuse NY Lines: 32 Nurse Jones, honey, I love you! Feedback, huh? this is gonna sound very 'female' (new experiment for me as I usually find myself portraying male qualities), but what turned me on the most on your writing was the RELATIONSHIP that you and Jay have... if the exact same scenes were written about two strangers having a passing encounter, my reaction would have been more like "Wow...neat toys....". (and yes, some of those toys both turned me on and scared me a little... the horse is a good example of doing both....) what made those stories as you wrote them sexy to me and erotic was as much what you were doing as why you were doing it and who you were doing it with. You two have an extrodinarily special relationship, and that comes SCREAMING through what you were writing. THere is also the fact that it was like reading someone's diary... something you want to do but know you really shouldn't be and even made more wonderful becuase you had HANDED it to me. I got into the stories because as I was reading I was getting to know you as a person and getting some really interesting insites about Jay (spelling not withstanding). that alone kept me reading, and i was rewarded by some really HOT scenes, made hotter by your reactions to them being right there. did the list turn me on? yes. unequivocolly. (i wish rn had a spell checker.....) why? because you were describing (WELL) things you had done with someone who loved you and who you loved, doing things that were streching your limits (among other things ;-) and showing us a glimpse both of the outside (what was going on), with that early scene in the shower being a REAL standout in that area for me, and the inside (what you were feeling). Roo
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