Soldier Part I: Player Information
Your Name: Ree
Email Address: [email protected]
Web Page: Diamond Warriors ((http://diamond_warriors.tripod.com/index.html))

Part II: Character Information
Character Position: Sailorproserpina
Character Name: Mae Cerise Mignon

Name Meaning:
-Mae is French and its meaning is May. In Roman mythology Maia: (source of the month May) was goddess of spring growth.
-Cerise is French and it means "cherry"
-Mignon is French and it means "darling"

Dissy: Actually it means cute, but I suppose it could mean darling also, I’m only a second year French student ^^;;

Vessy: eh *shrugs* Garage, Car Hole Same differance X3


Birthdate and Age / Zodiacal Sign: Mae was born on May 26th, which was during the time of the festival for Diana with the Secular Games to Proserpina beginning as well. Being born on that day makes her a fun- loving and talkative Gemini and she is 20 years old.
Physical Details: Mae has long dark curly brown hair that ends an inch above her chest and covers one of her eyes. She has bright green eyes that are the color of fresh spring grass and seem to sparkle whenever she’s happy. Because she is from France,

Dissy: Oh no…a foreigner? not again…
Vessy: *cries* No! That recurring dream is back!

she has a pale and creamy complexion that resembles fresh milk with nary a flaw, except for on her stomach. On her stomach, wrapping around her waist, she has a long tattoo of a vine branch, with thorns and leaves that isn’t visible when she is in Senshi mode. She carries herself with an air of grace about her and her warm smile on angel-rose lips is something to be noticed. Mae has a natural grace about her, standing at 5’7" in height, and can often be found wearing hip-hugging pants and a pale yellow midriff-baring top with no sleeves and a turtle neck and black boots. She is into fashion, and believes in dressing nice and looks beautiful when she cleans up for special occasions. When it’s colder, she’ll wear longer- sleeved shirt, long pants, mostly black velvet, and a warm fur-lined leather coat with fur-lined boots.

Bloodtype: Mae has an O-type blood and it reflects on her when it comes to her sometimes jealous streaks and her ability to excel at track and field, along with swimming.

Gemstone: Aquamarine, which represents the need for communication, which is perfect for the sign of the twins.

Dissy: Quick question, how is that perfect? please explain.
Vessy: Gemini are the most natural communicators within the zodiac circle. . .

Likes:
Clothes: because they allow her to express herself no matter what mood she’s in and since she wants to be a model, she loves to wear them well. Also, they feel good to her and she loves them.
Mythology (Roman and Greek): Mae loves to read Greek and Roman mythology because she can relate to some of the gods and goddesses in the stories and since they hold such romance for her, she thinks they’re great.

Dissy: it is understandable that because she will be Proserpina’s avatar, she would be interested in mythology, but is seems like this is a very common interest, and becoming rather cliché for that matter. I’m going to ask that we erase this.

Art: she knows art and she knows what she likes. People who are able to make beautiful works of art are respectable by her standards. She loves to discuss art and what the artist felt when they made it.
 
Vessy: What types of art? There are many types of art and each can equally be consider crap by another group. ie: Impressionist vs. Realists. Found art vs. Greco sculpture... crayon scribbles by a five year old vs, Modern art (well not really a huge differance there. . .but. . . Just wondering...

Animals: Mae loves animals, and she especially loves her dog, Percy. Percy is short for Persephone and she is a golden retriever. Mae will spend lots of time with her dog, who is also her guardian, talking or playing. She loves all sorts of animals, but dogs and wolves will always be her favorites.

Dislikes:
Poachers: even though there are none in Paris that she knew of, or in Rome where she is now living and currently going to school, she hates them because they harm animals and she loves animals.
 
Vessy: Couldn't you just more specifically state "hunters" in general because a poacher is anyone who takes or kills animals or produce off of private property (ie: Pheasant poaching on someone elses hunting reserve. Or harvesting Apples from someones orchard)

Hunting: you will never get Mae to hunt, not ever. She doesn’t like deer hunting or hunting of any kind and whenever someone brags about it, she leaves the room. If she sees a deer that has been killed hanging upside down, she runs away and would most likely throw up.
 
