Soldier Part I: Player Information
Your Name: Well, technically Aeryn, but I go by
Metsuki and answer to it more readily ^^;
Part II: Character Information
Character Position: SailorAesculapius (Lucidus Senshi)
Character Name: Ariadne Theropeva
Name Meaning: – Ariadne is Most Sacred, Theropeva is Heal, cure, wait on;
(both are Greek, although Theropeva is Ancient) I’m going for the Healer thing
here x.x Her Senshi form is the Healer, and since she’s identified with a
goddess, she’s gonna be sacred (duh), and plus it does a bit for her
personality… So basically, Most Sacred Healer
Birth date and Age / Zodiacal Sign: 15-16 (Whichever would be more
relevant); March 1st, making her Pisces. The Pisceans (I LOVE that word^^) are
the supersensitive bunch in the Zodiac, and they are intuitive and easily
adaptable, but tend to be out of touch with the real world. They dislike
violence, and like pretty and nice things. Yep. There’s Ariadne, to a point.
Vessy: Pick an age it's your character.
Physical Details:
Eyes: Blue. Very, very blue. Mediterranean blue.
One-look-knocks-you-flat-on-your-face-because-they’re-so-freakin’ blue. At the
risk of being repetitive, Ariadne’s eyes are bright, striking blue, extremely
large, with an interesting upward-tilt at the outward edges. They are fringed
with very long lashes that are pale blonde, and topped by neat, delicately
arched, (oddly enough) dark brows. They have the whole depthless-pool quality,
and if for any reason you stare into them, it seems like they are too deep to
see your reflection. They are her emotional windows, and regardless of her
facial expression, what she really feels is right there, plain as day, in her
eyes. ((I’m an eye freak. Leave me alone. o.^))
Hair: Superfine and very long, braided, it would swing at her waist;
the color cannot be put any other way than white. It’s just white. You could
rationalize it by saying she naturally had light blonde hair, and years in the
sun bleached it out… or maybe it’s just white. She tends to part it just barely
off center, then pull just the sides back and tie them, and if she’s doing
something where long hair is extremely impractical, she will gather it up and
coil it on her head, but she never, ever braids it. Ever. When she pulls the
sides back or puts it up, several random small pieces fall around her face and
ears, and they either never grow out, or are replaced as they do, because she’s
had them forever.
Vessy: Why doesn't she briad it? is it cus she
can't/doesn't know how? Hates how it looks? secretly joined a the church of
modern day anti-braidist and the committee for Braid abolishion and they'll kill
her if she braids it? Why?
Build and carriage: To be perfectly honest and blunt, Ariadne’s a
shrimpy little thing. She comes in at all of 4’11¼", and she only hopes to be
five-one as an adult. Her diminutive stature doesn’t bother her at all, however,
and she doesn’t try to compensate. She carries herself perfectly upright, even
so, but it’s a good thing she isn’t trying to look taller, because it doesn’t
work. She isn’t bony at all, thank Heaven, but is built wiry and lean, and short
of going on a three-month fat binge, there’s just not much she can do about it.
As to curve, well, really, there’s none there. Optimistically, she can be said
to have a cute figure, but really, she’s easily discernibly female and it stops
there.
Skin, facial features, mundane dress: Early life (and a tendency to be)
in the sun has given her a golden-brown skin tone. I do not mean tanned, because
that is brown. I mean something almost Asian; golden-brown like sand, or the
perfect cookie. Ariadne would not really ever be called beautiful; she simply
hasn’t got the look. She’s more of what you’d think of when you hear the word
‘ethereal’. Her eyes are large (or maybe huge would be a better word), her
cheekbones are high, her face rather narrow, her chin slightly pointed. All that
really negates the image is her skin color, and even that’s not too bad. This
may sorta be thought of as good looks, but the initial attraction would almost
never be appearance (unless the giant blue eyes hook you in).
Whatever her school may allow, she dresses conservatively, mainly. Shirts
she favors in shades of blue, turquoise, green, one of the three mixed with
purple, and white. These all tend to be rather plain, save her penchant for
empire waists, belled sleeves, and/or square necks. Vests and cardigans also
appear. She will wear nothing, pants/skirts or shirts, which is skintight,
although a somewhat formfitting shirt isn’t utterly against her principles. In
bottomwear (is that a word?), she prefers khakis and jeans, although she isn’t
averse to anything else but leather. Her favorites are pants cropped at the
mid-shin, and skirts below the knee. A rumor at one point said that she has a
pair of short-shorts in a drawer, but most people considered it untrue. She’s
mine and I can tell you that it was factual, but she won’t wear them in public.
