SAND CASTLE

PETER KIM

            Once there were twins who liked to go to the beach.  One’s name is Jack and another one’s name is Zake.   One morning their family went to the beach. Their family’s car was so big and Jack and Zake’s father was a machine maker.  So, their father built a big black machine in the car.  Jack and Zake built a sand castle.  Zake found a gold stick in the car behind the big black machine.  Zake tried to grab the stick, but he fell to the “START” button of the big , black machine.  So, the laser went on to Jack and Zake and then, they got small like an ant! 

            Zake was scared, but Jack was excited.  They were 5 years old.  They went to the said castle.  Zake said, “Jack, I want to be big!”  “Come on, Zake, just think the sand castle is big, and let’s go up to the big black machine at night and press “START” button, get it, and don’t be afraid.”  At the same time, Jack and Zake’s father was trying to find Jack and Zake.

            Jack and Zake found Mice family.  2 years after, Jack and Zake were like mice.  But they were still small and they still talked.

            Jack and Zake’s father made a house, beside the beach.  The paper was stuck on the house.  It says, “Lost Children, Twins, 7 years old, Name: One is Jack and another one’s name is Zake, Tell: 565-63310.”

            Jack and Zake can’t be big like humans again, because their father put the big black machine in a garage!  So Jack and Zake’s mouse friends Tom and Alex think for 3 hours.

            Then Alex said, “Oh, I know, beside the beach, there’s Mr. Birdie who is driving a taxi to your house, to there at tomorrow 6:00 am.”

            So they did.  Beside Jack and Zake’s father’s garage door there was a hole and it says,  “WELCOME”. So they went in the hole with Tom and Alex.  In there was a big black machine.  Jack’s father checked the computer, so he know what happened.  Then he found mice and Jack and Zake.  So he thanked the mice.  Zake’s father cried.  They lived happily ever after.

<This story was written by Peter when  he was in  first grade >

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