| "Hot Jazz" by BlueDragon |
| Mmmm. Hmmmm. Blue felt the need to untarnish her reputation here at The Amazon Sweat hut and show the world that yes, she can score higher than a 7.5 in the moisture ratings. So as she climbed a water tower with a bucket of paint, she dug through her archives and found this short story deep within. Want a Moist Review? Then here it is! |
| If you're familiar with Blue's other works such as, "Mississippi Blues" and "All That Jazz", then you're in for a treat! This was a scene that didn't work out well within the context of "All That Jazz", but it had been tucked away on the hard drive in hopes of seeing the light of day. And that day has come! The characters Laurel and Nicole have been brought out for an excursion that would prove to get the palm fronds a slappin'. Sex Scenes: 1 and only one is needed. Moist/Moisture: 2. Hey, it's an improvement from the lack of moisture in "Just Buisiness as Unusual" Climaxes: A whopping 4! Blue is one of very few bard's that can give out multiple orgasms in such a short time frame and within the same scene. Kink Factor? Why yes. It's Laurel's birthday and Nicole has some surprise role-playing in store to mark the momentous occasion. Note: A strap-on is part of Laurel's costume. And just incase things get a little too out of hand, they even came up with a safe word, "Rose Bowl". Always remember to use a safe word when ever the potential for bondage arises (a public service announcement from The Amazon Sweat Hut). Once again, Blue slipped by without the blatant use of sleazy euphemisms. But we'll forgive her of that. <g> She makes good use of beasts, curls, lips (lower), vagina (which also doubles for a moist opening), dripping folds, quivering flesh, smoky fluid (also known as Passion Nectar or Juices), and a clitoris that gets shortened down to a clit. And to let you know before we begin, there are no lepers present to dry up the rivers! <a sigh of relief is heard from the Sweat hut> And here's a short summary for you so you can get straight to what you came here to see --The Sex. Here we are and it's Laurel's birthday. She's sitting back with a beer and watching the football game. She gets up to make some popcorn and comes back to find a present waiting for her. Hmm. She opens it and it's a cowboy costume along with a surprise and a note telling her that she was to play the part of the River Gambler. She finds Nicole in the bedroom dressed in time period clothing...... Awe shucks, just go and read the damn thing! "All the moisture in her body was rapidly heading downward" -- As we document the first useage of "Moist", I would like to point out that Laurel is trying to get over seeing Nicole, acting as a French Quarter Prostitute, unlace and loosen the front of her dress. "Jesus, Mary and Joseph." Nicole was in heaven" -- I see Nicole has a fondness for the Good Book (not the Kama Sutra you sick pup! --Geez, what gutter is your mind in <g>) "The evidence of her lover's enjoyment of their game coated Nicole's thighs and plastered her curls to her lips" -- Soaked, slick, sodden. To name a few observations. "Laurel leaned down and ran her tongue from thigh to navel" -- <slap, slap, slap ,slap> "She ran her tongue from her lover's vagina to her clit and back again. She took her time, exploring and relearning the familiar" -- Just like riding a bike, eh Laurel? "Oh, Jesus, Laurel." -- Gettin' biblical again, are we? <g> There is a third reference to the Lord and Savior (well, not mine), but I figured there were more important things to get to. <eg> "Nicole did all she knew would quickly release her lover. Soon, her name was pronounced to the heavens as Laurel climaxed." -- And the neighbors soon returned to their regularly scheduled gardening right on the other side of the fence under Nicole and Laurel's bedroom window. Well Blue, you have been redeemed. I now dub thee "Queen of The Multiple Orgasms" Without a Leper lurking around to hinder your rating this time, I have the honor of presenting you with a |
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