Vessy: Or combine these two categories into one "Hunting and hunters" with maybe a seperate category of "Stealing"

Laziness: Mae has a thing against lazy people. She thinks that they are people that don’t deserve to get the benefits that the hard-working people also get and won’t tolerate it.
Fish: She hates the taste, hates the smell, and hates all of the little bones that come with it. She won’t go fishing and you wouldn’t be caught cleaning fish or watching fish cleaning.
 
Vessy: So is she going vegetarian? She doesn't like fish or killing animals... so is she just one of those "i don't like the killing but I'll still eat meat" people...

Hobbies:
Swimming: Mae loves to swim. She will often go out on her own at night, if the night is warm and swim in a nearby lake. Percy often tails her and keeps an eye on her so that she doesn’t get hurt. Mae loves the feeling of water caressing her skin and it makes her perfectly relaxed.
 
Vessy: Why swimming at night? Couldn't she swim in the daytime too? and wouldn't swimming at night be more than a little dangerous?

Gardening: she loves to plant things. Ever since she was young, she has had her own flower bed. She has the touch that the goddess Proserpine had, for when the goddess walked, flowers would spring up behind her and it seems that no matter what Mae plants, it grows.
Singing: singing is one of Mae’s favorite pastimes. She is always either singing or humming something, whether it is when she’s gardening, or working on her homework she’ll sing springtime songs, ones with lyrics that she writes herself, because she loves to write songs.
Dancing: Mae is an accomplished ballet dancer and went to the best ballet classes that her father and mother could afford for her. She’s been the leading role in several ballets, including "Swan Lake" and "The Sleeping Beauty" in her time. That’s where she gets her grace.
Running: when the sun is thinking about coming up, Mae is already running outside, enjoying the fresh cool air and she only runs in the springtime. Running allows her to organize her thoughts and stay in shape.

Dissy: for most of these I don’t see the relevance. Do they have any foundation in anything you read about Proserpina/Persephone? If so, state this. After all, the gods and goddesses chose people who are like them, not people who happen to like animals but besides that are completely different.
Personality: Mae is someone that is sophisticated, but with an air of playfulness about her. Like her sign of Gemini, she has two very different sides to her. Her stronger side is that of a young woman with an air of maturity about her. The side that she doesn’t show very often is the scared and unsure little girl that needs protection from others that she loves.
Her greatest attribute is her ability to mask her feelings. Mae is able to cover her true emotions well and has only never cried in front of her guardian Percy. She doesn’t ever show her true colors to her parents, because they expect her to be made of stone and never show emotion. Mae has learned to not rely on anyone but herself and not letting her defenses down unless she truly feels as though she can trust someone with all her heart.
 
Vessy: Um... why would anyone expect someone to have or show no emotions? I mean not only is that extremely unreasonable on the parents account (or her beleif of what her parents want) but its extremely unhealthy on her part. and it doesn't mesh with the Geminiac sign as they are one of the most expressive signs emotionally. And it doesn't mesh with her wanting to be protected and nurtured you mentioned above. That type of person would be more over the top with their emotions or do things that would cause people to be more protective of her (ie: fake being sick, cry etc.) although you said she doesn't show that side very often so... and stony doesn't really complement "playful and sophistocated"