To school, she would generally wear a pair of khaki pants/a khaki shirt and a
nicer shirt or cardigan or vest, although jeans make a rare appearance on days
where an event makes the atmosphere more informal.
Vessy: Okay now I'm down with scary coincidences and I
tend to go looking for them but I SWEAR TO GOD this is exactly exactly my friend
Crissy. Right down to everything. maybe her hair is a tiny bit blonder due to...
we live in Canada and don't get QUITE that much sun. But the scary-ness of this
is frightening. No seriously. It's like looking at her picture (well actually
it's like comparing the summary to the grad picture I have of her, but still
down with the scary-ness man! Seriously! Are you secretley her playing herself
as a character?
Dustin: Okay no more X-files for you missy it's
late and your tired, STEP AWAY FROM THE APP
Blood type: A, only, maybe not very nervous?
Gemstone: Lapis lazuli
Dissy: Why? In other words what are the qualities of
the stone that made you chose it
Likes: The ocean, first and foremost, because of her earlier childhood (see
history); full and crescent moons (just… pretty…); deer, gazelles, dik-diks,
muntjacs, or any other remotely deer-like creature (because of their graceful
movements and speed); white flowers (they have this aura, almost, of innocence
and purity that she loves. They seem, in her words, "like hope"); anything blue;
stars (they’ve always been there, always will, and even as their majesty awes
the bejeebers out of you, they looks small and almost unassuming); the truth; a
clean conscience (like she ever doesn’t have one X.x)
Dislikes: The color orange (quote by Ariadne: "ORANGE?! EEW! ICK! GET IT
OUT OF MY SIGHT AT ONCE! NEVER AGAIN PROFANE MY PRESENCE WITH THAT VILE
*omitted* AGAIN!" etc. etc. Must just be a pet peeve…); dishonesty by anyone for
any reason (poisons relationships, shatters trust, breaks hearts, too much
damages the soul…. Lies are the force that scares her more than anything); ticks
(six words: They Suck Your Blood With Pleasure. Her skin crawls at the thought
of a tick; and it’s not arachnophobia, one of her ambitions is to hold a
tarantula. Just ticks, the way they stick their head under your skin and if you
pull them out it STAYS THERE **shudder**); conceited people (far too much
exposure to them and one bad childhood experience); hatred, dislike, enmity in
general (they aren’t good for people! Why do they happen so much?). One more
thing: It’s not exactly a dislike, but for reasons beyond her control, Guys Her
Age scare the ever-living shizat out of her. No wonder she’s never gotten a
date.
Hobbies: Swimming; mediating disputes (you did read dislikes, right??);
helping people whenever possible regardless of her own life (she’s
SailorAesculapius. What’d you expect?); reading books on psychology; growing
bonsai plants; arranging her Zen rock garden (it’s more relaxing than you’d
think, and whatever artistic flair she has comes out); quick sketches and
pictures (she cannot for the life of her draw or photograph anyone or anything
posed; the drawings look like they were done by a fifth-grader and the photos
aren’t too great. Candid shots and impromptu sketches turn out much better, and
besides her Zen garden, are the extent of her artistic talent)
Personality:
Ariadne’s greatest talents and interests lie in helping and healing people,
physically and mentally. If someone is crying, you bet your boots she’ll be
right there making them feel better, and she does an incredibly good job. Her
Healing powers are both for the body and the mind, to an extent; her favorite
class is Biology and she’s usually to be found with a book on psychology.
Helping people through whatever their current crisis is is very important to
her.
On that note, she wants to be a psychologist (with a minor in physical
medicine, maybe?) and beware: She Will Diagnose You. She has most of the student
body classified under some kind of heading, be it Deep-seated Insecurities,
Superiority Complex, Troubled Childhood, Starved for Love/Attention, etc., and
for the most part she is right on the money. She doesn’t do this for herself,
though, it’s so she can better choose her words and actions around those she
meets. This makes her exceedingly easy to get along with, and even people she’s
just met soon find themselves pouring out their deepest problems—which is what
she wants. She gets pleasure from correctly psychanalyzing someone and therefore
acting accordingly, and she feels frustrated and caged when she can’t do
anything about someone’s problem.
