Note: The parsing on this app was so painful I had to change it! DON'T DO MESSED PARSING OR I BEAT YOU! (This goes for everybody)


Soldier Part I:
Your Name: Rydia
Email Address: [email protected]
Web Page: Realm of the dreamer *CoMiNg SoOn*
Part II: Character Information

Character Position: Sailor Aurora

Character Name: Amara Oriana
Name Meaning: Everlasting Sunrise
 
Vessy: *cringes* bad flashbacks to the Sailormoon dubs... amara... not intentional of course.
Amara is Italian for Everlasting
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The name of Amara has given you an appreciation for many beautiful and refined aspects of life--music and art, literature, drama-and the outdoors, where you find much peace and relaxation, but it creates a far too sensitive nature. You sense and feel much that you do not understand, and sometimes you are alarmed at your thoughts and wonder about their origin. You rarely experience the tranquility that comes with stability of thinking or emotional control. At times, you are very inspired, desiring to be with people and to entertain others as the "life of the party," while at other times you are aloof and choose to remove yourself entirely from association. You crave understanding and affection but your intensity of desire and your self-consciousness prevent you from finding the happiness you desire. You have suffered many disappointments and misunderstandings because of your inability to express your inner thoughts. You could experience sensitivity in the heart, lungs, or bronchial organs, causing tuberculosis, asthma, or depletion of your energies.
Oriana is Italian and English for Sunrise
Nickname: Mara
Birth date: May 23
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Personality Card Number: 7
Character Card Number: 7
Personality Card: The Chariot

Synopsis
A struggle or a conflict. Yet strong potential for triumph over adversity.

General Description
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The Chariot stands for the great leap forward. It shows that we can detach ourselves from our familiar surroundings and go our own way. In doing so, the desire for freedom, ambition, the search for paradise lost, or simply our own need for recognition are driving forces. The Chariot is the only Tarot card that shows the departure to be full of confidence and joy. In all other cases, parting is shown to be characterized by feelings of heaviness and fear. Here, however, is a vigorous, undaunted push forward, initiative, and a great willingness to take risks. The card shows a vast amount of skill (steering the chariot), but also inexperience (entering an unknown world). It must therefore be additionally understood as a warning not to overestimate one's own powers and act too self- confidently and euphorically. Instead, we should, in good time, gain the insight that we still have much to learn.

Growth Card Number: 5
Growth Tarot Card: The Hierophant

Synopsis
Guidance on religious matters and the need to find spiritual meaning inlife.

General Description
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The Hierophant stands for the world of belief and a deep trust that stems from this conviction of faith. In older times, he was considered one of the three protective cards of the Tarot, which basically gave the course of a matter a favorable tendency. There is much to be said for this understanding of the card, since the power of trust that it expresses can be related to the trust we have in ourselves as well as the trust we have in a deeper sense in our personal lives and the resulting trust in our future. Moreover, this card shows the path of ethics and virtue and stands for the personal resolve resulting from our fundamental moral values.

Nationalities: Italian

Age: 15

Chinese Zodiac sign: Tiger
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The Tiger is a Yang, and is the Third sign of the Chinese horoscope Characteristics: Fervor, Bravery, Magnetism, Good Luck, Benevolence, and Authority
Vices: Impetuosity, Hotheadedness, Disobedience, Swagger, Intemperance, Itinerancy,
Tiger people are hasty and passionate. Their judgment isn't always perfect and they hate rules unless they make them themselves. It's common to meet Tigers who have held many different (and sometimes very responsible) lobs in their lives. Tigers need change and movement. They hate to stand still or feel confined by outside forces. Tigers are frequently identifiable by their velvet-footed tread.
They move in a rather liquid fashion, arms out slightly, shoulders thrown back.
To the Tiger, all fashion is snobbery. He wouldn't be impressed if Saint Laurent were holding a press conference in his bathroom. Yet, Tiger people love to think of themselves as innovators and pacesetters. And the Tiger's pace is indeed frequently more avant-garde than the current mode. The Tiger seeks out the unusual and then tries to call it his own. Tigers are go-ahead people. They rush headlong into nests of hungry piranhas that even a killer shark would give a wide berth. Attracted to the zany and outrageous in both friends and mates, the Tiger frequently finds himself hitched to a loony. There's something about this tawny beast that says, "Come alo g, Nutcase. I'll take care of you. Just amuse me with your crazy antics and we will live happily ever after." Months or even years later, when the Tiger finds himself being held by the throat against the wall of his lair, threatened both mentally and physically, he simply gives a push with his hind legs and leaps to safety -always landing on his feet. Relationships and circumstances that would drive anyone else to the brink of suicide leave the Tiger person unshaken and even smiling. How does he do it? Let's just say that when the going gets rough, the Tiger's well-developed self-preservation instinct comes to the rescue and, in a rush of adrenalin, he lopes off into the hills.
The Tiger subject is not interested in money. (I say this in full knowledge of the fact that some Tiger subjects are lusciously rich and prowl around in luxury.) But what I mean is that Tiger people are not conscious of money. They like to have enough-even lot-of money. But they are not unduly preoccupied by the acquisition of it. For the Tiger, no matter what he does; there will always be ample-until one day there is no more. When they have it, Tigers spend it. And when they have no more, they get more. This does not mean that Tigers are always industrious. But it does mean they are very, very lucky.
Tigers like to be honest. But sometimes circumstances push them to commit small crimes. They cannot tolerate either authority or "unfair" laws. They hate injustice and will fight to the death defending their opinions. As Tigers have natural authority, they are often found in positions of influence or power. But because they are so mobile and fond of change, many intemperate Tigers find themselves at age fifty without a position of importance worthy of their talents. Curiously, the secret of Tiger success lies in his ability to cultivate solid, serious and sound thinking advisers and friends. If he chooses his lieutenants wisely, the Tiger will always be a winner. He must learn to ask for counsel and help, to learn from experience and derive lessons from all his mistakes. Then, and only then, when the Tiger learns moderation, will he succeed?
Vessy: erm. How can you know her Chinese Zodiac if we don't have a year of birth?

