| by Blue Dragon |
| Ahh, Now this little ditty was sent to me as the first sacrificial lamb for this site. Now Blue Dragon says that I could not possibly trash this story better than she has. Well, we�ll just see about that! This was an interesting one. Not one mention of the word �moist�. I gotta hand it to Blue Dragon, she worked around it very well. She also found a way to slip past most of the euphemisms by using the actual names of the sexual organs in question. i.e.. Clit. It wasn�t a nub or a pleasure beacon. Not even raging, throbbing, or pulsating. Just a plain ol� clit. Enough with the pleasantries, let�s get into the nasty smutty details, shall we? Sex Scenes: 3 and 1 potential interrupted by a bible banging het chick. Moist/Moisture: 0 Climaxes: A total of 11! You go Blue! That just might be a record in such a short story. Kink Factor? A little. We find that Barbara likes it rough, giving and receiving (in a bathroom stall). She also had never gotten it with a tongue ring before (also in the bathroom stall). Oh, and a little blood letting. But not to worry, it�s not like it was some vampyric, sadistic ritual that went on. It was just a little innocent split of the lip during a rough slam dance of tongues. There was also a slight reference to a strap on. I did say that Blue slipped through this one by bypassing the usual euphemisms, but she does get some doosies in there. Along with the everyday pumping hands, soaked curls, folds, and marination by womanly juices; there were some soon to be classics lurking around for me to spot. - �Hooded Bundle of Nerves�--Blue�s first and only stray from using the word �clit� or �Clitoris� - �I kept biting at her nipple and leaving hickeys underneath her breast. I was determined to have her look like a leper before I was through with her.� --Did we need to have the leper reference? I think not. Blue coulda dried up the Great Lakes with that one. But if you just glossed over, then you wouldn�t be affected by it...much. - �The smell of her arousal was manna. The taste was ambrosia.� --<slamming head on desk and laughing my ass off!> This is where it starts to get good. Blue get�s even more creative.... And biblical. - �Unable to take it anymore, I licked my way from her breast to her blonde curls. They were soaked. The fragrance I inhaled there almost knocked me out.� --Umm, that really could be a bad thing. Blue could�ve elaborated a touch more. You see, the question arises about Talia�s feminine hygiene practices, or lack thereof... But we do get the picture, sort of <scratching head in wonderment>. - �She can knock down the walls around my heart and mind better more thoroughly than what Joshua and his army did to Jericho.� -- Oh, how sweet... But sweetness doesn�t count here. - �Her tongue felt like it came straight from Plato's land of ideal forms that cannot exist on this plane.� --I also forgot that Blue gets philosophical too. I had to re-read this one a few times and think about it for a second, then shook my head and moved on. It slowed down the scene to a stand still, freezing time and any thought process with it. Overall, the story isn�t a bad one. It is actually quite interesting with the twist at the ending. It is filled to the brim with smut and sloppy sex, if that�s what you�re looking for. But why else would you be here? The sex is all throughout the story. Hell, the sex is the story, other dialogue and actions were just written around it. Even with the other stuff, the story is worth the read. Now the results are in from the Amazon Sweat Hut for the Moist Review......... �Just Business As Unusual� by Blue Dragon Kicks off the Moist Review with a |
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