Dissy: Hm.might run a quick spell check and proof read
on this thing.
Physically, she can’t exactly touch and heal, but she has the doctor’s
touch, managing to make you feel better no matter what’s wrong with you. This
she likes, being convinced that a good attitude helps the healing process. If
you get hurt, Ariadne’s the person you want to be there, since she’ll help with
both your injury and how you feel.
Ariadne had a serious problem with being lied to. Besides the obvious (it
gets in the way of a proper analysis and if you aren’t level with her, she can’t
help you), she has an innate fear of being unable to trust. She is a bit more
trusting that one would expect from someone of her intelligence (all of her
classes are either honors or AP), and easily suckered if you know what you’re
doing. She trusts everyone she meets without reserve, and the thought that she
cannot is one that just scares her. It takes away the sercurity in her life. Oh
yes, big problem with lying.
Dissy: One wonders how the girl will survive as a
senshi if she has issues with lying.
Vessy: Damn those pesky little
secret identities, so hard to not lie about
them. *IDEA* I wanna do one of those talking to random people on the streets and
ask them if they have secret identities :p
One of her pet peeves is conceited people. Many of these fall under her
Deep-seated Insecurities heading. You wouldn’t think it, but the only people she
ever gets sharp with are those with heads too large for the rest of them, and
when she gets sharp, she really gets sharp. Give her twenty-five seconds, and as
the Bighead walks by you can hear the hot air leaking out: ‘Pfffffffffffff…’ The
downside is, she feels guilty immediately afterwards and runs after them to
apologize, which tends to diminish the overall affect.
She zones out. All the time. She still manages to ace her classes, but
she’s way out of touch with the world everyone else lives in. She drifts about
in a bubble, and comes off self-posessed, poised, and confident, but she really
just doesn’t get it. Look naïve up in the dictionary, and at the bottom you’ll
see: SEE: ARIADNE THEROPEVA. She little bubble has done a lot to protect her
from the harshness of reality, which is good in a way, but it won’t be good when
the bubble pops. She still, however, manages to relate to other people.
Basic summary: She is caring, understanding, easy to talk to, eager to help
in any way she can, quick to cut you down to size but quick to apologize, overly
trusting, naïve, somewhat oblivious to reality, and has a tendency to zone…
out.
Vessy: AGAIN WITH THE SCARY-NESS!! Everything except
the whole lieing thing, she's not super fanatical about that as far as I
know.
History:
Born on a small island in the Mediterranean Sea, Ariadne Theropeva’s
parents had a combined age of thirty-four. They refused her father Niko’s
parents’ offers to raise her, instead keeping her. She was a bit of a
wild-child, running all over the island, swimming, going barefoot all year. Her
parents put almost no restrictions on her life, but made it abundantly clear
what was right and wrong, and everyone on the island helped to raise her, which
ingrained in her the belief that everyone in the world loves her and would never
hurt her. This idyllic life lasted until she was seven years old, at which point
her mother died. Why exactly she died Ariadne doesn’t know, because no one ever
told her. Her father, a fisherman, was deemed by the gonverment unfit to care
for her, and the social worker sent to take her away was almost comically full
of herself, and she made the little girl feel very, very small, and angry, but
too afraid to speak up. Taken from her father, she was going to be placed in
foster care but for her mother’s oldest sister, her Aunt Lucia, who interceeded
and harassed the agency until she got custody.
Lucia lived in Rome, and Ariadne was given to her care. At first, the child
was afraid and closed herself up, but being raised as she was, soon opened up.
Her aunt was a far stricter guardian than her parents, but she has a sense of
humor that peeks out in everything she does, and that mellowed everything out.
Lucia was all for cutting the girl’s hair, but she protested vehemently. She
then suggested braiding it, but this too was met with intense opposition.
Ariadne’s hair had never been cut or worn tightly, and the girl couldn’t bear
for it to start now.
After settling in with her Aunt, her life progressed quite normally. The
woman thought the government’s decision that Ariadne’s father was incompetent
was utter nonsense, and so the two exchanged regular letters, and she fought for
his right to visitation, and he is allowed to visit his daughter in Rome one
weekend ever two months. She attended Romulous Elementary and Junior High, and
is currently a sophomore at Romulous High. She is almost violently determined to
be accepted into USR, and her teachers seem to think she has a decent enough
chance. Her terror of males has left her out of the social cloud, but she’s so
intent on her goal she really just… doesn’t care. ((Oh cheese… Tell me what else
you need, if you take the notion to consider this app. I can write more once I
know just what else is needed…))
Dissy: Oiy vay, another foreigner and a sob story at
that
Vessy: Well that's a really kinda
screwed up childhood. I think the similarities stopped there.