Zodiacal Sign: Gemini
Flexible, Versatile, Restless, Jack-of-all-trades, lively, alert, quick-witted, literary, communicative, a good conversationalist, changeable, sociable, logical, ingenious, agile, dexterous, intellectual, and mentally ambitious.

Element: Air
The preponderance of Air signs suggests a strong emphasis on thought, ideas and intellectual pursuits of one sort or another. There is a detachment and a sense of objectivity associated with such a heavy influence in the element of Air. Air signs communicate and express ideas with mental agility. Your Air signs may not, however, always get the job done, and you need to be sure ideas are grounded in reality and put to practical use. You are probably more concerned with theory than with application. Often, individuals having a heavy amount of Air signs become the impractical dreamers, constantly thinking, but not always following through as well as others. Rational and logical, you analyze situations fully, thinking them through and planning carefully before you act. While you may ponder and vacillate, you rarely make foolish mistakes. Detached and not overly emotional, you are almost always objective and fair-minded. You are people-oriented, but more inclined toward the group than the individual. Your interests are varied, and you're apt to be a life-long student.

Ruled by: Mercury
Mercury's sign describes your thought processes and projection. It's closely associated with its natural home, the third house of learning and communication. Mercury relates to your general intellectual orientation, and the expression of your thoughts and ideas. In other words, it describes the way you think and communicate, and the way you get information. Mercury also shows how you like to travel through life. Are you a speedster who takes the most direct route, or do you amble and get sidetracked sometimes?
Gemini is the natural home for Mercury, and the placement produces pure logical reasoning of the highest order. This Mercury denotes a lightning quick thinker. Your concern is with fact and unbiased understanding, rather than personal preference. Communication is easy, rapid, accurate and often eloquent. You are an interesting and incessant conversationalist. Mercury is at its quickest and best when it resides in Gemini. If given proper training, you excel in mathematics as well as in language. You are very logical, and your min moves very quickly. You love logic, a fact making you an excellent teacher or reporter.
When engaged in arguments, you may miss a basic premise, but you are clever enough to win anyway. The opponent is convinced by your rational remarks. You have a great variety of interests, and your mind may flit from one idea to the next, never digging in very deeply. You have an intense curiosity leading you to want to know a little about nearly everything. This makes you a very interesting person, but rarely an expert in any particular field.
The down side of Mercury in Gemini is the sensitive nervous system often noted. It's hard for you to shut out external stimulation of any sort. You may find yourself being forced to deal with too much activity and too many impressions from time to time. If you allow yourself to be subjected to too much stress and too many demands for an extended period, you can become frazzled and subject to breakdown. The obvious signs of this problem are irritability and mental confusion. The root cause of this is simply spreading yourself too thin. Getting away from it all generally provides a quick cure

Metals: Mercury
To the medieval alchemists Mercury was the metal symbolizing duality. Metallic yet liquid, matter yet spirit, cold yet fiery... Mercury was the metal uniting all the opposites..

Tarot Cards:
King of Pentacles,
Lovers
Mode of Expression: Mutable
The preponderance of mutable signs in your horoscope denotes adaptability, and you may be so changeable that it is almost impossible to pin you down. You are apt to find yourself going off in several directions at the same time as you have great difficulty focusing your attention to one thing. You are able to fit easily into most situations. You adapt yourself to all sorts of experiences in life, and like a chameleon, you are able to adjust. Personal and sentimental, you are concerned with people rather than ideals or personal ambitions. You have an inner desire for much personal freedom, though you may find decision-making and self-directed actions difficult. You learn from the past, and in fact, you may occasionally dwell in the past rather than concentrating on the future. You're flexible and ingenious in emergencies because of your innate ability to improvise

Positive trait: Adaptable
Negative trait: Cursory

Sun/moon sign: Scorpio
The combination of your Sun sign and your Moon sign produces an intellectual quickness and an emotional depth that makes you an exceptionally forceful, magnetic, and versatile person. You are especially quick and active, while being extremely receptive and tuned in to other people. Surprisingly, these exceptional traits may not necessarily make you the leader that is implied. With all this strength, you are easily persuaded and influenced, and sometimes led astray or distracted from doing what you might be thought capable of doing. You're never opposed to taking a chance or getting out on a limb. Sensationalism is always appealing to you, and this is reflected in your actions, and perhaps in the friends you select, as well. You may expend a good deal of your energies chasing personal pleasures rather than keeping your nose to the grindstone. You can pursue any project with such great intensity, but never for any long periods of time. Overindulging and getting your finger to too many pies can result in problems if you aren't careful, and you are not one who is usually very careful. There is little you couldn't do if you could get your mental and emotional nature pulling together in the same constructive direction.