However, buried deep within her is an unsure and emotional little girl. She’s a complete contrast to her stony exterior. On the inside, Mae is as warm and welcoming as a warm spring day or breeze. The only one that has seen her smile in a loving or affectionate way is Percy. Something that Mae has very little of is friends, but she doesn’t mind that. (V That doesn't mesh with Gemini or the "sophisticated" side either)
Once a person finds their way past her stony façade, inside, they’ll never find a warmer person. Because Mae loves to sing and you can feel the warmth she has to radiate when you hear her. She can literally brighten your day just by singing and that’s a special gift she developed herself. Percy has heard her sing and can safely say it’s wonderful and heart- warming to hear Mae.
But Mae is also snotty at times and looks down on people that she doesn’t think are good enough to acknowledge her presence. You’d have to be able to endure lots of slinging insults and comments before you win your way into her heart and realize it was only because she hates being hurt. If you get on her bad side, you will be snubbed and made fun of and publicly humiliated if she’s really mad at you, except if you’re one of her friends.
Dissy: Okay, there seems to be a lot of levels to this girl, but no real depth. Here’s an example of what we’re looking for in an application, especially once you get down to the personality. Remember, this is quick and dirty, not at all the length we look for, but hopefully the quality;
So and so is very classy and more often than not, acts as if she rules the world. She’s pretty snotty most of the time and unless you’re considered a friend, don’t expect her to really even acknowledge you. In mythology, Proserpina was kidnapped by Pluto and taken to the underworld to be his queen. The queen part of that is why so and so is always so stuck on her high horse. She also has a problem with mood swings, one minute she’s being warm and friendly, or at least her version of that, and the next she’s flaming mad, ready to snap off the head of anyone who would cross her. In mythology Proserpina returned to the earth’s surface in spring, bringing with her all the glory of springtime, but when fall hit she returned to the underworld, leaving the earth barren and dry. Because of the changing of the seasons, there is such a thing as seasonal depression, and the extremes between the different moods is just like So and so’s mood swings….etc.
That is just a quick example of what we look for throughout the entire application, relevance, it doesn’t necessarily have to be relevance to your mythological being, but it should be completely relevant to the archetype you’re using, which should have at least a visible relationship to your mythological being.
Vessy: I'm missing the relevancy and the relation to Gemini in this character. Overall its a good start but the lack of showing emotions is really not something I would view/recomend for a character of the spring. Besides if she doesn't show/express her emotions how does she express herself? Some people express themselves through dance or work out their negative energy through meditation or physical work out. Or does she draw or write or paint? Or in much more negative harmful ways such as cutting or anorexia? What makes her think she needs to be emotionless?

History: Eugene met Regina through a mutual friend in Paris, France and they have been together ever since. They both went to school, and got married, but soon, Regina became nothing more than a trophy wife. Eugene became a major business man and has been working in his company of N.I.T.E., or Needed International Trades of Economics. Regina began to become more social and took to the wine that she had grown up with all her life. They didn’t ever want to have children, but one day, something happened.
 
Vessy: NO FOREIGNERS!!! *Flying attack with a foam baseball bat* NO!

Mae Cerise Mignon was born a few months later and immediately was treated like a burden. She grew up with many a nurse or nanny at her side to raise her when her parents couldn’t. Mae thought of her nannies and nurses as her friends. However, when she became old enough to go to school, her mother sent them all away and she stayed in her room and didn’t come out for two days.
 
Vessy: When you say old enough to go to school do you mean like ecs? or lower elementary? or when she got old enough that she could amuse herself without need to worry about her getting in trouble. Or *reads on* when she was sent off to boarding schools?

Mae was then sent to boarding and finishing schools in Paris and stayed there all year, never seeing her parents, but she didn’t mind it. She had made some friends, young Adele Florence and Camilla Fitzgerald. Mae went to boarding and finishing school until she was thirteen and that’s when her parents announced that they were moving to Rome. Mae had to say good-bye to the friends that she had known all her life and it was a heart-breaking time for her.
That was the time that Mae decided not to show her feelings to anyone unless she thought that they truly deserved to be her friends and wouldn’t leave her again. At the time she hit puberty she was so lost and had to go to the school nurse at Romulous Public Jr. High School and was so embarrassed she ran right out of the school and didn’t go back for three days. Mae has always been determined not to let anyone see her cry, and no one ever did, not even when she ran out of the school the day she went and saw the nurse.
 
Vessy: I'm sorry but the whole hitting puberty thing gave me deranged flash backs to "Carrie" screwed up horror movie >.<

Mae was afraid of turning into a woman because she thought that she would turn out like her mother. She loved her mother with all of her heart and the few times that her mother had held her close or wanted her to come home always reminded her that her mother was a good person deep down. She knew that her mother could be warm, but kept it hidden and that’s what made her strong, so Mae decided to be that way too.
When she was 15, she found a golden retriever in the streets with no collar but with a pomegranate hanging from around its neck. She knew that was the symbol of Proserpine and since she loved the tales of that goddess so, she took the dog in. She needed a friend and the two of them became fast friends, with Mae constantly playing with Percy. It wasn’t until she took the pomegranate that was hanging around the dog’s neck and joked about eating one of the seeds and actually tasted one that the dog revealed she could speak.
Mae didn’t know what to think at first, but the dog explained her name was Persephone and that she was looking for someone. Mae said that she didn’t know who she meant, but Persephone or Percy as Mae called her, decided that she would stay with Mae until she found her. The two became the best of friends and Percy was upset that she still wasn’t able to find the person she was looking for.
When Mae graduated from high school, she was immediately enrolled in Università degli Studi di Roma by her parents. She took Percy with her because she refused to be alone at college without her only friend. She was a nervous freshman at college but soon met up with her old friends, Adele Florence and Camilla Fitzgerald at the same University! They were instantly reunited and caught up on things and the two girls made Mae try out in the choir and she became famous around the school for her warm and comforting voice.
She confessed to them everything that had happened over her life, but after they caught up on things, they were girls in grade-school again and Mae brightened her outlook and smiled and laughed for the first time in ages with genuine affection and caring. Now, Mae is a sophomore in college and is just diving into her major of music and English.