We still would kinda like to know why her mum died
even if Ara doesn't know. It's really a bit of a sob story and why the smeg an
island? I mean it's original but I think it's original for a reason... Where'd
the fear of males come from? Is she like actually afriad of them and uh
WHY?
NPCs: ((Well she’s not an Edna…)) Aunt Lucia: The woman who sucked up all
the height genes in Ariadne’s mother’s family, she raised the girl from the age
of seven. Dark-haired and dark-complected, with laughing brown eyes, she is
something like 5’9", and skinny as a rail. Her approach to life is upright,
stern, and uncompromising, but her constant laughter and good humor makes it
worthwhile. She is anything but negligent as a guardian, but very understanding,
and she always listens to Ariadne’s side of an argument, although she rarely
changes her mind.
Part III: Senshi Information
Special Skills: Drawing/sketching things/ people that aren’t posed; being
able to say just the right thing in a given situation; calming people down and
treating wounds very well
Dissy: erm.how would this skill attract the god of
healing to her. Special skills are things that made the child more attractive to
the god who chose them to be a soldier, not things they do well in general.
being able to say just the right thing in a given situation; calming people down
and treating wounds very well
Vessy: Maybe stuff like drawing medical-ish stuff
really well but being rubbish at drawing anything else. or being REALLY REALLY
INCREDIBLY GOOD at the operation game with the pincers and the buzzer and the
light up nose. What? It's could be a special skill...
Henshin Item: The norm for the Pantheon Senshi. The circular jewel is set
on a large silver barrette that she uses both to secure her hair when it is all
up on her head and hold back the sides; it looks fine in her hair both ways, and
the barrette is able to handle both uses. ((Unless there’s another size it has
to be))- The jewel and casing is about 1¾" in diameter.
Transformation: She holds her jewel high in one hand and shouts,
"Aesculapius Deus Power Make-Up!" (*Insert Pretty Blue Flash Here^^*) Then,
Ariadne is sitting with her knees drawn up and her arms around her ankles, head
tilted slightly down and eyes closed, cradles within her symbol, which is
brilliant silver against a darker blue, her symbol glowing on her forehead. The
symbol shimmers, and in a smaller flash, it is gone, and she is slowly
straightening until she stands, eyes still closed and hair fanning out behind
her, arms crossed at the wrists over her chest with her jewel in its casing
floating in front of it (at this point, she’s all shimmery-glowy blue, like a SM
transformation). She draws her hands apart and the symbol floats between them,
and she places it where it would be to join her armor. In another flash, her
eyes are open, coming away from her jewel, and she now wears her armor over her
bodice-thing, and her skirt. She turns around, her arms bent at the elbow and
angles slightly out, palms up (like in a Look, No Weapons gesture), one foot
raised so her toe is at the other ankle and her hair curling around her, to face
the side so her profile is seen. Gloves to the elbow appear like a wave washing
over her arm, and boots to the knee, the same way. She turns the rest of the way
around, facing forward again, and the leather straps appear like streams of
water from the waist as her tiara and choker appear. She then finishes in her
‘pose’: Right arm bent, two fingers resting on the rim of the symbol-jewel, legs
apart but knees slightly bent and one further out than the other, left arm down
and a bit away from her body, fingers wide—rather like she just caught her
balance. Her expression is one of quiet determination. ((Ending in a smile’s not
mandatory, right?))
Color: Cerulean blue
Symbol: The symbol for Seed of Life, Japanese in origination. It is a
circle with an arc coming in halfway, like half an equator on the earth, but
from the upper-left coming diagonally right, and thinning, kinda like a
brushstroke. It’s right here:
http://www.symbols.com/pics/big/32/3201.gif
Fuku/Costume: Basic fuku, silver armor and such. The symbol on her tiara,
the choker, collar, skirt, and her boots are all cobalt blue. The leather strips
are, instead of dark brown, dyed white. The gloves are cobalt blue,
elbow-length, and have her symbol in white on the back of the hand. Her boots
are kneeboots, without any heel, and also cobalt. She has the armband pictured,
colored white with a cobalt stripe at the wrist.