Classification: Cadent

Numerology:
The Life Path Number-7
A Life Path 7 person is a peaceful and affectionate soul, and by nature rather reserved and analytical. The overwhelming strength of the number 7 is reflected in the depth of thinking that is shown; you will garner knowledge from practically every source that you find. Intellectual, scientific and studious, you don't accept a premise until you have dissected the subject and arrived at you own independent conclusion.
This is a very spiritual number and it often denotes a sort of spiritual wisdom that becomes apparent at a fairly early age. You need a good deal of quiet time to be with your own inner thoughts and dreams. You dislike crowds, noise and confusion. You are very thorough and complete in your work, the perfectionist who expects everyone else to be a meet a high standard of performance, too. You evaluate situations very quickly and with amazing accuracy. You rely heavily on your experiences and your intuition, rather than
accepting advice from someone; your hunches usually prove to be very accurate, and knowing this, you are one who tends to follow the directions they seem to guide. It's easy for you to detect deception and recognize insincere people. You aren't one to have a wide circle of friends, but once you accept someone as a friend, it's for life. You really aren't a very social person, and your reserve is often taken to be aloofness. Actually, it's not that at all, but merely a cover up for your basic feeling of insecurity. You actually like being alone, away from the hustle and bustle of modern life. In many ways, you would have fit in better in much earlier times when the pace of life was less hectic. In the most negative use of the 7 energies, you can become very pessimistic, lackadaisical, quarrelsome, and secretive. A Life Path 7 individual who is not living life fully and gaining through experiences, is a hard person to live with because of a serious lack of consideration and because there is such a negative attitude. The negative 7 is very selfish and spoiled. If you have any of the negative traits they are very difficult to get rid of because you tend to feel that the world really does owe you a living or in some way is not being fairly treated. Fortunately, the negative 7 is not the typical 7, at least not without some mitigating positive traits. This number is one that seems to have some major shifts from highs to lows. Stability in feelings may be elusive for you.

The Expression Number-3
An Expression of 3 produces a quest for destiny with words along a variety of lines that may include writing, speaking, singing, acting or teaching; our entertainers, writers, litigates, teachers, salesmen, and composers. You also have the destiny to sell yourself or sell just about any product that comes along. You are imaginative in your presentation, and you may have creative talents in the arts, although these are more likely to be latent. You are an optimistic person that seems ever enthusiastic about life and living. You are friendly, loving and social, and people like you because you are charming and such a good conversationalist. Your ability to communicate may often inspire others. It is your role in life to inspire
and motivate; to raise the spirits of those around you. The negative side of number 3 Expression is superficiality. You may tend to scatter your forces and simply be too easygoing. It is advisable for the negative 3 to avoid dwelling on trivial matters, especially gossip.

The Soul Urge- 8
With an 8-soul urge, you have a natural flare for big business and the challenges imposed by the commercial world. Power, status and success are very important to you. You have strong urges to supervise, organize and lead. Material desires are also very pronounced. You have good executive abilities, and with these, confidence, energy and ambition.
Your mind is analytical and judgment sound; you're a good judge of material values and also human character. Self-controlled, you rarely let emotions cloud judgment. You are somewhat of an organizer at heart, and you like to keep those beneath you organized and on a proper track. This is a personality that wants to lead, not follow. You want to be known for your planning ability and solid judgment.
The negative aspects of the 8-soul urge are the often dominating and exacting attitude. You may have a tendency to be very rigid, sometimes stubborn.

Your Inner Dreams-3
3.You dream of artistic expression; writing, painting, music. You would seek to more freely express your inner feeling and obtain more enjoyment from life. You also dream of being more popular, likable, and appreciated.

The Birthdays-23
With a birthday on the 23rd of the month (5 energy) you are inclined to work well with people and enjoy them. You are talented and versatile, very good at presenting ideas. You may have a tendency to get itchy feet at times and need change and travel.
You tend to be very progressive, imaginative and adaptable. Your mind is quick, clever and analytical. Restlessness in your nature may make you a bit impatient and easily bored with routine. You may have a tendency to shirk responsibility. Very sociable, you make friends easily and you are an excellent traveling companion.

Blood type: 0
-Sociable, energetic, extroverted,
-Frank and realistic,
-Showy, flighty, generalist and highly sociable
-Makes friends easily and goes with flow
-Grasps opportunity and is very flexible to gain the better opportunity
-Quick to start a project or chase an idea but tends to let them fall off towards the end
-When prospects are bad are first to bail out
-Short attention spans and easily bored
-Express strong emotions and may quickly take opposite view
-Declarations are deep but not always durable or well planned
-Classic entrepreneur
-Move from place to place, prefer large Urban centers
-Express their emotions readily but can be swayed by other blood types
-Has an intrinsic elegance
-More often performer
-Easily adapt to new circumstances
-Are enigmatic speakers and words come to them readily
-Not self-conscious
-Frank, reveal inner feelings
-Ambitious and realistic
-Materialism is more important than intellectual property
-May have problems with detail
-Higher aptitude to crime

Dissy: Okay, truth of the matter here, is that while you have a lot of information it is pretty clear that you pretty much just copied and pasted it from some web site. This is very close to, if not plagiarism. Also, there’s so much and it’s hard to read through. Lastly, when you find information like this, you should cut it down to the parts that apply to your character and then rewrite them in your own words down in the personality section. What you have is good, but you need to have at least made it your own words, and then also decide where all this really belongs, because while numerology and tarot are interesting, they don’t belong in the same place as birthday and name analysis.
Vessy: Stuff like this is really useful in developing and defining the personality but its seriously like half the app ^-^;; good work on the research but less is more as the saying goes. If you want to include these vast amounts of information maybe include them on a seperate webpage with a link...

