| Papa's Waltz | ||||||
| The whiskey on your breath
Could make a small boy dizzy; But I hung on like death: Such waltzing was not easy. We romped until the pans Slid from the kitchen shelf; My mother's countenance Could not unfrown itself. The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle; At every step you missed My right ear scraped a buckle. You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt, Then waltzed me off to bed Still clinging to your shirt |
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| 1. ABABCDCDEFEFGHGH 2. Romped- Ran around ravishly Battered- Beaten down badly Scraped- Scratched Vadly Clinging- Hanging on for life Waltzing- Graceful moving Unfrown- Always happy Slid- Quickly moved 3. But I hang on like death.- Simile Slid from the kitchen shelf- Assonance Beat time on my head.- Metaphor 4. A palm caked hard by dirt- visual The pans slid from the kicthen shelf- visual The Wiskey on your breathe- olfactory Battered on one knuckle- tactile I feel that the boys attitude is loving towards his father in this poem. Although his father is drunk, he still loves him no matter what. He cherishes him and longs to be with him. |
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