Powers/Attacks: ‘Sacred Spirit, Be Healed!’ (Called casually her Spirit
Flash) – First, she touches the center of her symbol jewel with two fingers,
then flicks them out, like tossing something, and a sphere the size of a marble
glows in front of her chest. She catches it between her two palms and keeps them
there, like she’s praying. She bends her head over them for an instant
(seemingly asking a blessing), then looks up and, keeping her hands together,
holds them out in front of her (think Rei’s first attack in the anime, only
without her hands looking like a gun). Slowly she brings them apart, the little
light between them slowly expanding and getting brighter, until it floats
between her hands, which are shoulder-width apart. She holds it for a fraction
of a second, and then brings her hands together, like clapping or smashing a
mosquito, and there is a huge (silent) explosion of cerulean light.
As she is the Senshi of healing, it would be a bit difficult to give her an
offensive attack, so this is how I compromised: Sacred Spirit, Be Healed
attempts to do just that: heal. This attack makes a heroic attempt to heal the
corruption within whatever evil minion it comes into contact with, affecting
whatever sees the flash of light. In things with more sensitive eyes, it may
cause temporary blindness (heck, it’s a little bluey supernova), but its main
affect is that it diminishes the evil in something. If it is something that is
fundamentally evil, it attempts to sever their contact with the power that stems
from the evil in them; if they were something that wasn’t evil to begin with
(for example, something brainwashed), it throws their newfound beliefs into
limbo, creating inner turmoil and slices their ability to use powers by anything
from one-fourth to one-half, depending upon the strength of their belief in the
correctness of evil ideals, and the physical strength of the victim. Also,
anything that covered its eyes before the ‘clap’ would not be affected by the
light, and therefore only have a funny tingling sensation on its skin. On the
nymphs themselves, however, it would simply stun them for a moment, and possibly
cause them to lose their concentration on whatever attack they had been planning
to launch. It can be blocked by a decent power-shield, and can only be used once
with full effect. The second time, its power decreases by half, the third time
by half again (making it one-fourth of its original strength), and after that,
it’s only useable as a diversionary tactic (the light’s really freakin’ bright).
As for effects on Ariadne, it doesn’t make her physically fatigued, but it saps
her emotional strength, leaving her with little conviction in her beliefs and
easily susceptible to fits of laughter or crying. If she were, say, captured and
interrogated after using the attack more then three times, she’d hold up to any
sort of good persuasion like a wet paper sack to a mallet, although her physical
strength would be largely unaffected. As for redirection, it’s impossible, as
there is no actual ray of attack, simply a flash. If it is blocked, however, it
disappears without bouncing anywhere.
Weapons: None.
Guardian: Asklepios, an emerald-green snake. (I got the idea from
Aesculapius’s staff with the serpent around it.) ‘Pios, for short, has a general
tendency to speak in cryptic sentences, and will rarely if ever say anything
straight out. He usually knows more than he lets on, and the
holier-and-very-much-wiser-than-thou expression he manages to assume on his
reptilian face drives Ariadne nuts. He first appeared on a branch outside her
window, and announced his presence by saying, "It is indeed Man’s greatest
tendency to shut out that aid given him, and then revile the heavens for their
lack of help." (Never, ever would he simply say, "Open the window.") It all
began there. Because of Ariadne’s aunt’s utter terror of any green animal, be it
reptile, bird, insect, etc., has forced her to keep him outside in the tree, a
situation to which he is amenable enough. (She did, however, make him promise
not to eat any birds nesting or simply standing in the tree.) She will
sometimes, for company, smuggle him into school in her messenger bag, and he has
come in very handy on biology quizzes… Their relationship is much like that of
siblings, although she tells him things she wouldn’t tell a brother. He is
surprisingly easy to talk to, and she confides things in him she wouldn’t
breathe to another living soul.
Dissy: Ooo, fun guardian!!!!
Vessy: That is a kick as guardian I want
one!
Part IV: Miscellaneous Information
Why you: Me? Because you all love me… er… or not. Because I think I’m good
enough to play; because I write well; because I am willing to learn from others,
to take criticism and learn from it, because I have a sense of humor. Because I
can be as weird as the next person. Because I want to, and am willing to work.
This character? I’ve always wanted to play a healer. I want to BE a healer,
complete with herbs and infusions and everything. Because I love the idea of a
Healing Senshi. I like the character I’ve created, and I like who she could be
as SailorAesculapius.