Physical Details:
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 110
Hair: Amara has a rich red hair with light orange highlights. It has a light rain scent to it due to the shampoo she uses. Her bangs are thin, parted in the center and are cut weird because the hairdresser messed up when doing her bangs. He cut them so they go to her eyebrow with some pieces falling over her eyes; he made the bangs by her ears go to her eyebrow. Her hair is always done up in a pony-tail with an gold ribbon except when she is cheerleading then her hair is done up in two pigtails, gel and hair spray to keep it up through the day because she usually curls it before she goes to school. When loose her hair goes down to her shoulders and is fine with a bit of a curl here and there.
Eyes: Amara has her fathers sparkling sky blue eyes but inherited her mother's black ring around the outside of the iris. She usually wears light pink eye shadow on her eyelids and mascara on her long, fine black eyelashes. Her eyebrows are a different story... She has her grandmother's eyebrows, which are small, thin light brown colored eyebrows that are in a long arc shape.
Features: The only interesting feature is her nose. She has a small nose that has an upper turn to it (her dad calls it a ski slope: P). Apart from that her features are plain. She wears a small set of silver hoops everyday on the bottom part of her ears; she also has a small silver stud on the top of her right ear. Her lips are a light pink and thin.
Skin: Her cheeks have a natural rosy blush to them, while the rest of her skin is pale bronze due to a fair tan. On her upper right arm she has a tattoo of a grape vine that wraps all away around her upper arm. She wears pink nail polish once every while but not to often.
 
Vessy: Isn't she a bit young to have a tatoo?

Voice: Amara has a mezzo soprano kind of voice, it's not to high and it's not to low, when she's talking her voice has this sort of laid back, carefree, yet expressive tone to it.
Build: Amara has the build of a 15 year old, she's not skinny but she's not fat, she doesn't have a lot of curves either and always wears a male uniform to school so she's usually mistaken for a young boy with long hair. She has muscles on her arms, & legs because of all the sports she's in. She about 5'-5'1 and weights 110. (Most people call her ani...anirex..........Anirexit?? I think that how you spell it, I better spell check it...Anorexic. That better be right. oh well...what I mean is someone who doesn't eat a lot and is very thin and doesn't weigh much)
 
Vessy: http://healthfullife.umdnj.edu/editor/METROLIFE_table.htm 110 is quite a healthy weight for someone with a small frame and is 5'2" don't know why they would call her anorexic it is a bit on the light side but not overly so.
Okay now here's the ringer. She's a cheerleader, captain no less... and yet she's not preppy and wears a guys uniform... I mean I'm all for non-convention and receiving positions based upon talent... but... I somehow don't think the blonde hair and ponytail, and make-up and hoop earrings quite... score with being mistaken for a young boy...

Physical strength: Amara plays soccer, basketball, volley ball and is a cheerleader she has good strength and could probably lift things heaver then her...but only for a short time, she can carry her friends around but will eventually need help. She is very flexible and she can run a good distance without getting tired, which is necessary for the sports she plays in.
 
Vessy: Perhaps you mean "football" hehe... okay bad european pun...

Hand: right
Attire/Clothing: Amara goes to a private school called Fuori Regina Scuola that means fire queen school in English. Her uniform consists of a white dress shirt with white buttons, a black tie with a red border, a pair of red pants, white socks with black dress shoes and a black blazer that has her school name in red on the back and her cheerleader number on her right arm.

Dissy: Hmmm…..I dunno, we already have St.T’s if she wants private, and besides that we have the whole slew of Romulous schools….We’ll find out what Ki-chan thinks about adding to the list of schools. I personally am having second and third thoughts about it.
Vessy: I'm not against a new school but it just makes it easier and more plausible for storylines ot occur if kids are at the same schools... But Its fine with me if you really really want a seperate school... o.O 

She has two different types of cheerleading uniforms; her practice uniform consists of a plain white t-shirt with her number on the right sleeve a red skirt, knee high white socks and sneakers. her formal uniform consists of a red sleeveless shirt with a white bib like thing the goes past her skirt in the back, a red skirt, knee high red socks and black sneakers.
 
Vessy: Thats a pretty tripped out Formal uniform... and dude how long is that bib if it goes past her skirt...?

On normal bases, she wears a baby blue spaghetti strap top, a pair of blue Capri's and platform black sandals. In the winter she wears a blue sweater with a white t-shirt under it, a pair of black jeans, ankle length boots.