Dissy: Sorry, but again, this lacks depth. Also there’s not a lot of coherency, she hates her mom, but she loves her, and stuff like that. Also, it seems as if you really want her to have this sad dramatic life, sort of like a soap opera. Honestly, rich families do not all have this problem, in fact, a lot of the kids act just like their parents, if not worse. They’re usually stuck on themselves because of all the upper class schools they’ve attended, and are too busy bragging about themselves to worry about their parents not wanting them, they simply think that’s the way everything is. And one last little pet peeve, I’m pretty sure this was on the application somewhere, but we are not accepting any foreigners, so you’d have to change that.
Vessy: Okay overall not truly horrible as far as family histories go. But I would really strongly suggest that you base her history on the myth. The myth of this character (persephone) is great cus it gives us sort of an insight into the family life. I would say build strongly upon the part were she's close to her mother. Because from what I can remember Persephone and her mum (whats her name... in charge or crops and stuff *shrugs*) we're quite close. Now conceivably you could twist the story so that she could say have had her father say... commit adultery resulting in a divorce. Then a long custody battle in which They decided that she would spend half the year with her father and half with her mom... something along those lines >.< This is perhaps one character where a Sob story would be plausible... and it would maybe allow for the lack of emotions or SED that Dissy mentioned.

NPCs:
Eugene Mignon (Father): Eugene is an old man at the age of 50 and is short, fat, and balding. He’s got silvery-gray hair and green eyes that were once young and vibrant, now are dull with age. He stands at about 5’4" in height and has a belly that anyone would notice. Eugene thinks of Mae as a mistake, but has decided to leave his entire fortune to the man that she marries. He doesn’t ever spend time with her and will space himself as far from her and her "deadbeat friends" as possible. Eugene is bitter from being the head of a multi-billion dollar corporation for so long and is bitter towards everyone, even his wife.

Regina Mignon (Mother): Regina is Mae’s mother and she was the one that gave her daughter her natural beauty and grace with her brown hair and long legs and defined cheekbones. Regina fell in love with Eugene because he promised her things that he never kept and has ever since dove into the world of galas and elegant affairs but still found the time to treat her daughter to a shopping spree or an affectionate hug whenever Eugene wasn’t around. Regina stands at 5’7" in height and has defined cheekbones, but has lost some of her youthful vigor and beauty over the years because of being a mother and having to deal with Eugene. She at first thought of Mae as an accident but has since embraced her as her daughter.

Adele Florence (Friend): Adele is Mae’s best friend and her complete opposite. Where Mae is self-reserved, Adele is crazy. Where Mae is practical, Adele is unpredictable and always ready for a challenge. Adele is someone that brings out the best in Mae, and this red-headed, brown- eyed 20-year-old college student is someone that is friendly towards her best friends, but get on her bad side or challenge her to a verbal duel and you’ll get more insults slung at you than ever before. She stands at 5’9" in height and has a willowy figure, almost fragile, but she’s strong and has a great right hook that can break any jaw.

Camilla Fitzgerald (Friend): Cam, as she’s called by Adele and Mae, is the intelligent one in the group. When I say intelligent, I mean that she doesn’t let either one of them do things that will get them into trouble and is very smart and has the highest GPA among them. This black- haired and amber-eyed beauty is someone that you would notice if you saw the curvy 5’6" frame. She has a soft voice and doesn’t speak that often, but when she does, she’s giggly and always has a smile on her face and knows instantly when there’s something wrong with Mae. She is very close to Mae and knows what it’s like to have parents that don’t care about her because she had parents that abandoned her and she was adopted.
 
