| "Manipulations" #44 of the Xena and Gabrielle XXX Scrolls by Shana and Kye |
| This has probably been one of the most interesting reads I've had in a long time. I was thrilled to pieces to see the submission in my mailbox giving me access to the XXX series. And the authors were even nice enough to point me in the direction of their most sleaziest of works! After reading through the recommended stories, I felt that this one would be a great introduction for the "Xena and Gabrielle XXX Scrolls" into the Sweat Hut. And I do have my sights set on a couple of others, particularly a trilogy set <g> Without further ado, I bring you the Moist Review! (yes, I know it sounds tacky) |
| "Manipulations" is just a small taste PWP? from a series of PWP's? If you haven't read the XXX Scrolls, which you will most likely do after reading this review, you will notice that there are two sides to each story. Xena's scroll and Gabrielle's scroll. Here I crammed both together because the details don't change much between the two. But reading both is worth it. One thing, well, the first thing I'd like to point out is, how in the hell did they ever get any travelling done! Much less ride a horse or walk the next day! And with the amount of action they see here, why aren't their hands permanently pruned? <g> Sex Scenes: 1, yep, only one. But it gets better. Moist/Moisture: 5 !!! Oh, this is a very slick, sloppy, wet, sloshy, drippy kind of a PWP? Climaxes: 5 from the Xena scroll; Gabby: 3, Xena: 2. But if you take an overall poll (both X and G's scrolls) the numbers slip together at 8. Kink Factor: Remember the old adage: "Erotic is using a feather, Kinky is using the whole bird"? Well, Shana and Kye have summoned an entire gaggle of geese for this. Gabrielle initiates a little game with Xena by laying out Xena's bed roll fur side down. A good thing too, could you imagine trying to get those stains out just by beating it against a rock? But, apparently that's the signal they both agreed on when our sweet and innocent little Gabby wants a night of role playing. Xena comes back into camp, sees it, and the game is afoot! There is a balls to the wall bondage, dominance/submissive alert here for those faint at heart and don't want to see Xena and Gabrielle in these positions. But it seems that the little bard likes the Slave Game. We have a whip being used in a rather unconventional manner, leather straps, a gold chain (explination soon to come), and a wooden strap-on phallus to round things off. And the safe word for the evening is "Illusia"(remember, whenever you are involved in this sort of kink, a safe word is a must---another public service announcement from the Amazon Sweat Hut, now back to the smut in progress). Wild Card Round-up: Many, many words are thrown around in here and they came up often enough that I decided to count them. --Slut: 13 --Whore: 10 --Cunt: 18 Now I haven't heard these words used in such frequency since the cat fights in high school. Shana and Kye give us their all with the things they come up with. I would like to know who did the full scale research in this duo. Euphemism wise? Where oh, where do I begin? Aside from the normal everyday breasts, nipples, vaginas, and tits. The Labia makes its first appearance at the Sweat Hut, as does the pussy. The clit or clitoris is a mainstay. It's hardened, throbbing, and (at times) lunging. Oh, I almost forgot about the slit. Lots of flowing, fragrant, thick juices and/or secretions. Sodden needs to be met. Quivering thighs. A soaked valley. Clamping pussy muscles. Nipple tweaks? Hard-on's? And my personal favorite, the gulping cunt. <I almost spewed my Dr. Pepper Big Gulp all over the screen, but saving the day, it came out my nose. Good work ladies, that hurt like hell><g> With Xena in Mistress mode and Gabrielle the subordinate Slave, this story takes flight within the first couple of paragraphs. Xena begins by berating Gabrielle like any good Mistress would and ties her wrists to a knife stuck in the ground above her head (note-- leather straps). "And my pussy was another story in itself." -- Why yes it is! A whole other plotline could have branched off of that alone. "She looked so young; so vulnerable; so tender it made even more moisture bubble out of me." -- Come one! Come all! Come see the see the Amazing Xena as she froths down below like a elementary school volcanic science project! <also our first usage of Moist/Moisture> "I gave a firm squeeze and felt my hand become coated with the thick juices that would always give her away." -- So much for stealth. �Gods, girl, you�re a swamp down here,� I clucked my tongue." -- Good Gods! No! They used SWAMP! I just heard every palm frond in the Sweat Hut drop to the floor! I haven't had a reaction like that since BlueDragon brought a leper into the mix. Oh, the mental images that one word just conjured up! I think I just saw the Crocodile Hunter wading through! "She was pumping out an incredible amount of lubrication." -- Hence, the first Jiffy Lube! "she swallowed the moisture her mouth had siphoned from her own underwear." -- I couldn't quite find the words to explain that scene. You'll have to read it for yourself <g> "I reached forward, prying open her lips which had clam shelled their way shut, sealed with her juices." -- Looks like Xena needs to find a shucking knife in those bottomless saddlebags. "I opened my mouth wide, and sucked in her whole sex, drinking my fill from her fountain" -- Would that be the Fountain of Youth or the Fountain of Strength? Me's thinks that FIN would have ended differently if Gabrielle... Now by this point, Xena has brought out the whip. Instead of putting it to its obvious use, she proceeds to wrap it around Gabrielle's body and breasts. See "Nipple Tweaking." I will leave those details for you, dear reader, to take on for yourself. "I immediately pressed my screaming pussy down onto it." �Oh yeah, gonna fuck your leg,� I sang to her" -- Xena, Warrior Princess, turned Mistress, turned... �Are you ready to be fucked by your mistress?� -- That little line reminded me of "Exit to Eden" by Anne Rice, Where Lisa puts on a strap-on and asks Elliot (who is standing, chained from the ceilling), "Have you ever been fucked by a woman?" Well, we have basically the same premise here. The wooden phallus with leather harness is out of Xena's little bag of dirty tricks. "Her eyes flitted from the wooden dick to my eyes" -- And what exactly was Gabrielle thinking? "spreading more of her juices upward to make sure her already moist anal opening was soaked." -- Gods be saved, that's not where it's going. No, no, that place has reservations for something else. "I took one end of the chain, and began to feed it inside her nether entrance." -- THAT'S what's going in there. This story brought about one surprise after another. I would suffice it to say that my jaw dropped right down to the keyboard within the first few lines. I tried to pick it up, but I eventually gave up and let it stay there. True, I had never seen the characters of Xena and Gabrielle brought so far out of their element, but what do we know about what goes on behind locked doors, or in this case, around the campfire? "Manipulations" is just about as sleazy, smutty, filthy and hardcore as one can get. And I can't forget, imaginative. You know what you are getting into just by reading the series title, "The Xena and Gabrielle XXX Scrolls." If this kind of writing disgusts you, then you should not be there and you have been warned. But if it intrigues your innermost desires, then it is right up your valley. Shana and Kye left nothing to the imagination, which in this piece, could have either hurt or rocketed story. It is all up to the beholder. But they went straight for the senses letting you see every little detail so that you are all but participating, making you the shameless voyeur. I am just going to peek into the Sweat Hut for a moment... Damn!!! The palm fronds have been cast down and the cat-o-nine tails have been broken in! The sleaze is thick enough to be scraped off the walls! ..."Manipulations" (scroll #44 of the "Xena and Gabrielle XXX Scrolls") Sleazes in at a |
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