Gemstone: Emerald
Known to bring good fortune, the emerald is said to empower its owner with foresight. Its rich green hues reflect nature and symbolize fertility, rebirth and springtime. Legends claim wearing an emerald will strengthen memory, guard against evil spirits and reveal the truth of a lover's love. Once a favorite of Cleopatra, emeralds are the birthstone for May.

Likes:
Walking in the woods: Amara doesn't know why she likes walking in the woods, she thinks that she likes walking in the woods because it is a calm quite area. She found a small clearing near a river, she likes to sit by the bank and draw or think about everything

Dissy: Just a question, what woods? There really isn’t much in the way of wild nature inside Rome, and it’s got to be a pretty long drive and an even longer walk to get to any forest area. Now if you said she likes to walk the ruins at the edges of rome, that would make more sense, since it’s less people and there’s likely to be more overgrowth on the ruins there.

Rain: Amara loves to watch the rain, it helps her sleep or give her new ideas, sometimes she will go out for a walk in the middle of a rain storm just for the fun of it.
Swimming: Amara loves to free swim, it's a good training sport and it can quite relaxing and fun. She will spend hours in the pool swimming or floating around, if a friend is with her she will hold a race to see who the fastest swimmer is.
Ballroom dancing: Amara started ballroom dancing when she was 14. She tried many types of dancing before but none of them caught her interest until she discovered ballroom dancing. She goes to a lot of fancy parties and doesn't feel left out when people are ballroom dancing because she knows how to dance now.

Dislikes:
Running: Amara hates running, she says it's too tiring and she can't enjoy the scenery around her. She has to run in gym and for cheerleading but that's all. She walks to school, even when she's late and hates track and field. She prefers walking.
Football:(hehe this is funny, well for me it is) Amara has bad experience with football, she remembers breaking bones, being bruised up so she tends to stay away from football. If she does play and the ball is passed to her she'll run towards the girls locker room and lock herself in there.

Dissy: just for clarification, you mean football with kicking and running and the black and white ball, not American football with the brown ball, right?
Vessy: I think she means american football because it was mentioned she played soccer above... or maybe she does mean actual football... I'm very confused...

Hobbies:
Cooking: Amara loves to cook, when she's not drawing, or cheerleading she's at the oven baking something or looking in a recipe book for something to bake. She bakes a lot of things, cookies, squares, fudge; she was in home economics but stopped taking it because it got boring. (She makes a great mom, ne?)
Cheerleading: She goes to practice twice a week and appears at every meeting. She is the captain of the cheerleading squad and is very proud of this. She practices when she's home and during gym when they get to do whatever they want. She thinks that Nadine deserves to be captain but Nadine won't take it.
Drawing: Amara has the gift of art, she can draw many things, flowers, rivers, landscapes, cartoons and sometimes people. She walks to her special place in the woods and sits by the river and draws what's in her heart at the time, if she doesn't like the picture she'll flip the page over and try again. No one knows about her hobby for drawing or where her special place is.

Dissy: This seems out of context with everything I’ve read so far. She’s a sporty person right? Well, I don’t know many people who spend a lot of their time in sports and sti;;
Vessy: Betty Crocker!

Personality: Amara is a very mysterious person to all those around her and what is known as a true Gemini. When you are around her, she barely ever speaks but when she does her voice has a calm soothing tone to it, which makes people feel more comfortable. (V- I'm sorry but being non-talkative is not really a Gemini trait. Its probably THE most common Gemini trait... thats just weird...She is a sensitive person and will share her pity to those who need it. Amara is really smart, quick witted and a quick thinker who loves to talk (V- But you just said she doesn't talk very often!) and make friends while adapting to the life around her. She loves to work but she tends to daydream and she never gets the work done until the last minute. Amara thinks before she acts or says...but sometimes she slips and ends up hurting someone's feelings, making her feel bad for the rest of the day. Amara likes to be on time and is a very determined person; she is also forceful and will take action to make sure something is done right and on time. At school Amara looks and acts calm, but on the inside she is as cold as ice. People always make the same mistake and try to get to know her, but end up failing because she will usually give the cold shoulder and ignore them. Amara is a cold person that chooses her friends wisely; she likes to hang around in a group of people that aren't snobs but nice caring people that will teach her how to be kind and learn to live life. (V- But you just said she was rather cold and exclusive! If she hangs out with "people that will teach her how to be kind and learn to live life." would that teach her to be more accepting towards other people?) Amara likes to talk and read but she hates to be alone. She likes the unusual and to have a variety in life, she also likes multiple projects all going at once. She hates learning at school and prefers to be home schooled. Overall Amara is a mysterious, extroverted person that tends to be cold hearted to most people.

Dissy: didn’t you say that she procrastinated a lot? Then you go on to say that she works hard to make sure that everything’s done on time. That’s probably a contradiction that you missed, but if you were trying to say that while she does procrastinate, she does manage to get everything done on time and to a certain degree of quality, then that would be a better way of saying it. Another contradiction you make here is where you say she’s cold and chooses her friends carefully. The stuff you have up above with the name analysis and birthday and numerology and all that clearly say that she’s friendly and likes being popular, but is easily swayed. Also, you say she hates being alone, but then people who hate being alone usually try to befriend as many people as possible so they aren’t ever alone, but you say she chooses her friends carefully. Lastly, the personality is really short, a lot shorter than we like to see.
Vessy: Well her personality seems quite a bit contradictory. She likes to talk but barely speaks. She is kind hearted and pitying but cold hearted and exclusive. She likes ebing around people but is homeschooled... and on that note how you're contradicting previous notes of how she is on teams, and wears uniforms. And I'm not really getting that extroverted flavour you're speaking of... Basically it just needs clarity and a single course of direction.
 