Vessy: err... From the history these characters we're mentioned as being friends from France and now she lives in Italy so how much of a relevance are they going to have on the story if they're that far away?

Victor Cunningham (Bodyguard/Chauffer): He is Mae’s chauffer. He has served the family for a long time, but when Victor became attracted to Mae, as in personality, not in looks, he was allowed to be her chauffer. Victor is a 29-year-old former Navy Seal with a black belt in judo and also has an extensive knowledge of being a chauffer because he served the family for years. He cares very much for Mae and would do anything to protect her.
 
Vessy: Very... odd... o.O *cough cough -Childs toy(kodoma no omcha)- cough cough*

Part III: Senshi Information
Special Skills: Mae has the ability to dance more gracefully and move with more agility than anyone else she knows. Adele once compared her to the fleet-footed Artemis and Hermes, but Mae just laughed.

Dissy: relevance? Proserpina wasn’t a dancer of any sort I don’t think, let alone a good one.

Henshin Item: Mae’s henshin item is a pale yellow jewel with her symbol in the center. She wears it as a belt buckle and it’s always on her pants and everyone thinks that it’s just something she got because she’s rich.

Transformation: "Proserpina Deus Power Make-Up!"
-Mae calls out her transformation phrase and the jewel on her belt buckle releases raindrops for the spring rain and pomegranates for Proserpina and they combine by swirling around her in a cyclone-like affect and encase her within. A bright yellow light flashes and she emerges, clad in her fuku, her henshin item moved from her waist to her chest and her vine tattoo around her stomach is gone. She extends her right hand and an orb appears in her hand. This is her weapon, the Orb of Forbidden Fruit and she holds it to her chest and performs a turn so that her back is facing you and the orb is floating above her palm, her left arm at her side, ending her transformation.

Color: Pale Yellow
Symbol: ((see attached picture)) and means "the season of spring"

Dissy: you should describe it all the same, even if you think it’ll be hard.
Vessy: *hunts around* I can't find the "attached image" *sighs*

Fuku/Costume: Proserpina’s fuku from head to toe, starts with her symbol in pale yellow in the center of her forehead. Moving down, she has red earrings in the shape of pomegranate seeds, then her pale-yellow choker with her orb as the pendent hanging from it around her neck. Proserpina’s collar is pale yellow and her henshin brooch is on her right shoulder, connecting her armor around her bodice. The jewel is pale yellow with silver casing, her bodice is white, bares the midriff, and has long sleeves that cling to her skin with bell-sleeves at the ends. Her breast and shoulder plates are silver, and her wrist bands are black leather underneath her sleeve. Proserpina’s skirt is yellow with black strips of leather as the skirt straps.

Dissy: And her shoes…..?

Powers/Attacks: "Forbidden Orb Bane!"
-The attack begins when Proserpina holds her orb out in front of her in between her hands and her hair floats behind her as her eyes are closed. The orb glows with yellow light and her voice is soft and sorrowful as the orb begins to spin and flies towards the enemy, hitting them hard.
-This attack can be blocked if the enemy is strong enough or if they can catch the orb before it hits them. Also, this attack can not be used against certain types of monsters, like water or fire monsters. Included is the fact that if Proserpina is weak already, the attack isn’t very powerful.

Dissy: what does the attack do? just knock them off their feet? Also, what does the attack do to her? for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction.

Weapons: Orb of Forbidden Fruit: This is a clear orb with a pomegranate inside it. It’s smaller than the size of a crystal ball that fortune-tellers use and can fit in the palm of Proserpina’s hand. The pomegranate inside has a section exposing the seeds and fleshy part within, as if it has been eaten. When it isn’t being used, it is a small necklace around her neck, the orb as the pendent.

Guardian:
Name: Persephone (Percy)
Age: 1 year (In human years)
Species and Physical Appearance: Percy is a golden retriever with amber eyes and a golden and silky coat. Since Mae has her groomed and taken to the vet regularly, Percy is in good health and has trimmed toenails and a toned body from running and swimming with Mae.
Gender: Percy is female.

Personality: Like a golden retriever, Percy is very playful and hasn’t really matured into a true dog yet. She loves to play, run, and swim with Mae and is always ready to hear a song or a story from her. Also, she is caring and sensitive and knows when something is bothering Mae. But, she can at times be stern when Mae doesn’t listen to her or doesn’t heed her advice. But, most of all, she’s fun-loving and easy-going, except when it comes to people that hurt Mae, then she’ll become aggressive, unless they’re friends. But, she can be withdrawn herself at times and often needs Mae to bring her out of her slump.