This game? Because it looks FUN! Because it’s something that I haven’t
done, that I could get better in, because there was a period in time that I
wished I were a SailorSenshi. I think I’m good enough to play this character in
this game in a way that won’t make you regret you accepted this app.
Miscellaneous: I know there is an applicant for this Senshi, and I am
sending this in anyway. I accept the possibility that you may already be biased,
and heck, that’s fine, I know I won’t get in because I was the only one. And
about the writing sample…. Have mercy upon my soul.
Part V: The Writing Sample
Ariadne stared at the sheet of math problems before her in utter
disbelief. There was no way her teacher expected them to get it done in one
class period. No way. The simple fact that the quadratic equation was the one
with the least amount of work in every problem shot that possibility right down.
Her mind was already starting to fog over. As she brushed a strand of white hair
out of her eyes, she attempted to focus on the first question. Something about a
bunch of x’s and y’s who were confused about their true identity.
She looked up to stare at the man at the desk before the class. He was
merrily sipping cold coffee and surverying the slaves… er, students… under his
domination. He was the teacher, and fully able to give them one hundred
complicated problems to be accomplished in forty-five minutes. Control freak,
Ariadne thought in a momentary flash of bitterness. Then she felt guilty. It
must be the fact that he was unable to procure hot coffee… Or maybe he’s just a
sadist.Reluctantly applying her pencil to the first question, in which several
x’s were the square root of y and also 3y cubed, she heaved a sigh and gave a
last lingering look at her teacher. He was holding up a paper that she
recognized as the sheet her class was working on, and in a fit of mercy, he
stood up and announced that they could finish it as homework and turn it in the
next day.Thanks, she thought sarcastically. Another up-till-two night. She
resignedly continued laboring at the problems, her mind anywhere but on the
math.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Arriving home, Ariadne called out a greeting to her aunt, then ran up the
stairs to her room. Flinging the window open, she got out the sheet from her
math class and stared at it critically. Fifteen problems done in forty minutes.
She went downstairs. May as well face it with a full stomach.And so it was that
she sat down two tuna sandwiches later to eighty-five math problems that would
most likely not benefit her in any way, unless admittance into USR was based on
your score on one comprehensive worksheet. Blanching at the possibility, she
began working.
"Ariadne?" her aunt called. "What are you doing up there? Homework?"
"Yes ma’am," she answered. "Math."
"You’re on your own," Lucia replied. "Come down when you want
dinner."
"Alright." Sixteen down, eighty-four to go… Einstein, eat your heart out.
The pencil flew.
The digital clock beside her bed blinked away the minutes, and the hours.
At seven-thirty (and problem fifty-three) she went and took a shower, tying her
long hair up in a turban to dry. She returned to the sheet with a passion,
determined to get it done by midnight, so help her.
As her pencil scratched away, her mid drifted to her teacher. He seemed to
be quite fond of giving them long and involved worksheets, but did not lecture
if he could help it. He seemed happiest when the class was silent. Maybe he’s an
agoraphobe, she thought. Then, No, just a control freak. He has to be in sharge
of ehat we’re doing and thinking… little does he know I’m not thinking about how
many x’s are in that pi, I’m thinking about what his mental state is….And so
went the next fourty-seven problems. Ariadne brushed her teeth and fell into bed
as the clock hit 12:00, and dreamed of cold coffee and variables.
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Dissy: well, all in all, I liked your application until
you got to the part about the mother's death.then it went and became a sob story
and sorry, but I just can't take those. Then you also made her a foreigner, of
which we are accepting no more of unless we REALLY love your application and
there are no other problems. Aside from all this, you could've run a spell check
through it to make sure everything was spelled right. And also a proof read too.
These are big problems so I can't really say revise or die so.
Dissy's Verdict: Reject, revise
Vessy: Okay the history was a tad bit messed up in
umm... every aspect. Plus foreigner. There were also just a few little tiny
things here and there. Basically if you just changed her history completely and
made it just a touch more uh... non-garglo of the wild it would work alot
better. I like The personality and appearance (But I may be biased due to
friend-ness) which sort of made this app pop even more. It has great potential
just a few glaring problems that need to be fixed majorly before we can consider
accepting it.
Vessy Verdict: Revise or die!
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Final Verdict: Revise or
DIE!