History:
Amara is the daughter of Teresa and Moreno Oriana in Rome Italy. She is an only child and has very few cousins. Her mother was a teacher and her father was an archeologist, they both wanted to share their knowledge and love to her, by the age of 4 her mother was teaching her how to read while her dad told her Myths about different countries which she grew to believe where real. Amara started to go to school and made many friends knowing she would probably leave for a few months to go with her dad to another country but that never happened. Her father went away without telling anyone leaving Amara and her mom heartbroken.

Dissy: Oh boy, sob story……
Vessy: Uh. . . why?

Her and her mom moved to a different house in Rome and started a new life without her father; even though she was hurt she knew that this would happen again. During the move Amara meet her next-door neighbors, the house on her left was the Diviana family, they had a little girl named Nadine which Amara and her mom grew to adore, the house on her right was empty but it had a sold sign in front of it.
Many years later her father returned but left again a week later only saying that he and his crew found a site in Egypt. He did this many times until Amara couldn't take it anymore and blew at her father when he came home, she yelled things like " Your work seems to be more important then me! Why?! I know Archeology is important to you...but your never home" and " Why don't you go marry your work, since you love it so much!!" After that she knew she ruined her relationship with her father, but she didn't care because she knew he would keep on doing what he was doing. While she was in middle school her parents had a divorce knowing it would for the good of the family. During that time she got another neighbor the Azucena's and their daughter Morena. Amara and constantly argued about one thing or another. Other than that Amara decided she wanted to move to America and become a CSI. Her decision was final and she didn't think about till high school.

Dissy: Okay that came out of no where….o0;;

In her first year of high school, she began to study, English, Math, Science and Art as while as gym. She found out she was better at gym then she though so she joined the cheerleading club with Nadine who taught her all the moves that she needed to know. After months of practicing she became the captain -of the team. Her mother was so pleased that she came to every game just to see her daughter lead the cheerleading squad at the beginning and after each victory.

Dissy: Well that was…interesting. It’s a sob story, which is just something we don’t like to see, and also there’s a lack of coherence, or any continuing theme. If her father’s being away bothers her so much, you would think she’d still have issues with it today. problems in a family don’t end simply because of a divorce…at least they usually don’t.
Vessy: And here's why you should not attempt bio writing late at night after consuming large amounts of caffeine and probably after/while watching TV...
The main thing that bugs me about this sob story is that its just so out of the blue. Its all "lalalalala perfect family" *BAM* father leaves with no warning and no notice. Its just so random... then ten years later he's in and out at his leisure... and yelling at her father probably wouldn't ruin their relationship... especially if they don't really have one because he's been AWAY for 10 years... okay we need reasoning. You may know why she wants to be a CSI but we don't so tell us. Go throught and add the details and reasoning behind whats happening. For we are three year old and need everything explained with short words and pretty pictures :)


NPCs:
1) Nadine Diviana- Next door neighbors and best friends. She is a fellow classmate and cheerleader at Fuori Regina Scuola. The two girls are so close they treat each other like the sister they never had. They do everything together, shopping, studing, cheerleading but like all friends and siblings they tend to get into a small argument once in a while. Nadine has short wavy blonde hair that reaches to her ear and forest green eyes. Nadine dresses in the high school female uniform, which consists of white blouse with white buttons, a black tie with a red border a red vest, a calf length red skirt, white socks with black dress shoes and a black blazer with the school name in red on the back and her cheerleader number on her right arm.
(Extra note: Nadine Diviana means Hope Goddess)

2) Morena Azucena-Morena is Amara's rival and classmate at Fuori Regina Scuola. Morena or More as most people call her has long waist length black hair and purple eyes, which leaves Amara wondering if she's all that she seems. Morena wants to be a model when she's older and travel the world with a rich husband. Morena and amara fight over everything little thing, but since Morena's voice is very soft she can't yell very loud. Morena dresses in the high school female uniform but she also wears black tank tops and baggy black pants with knee high heel boots.

3) Teresa Oriana - Lively and beautiful, kind and nurturing, all the things a mother should be*in some cases* Amara and her are really close and see each almost all the time. Teresa is one of the teachers at Fuori Regina Scuola and no matter how busy she is after school she tries to be the "best" mom there is, but only in Amara's eyes she is. Teresa is kind to all Amara's friend but her favorite is Nadine, who she treats with full respect and always allows her to come over when ever she wants and how long she wants. Teresa has shoulder length orange hair, which is done in a loose ponytail and blue eyes. She wears the female teacher uniform, which is a white blouse, red jacket, red knee length skirt and red high heel shoes.

4) Moreno Oriana- Strong, tall and serious but never home. He has a kind face; full of wisdom from everything he has learned over the last 40 years of his life. He has midnight black hair and sky blue eyes that shine of wisdom. Amara and Moreno don't have a very good relationship, in fact Amaradoesn't even like her father because as she always says" Your work seems to be more important then me! Why?! I know Archeology is important to you...but your never home". After that they haven't talked to each other. Moreno is an archeologist so he usually wears a pair of tan pants, old brown boots and a tan shirt.