History: When Proserpine had been in her human form, she had decided that she would become a guardian and placed her soul in the body of a golden retriever, and began to search for the one that inherited her powers. She wore a collar with a pomegranate around her neck so that whoever had her powers would be the only one that could eat the seeds and help her recover her ability to talk. When she was in France, lost and away from Rome, she ran into Mae, who took her in and eventually ate one of the seeds. The rest, as they say, is history.
Relationship with Mae: The two have a mutual friendship and they are the best of friends. Even though Percy can seem so serious and stuffy at times when she has to be, Mae knows that she only does it because she cares about her. The two are partners in what they do, and they like it. All in all, they are friends and they respect each other, no matter what.
Power: Percy can communicate telepathically with Mae.

Part IV: Miscellaneous Information
-Weapon: I chose the name "Orb of Forbidden Fruit" because the pomegranates that Proserpine ate were forbidden because they would bind her to the Underworld forever. Also, it holds relevance to her Senshi name, with the clear orb and the pomegranate in the middle. It also holds relevance to her mundane self, because she is in a way "forbidden" because she isn’t that warm to others o.o;;
-Personality: I made her more like the cold Queen of the Underworld and bride to Pluto because that is how she spends most of her life, in the darkness below, and so I placed some darkness in Mae. But also, sometimes, just like the 1/3 of the year Proserpine spent with her mother, I made her bright and happy.

Dissy: See all of this should’ve been put up in those sections. unless people read the whole profile, which they usually don’t, they’re going to wonder why?
Vessy: I thought it was 1/2 of the year...

-Why Me? Well, I am in many RP’s and have much experience. I also chose this char because I have personally read the versions of the story of Persephone and Hades/Proserpine and Pluto and love that story very much.

Part V: The Writing Sample
Mae Mignon walked through the halls of her house, her boots clicking nicely on the tiles that formed her immaculate hallway. Green eyes looked out from under a russet-hued curtain that was over her right eye, her curly brown hair bouncing on her shoulders as her haughty attitude reflected in her stride. Reaching the end of the hallway, she placed her hand on the cold knob of the door and twisted it, walking into her bedroom.
"Percy, where are you?" she called, her rich voice echoing through her room as she closed the heavy oak door behind her.
A golden retriever came out from underneath her oak canopy bed and shook herself off. Looking up at the young woman with bright amber eyes, the dog bounded over to her and knocked her down in her tackle. Mae laughed as she felt her face being licked over and over.
"All right, Percy, that’s enough," Mae said and pushed the playful dog off of her. "How are you doing?"
"I’m fine, Mae, and how was school?"
Mae groaned and threw her books against the far wall and flopped down onto her bed, the soft comforter a welcome change from being in the cold building that was her home only minutes before. The golden-haired dog jumped onto her bed and lay down next to her. Mae smiled softly and stroked her friend absently. Percy rolled onto her stomach and Mae scratched her there, smiling softly. The 20-year-old seemed weary from her day and sighed heavily, rolling onto her side, tucking her legs beneath her and closed her eyes.
"Get some rest, Mae, you need it," Percy said.
She smiled and yawned slightly as her dog snuggled against her and kept her warm without a blanket.

 
Dissy: Alright, you have a good foundation for a character here, but I think that you need to do some more research, point out relevant things and cut out irrelevant things to both her archetype and her mythic figure, and also put some more depth into her personality and history. Lastly, cut out the drama, I guaruntee, someone more run of the mill is easier and a lot more fun to play. If you’d like some help fixing up your application, a good person to talk to is Sailor Freak/Furiku. you can find her over at { HYPERLINK "http://www.otakusekai.com/board/" }RPG Crossroads. Hope to here from you again.
Dissy’s Verdict = Reject, revise
 
Vessy: Overall not bad... I think that the character of spring could have alot more of the relevancy from her myths worked into the character. Yeah other than that she's entering Mary sue territory with a bit of an avengance... she could use a good dose of normalcy. NO FOREIGNERS!!!!
Vessy's Verdict = Reject Revise
 
Final Verdict = Reject, Revise
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