Well I was asking for feedback for my page and sure got it.. But this is the only negative response I got.. So I made some changes to the page.

Philena,

It looks like a 3rd grader developed the site. It is unprofessional looking which is going to turn people off. People coming to that site are going to leave as soon as they it because it looks so much like spam/phishing sites. They'll ask does this person really know what they are talking about with. It also smells like an MLM (multilevel marketing) scam, which really turns people off.

What is the goal of the site? How are you going to get people to it besides through search engine submission. From that standpoint you will get a very low ranking on your site. Java applets don't add to your ranking score. There is very little copy saying what your offer is, the service/product you are providing, how it is suppose to work, etc. I gather you are attempting to sell multivitamins, but you don't say anything about what's in the vitamin, what makes your vitamin better then the name brands you can get at any Walgreens, OSCO, GNC, etc.

You have too many unrelated images on the site. Plus I believe the MomWins, About.com and Rush Office Equipment are in part paying for you to have this site. In that regard I believe they would like to see a more prominent position on the site. Additionally, I am wondering why these companies want to be sponsoring this site? The unprofessional image the site excudes will no doubt tarnish their reputations.

You have too many fonts being used on the site.

I think that is enough.

Jeff

So.. I made some more changes so I don't seems like a 3rd grader. But seriously.. on that note.. I'm sure alot of our kids would be rich right now considering they probably could design better websites nowadays. The next generations are very smart. But I think the comment of me "tarnish their reputations" is a lit harsh.. Considering he doesn't really know me like you guys do here.. I'm not taking that personally.. but I did make some changes.. and adding more testimonies from MomsWin. I hope that helps some. I know he was just being an a-hole so I would break.. esp if he's a webmaster, so I could (Pay) for his help. What do you guys think.. Do you think it looks like a scam now??

Round 2 for the 90 Day Challenge