5) Harvey - Harvey is the new boy at Fuori Regina Scuola. He keeps to himself and never allows anyone to know him except for Amara, which they became good friends. Amara has a small crush on him but doesn't tell anyone do to the fear of a rumor. Harvey has short blonde hair and shining gray eyes that show every emotion all at once. Harvey is learning how to drive and is looking forward to being able to pick Amara up every day before school and drop her off. Harvey wears the male school uniform most, but other than that he wears a white shirt, a pair of blue jeans and his school uniform shoes.
 
Vessy: Does Harvey have a last name?
 
Part III: Senshi Information

Special Skills:
Amara's skill isn't that amazing, she's just like the saying "red sky at night sailors delight, red sky in the morning sailors take warning". She can tell if there's going to be a storm that day... Sometimes she wrong, she doesn't tell people about her skill, she just tells them she heard it on the news.

Dissy: Erm…that doesn’t really seem relevant to her power base, something more likely to be Aurora’s special skill is to have an inate sense of what tie sunrise was at that morning without having to look at a newspaper or a tv screen.

Henshin Item: Amara's henshin item is a small golden half sun charm, which is on a golden chain. The charm is only 24 karate so it's not valuable, but when it's on her chocker it's made of pure gold and shines like a star.

Transformation: "Aurora Deus Power Make-Up!" Amara removes the charm from the necklace and puts her hand together while holding the charm in the air she throws her head to the side as the ribbon from her hair fall out making her hair loose. She throws her head back and closes her eyes. The pendent glows red creating a eerie red light around her. When the light fades her body is wrapped in a pastel red ribbon, she puts her head back and opens her eyes as the symbol appears on her forehead. She put her hands across her chest and places the pendent on her right shoulder. She raises one foot in the air and the ribbons on her feet disappear and her shoes are there instead. She removes her hand as her bodice appears. She spins making the ribbon fall off her gloves, skirt, skit flaps and armor. She close's her eye as a bright light appears behind her. She raises her right arm as her Yari raises from the ground she grabs it with her left and places the tip in the ground beside her keeping her left on the handle and her right hand in the air. She raises her right knee in the air as she looks down. The sun raises behind her as her symbol appears in gold

Color: pastel red
 
Vessy: Okay is this Pastel red like a light color of red which Clothing companies have labelled Pastel (ie: easter type colors) or Pastel like the color of actual pastels which is quite dark and vibrant?

Symbol: Aurora's symbol is a golden half sun.
 
Vessy: Half sun? In what way? um... like a solar eclipse? or like a rising sun... maybe we could have a picture for this? I mean even in paint would be great!

Fuku/Costume:
Symbol: pastel red on the forehead
Chocker: pastel red with her symbol in gold in the center
Collar: pastel red
Henshin broach: pastel red with her symbol engraved in the center.
Bodice: white with a pastel red sunray design on the bottom.
Armor: gold with a pastel red trim going around the edge of the breastplate and shoulder plate
Wristband: elbow length, fingerless gloves with a pastel red half design on her wrist
Skirt: pastel red with golden trim.
Skirt flaps: orange with golden sunrays going up the front two
Boots: high heel pastel red sandals that tie up half way to her knee with a gold ribbon

Dissy: Eeks! please oh please keep the armor silver, please!
Vessy: what sunray design? Can we maybe have a bit more description or a doodle or something?

Powers/Attacks: "Land of Raising Sun!!" Aurora jabs the Yari in the ground making the land turn red. The sun begins to rise making all the gold pieces shine. She pulls the yari out of the ground and points it towards the raising sun. A small ball of energy forms at the tip; while the energy ball grows she begins to turn around. Once she's facing the enemy completely she fires it and begins to run. Right before the blast hits the creature she slices through it and tries to slash the enemy as well. Raising sun can do one of two things but one takes up more energy than the other so she prefers to run and cut through the ball of energy because she has a better chance of hitting the monster since it has a 50/50 chance of being blinded by the light. If the monster isn't blinded it can be blocked by another weapon or dodged.
The one that takes more energy and the one that she never uses is where she allows the ball of energy to hit the monster, then running up to attack; this move can be easily dodged but not blocked.

Dissy: What does the energy ball do to her opponent, burn them, char them to an unrecognizable piece of coal? Add that in here.
Vessy: *Dances to 'House of the rising sun' and 'Blinded by the light'* I mean hehehe. . .
Weapons:

The Yari of the Raising Sun: A straight reddish brown wooden spear with a silver arrowhead. It stands approximately six feet in length. A golden half sun is on the bottom with a bunch of golden ribbons representing the rays, at the top there is a pastel red ribbon wrapped around and tied in a neat little bow.

Part IV: Miscellaneous Information

Why you:
Why I'm I writing this I don't know, I'm new to the world of Rpg's and I'm proud of it, I saw this web page on Anime Web Turnpike. I entered it, read the story and became interested, but the thing is I didn't know how to make a character suit your needs, her she is the lovely Sailor Aurora, that I created. She is done how you want all the scouts done. Why me...I'm never good at these things.. well I'm a hyper happy girl that plays D&D at lunch hour during school. Yep I'm in school, grade 10. I'm new to online RPGing but that's okay, I have to be to something.
Miscellaneous: I'm new in the world of online RPGing.

 
Part V: The Writing Sample
'I've always told to never give up, to hold on to what I got, to stand strong and never and she means never give up on my dreams and goals," thought a young 17 year old girl as she lay in bed with her eyes closed ' That really helped me, now I'm working harder, so I can be what I want to be.' She opened her eyes to reveal two stunning blue eyes, ' I can't sleep,' she thought 'I know I'll go for a walk.' The young girl got out of bed and got dressed. She put on a black pair of jeans and a red top with a black jacket; she put on a pair of black leather boots and headed to her make-up table. She looked in the mirror as she brushed her red hair; she put the brush down and opened the door that lead to the hallway ' If I can pass my mom's room.... I'll...I'll be home free' she thought. She walked pass her mom's room and headed downstairs and out the front door,
"Where can I go," she said to herself "I know the woods!" She took out her Discman and headed to the park.
She walked to the park and walked along one of the many trails in the woods until she found her hiding spot, she sat down on a large rock and turned her Discman on and went to song #5, the song filled her ears as she closed her eyes and thought of everything that happened during the day.
I never cared too much for love
It was all a bunch of mush that I just did not want
Paid was the issue of the day
If a girlfriend's got some game
Couldn't be more fly, gettin' paid was everything
But I'm not every girl and I don't need that world to validate me
'Cos shorty's got a job, shorty's got a car, shorty can pay her own rent
Don't wanna dance if it is not in my heart
Most girls want a man with the bling bling
Got my own thing, got the ching ching
I just want real love
Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be everything that I dream of
A man that understands real love
I was a girl about the floss
It was all about the cost, how much he spent on me
Seek, for a man who's got the means
To be givin' you diamond rings
It's what every fly girl could want or even dream
But I'm not every girl and I don't need no G to take care of me
'Cos shorty's got a job, shorty's got a car, shorty can pay her own rent
Don't wanna dance if it is not in my heart, no no
Most girls want a man with the bling bling
Got my own thing, got the ching ching
I just want real love
Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be everything that I dream of
A man that understands real love
Most girls want a man with the bling bling
Got my own thing, got the ching ching
I just want real love
Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be everything that I dream of
A man that understands real love
But I'm not every girl
And I don't need no G to take care of me, no
'Cos shorty's got a job, shorty's got a car, shorty can pay her own rent
Don't wanna dance if it is not in my heart, oh most girls
Most girls want a man with the bling bling
Got my own thing, got the ching ching
I just want real love
Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be everything that I dream of
A man that understands real love
Most girls want a man with the bling bling
Got my own thing, got the ching ching
I just want real love
Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be everything that I dream of
A man that understands real love
'Cos I'm not most girls, don't wanna dance if he can't be everything
I, I just want real love, said I gotta have real love
Everything that, can you be everything that I dream of
"What would Nadine say if she saw me listening to this song?" she asked her self, "She would probably say Amara, stop listening to that song or are you thinking of something or someone!" The girl know as Amara stood up and walked back towards the main road, "Who would I be thinking of, well maybe that Harvey kid, but still, he doesn't like me"
"Who doesn't like who?" asked a male voice
"Harvey?" asked Amara as she turned around "What are you doing here?"
"Shouldn't I ask the same?" he said with a smile
"I'm heading home after a long walk in the woods," she said coldly
"Oh, I'm sorry," replied Harvey with a sad tone
"Wait, I'm sorry, I'm just tired," said Amara "but I really need to go, see you tomorrow?"
"Yeah sure, bye...Mara" said Harvey as he turned and walked away
"He's not so bad...Wait a minute Mara?" she muttered to herself as she walked home with the words "A man that understands real love" stuck in her head.
Vessy: Err... whats with the song lyrics? *shrugs*
 

Dissy: Well, this is a very good app for a first try, or for being one of your first tries. Truth it that it lacks coherency. Things don ’t match up and other things contradict themselves, the CSI thing was out of nowhere and didn ’t make a lot of sense. The app shows that you ’re on the right track but the character you ’ve created here has so many wholes and unclear behaviors that I don ’t see much of a point in putting it in the revisions stack.
One thing that will help in understanding what we want to see in an application is to read the applications that we have accepted, especially the ones that were accepted without any revisions needed. Please don’t take anything we’ve said in here too seriously, and we’d love for you to reapply with a new character sometime in the future, but this particular character would need a complete and total make-over to make her work for our RPG. Please try again at some point though.
Dissy’s Verdict = Reject, Revise
 
 
Vessy: Overall not bad. Lacks coherancy most of all. Personality - Overall pick one side of her personality or the other stop havering between the two, then take the points from that side of the personality and give it the meat and detail it needs. History - Overall good and workable it just needs the details to back up the events (ie: why did he leave, why does she want to become a csi?) Other than that its mostly little things (ie: the gold on the uniform) that need adjustments. And put the effort in which you gathered all that wonderful Analysis stuff and put it into History and Personality. You're on the right track! Keep up the good work.
Vessy's Verdict = Revise or Die!
 
Overall Vedict = Revise or DIE!
 
 
 
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